SAD KITSUNE LOVE
Author: For those who ask why I don't put a disclaimer, it's because it's stupid. Everyone knows that a teen doesn't own YYH! People who e-mail are the best! Reviewers are cool! Well, about the cliff hanger, sorry. I got a bad e-mail 'cause of it and it was SCARY!! ~.~ I promise to not leave a bad cliff hanger next time. (Maybe just a little one....) People who neo-mailed me... thanks. You helped the girl a lot! How did you guys like the longer chapter? I'll try to make more longer ones! And how Mina got to Kurama... don't know. Maybe she didn't feel the pain till then, I've had that happen to me!
Review: Mina is a kitsune girl enslaved to Togoru because he killed her family, friends, the tribe she was the leader of. She had once loved a guy named Yoko, now she's in love with Kurama! I left off when Mina had broken her ankle and Kurama helped her. He was acting nice and she began to cry. Lets see what happens!!
Chapter 5: In the cave
What happen:
"You're no bother." He said, softly, removing her plastered hair from her eyes. Her jade eyes blinked up at him. She could feel herself falling for him even more. Tears blocked her vision. 'He so kind and gentle. No one I know would of helped me like he does. He makes me feel so happy, he makes me feel loved.' Tears slid down her cheeks as she gazed upon his kind eyes.
Now:
Surprised he drew back. "Some thing the matter?" He asked, feeling a little hurt. (Why I don't know. Something my friend told me to put in) "No-no-no-no-no!" She stuttered. "It's just...." She blushed harder. "You're really sweet... and erm... caring..." She avoided his gaze.
Her ebony ears lowered and her tail drooped. Feeling rather embarrassed, she tried to walk to the nearest rock and failed miserably. She started to fall, but Kurama caught her easily. "You shouldn't try to walk yet." He scolded, sitting her down on the rock she had wanted to get to.
Crouching he examined her foot again. "I'll be right back." He said, turning to leave. "Where are you going?" She asked, a little worried. "To get the herbs needed to heal that foot." He replied. She slumped against the cave wall and nodded. With that he left. She watched him leave and sighed. Shivering, she tried to fall asleep.
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When she woke a couple of hours later, Kurama wasn't there. Panicked, she tried to get up. Instead she fell. She landed on her back. With a tremendous effort she sat up. Rubbing her back, she leaned against the rock.
Kurama chose that moment to come in. To her great surprise, he wasn't soaked, as she thought he would be. In one hand he carried a bunch of roots and leaves and such. In the other he carried a cup of something. He sat down next to her. Pulling out of his pocket (Imaginary) gauze and wrap, he began to crush the herbs together. "I see you've tried to move again." He said softly.
She reddened. "Because... er... I was worried..." She answered, finding the wall really interesting. "Worried I wouldn't come back and leave you?" He whispered. She nodded to the wall. "You don't trust people much do you?" His voice was sad and soft, just loud enough for her to hear him.
She turned to face him clumsily, losing her balance. He put an arm around her to steady her. Leaning heavily against him so she wouldn't fall, she finally faced him. His emerald stared into her own. "Don't worry I know how you feel." Kurama said, reading the sadness in her face
"No. No one does." She said flatly, trying to sit down, with his help, of course. "You have no idea." Kurama snorted at the comment. "When I became a human, I isolated myself, I didn't think I could trust no one, not even my human family." He said.
Mina looked into his green eyes. "How did you learn to trust?" She asked quietly. "I started love. I started to care." He replied simply. "I don't think I could do that." She looked down at the floor. "Anyone can. It takes time, when the right person comes along... you'll see." He said gently.
"I think that person already came." She whispered. Kurama blushed, then went back to crushing the herbs together. When the task was done he rubbed the bits against the gauze wrap. The gauze turned a forest green color. "There." He muttered to himself. He elevated her foot with a pile of rocks and started to wrap it tight.
When he was done, he stood her up. "Try and walk now." He told her. She shrugged. He slung her arm around his neck and put an arm around her waist. She took his hand and tried to take a step. To her surprise, she didn't fall. Her foot throbbed a little but she was okay.
She took another cautious step. Then another. They continued that way, till they went around the whole cavern. Mina smiled happily, something rare. "Good. You're healing a lot faster than I
thought." He told her with a small smile. "Yeah. Do you think I can fight tonight?"She asked. "No. You'll have to sit tonight out. You can fight tomorrow though."
Her smile widened. "Good." She sat down. He sat next to her. Suddenly a look of horror spread on her pretty features. "Oh shit! Togoru's gonna kill me for sure!" She shivered. She couldn't stop. Not only the fact that Togoru would kill her if needed but also because she was soaked.
Kurama took off his outer kimono (Is that right?) and placed it around her. "How's that?" She could only nod in response. She was mesmerized by his muscular body. (I would be too). Sure she had seen her team bare chested (Do no e-mail me about this) but it was different to her since she liked him.
Kurama noticed her staring. "Not what you expected huh?" He laughed lightly. Mina could feel her face going totally red."S-sorry." Cleaning her nails seemed really important to her at that moment. "No need to apologize. Mother was just as surprised. She even asked if I was the same person." Mina felt saddened by the word mother. Kurama noticed. "Sorry, didn't mean to make you sad."
Author: Sorry, I know I promised to make Hiei's girlfriend show up in the next chapter, but... I went into detail in some parts and never got to where I needed. I will try to have her appear at least in the next chappie.
Kittykat: Baka
Silverfox: I said sorry!
Hiei_lover: I don't mind!
Kittykat: That's because you don't want him to have a girlfriend
Hiei: Shut-up
All: Sweat drop
Author: For those who ask why I don't put a disclaimer, it's because it's stupid. Everyone knows that a teen doesn't own YYH! People who e-mail are the best! Reviewers are cool! Well, about the cliff hanger, sorry. I got a bad e-mail 'cause of it and it was SCARY!! ~.~ I promise to not leave a bad cliff hanger next time. (Maybe just a little one....) People who neo-mailed me... thanks. You helped the girl a lot! How did you guys like the longer chapter? I'll try to make more longer ones! And how Mina got to Kurama... don't know. Maybe she didn't feel the pain till then, I've had that happen to me!
Review: Mina is a kitsune girl enslaved to Togoru because he killed her family, friends, the tribe she was the leader of. She had once loved a guy named Yoko, now she's in love with Kurama! I left off when Mina had broken her ankle and Kurama helped her. He was acting nice and she began to cry. Lets see what happens!!
Chapter 5: In the cave
What happen:
"You're no bother." He said, softly, removing her plastered hair from her eyes. Her jade eyes blinked up at him. She could feel herself falling for him even more. Tears blocked her vision. 'He so kind and gentle. No one I know would of helped me like he does. He makes me feel so happy, he makes me feel loved.' Tears slid down her cheeks as she gazed upon his kind eyes.
Now:
Surprised he drew back. "Some thing the matter?" He asked, feeling a little hurt. (Why I don't know. Something my friend told me to put in) "No-no-no-no-no!" She stuttered. "It's just...." She blushed harder. "You're really sweet... and erm... caring..." She avoided his gaze.
Her ebony ears lowered and her tail drooped. Feeling rather embarrassed, she tried to walk to the nearest rock and failed miserably. She started to fall, but Kurama caught her easily. "You shouldn't try to walk yet." He scolded, sitting her down on the rock she had wanted to get to.
Crouching he examined her foot again. "I'll be right back." He said, turning to leave. "Where are you going?" She asked, a little worried. "To get the herbs needed to heal that foot." He replied. She slumped against the cave wall and nodded. With that he left. She watched him leave and sighed. Shivering, she tried to fall asleep.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
When she woke a couple of hours later, Kurama wasn't there. Panicked, she tried to get up. Instead she fell. She landed on her back. With a tremendous effort she sat up. Rubbing her back, she leaned against the rock.
Kurama chose that moment to come in. To her great surprise, he wasn't soaked, as she thought he would be. In one hand he carried a bunch of roots and leaves and such. In the other he carried a cup of something. He sat down next to her. Pulling out of his pocket (Imaginary) gauze and wrap, he began to crush the herbs together. "I see you've tried to move again." He said softly.
She reddened. "Because... er... I was worried..." She answered, finding the wall really interesting. "Worried I wouldn't come back and leave you?" He whispered. She nodded to the wall. "You don't trust people much do you?" His voice was sad and soft, just loud enough for her to hear him.
She turned to face him clumsily, losing her balance. He put an arm around her to steady her. Leaning heavily against him so she wouldn't fall, she finally faced him. His emerald stared into her own. "Don't worry I know how you feel." Kurama said, reading the sadness in her face
"No. No one does." She said flatly, trying to sit down, with his help, of course. "You have no idea." Kurama snorted at the comment. "When I became a human, I isolated myself, I didn't think I could trust no one, not even my human family." He said.
Mina looked into his green eyes. "How did you learn to trust?" She asked quietly. "I started love. I started to care." He replied simply. "I don't think I could do that." She looked down at the floor. "Anyone can. It takes time, when the right person comes along... you'll see." He said gently.
"I think that person already came." She whispered. Kurama blushed, then went back to crushing the herbs together. When the task was done he rubbed the bits against the gauze wrap. The gauze turned a forest green color. "There." He muttered to himself. He elevated her foot with a pile of rocks and started to wrap it tight.
When he was done, he stood her up. "Try and walk now." He told her. She shrugged. He slung her arm around his neck and put an arm around her waist. She took his hand and tried to take a step. To her surprise, she didn't fall. Her foot throbbed a little but she was okay.
She took another cautious step. Then another. They continued that way, till they went around the whole cavern. Mina smiled happily, something rare. "Good. You're healing a lot faster than I
thought." He told her with a small smile. "Yeah. Do you think I can fight tonight?"She asked. "No. You'll have to sit tonight out. You can fight tomorrow though."
Her smile widened. "Good." She sat down. He sat next to her. Suddenly a look of horror spread on her pretty features. "Oh shit! Togoru's gonna kill me for sure!" She shivered. She couldn't stop. Not only the fact that Togoru would kill her if needed but also because she was soaked.
Kurama took off his outer kimono (Is that right?) and placed it around her. "How's that?" She could only nod in response. She was mesmerized by his muscular body. (I would be too). Sure she had seen her team bare chested (Do no e-mail me about this) but it was different to her since she liked him.
Kurama noticed her staring. "Not what you expected huh?" He laughed lightly. Mina could feel her face going totally red."S-sorry." Cleaning her nails seemed really important to her at that moment. "No need to apologize. Mother was just as surprised. She even asked if I was the same person." Mina felt saddened by the word mother. Kurama noticed. "Sorry, didn't mean to make you sad."
Author: Sorry, I know I promised to make Hiei's girlfriend show up in the next chapter, but... I went into detail in some parts and never got to where I needed. I will try to have her appear at least in the next chappie.
Kittykat: Baka
Silverfox: I said sorry!
Hiei_lover: I don't mind!
Kittykat: That's because you don't want him to have a girlfriend
Hiei: Shut-up
All: Sweat drop