Transforming a Ditz
Author's note: OK! THAT'S IT! -_- I'm ticked! I WANT TO WRITE A GOOD CHAPTER! I will not send this chapter out until I deem it at least 50% percent suitable for my readers. Thank you for the gracious reviews, and I agree with you Damia; that chapter was the poorest I've ever given. ^^ But thank you all for the reviews. I enjoy that so many of you are honest with me ::grins:: so that's why I'm working extra hard on this chapter!
Disclaimers: See all previous chapters. this is probably the last time I'm putting this on my page, all other chapters will have a see first chap for disclaimers. Bye bye.
Chapter 14:
Setsuna stood at the mirror with sailor Venus. Both women had scowls on their faces, and both looked haggard. "Sailor Venus, the princess is being trained as we speak, that was her test, to endure training of a brute-level without the absolute aide of her sailor scouts. It's to help increase her confidence levels and make her more self-relying." Sailor Venus' blue eyes brightened at that, "Ok! So is that how she becomes Neo Queen Serenity? By this training? That's wicked awesome!" She chirped, the gold in her hair shimmering as she stepped to the side, leaning on her hip.
Setsuna looked to her, and smiled demurely, "Yes. this is one of the ways she turns to Neo Queen Serenity." She trails off as she turns to the mirror to a view what was happening to Serena; as she did so she murmured. "How would you like to join her? In training, I mean?" She turned, her garnet eyes seemed to be an almost sinisterly dark color; her green hair shimmering and waving as she moved, the staff in her hand making soft clicking sounds in the foggy chambers.
Mina's eyes widened, "I can go with her? Of course, to get stronger? I'll do anything.. But wait! What about the other sailor scouts? We have to find them. or is this part of the training, not being dependent on the others." She trailed off, to her, for some strange reason, nothing was adding up. 'There's something not right here. but what?' Her senshi skills sharpened as she turned her light blue eyes to Setsuna, who returned her gaze with a loving smile. "I'll find the other scouts, I just hope we're not too late. Sailor Venus, It's almost as if they just. disappeared!"
Sailor Venus frowned, and dipped her head forward trying her best to think. "It is possible. that. they. switched. dimensions? Like Rini? Could they have traveled to the past. or future," She looked up at Setsuna who had a frown on her face. "That is very possible. or they could be in. a time wrap." She said this mostly to herself, before turning to Venus, "Scout, I'll send you on to train, do not, I repeat DO NOT mention anything of this test to Serena, in fact you are to make absolutely no contact with her. She'll start depending on you, and all that had been taught to her up until now will be forgotten!" Venus nodded her understanding, "Alright then Setsuna. and don't forget to tell me when you've found the others." Mina turned around to face the inky black hole that appeared. "I'll see you around, Setsuna-san!" She called out as she stepped through, and emerged in a room bare of much furniture, but spotless. She sat down on the cot and waited, 'I'm sure they'd have sensed me, or Setsuna will have told them of my joining the training. all I have to do is wait.' She thought patiently as she leaned back on the bed.
Setsuna smirked to herself as she looked to the mirror, "Aww, this is only twice as easy now!" She said out loud, "You see Serenity? All the pain! All the anguish, you caused me! NOW YOUR PRECIOUS DAUGHTER IS MINE! And what makes this all the sweeter is how easy it'll be to recruit the sailor scouts as well! THE OUTER SENSHI ARE GONE. SMALL LADY IS DONE. ALL THAT'S LEFT ARE THE INNER SENSHI. WHERE ARE YOU HIDING THOSE THREE?" She laughed bitterly, an insane shine in her eyes as she formed another pitch black hole, and disappeared through it.
Meanwhile, in a place not far from Earth, three naked girls were wrapped in bubbles, their legs drawn up, hiding their breasts and other private parts. Their eyes were closed, but in a peaceful sleep, their breathing loose and shallow. A young woman dressed in a white gown stepped towards the three in bubbles, her silverish purple hair was strung up in two odangos on either side of her head. Her eyes were a light purple hue, and her lips a soft pink color. The gown she wore clung to her body, and on the center, what seemed to be holding the dress together, was a golden crescent moon. It rested between her breasts, and seemed to glow a vibrant moon white color.
Beside her trotted a black cat, fur glistening as it moved lithely; a golden crescent moon lighting her forehead. On the other side of the woman trotted a moon white cat, fur bright as it jumped forward; on his forehead, too, was a golden crescent moon. As the trio neared the three women, the woman waved a hand, her voice a bright tone of regal power, "Awaken princesses, and rise! Meet your queen." The soft words held much power, as the three girls stirred and opened their eyes. With gasps they were released from the bubbles, and immediately shrouded in beautiful gowns.
The raven haired woman was kneeling, the gown she had on a fiery red color. Off the shoulder straps hung lightly to her body, the dress curved to fit her body, her shoes a deep red color. A sash tied around the dress, swinging from behind to form and X shape on her back, and then rising up to form a bow at her breasts, the streaming ribbons flowed down the front of her dress. She stood up and looked around in confusion, as she stood she revealed white lace along the hem of the dress and along the bows ends. Her hair was loose down her back, but on it was a clip of white and gold, the sign of mars glinted at the others.
Beside her stood another young woman, blue hair cut short, eyes bright with wonder. In her hair were several white clips displaying the sign of Mercury. She wore a soft blue dress, it flowed around her. It was a strapless dress, tight across her chest but loose as it trailed to her hips and flowed out around her. This wasn't solid blue either, instead the blue of the upper blouse seemed to cut away and trail off to the sides, forming a V down the front. The V part of the dress was a pure white color, crisp and pure. Right at the point where the blouse flowed down to become the skirt, a beautiful white and gold brooch hung, belt like metal 'arms' swung around her hips, and trailed down the back of her dress. The brooch was of moderate size, but seemed to glisten as bright as the largest diamond in the world. Her shoes were also a light blue color to match the upper part of her gown.
The third young woman was wearing vibrant dark green dress that matched her emerald green eyes. This dress was sleeveless color, the dress clung to the woman's throat and came down almost totally covering her skin. As the dress dipped lower, it also opened up, revealing the woman's cleavage point, all the way to her arms. It closed up only to open once more as it slid down her stomach, revealing a taught belly button. The dress then hung closely to her hips, lengthening out but not in a flowing a skirt. The green fabric was clingy, and hung loosely to her legs, revealing a long slit that trailed down her thigh to her ankles, revealing forest green heeled party shoes. Her hands were gloved in lace green, and her hair was tied up in a dark brown ponytail. Clipped to the pony tail was the sign of Jupiter, with streamers flowing along the ponytail.
All three women were equally confused, and startled to be where they were. The blue haired angel turned to the woman and gasped, "Serenity-hime!" She fell down into a curtsey before rising, eyes wide, "Luna! Artemis!" She addressed the cats that stood beside the queen. "Scouts," the two answered, then fell silent as the Queen spoke. "Sailor scouts. I apologize for the rude way of my bringing you here. I wish I could have warned you, but had I done any such thing then we would have been found. and that can not happen. not yet!" Her
The raven haired goddess took a step forward, curtseying politely, "M'queen.with all due respect, what is wrong? Why couldn't we be found. and where is Serena?" Her tone was that of a concerned friend and guardian, her eyes blazing with controlled fear and hope; beside her the green-cloaked lady also stepped forward, "Serenity-hime, Serena's no where to be found, what is going on?" Her own words were unlady-like compared with her two friends, the warrior's shine evident in her eyes.
Serenity smiled brightly at the three women, "This is why you all protect my daughter. but from this force, even I was shocked to learn who had kidnapped our princess. and the last inner scout, Venus." The three senshis turned around, mixed voices of question and worry exclaimed in shock, "Venus, what's happened to Venus?" Serenity shook her head sadly, "Try not to call your friend, she never made it to this dimension warp. she is now with Serena, and both are in incredible danger!"
The vermillion-clothed woman stepped forward, raising her voice in chocked shock and concern, "Then why are we here? Take us to them, we'll save them and fight this force!" The other two raised their voices in agreement, only to be silenced by two loud cat-voices. "Enough, Scouts! Listen to Serenity- hime, you now face the greatest force you ever had. and you do this without use of your powers. only with the friendship and love you formed with Serena and Mina." The three princesses' fell silent, eyes downcast and humble. "Sorry.sorry.sorry." Three apologies echoed through the moon, bouncing off the walls of a high palace, and gleaming fountain. "Huh?!" The exclaimed shout of surprise didn't seem to bother Serenity as she gestured to the scene behind her. "Here was where it all started, Scouts. a young princess had fallen in love with a knight from the next kingdom. But she was forbidden the love, as it was unfitting to lower herself to a knight's rank." Her voice trailed off as a young woman came walking out of the palace, her eyes a vibrant color, her hair a soft lavender color, tied up in two buns on either side of her head. She wore a dress similar to that of Serena's when she was Neo Queen Serenity, her hands were gloved and held a single white rose.
"Oh knight of the kingdom of Time. do venture forth! Show yourself!" She called out as she searched around, eyes bright with laughter and glee. From the shadows a young man approached her, his hair cut short about his ears, eyes garnet colored, hair a dark green. He held another white rose, though he looked hesitant to walk up to her; as he walked he accidentally kicked a stone, causing the princess to whirl around startled. Seeing that it was him, the young woman, hurried to him, touching his arms, looking into his eyes, smiling. "My knight," she crooned blinking at the rose he held to her. "For you, my princess," His voice is a low purr, his eyes filled with pure love.
The young woman laughed, "More roses?" She looked at him, only to receive to kiss on the cheek, and a whispered answer, "Roses to prove my love, white to emphasize the purest of loves. petals are soft as your hair, color as vibrant as your beauty. yes, only roses befit you, Princess Serenity." His voice is gentle, loving, bringing to her cheeks a warm bouquet of roses.
The scene before the three froze, accompanied by Serenity's voice, woe- filled and choked, "The king and queen of the moon had found the love, and forced Serenity to say goodbye to her lover. they did not realize that no matter what they did to the two, that their love would always exist. one night, Serenity learned that her betrothal to a prince of a far off land was to be turned to a wedding before she turned 17, she ran from her home, and into the arms of her waiting Knight. To prove her love to her parents, the young princess threw herself into his arms, spending the night in his room, the love they had heated into a passion unforgettable for each.
Her voice turned into a mournful moan, "Oh, but the king and queen would hear nothing of it, they were disgusted and angered towards their daughter and her lover. the knight was sentenced to death, and kept away from the child. The young princess was sent away on vacation to Earth, where she had a child born to her of the Knight." Serenity turned to the scouts, who watched in horror as the young knight was beheaded for the love he held, and the princess tortured with a broken heart. The birth of the child had sent Serenity into spirits, she would show the world, and bring to everyone the torture of her love. but her parents would have nothing of it. they took away her baby, and forced her to wed the prince, fooling him into thinking she was a virgin. and he would be her first and only.." Tears now fell from the Queen's face as she watched her younger self grieve over the loss of her baby and a marriage with no love. "Mercury, Mars, Jupiter. the daughter I had before I had Serena.. She was taken and grown up in a land, only to be locked up in a prison.. A prison that held no jobs but the protection of time, space and dimension.."
Author's Note:
I'm much much happier now! ^^ I think this was a fairly good chapter! I love the cliffy at the end. well actually semi-cliffy. can you all guess the first child born to Serenity? ::snickers:: GUESS AND THE NEXT CHAP WILL BE OUT SOON!!!!!! ^__________________^
Author's note: OK! THAT'S IT! -_- I'm ticked! I WANT TO WRITE A GOOD CHAPTER! I will not send this chapter out until I deem it at least 50% percent suitable for my readers. Thank you for the gracious reviews, and I agree with you Damia; that chapter was the poorest I've ever given. ^^ But thank you all for the reviews. I enjoy that so many of you are honest with me ::grins:: so that's why I'm working extra hard on this chapter!
Disclaimers: See all previous chapters. this is probably the last time I'm putting this on my page, all other chapters will have a see first chap for disclaimers. Bye bye.
Chapter 14:
Setsuna stood at the mirror with sailor Venus. Both women had scowls on their faces, and both looked haggard. "Sailor Venus, the princess is being trained as we speak, that was her test, to endure training of a brute-level without the absolute aide of her sailor scouts. It's to help increase her confidence levels and make her more self-relying." Sailor Venus' blue eyes brightened at that, "Ok! So is that how she becomes Neo Queen Serenity? By this training? That's wicked awesome!" She chirped, the gold in her hair shimmering as she stepped to the side, leaning on her hip.
Setsuna looked to her, and smiled demurely, "Yes. this is one of the ways she turns to Neo Queen Serenity." She trails off as she turns to the mirror to a view what was happening to Serena; as she did so she murmured. "How would you like to join her? In training, I mean?" She turned, her garnet eyes seemed to be an almost sinisterly dark color; her green hair shimmering and waving as she moved, the staff in her hand making soft clicking sounds in the foggy chambers.
Mina's eyes widened, "I can go with her? Of course, to get stronger? I'll do anything.. But wait! What about the other sailor scouts? We have to find them. or is this part of the training, not being dependent on the others." She trailed off, to her, for some strange reason, nothing was adding up. 'There's something not right here. but what?' Her senshi skills sharpened as she turned her light blue eyes to Setsuna, who returned her gaze with a loving smile. "I'll find the other scouts, I just hope we're not too late. Sailor Venus, It's almost as if they just. disappeared!"
Sailor Venus frowned, and dipped her head forward trying her best to think. "It is possible. that. they. switched. dimensions? Like Rini? Could they have traveled to the past. or future," She looked up at Setsuna who had a frown on her face. "That is very possible. or they could be in. a time wrap." She said this mostly to herself, before turning to Venus, "Scout, I'll send you on to train, do not, I repeat DO NOT mention anything of this test to Serena, in fact you are to make absolutely no contact with her. She'll start depending on you, and all that had been taught to her up until now will be forgotten!" Venus nodded her understanding, "Alright then Setsuna. and don't forget to tell me when you've found the others." Mina turned around to face the inky black hole that appeared. "I'll see you around, Setsuna-san!" She called out as she stepped through, and emerged in a room bare of much furniture, but spotless. She sat down on the cot and waited, 'I'm sure they'd have sensed me, or Setsuna will have told them of my joining the training. all I have to do is wait.' She thought patiently as she leaned back on the bed.
Setsuna smirked to herself as she looked to the mirror, "Aww, this is only twice as easy now!" She said out loud, "You see Serenity? All the pain! All the anguish, you caused me! NOW YOUR PRECIOUS DAUGHTER IS MINE! And what makes this all the sweeter is how easy it'll be to recruit the sailor scouts as well! THE OUTER SENSHI ARE GONE. SMALL LADY IS DONE. ALL THAT'S LEFT ARE THE INNER SENSHI. WHERE ARE YOU HIDING THOSE THREE?" She laughed bitterly, an insane shine in her eyes as she formed another pitch black hole, and disappeared through it.
Meanwhile, in a place not far from Earth, three naked girls were wrapped in bubbles, their legs drawn up, hiding their breasts and other private parts. Their eyes were closed, but in a peaceful sleep, their breathing loose and shallow. A young woman dressed in a white gown stepped towards the three in bubbles, her silverish purple hair was strung up in two odangos on either side of her head. Her eyes were a light purple hue, and her lips a soft pink color. The gown she wore clung to her body, and on the center, what seemed to be holding the dress together, was a golden crescent moon. It rested between her breasts, and seemed to glow a vibrant moon white color.
Beside her trotted a black cat, fur glistening as it moved lithely; a golden crescent moon lighting her forehead. On the other side of the woman trotted a moon white cat, fur bright as it jumped forward; on his forehead, too, was a golden crescent moon. As the trio neared the three women, the woman waved a hand, her voice a bright tone of regal power, "Awaken princesses, and rise! Meet your queen." The soft words held much power, as the three girls stirred and opened their eyes. With gasps they were released from the bubbles, and immediately shrouded in beautiful gowns.
The raven haired woman was kneeling, the gown she had on a fiery red color. Off the shoulder straps hung lightly to her body, the dress curved to fit her body, her shoes a deep red color. A sash tied around the dress, swinging from behind to form and X shape on her back, and then rising up to form a bow at her breasts, the streaming ribbons flowed down the front of her dress. She stood up and looked around in confusion, as she stood she revealed white lace along the hem of the dress and along the bows ends. Her hair was loose down her back, but on it was a clip of white and gold, the sign of mars glinted at the others.
Beside her stood another young woman, blue hair cut short, eyes bright with wonder. In her hair were several white clips displaying the sign of Mercury. She wore a soft blue dress, it flowed around her. It was a strapless dress, tight across her chest but loose as it trailed to her hips and flowed out around her. This wasn't solid blue either, instead the blue of the upper blouse seemed to cut away and trail off to the sides, forming a V down the front. The V part of the dress was a pure white color, crisp and pure. Right at the point where the blouse flowed down to become the skirt, a beautiful white and gold brooch hung, belt like metal 'arms' swung around her hips, and trailed down the back of her dress. The brooch was of moderate size, but seemed to glisten as bright as the largest diamond in the world. Her shoes were also a light blue color to match the upper part of her gown.
The third young woman was wearing vibrant dark green dress that matched her emerald green eyes. This dress was sleeveless color, the dress clung to the woman's throat and came down almost totally covering her skin. As the dress dipped lower, it also opened up, revealing the woman's cleavage point, all the way to her arms. It closed up only to open once more as it slid down her stomach, revealing a taught belly button. The dress then hung closely to her hips, lengthening out but not in a flowing a skirt. The green fabric was clingy, and hung loosely to her legs, revealing a long slit that trailed down her thigh to her ankles, revealing forest green heeled party shoes. Her hands were gloved in lace green, and her hair was tied up in a dark brown ponytail. Clipped to the pony tail was the sign of Jupiter, with streamers flowing along the ponytail.
All three women were equally confused, and startled to be where they were. The blue haired angel turned to the woman and gasped, "Serenity-hime!" She fell down into a curtsey before rising, eyes wide, "Luna! Artemis!" She addressed the cats that stood beside the queen. "Scouts," the two answered, then fell silent as the Queen spoke. "Sailor scouts. I apologize for the rude way of my bringing you here. I wish I could have warned you, but had I done any such thing then we would have been found. and that can not happen. not yet!" Her
The raven haired goddess took a step forward, curtseying politely, "M'queen.with all due respect, what is wrong? Why couldn't we be found. and where is Serena?" Her tone was that of a concerned friend and guardian, her eyes blazing with controlled fear and hope; beside her the green-cloaked lady also stepped forward, "Serenity-hime, Serena's no where to be found, what is going on?" Her own words were unlady-like compared with her two friends, the warrior's shine evident in her eyes.
Serenity smiled brightly at the three women, "This is why you all protect my daughter. but from this force, even I was shocked to learn who had kidnapped our princess. and the last inner scout, Venus." The three senshis turned around, mixed voices of question and worry exclaimed in shock, "Venus, what's happened to Venus?" Serenity shook her head sadly, "Try not to call your friend, she never made it to this dimension warp. she is now with Serena, and both are in incredible danger!"
The vermillion-clothed woman stepped forward, raising her voice in chocked shock and concern, "Then why are we here? Take us to them, we'll save them and fight this force!" The other two raised their voices in agreement, only to be silenced by two loud cat-voices. "Enough, Scouts! Listen to Serenity- hime, you now face the greatest force you ever had. and you do this without use of your powers. only with the friendship and love you formed with Serena and Mina." The three princesses' fell silent, eyes downcast and humble. "Sorry.sorry.sorry." Three apologies echoed through the moon, bouncing off the walls of a high palace, and gleaming fountain. "Huh?!" The exclaimed shout of surprise didn't seem to bother Serenity as she gestured to the scene behind her. "Here was where it all started, Scouts. a young princess had fallen in love with a knight from the next kingdom. But she was forbidden the love, as it was unfitting to lower herself to a knight's rank." Her voice trailed off as a young woman came walking out of the palace, her eyes a vibrant color, her hair a soft lavender color, tied up in two buns on either side of her head. She wore a dress similar to that of Serena's when she was Neo Queen Serenity, her hands were gloved and held a single white rose.
"Oh knight of the kingdom of Time. do venture forth! Show yourself!" She called out as she searched around, eyes bright with laughter and glee. From the shadows a young man approached her, his hair cut short about his ears, eyes garnet colored, hair a dark green. He held another white rose, though he looked hesitant to walk up to her; as he walked he accidentally kicked a stone, causing the princess to whirl around startled. Seeing that it was him, the young woman, hurried to him, touching his arms, looking into his eyes, smiling. "My knight," she crooned blinking at the rose he held to her. "For you, my princess," His voice is a low purr, his eyes filled with pure love.
The young woman laughed, "More roses?" She looked at him, only to receive to kiss on the cheek, and a whispered answer, "Roses to prove my love, white to emphasize the purest of loves. petals are soft as your hair, color as vibrant as your beauty. yes, only roses befit you, Princess Serenity." His voice is gentle, loving, bringing to her cheeks a warm bouquet of roses.
The scene before the three froze, accompanied by Serenity's voice, woe- filled and choked, "The king and queen of the moon had found the love, and forced Serenity to say goodbye to her lover. they did not realize that no matter what they did to the two, that their love would always exist. one night, Serenity learned that her betrothal to a prince of a far off land was to be turned to a wedding before she turned 17, she ran from her home, and into the arms of her waiting Knight. To prove her love to her parents, the young princess threw herself into his arms, spending the night in his room, the love they had heated into a passion unforgettable for each.
Her voice turned into a mournful moan, "Oh, but the king and queen would hear nothing of it, they were disgusted and angered towards their daughter and her lover. the knight was sentenced to death, and kept away from the child. The young princess was sent away on vacation to Earth, where she had a child born to her of the Knight." Serenity turned to the scouts, who watched in horror as the young knight was beheaded for the love he held, and the princess tortured with a broken heart. The birth of the child had sent Serenity into spirits, she would show the world, and bring to everyone the torture of her love. but her parents would have nothing of it. they took away her baby, and forced her to wed the prince, fooling him into thinking she was a virgin. and he would be her first and only.." Tears now fell from the Queen's face as she watched her younger self grieve over the loss of her baby and a marriage with no love. "Mercury, Mars, Jupiter. the daughter I had before I had Serena.. She was taken and grown up in a land, only to be locked up in a prison.. A prison that held no jobs but the protection of time, space and dimension.."
Author's Note:
I'm much much happier now! ^^ I think this was a fairly good chapter! I love the cliffy at the end. well actually semi-cliffy. can you all guess the first child born to Serenity? ::snickers:: GUESS AND THE NEXT CHAP WILL BE OUT SOON!!!!!! ^__________________^