"He'll Never love Me"
By: Noemi Diaz
I opened my eyes and looked around my surroundings. I was in a large room with lattice walls. I was lying down on a straw mat and I had a wool cover on me. I sat up and yawned. I felt like I have awakened from a very deep sleep. Strangely enough I didn't remember anything, nor did I have any memories of any kind. I didn't even remember my name, if I had one that is.
"You finally awoke." Said a young man with wavy, long black hair, and reddish, brownish eyes. He was sitting on a straw mat that was facing the window. Strangely enough, he wasn't there before. And to make things even stranger, I didn't have any clothes on! I wrapped the quilt tighter around me and I backed all the way to the other side of the room.
"Don't be scared. I'm not going to do what you think I'm going to do."
"Then why am I alone with you in a room, and with no clothes on?"
"No incarnate is born with clothes on. You are my incarnate, and I shall call you.... Delaney.
I just stared at him in shock. I couldn't believe what he was saying. "That can't possibly be true!"
"It is. Why do you think you don't have memories, and look at your back? That spider shape mark is proof that you belong to me, Nuraku. You were made to kill Inuyasha, and anyone who interferes. You are a merciless, skillful, strong, and quick killer. That is your purpose."
"No! That isn't, it can't be!"
"But it is. And when you experience it, you'll love it. Kanna, bring me the swordsman!"
A little girl dragged a tied up man into the room and placed him in the center. The man panicky struggle to get free, but the rough rope was too strong and tight to break free. The little girl slightly smiled.
"Delaney, kill him."
I stared at the poor man. He was crying.
"No, I can't! And I won't!"
"You can, and you will! It's in your nature, and you don't have a choice! It's either him or you!"
"Fine." I murmured.
"In case you were wondering, you are a snow wolf demon."
I nodded and I started thinking of attacks.
"Snow has to do with.... icicles." I thought to my self. I started focusing on my hands. They started feeling cold. I noticed some frost forming on them, and then long razor sharp icicles. I held hands in front of me, and the icicles flew out and pierced into the man's body. And that's not all; it froze him!
"You only needed one to freeze him. I made you more powerful then you can imagine."
I suddenly felt some prideful joy within me. I hated to admit it, but.... Nuraku was right. ^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^
So, did you like my new story so far? I hope so. This is my third story so far. And I am doing all of them at the same time. I'm starting to get the hang of typing, story writing, and fan fiction, so you might notice that the grammar and punctuation is better then the first chapter of my first story. Please read the other stories as well, and tell me which one you like best. Please give me good tips and ideas. And if you didn't like this story or any of the other stories please tell me the flaw and what I should do to make the future chapters better. Thanks alot for your cooperation and for reading my story.
Your friend and fellow author, Noemi Diaz
By: Noemi Diaz
I opened my eyes and looked around my surroundings. I was in a large room with lattice walls. I was lying down on a straw mat and I had a wool cover on me. I sat up and yawned. I felt like I have awakened from a very deep sleep. Strangely enough I didn't remember anything, nor did I have any memories of any kind. I didn't even remember my name, if I had one that is.
"You finally awoke." Said a young man with wavy, long black hair, and reddish, brownish eyes. He was sitting on a straw mat that was facing the window. Strangely enough, he wasn't there before. And to make things even stranger, I didn't have any clothes on! I wrapped the quilt tighter around me and I backed all the way to the other side of the room.
"Don't be scared. I'm not going to do what you think I'm going to do."
"Then why am I alone with you in a room, and with no clothes on?"
"No incarnate is born with clothes on. You are my incarnate, and I shall call you.... Delaney.
I just stared at him in shock. I couldn't believe what he was saying. "That can't possibly be true!"
"It is. Why do you think you don't have memories, and look at your back? That spider shape mark is proof that you belong to me, Nuraku. You were made to kill Inuyasha, and anyone who interferes. You are a merciless, skillful, strong, and quick killer. That is your purpose."
"No! That isn't, it can't be!"
"But it is. And when you experience it, you'll love it. Kanna, bring me the swordsman!"
A little girl dragged a tied up man into the room and placed him in the center. The man panicky struggle to get free, but the rough rope was too strong and tight to break free. The little girl slightly smiled.
"Delaney, kill him."
I stared at the poor man. He was crying.
"No, I can't! And I won't!"
"You can, and you will! It's in your nature, and you don't have a choice! It's either him or you!"
"Fine." I murmured.
"In case you were wondering, you are a snow wolf demon."
I nodded and I started thinking of attacks.
"Snow has to do with.... icicles." I thought to my self. I started focusing on my hands. They started feeling cold. I noticed some frost forming on them, and then long razor sharp icicles. I held hands in front of me, and the icicles flew out and pierced into the man's body. And that's not all; it froze him!
"You only needed one to freeze him. I made you more powerful then you can imagine."
I suddenly felt some prideful joy within me. I hated to admit it, but.... Nuraku was right. ^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^~^
So, did you like my new story so far? I hope so. This is my third story so far. And I am doing all of them at the same time. I'm starting to get the hang of typing, story writing, and fan fiction, so you might notice that the grammar and punctuation is better then the first chapter of my first story. Please read the other stories as well, and tell me which one you like best. Please give me good tips and ideas. And if you didn't like this story or any of the other stories please tell me the flaw and what I should do to make the future chapters better. Thanks alot for your cooperation and for reading my story.
Your friend and fellow author, Noemi Diaz