Zim: The Lost Files
the return of Tak
the shootback section (a.k.a. where i respond to reviews)
Eminem4evr: ...you rule man...your the only reason this chapter preempts my Warcraft story.
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN ANYTHING EXCEPT MY TOE
chapter 1 "5 minutes beforehand"
Zim typed rapidly at his computer, Nick in the test tube behind him as the probe in his brain went deeper. "TOO..MUCH..HAPPY..MAKE...NICK...ANGRY!!" Nick exploded and Zim took cover. "what in the name of the taAALLEST!" the angry monkey lept for Zim's face...
Dr. membrane stood, staring at a computer screen reading '0MGz 101 w3 di3d!!1' he exploded from the stupidity. The owner of everyone's favorite large head heard the explosion and rushed to where his dad had been. He fell to his knees and cried, promising revenge to the only one who could have done this. the strange little foriegn ki-- ZIM!
GIR sat..and watched...and watched...and watched...then the little girl he had been watching screamed and ran, but GIR was at arms instantly, grabbing her and dragging her back so she could be watched...and watched...
inside GIR's head, something else was going on, something that explained why GIR was so stupid, even though the Tallest had in reality given him the most powerful computer in existance for the next twenty thousand millenia. GIR's mind supported the only remnant of Tak, the invader. Tak had grown enraged from her months of stasis, but that rage couldn't be released at all from her 2-D prison. Tak passed the time by going through all the files in GIR's head, analyzing weaknesses, to keep from loosing her own fil-- mind.
authors notes: yes, it is short. but these will get longer the more reviews that are GOOD that i get. i remind you again, flames only make my computer work faster from it's steam engine.