How To Transform a ditz into the Perfect Soldier
~Author's Note~ ^^ Thank you all for your support, and I am having a great deal of fun with this particular story. I can't wait to get to some really twisted parts in. Maybe I won't have Pluto the evil one.hmmm we'll never know -_^. COUPLINGS! Everyone is asking me, and I'm going to tell you the absolute truth: I HAVE NO CLUE WHO'S WITH WHOM. I want to be somewhat original. but I enjoy Hirro/Serena, Duo/Serena/Hotaru fics. -_- I can't decide.ummm I was thinking of having it be a Hirro, Duo and Serena triangle. Both of them falling in love with her, and she loving both of them, but only one will win her heart as a lover. Hmmmm how's that sound?
Well I'm open to all suggestions, but these are the couplings that I'd like to choose from:
Serena:: Hirro, Duo, Trowa
Amy:: Hirro, Duo, Wufei, Quatre
Rei:: Wufei, Quatre, Trowa
Lita:: Trowa, Wufei, Quatre
Mina:: Hirro, Quatre, Duo
How's that sound? This is your vote so please make them count, if you could please vote for each of the girls, and I can add in other ppl from both GW and SM. BTW the outer scouts might be in this fic. As well as Relena, and Rini. ^^ Oh wells. We'll see about them at a later date in this fic. ^^
Disclaimers: I do not own GW or SM, the only thing I own is the plot to this story.
Recap: The green-haired beauty felt her heart constrict her throat, the child lay on the street, and remembrance flickered through her eyes. "Life goes on." Her voice wavered slightly, and echoed off the room. Pain flickered, and then with a frown she pushed it aside. "DID YOU SERENTIY EVER LOOK BACK AT ME!?!? NO! YOU DID NOT CARE WHAT HAPPENED TO ME! YOU RUINED MY LIFE TO SAVE YOUR OWN LIFE! TO SAVE YOUR PRECIOUS LIFE, BUT YOU COULD CARE LESS ABOUT ME!! I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE!!!!" Her voice choked off, emotion invading it. She turned icily, her hair swished around her waist hips and knees. The staff she carried in her hand clicked as she slammed it onto the floor.
Chapter 3:
Amy, Lita, Mina, and Rei were all at the Tsukino's, and each was teary eyed, and worried. "I can't believe she ran away. Something must have happened to her." Mina's voice quivered with fear. The police were sitting inside talking with Serena's mother, and the girls were sitting outside on the steps crying. It had come as quite a blow to them all when Serena's mother opened the doors, she was obviously worried and was on the verge of tears. After hearing the girl's accounts of all that had happened at school, and what Serena had said at the diners, she had rushed to the phone.
Amy took a deep breath, "Something's not right! Serena's mad, scared and upset, but she wouldn't just run away!" Lita stood, and turned facing her friends. "Serena needs us girls! I have this really bad feeling-" Rei also stood, "I'm getting some really bad vibes from the house across from here. You know, the one where those weird people moved in a couple of weeks ago." Mina got to her feet, surprised, "Negaverse?" Rei shook her head, "I.I'm not sure." Lita's eyes narrowed, "If they have Serena, I'm going to kick their asses all the way to the ends of this universe!!!"
Amy nodded in agreement, and the other girls, forming a circle, smiled. "Scouts?" Mina's liquid quiet voice melted through them, and the others chorused, "SCOUTS!" All four girls turned in unison only to bump, literally, right into Molly. "Oh girls! I just got a call from Serena's mom, I can't believe she ran away! That's not like Serena, I don't know why but for some reason I have this feeling in the pit of my stomach that she's in trouble. Her voice drifted to them, concern for Serena was all that echoed back to the ears of the scouts.
The girls all looked at each other and nodded, "Umm..Molly, I really don't want to be rude, but I just ran off without telling my parents where I was going, I have to get home." Mina crossed her fingers behind her back, lying like this hurt her, but it had to be done. Rei nodded, "Yea me too, please call me if anything comes up about Serena." Lita and Amy also created some excuse to get away from Molly, and together they ran off.
Molly and taken each and every excuse, only half believing the scouts. 'They can't all have to get home so quickly. I wonder. Do they know where Serena is?" She quickly shoved the thought away. 'They're just as worried about Serena as I am, I could tell by their expressions. I'll just leave them, they're all super nice and they just need some time by themselves.' Without another thought on the subject, Molly calmly walked up the steps and knocked politely on the door.
Mina led the procession, and Amy took up the rear, the rest of the girls followed along. The girls/scouts sauntered into an alleyway, taking deep breathes the started their own individual summoning spells. "VENUS STAR POWER MAKEUP!!!" "MARS STAR POWER MAKE UP!!!" "MERCURY STAR POWER MAKEUP!!!" "JUPITER STAR POWER MAKE UP!!!" In a flash of orange, red, blue and green lights filled the air. Where the timid school girls once stood, there were 4 spectacular young women standing, hands on hips.
Mina stood within the circle of fighters, her blond hair flowing freely held an inhuman radiant glow of power. Her blue eyes were electric, and her fuku was now a totally different style. It was short, ending to right bellow her ass; it was an orange color, and her shirt was a white, with an orange bow. She had on pretty high-heeled orange party sandal-type shoes that wrapped around her ankles. A cold smile graced her pretty face.
Rei had on a blood-red skirt, and white shirt with a red bow on the front. Her raven black hair had a purple hue to it, and her dark violet eyes were radiant with power. She too had on a pair of party shoes, red in color, and had a tiara gracing her forehead, and pretty star earrings on too.
Amy's sun-filled eyes were glowing with intelligence and power. Gracing her body was a white shirt, with a soft blue bow, and soft blue skirt. She wore knee-high boots heeled boots, and a tiara on her forehead. Over her eyes, unique only to her, was a shady blue-gray almost transparent visor. This was her specific nega-energy reader.
Last but not least stood a taller fighter, displaying a green skirt, bow and a white shirt. She had her own brown hair in a ponytail that was electrified with her positive energy. She had emerald green eyes, and a pretty smile. Lita stood there, her stance showing off her ankle-high boots, and tailored legs.
Mina jumped high into the air, her hair flying in all directions, her orange fuku seemed to glitter in the sidewalk lights. She landed soundlessly on the roof, her heels barely clicking on the brick. Soon after the other scouts also landed soundless as cats on the roof of the building. "Lets do it!" Sailor Jupiter's energized voice pumped some more adrenaline into the other scouts and they all descended on the house across from Serena's.
Serena had long ago returned to 'her' bunk, and sitting up, glancing, and staring as more and more people ventured into the room; what she saw shocked her to her very core. Boys wore clothes that were so tattered that they were virtually wearing little or none what so ever; the girls were no different except that they were somewhat more clothed. Blood was caked on to arms, legs, torsos, and faces, dirt covered the places that weren't already covered in blood, and cuts, bruises and other various scars cut through the dirt and blood.
Serena couldn't believe her eyes, she could see, hear and practically smell the pain in the air, as each new arrival entered the room. She noticed that some of the boys looked at her as if she were weird, and most of the girls looked sympathetic when the saw her sitting, probably looking scared, on her bunk. The silence in the room was broken when the door was opened meekly, and in stumbled a bruised, battered, completely destroyed blonde boy.
His eyes were a beautiful color of blue, clear blue, and his hair a natural platinum blonde. He was lean, but well muscled and with a slight form. His barely there pants hung loosely off his hips, and no shirt covered his muscled but scarred, bloody and muddy chest. He could barely walk, he had shattered his ankle, and had twisted his knee. Blood was gushing from the various fresh wounds that covered his body. With a cry of pain he fell onto his bunk, and rolled over, gasping for breath that wouldn't come easily.
Serena felt her heart wrench in her chest, breathing became painful and she felt her eyes mist over. 'No one deserves to be in that much pain.' Instinctively her hand came to the bow on her shirt, but found nothing but a clasp. She gasped, and then recalled how the old man had taken her brooch, along with the crystal. 'Oh no.' Without realizing it Serena had gotten out of her bunk and was standing no more than 2 feet away from the boy's bed. Suddenly a brown braid was flying in her face, tickling her knows and swiping at the tears that ran down her cheeks.
"DAMN QUATRE! WHAT THE HELL??" Duo was hovering over his friend, shocked at the extensive fresh wounds that wound through Quatre's body. Quatre was finding it hard to breath, much less talk, and could barely move his fingers to console his disturbed friend. Gashes ran down his arms, and were bleeding profusely, the thin pair of pants that he wore was almost thoroughly soaked through with blood. Unknown to even him, he had 4 broken ribs, his lungs were almost punctured by the broken rib bones, and he was breathing on his last threads.
Quatre's vision swam before him, and his breathing became shallow, he could hardly see his friend's cobalt blue eyes. 'I'm dying. Mother.I'm dying.do...do I want to die?' His thoughts became more and more desperate with each struggle for air, and sight, within moments he had blacked out, but not before whispering his fears out loud. "I. I'm dy-dyin-dying."
Serena's eyes widened, fear engulfing her, she had heard his whispered words, and had seen the look in his eyes, she had witnessed before each of the nega-verse villains had died. That same look of pain, anguish, fear and disdain. No light had shed in those eyes, for all were beyond young, and had so much to live for. The same look had lit Quatre's eyes, and sent shivers of dread down her spine.
Moment's later men armed with rifles, shot guns and other various weapons burst into the room, sending Duo scurrying back to his bunk. One of the men grabbed Serena around her waist, and hoisted her up so that she could not fight, kick or bite him. Struggling in vain, Serena felt her breath being pushed out of her. Quatre was laid on a stretcher and carried out by the men, and right behind them Serena was being carried out too.
"HEEEEELLLLP, PLEEEEAAAAASE SOMEONE! I DON'T WAAAAAAAANA DIE!!! PLEASE HELP ME! PLEASE, PLEASE, LET ME GO, I.I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING, I SWEAR.P-PLEASE.P-PLEaaaaaasee." Her howls for help went seemingly unheard by everyone, and even Duo had to look away as Serena was carried off. Her cries slowly became distant, as she gave up hope. Tears were sliding down her cheeks, and she realized that she was going to die.
Out loud she whimpered, praying and apologizing. "Goddess above please help me..I. I'm sorry girls. I wish I were smarter, better behaved. I wish I could have been the leader that you wanted me to be. I wish I had listened, paid attention. I even wish I didn't burden you with so much. I know I was mean, I was a horrible, awful bitch, with no respect for any of you. I'm sorry.sorry Pluto, for not being there for you. I'm sorry mom that I'm not the ideal daughter, and I'm sorry for putting you through so much pain. I wish I had been nicer to you Sammy, you deserved nothing more than my kindness. Rei, Mina, Lita, Amy, I'm sorry. Molly I wish I were a descent friend. I swear to you Selena, if you just give me one more chance. Just one more chance, I'll try, honest, I'll try to be perfect for all of my friends. I'll become a leader, and less of a pig. I'll work hard at school, and I'll be there for Sammy. Just please..give me this one chance."
Tears slid down her cheeks, and her breathing became harried. She was in a great deal of emotional pain, and guilt slit through her soul. She knew deep down that she had disappointed many people. She had let down so many of her friends, family and even herself. She had yelled and screamed at friends who were only trying to help, had been weak when she needed to be strong. She let down just about everyone around her, but the person she knew she let down the most was her future daughter, Rini. Rini had come back to her a few blissful months ago, and had been disappointed to see her 'elegant' mommy still quite a piglet. Graceful was not a word you used with Serena, she was as charming as a roach, and as neat as a pig, but deep down inside of her still lurked the princess she had once been.
With a sick feeling of realization, Serena felt her whole body desert her. 'I'm never going to be the person that everyone wants to see. I'm not going to be perfect in every way, the way Princess Serenity had been, the way Neo- Queen Serenity was in the future. How was I supposed to accomplish all that when all I could do was shop, pig-out and evade taking responsibilities. But now it's too late to change everything. I'm going to die, and I'll never have the chance to make my family, friends and comrades proud of me." With grief pouring through her eyes, and face, Serena tearfully apologized to her friends, "I'm sorry, everyone.really sorry."
~Author's Note~ ::sigh:: I know that was sad little ending, but hey I'm feeling somewhat sad myself. Hmm lets see, guys how good is this? Honestly, don't butter me up just to feel better, on a scale of 1-10, 1 being the worst, 10 the best, how is this story? I promise I'll get into Serena's training a little in the future, and I did put Rini, indirectly,, into this story. ^^;;; I don't think we'll be seeing her until the end of this fic. ^^ Anyways, thank you all so much for your support, I'm feeling so loved, or rather my story is. ^^ Anyways, for a 3 day writing task, how is it? I promise I'll try to update every other week or sooner than that. But that'll only happen if you review this story. BTW I NEED SOME FLAMES!! Flames help my stories get better. Oh and umm hehe, I won't make Pluto such a bitch, because she isn't in reality. Your just going to have to wait till the end of this fic to understand a whole lot about Pluto's actions.
^^ Yea, you're all going to enjoy the end of this fic, its going to have a major twist to it. I'm debating on having it all be a dream or just.well anyways, I wont' give it away. ^^ Hehehe, I'm evil. N E ways, read and review, and Happy Holidays everyone!
~Author's Note~ ^^ Thank you all for your support, and I am having a great deal of fun with this particular story. I can't wait to get to some really twisted parts in. Maybe I won't have Pluto the evil one.hmmm we'll never know -_^. COUPLINGS! Everyone is asking me, and I'm going to tell you the absolute truth: I HAVE NO CLUE WHO'S WITH WHOM. I want to be somewhat original. but I enjoy Hirro/Serena, Duo/Serena/Hotaru fics. -_- I can't decide.ummm I was thinking of having it be a Hirro, Duo and Serena triangle. Both of them falling in love with her, and she loving both of them, but only one will win her heart as a lover. Hmmmm how's that sound?
Well I'm open to all suggestions, but these are the couplings that I'd like to choose from:
Serena:: Hirro, Duo, Trowa
Amy:: Hirro, Duo, Wufei, Quatre
Rei:: Wufei, Quatre, Trowa
Lita:: Trowa, Wufei, Quatre
Mina:: Hirro, Quatre, Duo
How's that sound? This is your vote so please make them count, if you could please vote for each of the girls, and I can add in other ppl from both GW and SM. BTW the outer scouts might be in this fic. As well as Relena, and Rini. ^^ Oh wells. We'll see about them at a later date in this fic. ^^
Disclaimers: I do not own GW or SM, the only thing I own is the plot to this story.
Recap: The green-haired beauty felt her heart constrict her throat, the child lay on the street, and remembrance flickered through her eyes. "Life goes on." Her voice wavered slightly, and echoed off the room. Pain flickered, and then with a frown she pushed it aside. "DID YOU SERENTIY EVER LOOK BACK AT ME!?!? NO! YOU DID NOT CARE WHAT HAPPENED TO ME! YOU RUINED MY LIFE TO SAVE YOUR OWN LIFE! TO SAVE YOUR PRECIOUS LIFE, BUT YOU COULD CARE LESS ABOUT ME!! I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE!!!!" Her voice choked off, emotion invading it. She turned icily, her hair swished around her waist hips and knees. The staff she carried in her hand clicked as she slammed it onto the floor.
Chapter 3:
Amy, Lita, Mina, and Rei were all at the Tsukino's, and each was teary eyed, and worried. "I can't believe she ran away. Something must have happened to her." Mina's voice quivered with fear. The police were sitting inside talking with Serena's mother, and the girls were sitting outside on the steps crying. It had come as quite a blow to them all when Serena's mother opened the doors, she was obviously worried and was on the verge of tears. After hearing the girl's accounts of all that had happened at school, and what Serena had said at the diners, she had rushed to the phone.
Amy took a deep breath, "Something's not right! Serena's mad, scared and upset, but she wouldn't just run away!" Lita stood, and turned facing her friends. "Serena needs us girls! I have this really bad feeling-" Rei also stood, "I'm getting some really bad vibes from the house across from here. You know, the one where those weird people moved in a couple of weeks ago." Mina got to her feet, surprised, "Negaverse?" Rei shook her head, "I.I'm not sure." Lita's eyes narrowed, "If they have Serena, I'm going to kick their asses all the way to the ends of this universe!!!"
Amy nodded in agreement, and the other girls, forming a circle, smiled. "Scouts?" Mina's liquid quiet voice melted through them, and the others chorused, "SCOUTS!" All four girls turned in unison only to bump, literally, right into Molly. "Oh girls! I just got a call from Serena's mom, I can't believe she ran away! That's not like Serena, I don't know why but for some reason I have this feeling in the pit of my stomach that she's in trouble. Her voice drifted to them, concern for Serena was all that echoed back to the ears of the scouts.
The girls all looked at each other and nodded, "Umm..Molly, I really don't want to be rude, but I just ran off without telling my parents where I was going, I have to get home." Mina crossed her fingers behind her back, lying like this hurt her, but it had to be done. Rei nodded, "Yea me too, please call me if anything comes up about Serena." Lita and Amy also created some excuse to get away from Molly, and together they ran off.
Molly and taken each and every excuse, only half believing the scouts. 'They can't all have to get home so quickly. I wonder. Do they know where Serena is?" She quickly shoved the thought away. 'They're just as worried about Serena as I am, I could tell by their expressions. I'll just leave them, they're all super nice and they just need some time by themselves.' Without another thought on the subject, Molly calmly walked up the steps and knocked politely on the door.
Mina led the procession, and Amy took up the rear, the rest of the girls followed along. The girls/scouts sauntered into an alleyway, taking deep breathes the started their own individual summoning spells. "VENUS STAR POWER MAKEUP!!!" "MARS STAR POWER MAKE UP!!!" "MERCURY STAR POWER MAKEUP!!!" "JUPITER STAR POWER MAKE UP!!!" In a flash of orange, red, blue and green lights filled the air. Where the timid school girls once stood, there were 4 spectacular young women standing, hands on hips.
Mina stood within the circle of fighters, her blond hair flowing freely held an inhuman radiant glow of power. Her blue eyes were electric, and her fuku was now a totally different style. It was short, ending to right bellow her ass; it was an orange color, and her shirt was a white, with an orange bow. She had on pretty high-heeled orange party sandal-type shoes that wrapped around her ankles. A cold smile graced her pretty face.
Rei had on a blood-red skirt, and white shirt with a red bow on the front. Her raven black hair had a purple hue to it, and her dark violet eyes were radiant with power. She too had on a pair of party shoes, red in color, and had a tiara gracing her forehead, and pretty star earrings on too.
Amy's sun-filled eyes were glowing with intelligence and power. Gracing her body was a white shirt, with a soft blue bow, and soft blue skirt. She wore knee-high boots heeled boots, and a tiara on her forehead. Over her eyes, unique only to her, was a shady blue-gray almost transparent visor. This was her specific nega-energy reader.
Last but not least stood a taller fighter, displaying a green skirt, bow and a white shirt. She had her own brown hair in a ponytail that was electrified with her positive energy. She had emerald green eyes, and a pretty smile. Lita stood there, her stance showing off her ankle-high boots, and tailored legs.
Mina jumped high into the air, her hair flying in all directions, her orange fuku seemed to glitter in the sidewalk lights. She landed soundlessly on the roof, her heels barely clicking on the brick. Soon after the other scouts also landed soundless as cats on the roof of the building. "Lets do it!" Sailor Jupiter's energized voice pumped some more adrenaline into the other scouts and they all descended on the house across from Serena's.
Serena had long ago returned to 'her' bunk, and sitting up, glancing, and staring as more and more people ventured into the room; what she saw shocked her to her very core. Boys wore clothes that were so tattered that they were virtually wearing little or none what so ever; the girls were no different except that they were somewhat more clothed. Blood was caked on to arms, legs, torsos, and faces, dirt covered the places that weren't already covered in blood, and cuts, bruises and other various scars cut through the dirt and blood.
Serena couldn't believe her eyes, she could see, hear and practically smell the pain in the air, as each new arrival entered the room. She noticed that some of the boys looked at her as if she were weird, and most of the girls looked sympathetic when the saw her sitting, probably looking scared, on her bunk. The silence in the room was broken when the door was opened meekly, and in stumbled a bruised, battered, completely destroyed blonde boy.
His eyes were a beautiful color of blue, clear blue, and his hair a natural platinum blonde. He was lean, but well muscled and with a slight form. His barely there pants hung loosely off his hips, and no shirt covered his muscled but scarred, bloody and muddy chest. He could barely walk, he had shattered his ankle, and had twisted his knee. Blood was gushing from the various fresh wounds that covered his body. With a cry of pain he fell onto his bunk, and rolled over, gasping for breath that wouldn't come easily.
Serena felt her heart wrench in her chest, breathing became painful and she felt her eyes mist over. 'No one deserves to be in that much pain.' Instinctively her hand came to the bow on her shirt, but found nothing but a clasp. She gasped, and then recalled how the old man had taken her brooch, along with the crystal. 'Oh no.' Without realizing it Serena had gotten out of her bunk and was standing no more than 2 feet away from the boy's bed. Suddenly a brown braid was flying in her face, tickling her knows and swiping at the tears that ran down her cheeks.
"DAMN QUATRE! WHAT THE HELL??" Duo was hovering over his friend, shocked at the extensive fresh wounds that wound through Quatre's body. Quatre was finding it hard to breath, much less talk, and could barely move his fingers to console his disturbed friend. Gashes ran down his arms, and were bleeding profusely, the thin pair of pants that he wore was almost thoroughly soaked through with blood. Unknown to even him, he had 4 broken ribs, his lungs were almost punctured by the broken rib bones, and he was breathing on his last threads.
Quatre's vision swam before him, and his breathing became shallow, he could hardly see his friend's cobalt blue eyes. 'I'm dying. Mother.I'm dying.do...do I want to die?' His thoughts became more and more desperate with each struggle for air, and sight, within moments he had blacked out, but not before whispering his fears out loud. "I. I'm dy-dyin-dying."
Serena's eyes widened, fear engulfing her, she had heard his whispered words, and had seen the look in his eyes, she had witnessed before each of the nega-verse villains had died. That same look of pain, anguish, fear and disdain. No light had shed in those eyes, for all were beyond young, and had so much to live for. The same look had lit Quatre's eyes, and sent shivers of dread down her spine.
Moment's later men armed with rifles, shot guns and other various weapons burst into the room, sending Duo scurrying back to his bunk. One of the men grabbed Serena around her waist, and hoisted her up so that she could not fight, kick or bite him. Struggling in vain, Serena felt her breath being pushed out of her. Quatre was laid on a stretcher and carried out by the men, and right behind them Serena was being carried out too.
"HEEEEELLLLP, PLEEEEAAAAASE SOMEONE! I DON'T WAAAAAAAANA DIE!!! PLEASE HELP ME! PLEASE, PLEASE, LET ME GO, I.I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING, I SWEAR.P-PLEASE.P-PLEaaaaaasee." Her howls for help went seemingly unheard by everyone, and even Duo had to look away as Serena was carried off. Her cries slowly became distant, as she gave up hope. Tears were sliding down her cheeks, and she realized that she was going to die.
Out loud she whimpered, praying and apologizing. "Goddess above please help me..I. I'm sorry girls. I wish I were smarter, better behaved. I wish I could have been the leader that you wanted me to be. I wish I had listened, paid attention. I even wish I didn't burden you with so much. I know I was mean, I was a horrible, awful bitch, with no respect for any of you. I'm sorry.sorry Pluto, for not being there for you. I'm sorry mom that I'm not the ideal daughter, and I'm sorry for putting you through so much pain. I wish I had been nicer to you Sammy, you deserved nothing more than my kindness. Rei, Mina, Lita, Amy, I'm sorry. Molly I wish I were a descent friend. I swear to you Selena, if you just give me one more chance. Just one more chance, I'll try, honest, I'll try to be perfect for all of my friends. I'll become a leader, and less of a pig. I'll work hard at school, and I'll be there for Sammy. Just please..give me this one chance."
Tears slid down her cheeks, and her breathing became harried. She was in a great deal of emotional pain, and guilt slit through her soul. She knew deep down that she had disappointed many people. She had let down so many of her friends, family and even herself. She had yelled and screamed at friends who were only trying to help, had been weak when she needed to be strong. She let down just about everyone around her, but the person she knew she let down the most was her future daughter, Rini. Rini had come back to her a few blissful months ago, and had been disappointed to see her 'elegant' mommy still quite a piglet. Graceful was not a word you used with Serena, she was as charming as a roach, and as neat as a pig, but deep down inside of her still lurked the princess she had once been.
With a sick feeling of realization, Serena felt her whole body desert her. 'I'm never going to be the person that everyone wants to see. I'm not going to be perfect in every way, the way Princess Serenity had been, the way Neo- Queen Serenity was in the future. How was I supposed to accomplish all that when all I could do was shop, pig-out and evade taking responsibilities. But now it's too late to change everything. I'm going to die, and I'll never have the chance to make my family, friends and comrades proud of me." With grief pouring through her eyes, and face, Serena tearfully apologized to her friends, "I'm sorry, everyone.really sorry."
~Author's Note~ ::sigh:: I know that was sad little ending, but hey I'm feeling somewhat sad myself. Hmm lets see, guys how good is this? Honestly, don't butter me up just to feel better, on a scale of 1-10, 1 being the worst, 10 the best, how is this story? I promise I'll get into Serena's training a little in the future, and I did put Rini, indirectly,, into this story. ^^;;; I don't think we'll be seeing her until the end of this fic. ^^ Anyways, thank you all so much for your support, I'm feeling so loved, or rather my story is. ^^ Anyways, for a 3 day writing task, how is it? I promise I'll try to update every other week or sooner than that. But that'll only happen if you review this story. BTW I NEED SOME FLAMES!! Flames help my stories get better. Oh and umm hehe, I won't make Pluto such a bitch, because she isn't in reality. Your just going to have to wait till the end of this fic to understand a whole lot about Pluto's actions.
^^ Yea, you're all going to enjoy the end of this fic, its going to have a major twist to it. I'm debating on having it all be a dream or just.well anyways, I wont' give it away. ^^ Hehehe, I'm evil. N E ways, read and review, and Happy Holidays everyone!