I DO NOT OWN THE INCREDIBLES OR ANYTHING ELSE THAT IS DISNEY/PIXAR.
But Violet is mine, so hands off.
This is my first attempt at a fanfic, or any other publicly seen writing. So please read and review.
Know this, however, I will accept constructive criticism or compliments only. If you review just to tell me what a $$# loser I am and how much my writing sucks, then I will send my army of killer ninja attack squirrels to hunt you down in your sleep.
And yes, for those of you who were wondering, I do have serious issues.
-.O Caffeine is good for you.
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"Violet! Hurry up!" whined Dash.
Dash was a normal kid. He was average height for someone his age, had swept back blonde hair and dark eyes, andwas currently wearing a light blue t-shirt and jeans with running shoes. It was the start of yet another school year, and Dash was on his way to sign up for track. Unfortunately for him, his mother, Helen Parr, was unable to bring him.
"What's the rush? It's not like your coach will replace you or anything."
Because Mrs. Parr was unable to bring him herself, she placed him under the control of his older sister Violet, and so he was constrained to her speed. Dash was a normal kid, who just happened to be able to break the sound barrier before he could break a sweat.
"But Violet, I wanna go fast!"
"And I wanna go slow, so stop whining."
"What is the rush, anyway? It's a nice day, why not take time to look around?" This was Tony, the first boyfriend Violet had ever had.
"There are beautiful flowers, beautiful birds, beautiful squirrels," Tony stopped for a moment. Searching the body of his girlfriend he noticed that she was wearing khaki pants and a loose pink shirt, her long black hair held away from her face by a yellow-orange headband. His light brown eyes met Violet's black ones and he continued, "beautiful girls." Violet's face turned a shade befitting her name. "So you see, there's really no reason to hurry."
Dash stuck his finger into his mouth and made gagging sounds.
"Hey look! There's the school already!" Dash stopped making noises and looked toward the place Tony had pointed out. "I told you there was no reason to hurry!"
Dash rolled his eyes and muttered under his breath, "Yeah, no reason at all, except that I would've been there an hour ago if I could've used my powers."
"What?"
"Nothing."
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It turned out that Violet had been right about the coach. The man was not even thinking of replacing Dash, in fact, by the time Dash showed up, his coach was frantically calling everyone who might possibly know where the young boy was.
"Where the heck have you been?!" screamed the overly hysteric man. "You are my star runner, the fastest boy on my team... I expected you to be here an hour ago!"
"Sorry coach, I would've been here sooner but my sister felt like walking at a snails pace."
Violet rolled her eyes. Dash stuck out his tongue at her and made a raspberry.
"Well, it doesn't matter." The coach said, calming himself, "You're here now, so just sign up and we'll send you through the try-outs."
"TRY-OUTS? Why do I have to go through the try-outs?"
The coach, aware that he had somehow managed to bruise the child's already overwhelming ego, quickly repaired, "Only because it's required! You and I both know that you'll go through them easily," the coach leaned down till his mouth was next to Dash's ear, and continued in a hoarse whisper, "but these mothers will skin me alive if I don't put you through, like all their little 'normal' boys."
His ego back to it's normal, highly inflated status, Dash signed his name and shot off through the test course like a rocket. The coach returned his attention to signing up the 'normal' boys.
"So, uh, Violet. You wanna go, I don't know, take a look around under the bleachers?"
"Tony, my dad would kill me if he found me under the bleachers with a boy. No, scratch that, he'd kill you. And then just ground me to infinity."
"And beyond?"
Violet had no time to respond to the jest. A sudden explosion in the center of the school's turf launched mud and debris everywhere; a man wearing a white lab coat and a mask leapt out of the crater that the blast created.
"BWA-HA-HA!! I am, (pause for dumbatic, oops, I mean dramatic effect) THE PSYCHIATRIST!"
"That is so lame."
After making sure that the attention of the crowd was on the so called 'super-villain', Violet quickly disappeared behind a nearby building, and reappeared a minute later, though no one recognized her. Now wearing a black mask and a bright red leotard with the family logo emblazoned across her breasts , she was Violet. Member of the Incredibles family, and super heroine extraordinaire.
The villain, having noticed the appearance of the young super, waited as Violet made her way across the field. When she had come within about ten feet, she planted her gloved hands on the tops of her thigh- high black boots and asked, "All right, Mr. Psycho, what do you want?"
The man was seething. Only there for a few minutes, and already the girl was mocking him. He decided to set her straight. "For your infor mation it's, The Psychiatrist. And as for my wants, they're really quite simple. World domination, chaos and destruction, all that normal bad-guy stuff."
"Well then, you have a problem . You stand no chance of beating me, and I won't allow you to do any of your 'normal bad-guy stuff'. You might as well give up now."
"Really? No chance of beating you? You must be quite a bit stronger than your partner, then. He only took two seconds to go down."
Violet started, but quickly regained composure. She crossed her arms and stated, "You're bluffing."
The nutcase laughed viciously, then drew out from behind his back the limp body of a young boy wearing a suit similar in design to Violet's.
Dash, his body still limp, slowly raised his head till Violet could clearly make out his face. Her eyes went wide, "What did you do to him?!"
The Psychiatrist, still chuckling, replied, "See for yourself." With that he whispered something into the boy's ear, and set him down.
As her brother rose slowly onto his own feet, Violet noticed that something was definitely wrong with him. His movements were stiff and his body sagged over, reminding Violet of a zombie she had seen in some old horror flick. Even more so when his face turned up to look at her. A maniacal grin had spread across it, and his eyes were glowing bright red.
The Psychiatrist's foul laughter redoubled when he saw the look on Violet's face, then stopped abruptly. The villain's face twisted into a grotesque sculpture of malice, and in a low, gravelly tone he commanded, "Sic her."
Violet only got her force field up just in time, as her own brother attacked at full speed.
"Dash, stop! It's me!"
Dash ignored her completely, and continued to batter away at her force field.
"He can't hear you, little girl." The Psychiatrist watched, amused, as Violet struggled to keep the force field up under the shower of lightning fast blows. "It was quite obvious, when the boy tried to attack me, that there was something wrong with his mind. As a psychiatrist, I felt it was my duty to help him. So I removed it."
"You what?!"
"I removed his mind. Or at least, any conscious part of it. For you see, just as you have the power to create force fields and turn invisible, and your partner has the power of super speed, I have the power of hypnotism." Apparently getting bored of the scene, The Psychiatrist's tone again became gravelly as he gave the final order, "Finish her."
Following the order, the hypnotized Dash ran back a short ways, then charged. Using the extra distance to build speed, Dash threw himself bodily against Violet's field, shattering it completelyand knocking himself unconscious.
"Interesting, isn't it? In only a few minutes, my power has completely wiped out one super hero, and immobilized a super heroine."
Violet found that it was true. Dash was completely out of it, and with her field broken forcefully, Violet had been drained so badly that she couldn't move if she wanted.
The Psychiatrist began walking toward the still figures lying on the ground, stopping with his feet only a few inches away from Violet's face. "I could destroy you now." The villain crouched down till his mouth was nearly touching Violet's ear. "I could destroy you now, but I think I'd like to see just who you are, first." He reached down with his right hand.
Violet's breath quickened as she felt her mask being slowly pulled away from her face. And then, it was gone.
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And that, dear readers, is the end of the first chapter.
Depending on your reviews, I will be updating shortly.
-.O Mutant squirrel, over and out.