Many reviews... Thanks very much. Some are even giving me tips about how to improve... I will try my best :P thanks to PhiloshopiLapis for telling me that it wasn't too realistic and I will improve on that. Here are other people I want to thank:
Evilevergreen- Thanks for the great reviews! I will try to include all parts
Fredslilangel- thanks!
Luvin' it- hey Bea, my fic isn't that great... so you better not say that yours is ugly... cause it's not... HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT?
Katdlc- Hi Kat, but what did you think of the story?
And to all those who also reviewed (that I forgot) thank you, I really appreciate it.
Now, on with the story... next day? Will Fred and Angelina be able to hide it?!?
Chapter 4- Caught In The Act
I woke up earlier than Fred the next day. It was only 5:00. I had only slept for three hours! Oh well, I could catch up with my sleep in Professor Binns' class. There was still at least one hour or so before I had to be downstairs, so I took my time.
I looked at Fred on the bed. He looked so peaceful and angelic when he was sleeping. Did I just say that? I thought of the time when we first met. He was so young and juvenile that time. He was always playing pranks and jokes on me. I never really liked him then but as he grew older, he started to mature and he became a perfect gentleman (hehehe).
I decided to leave early to give myself time to beautify myself. I picked my clothes up and headed toward the bathroom. The bathroom was really big! It was nearly as big as the old dorms. A scent of lavender filled the air and it felt like heaven when you stepped inside.
I put on all my clothes and looked at myself in the mirror. I looked presentable but my hair was scattered all over my face and my makeup got off. I needed a lot of time before I could look like myself again.
I slowly tiptoed outside and toward the door. I didn't want to wake Fred. I pushed the hair out of my face and breathed a sigh of relief when I was outside. I shut the door ever so quietly behind me. There was a slight sound but I don't think it woke Fred.
I raced down the steps as I thought about the events of the previous night. It seemed so clear and I could remember it well. I smiled just thinking about it. I had just realized, that I Angelina have now my own boyfriend! How cool!
As I entered the common room I thought about how lucky I was to have Fred. He was such a sweet and romantic guy. I remember when he would al-
"Angy?" someone asked in surprise.
I froze in terror. I spun around to come face to face with Katie. My face turned pale, and I couldn't breathe. It was like the memories from last night came all rushing back and it was choking me from guilt.
"What were you doing in the boys dormitories?" she asked coming closer to me.
"Nothing, I wo-woke up e-e-early and de-de-cided to um, take a look at it th-that's all," I stammered, would she figure it out?
"They are just the same as ours, you should have known if you were listening to our conversation last night," she continued coming even closer.
I remained silent. I didn't know what to say.
"You look terrible Angel, WHAT HAVE YOU BEEN DOING?" she demanded her face turning red.
"I told you nothing," I said, sounding more confident then I felt.
"Your hiding something from me, I just know it. Friends aren't supposed to keep secrets from each other. We agreed on that before didn't we?" she asked trying to keep her face straight, but it didn't work because I saw the tears starting to form in her eyes.
She began to run to the portrait opening.
"Fine! I'll tell what's been going on," I screamed. I hated when she threw the "good friends" crap at me.
She wheeled around. And walked to the couch. She sat down. She motioned for me to sit down too. I took the seat opposite her. We glared at each other before I began to speak.
"Fred and I, well we ummmmmm we, how do you say this?"
"Hooked up?" Katie asked.
I nodded I was feeling embarrassed telling this to my best friend.
"Well, finally!" she cried.
"What?" I started to raise my voice.
"Well it's soooo obvious you two had a crush on each other like forever, but never had the guts to say it," she explained.
I just looked at her. Of course she was right?!? It has been too long. Oh well, what's important is now right?
"Do you know what this means?" she asked me suspiciously.
"More troubles? You're gonna tell everyone in the whole school? I doomed? I'm sooo lucky? What?" I asked simultaneously.
"Yes yes, all of that, but another thing. Something important..." Katie replied quickly.
"Well, hurry up and tell me then," I commanded.
She beckoned me to lean closer. When we were face to face, she said,
"You, Fred, Oliver and I CAN DOUBLE DATE.......... OH MY GOSH!" she exclaimed.
