SAD KITSUNE LOVE
Author: Hello! No one's really helping me out ~.~ Please R/R I need as many reviews as possible! Review every chapter PLEASE!! *.~
Just for a review: Mina is a girl who is enslaved by Togoru, the man who killed her family, tribe, her hopes. She then finds out that her old lover, Yoko Kurama has survived and is now Kurama, the guy whom she has a crush on. We just left off to when Hiei was going to reveal to her crush who she really is.
Chapter 3: Wish upon a shooting star
"Like to know who that girl is?" Hiei asked. "Who?" Kurama asked. He was used to Hiei reading his mind. "The girl is your old girlfriend. The one that you left when you were Yoko Kurama." Hiei said, his voice rough as always.
"Is that so? I was wondering who she was." Kurama replied thoughtfully. "So what are you going to do Kurama?" Hiei asked with his regular smirk. Kurama shrugged. 'If it was a long time ago, why bother?' He thought. As usual Hiei heard his thought.
"Small point Kurama. Your in luck because she likes you." Hiei said, then he left, as if he never was there. Kurama closed his eyes and tried to remember the girl but only the image of what she looked like now came to his mind. 'I don't even know her name. And what's wrong with Hiei, sounded like he was mad or jealous.' He thought. Looking up at the sky, he could see some stars shining. Just as he was about to leave, he saw a shooting star. He smiled. 'Make a wish.' He thought. "I wish for..."
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"I wish to meet Kurama for real, not just a team encounter." Mina said after seeing a shooting star. Little did she know that it was the same one Kurama had wished upon. She continued to walk the forest path, oblivious to the fact that darkness was falling.
A thick fog began to surround her. She stopped suddenly. She realized she was lost. 'No matter, I'll just sniff my way out.' She thought. She sniffed the air for the smell of the hotel, but all she could smell was fog. 'Shit. Just what I needed.' Her black kitsune ears went back. Someone was coming.
Annoyed since she couldn't see anything and because she couldn't smell anyone, she pulled out her katana. A figure emerged from the fog. The person was on the tall side with long hair. She then realized it was none other than Kurama. Startled she put her sword away. She didn't expect the wish to come true so early. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Kurama walked on the path to go to the hotel. Or the one he thought would lead him there anyway. Suddenly he froze. There was someone ahead of him. He tried to catch the person's scent but the fog covered it. He took a couple of cautious steps forward.
He noticed that in the person's hand was a katana. The person was looking around wildly probably looking for me. He thought slightly amused. Then the person seemed to spot him and put away the katana. He realized it was a girl, the same one from yesterday. 'She's beautiful up close. Why didn't I notice earlier?' He thought.
The girl looked up at him. She seemed mesmerized by his appearance. He was a bit surprised himself. "Are you alright?" Kurama asked her. She tried to speak, but her voice was lost, she nodded.
'I don't believe it, up close he's the spitting image of Yoko, except younger. His eyes aren't as cold, but they seem sad. A lot like my own.' She thought. They gazed into each others green eyes.
'Strange, this girl reminds me of myself. Lost, alone, not knowing what to do. It's like gazing into my reflection, except it's a girl staring back at me. Her fox appearance is reminds me of Yoko Kurama, except black. Like his soul image.' Kurama thought. (Man he sure can get deep and spiritual! It's soo kawaii!)
I recognize you. You're on the opposing team, Team Togoru." He said. (I think it's a bit lame. I told you I need help!) She nodded curtly. Her dazed look gone. Instead a look of venom spread across her face, making him step back.
"I hate my team. The only reason I'm on the team is because I was enslaved by Togoru!" She told him. She sounded a lot like Hiei, except (if even possible) colder. More angry. "Are you going to the hotel?" He asked. She nodded. "Well let us go then." He said. He headed down the path, she followed. "Oh, by the way, I never had the pleasure of finding out your name." He said. (Oh, that's makes him sound soo cute!!) "It's Mina." She replied. "Mina? That's a pretty name." He said. She blushed, but since it was dark he didn't see, or if he did he pretended not to notice.
Author: Well, I'll try to update soon, I promise! Anyway, they should be together, neh? I was also wondering if I should make a character for Hiei. I don't really know, soo PLEASE review! I love reviews!! Also e-mail me! Give me ideas! E-mail address is *ktye03@aol.com* So I should now try to do chapter 4 eh?
Author: Hello! No one's really helping me out ~.~ Please R/R I need as many reviews as possible! Review every chapter PLEASE!! *.~
Just for a review: Mina is a girl who is enslaved by Togoru, the man who killed her family, tribe, her hopes. She then finds out that her old lover, Yoko Kurama has survived and is now Kurama, the guy whom she has a crush on. We just left off to when Hiei was going to reveal to her crush who she really is.
Chapter 3: Wish upon a shooting star
"Like to know who that girl is?" Hiei asked. "Who?" Kurama asked. He was used to Hiei reading his mind. "The girl is your old girlfriend. The one that you left when you were Yoko Kurama." Hiei said, his voice rough as always.
"Is that so? I was wondering who she was." Kurama replied thoughtfully. "So what are you going to do Kurama?" Hiei asked with his regular smirk. Kurama shrugged. 'If it was a long time ago, why bother?' He thought. As usual Hiei heard his thought.
"Small point Kurama. Your in luck because she likes you." Hiei said, then he left, as if he never was there. Kurama closed his eyes and tried to remember the girl but only the image of what she looked like now came to his mind. 'I don't even know her name. And what's wrong with Hiei, sounded like he was mad or jealous.' He thought. Looking up at the sky, he could see some stars shining. Just as he was about to leave, he saw a shooting star. He smiled. 'Make a wish.' He thought. "I wish for..."
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
"I wish to meet Kurama for real, not just a team encounter." Mina said after seeing a shooting star. Little did she know that it was the same one Kurama had wished upon. She continued to walk the forest path, oblivious to the fact that darkness was falling.
A thick fog began to surround her. She stopped suddenly. She realized she was lost. 'No matter, I'll just sniff my way out.' She thought. She sniffed the air for the smell of the hotel, but all she could smell was fog. 'Shit. Just what I needed.' Her black kitsune ears went back. Someone was coming.
Annoyed since she couldn't see anything and because she couldn't smell anyone, she pulled out her katana. A figure emerged from the fog. The person was on the tall side with long hair. She then realized it was none other than Kurama. Startled she put her sword away. She didn't expect the wish to come true so early. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Kurama walked on the path to go to the hotel. Or the one he thought would lead him there anyway. Suddenly he froze. There was someone ahead of him. He tried to catch the person's scent but the fog covered it. He took a couple of cautious steps forward.
He noticed that in the person's hand was a katana. The person was looking around wildly probably looking for me. He thought slightly amused. Then the person seemed to spot him and put away the katana. He realized it was a girl, the same one from yesterday. 'She's beautiful up close. Why didn't I notice earlier?' He thought.
The girl looked up at him. She seemed mesmerized by his appearance. He was a bit surprised himself. "Are you alright?" Kurama asked her. She tried to speak, but her voice was lost, she nodded.
'I don't believe it, up close he's the spitting image of Yoko, except younger. His eyes aren't as cold, but they seem sad. A lot like my own.' She thought. They gazed into each others green eyes.
'Strange, this girl reminds me of myself. Lost, alone, not knowing what to do. It's like gazing into my reflection, except it's a girl staring back at me. Her fox appearance is reminds me of Yoko Kurama, except black. Like his soul image.' Kurama thought. (Man he sure can get deep and spiritual! It's soo kawaii!)
I recognize you. You're on the opposing team, Team Togoru." He said. (I think it's a bit lame. I told you I need help!) She nodded curtly. Her dazed look gone. Instead a look of venom spread across her face, making him step back.
"I hate my team. The only reason I'm on the team is because I was enslaved by Togoru!" She told him. She sounded a lot like Hiei, except (if even possible) colder. More angry. "Are you going to the hotel?" He asked. She nodded. "Well let us go then." He said. He headed down the path, she followed. "Oh, by the way, I never had the pleasure of finding out your name." He said. (Oh, that's makes him sound soo cute!!) "It's Mina." She replied. "Mina? That's a pretty name." He said. She blushed, but since it was dark he didn't see, or if he did he pretended not to notice.
Author: Well, I'll try to update soon, I promise! Anyway, they should be together, neh? I was also wondering if I should make a character for Hiei. I don't really know, soo PLEASE review! I love reviews!! Also e-mail me! Give me ideas! E-mail address is *ktye03@aol.com* So I should now try to do chapter 4 eh?