Ack! I keep forgeting to save!!! Thank you all that reveiwed! This chapter is better and longer! At least I think it's better...
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'NO! These stupid machines are not going to kill mommy' thought a very young female demi-saiyin.
The little girl and her mother had been searching for food in a part-demolished-but-inhabited city when the androids,
17 and 18 decided to have some "fun". They immediately noticed the beautiful woman and the tailed girl. Soon after they began hurting the human.
17 was strangling 'mom'. The child ran toward the bored looking 18 and punched her in the gut. 18, who had taken the attack full force, stumbled back a bit surprised that it had actually hurt. "I'm not in the mood to play with you child. Your going to die now" 18 calmly stated.
17 let go of the blue eyed woman and was blocking every thing 'mom' threw at him, with a sickening smirk on.
"Oh come on sister have a little fun" the dark haired android said.
"No" 18 responded simply. She lunged forward and hit the young girl in the face, sending her crashing in to a former bank building. Before she could get up 18 'kindly' gave her a kick that slammed her into more buildings. Minutes later the tailed one got up and flew at the lighter haired machine. Punched and kicks went flying few landing on 18 most landing on the child
17 was playing catch with 'mom', by throwing her into the air and catching her ...some of the time.
The girl was losing energy fast she hadn't eaten or slept for over 24 hours and the danm android was beating the crap out of her. If she was going to die it didn't matter she'd be with her father and other her mother said he'd spoken of,
but she wasn't going to let them kill mom. The girl reached deep inside to collect as much energy as she could and got in to position "Ka... Me...." her hands began to glow "KA..." a ball of blue light formed "Me...." 'This hast to work' "HA" the blue beam flew to ward 18 who had just remember where she'd seen the attack last. She stepped to the side,
the blast only grazing a few pieces of her blonde hair. Completely drained the girl fell on her back.
"Kill the brat's mother she ruined my hair!" The female killer screeched.
Barley keeping her eyes open the child watched 17 simply rip her mother head off with no respect at all. The demi-saiyin forgot all the physical pain and fatigue all her felt was anger. She firmly stood and began searching for power within suddenly she was the center of a squiring white aura. Playing the death of her mother over and over again in her mind she told herself it was all her fault, she was too weak, she was to stupid. The anger exploded and the aura intensified. Her short black hair stood up and her eyes flickered blue, green. Screaming with tears down her face her hair turned a golden yellow and her deep black eyes turned turquoise. Realizing her power had somehow increased she rushed toward them faster then she'd thought possible.
"Another" groaned 18.
"Let's just kill this one too," 17 proposed
They attacked her until unconsciousness witch hadn't taking long. The recent lack of food, rest, the pain, physical and emotional, and her transformation clouded her mind and made her fighting skills poor.
Luckily a more qualified opponent had been watching and was ready to save the beaten girl.
Who could it be thats going to save her? If you don't know you propilbly don't know dbz to well...anywho please review tell what I've done wrong or ,hopefully,right!!
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