Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince

By: Krystal Lily Potter

Chapter Seventeen: All Hallows Eve

Rating: PG-13 (more on the AA side)

Couples: HP/HG, DT/LB, PP/SF, LL/NL, DT/GW, LB/RW, LL/RW, HP/PP (other twin), HP/EM, HP/CC…you know the whole raging hormone thing…

Summary: As Harry and his friends enter their sixth year at Hogwarts they don't enter the cheerful world they left behind. They enter a world covered in a thick blanket of fear. It only hits Harry how important he really is when people start seeing him as the light that allows them to see under this blanket. Along with his friend he must battle the horrors of the past, present, and possible the future to begin the end of the war, hopefully before it hits Hogwarts. What happens when people start disappearing from under Dumbledore's protection, and one of the famous 'trio' disappears? It's up to the last two, plus some more friends, to find a way to save all the people that disappeared because they can't fight this war on their own…

Warning: Dark themes will be mentioned a lot and if worst comes to worst I'll rate this R because of that. There's swearing, mentions of suicide, murder, rape, gore/bloody scenes, and other dark things like that…


For a week after the Quidditch match (which they won 200 – 50) Harry had attempted to avoid Hermione but that proved to be an uneasy task. Actually it proved to be impossible.

He gave her the slip the entire weekend but on Monday the now enraged teenage girl finally 'caught up' to him.

Before Defense class she had cornered him and said, "Alright Harry James Potter, you're going to tell me why in Merlin's name you have been attempting to avoid me!"

"I wasn't Mia," he said weakly.

"Don't Mia me," she snapped. "And don't think I'm stupid."

"I don't," he shot back.

"You expected me to believe you weren't trying to give me the slip…"

He didn't say anything and stared at the floor.

"Harry," she said softly. "Why did you fly so high into their air at the Quidditch game?"

He sighed and said, "I…I just lost it. I just wanted to die for some reason. There's just too much pressure." He looked like he was going to break down any minute again.

"Maybe you should skip classes today Harry, you don't look too good," she said cautiously.

"No, I'm making myself look like a wimp…I mean I've collapsed how many times so far and I've been sick…" he trailed off and frowned. "I've been in the hospital wing more times then I should have."

Hermione also frowned and thought, 'He's right, too many odd things have happened so far, much more then any other year.' Although out loud she said, "Well one of the reasons you keep collapsing is because Ron keeps trying to get into your mind so I guess it isn't that bad."

"No," Harry admitted. "I keep hoping that sometime I'll finally hear what he says clearly." "You will," she said and suddenly the bell went off. Both shot each other a terrified panicked look. Today they had Double Defense and they were late!

They set off at a high speed run, neither of them noticing that they almost knocked poor Professor Flitwick as they ran by him.


Professor Evelyn looked at the door expectantly. She hadn't started class yet and nobody knew why. She usually started when the bell rang.

Suddenly the door flew open showing a late and exhausted looking Harry and Hermione. A few people muttered to their friends with shock about Hermione Granger being late for class.

"Mr. Potter, Miss. Granger, what is the meaning for this?" her voice was sharp and quick and Harry realized that this was one of her off days. You never knew what mood she was going to be in.

"I'm sorry, we were discussing what's been happening lately, that's all," Hermione said honestly.

Evelyn's eyes seemed to soften for a minute before motioning to their seats, "Just don't be late again." They nodded and quickly took their seats at the front of the classroom.

"Now I know I gave you a schedule for this class but I decided to change it because of recent events," she said. "Yes I know the creatures you might run into is vital to know but there are some more important things at the moment. For instance…" her eyes traveled over to Harry. "Dueling."

A few people whispered excitedly.

"Now I want to know where you all stand in dueling so I can try to train you all as individually as I possibly can. Now in alphabetical order…Hannah you're first…"

Apparently each one of them had to duel her. Harry was watching everybody fight since he would be one of the last people to go up but something wasn't sitting right with him as he watched everyone duel. It was as if he was forgetting something that he should remember.

He had a little feeling of pride in him as he noticed Professor Evelyn's shocked face as the members of the ULD went up and showed they had more ability then anyone thought they would, especially Neville.

'Come to think of it, Evelyn looks a little peeved off. She probably thought she'd be able to teach most people these hexes and they already know. Score Harry-1, teachers-zip,' He thought with amusement.

"Harry, lets see what you've got," Evelyn said suddenly with a smirk.

Harry walked and faced opposite of her then as she bowed he said, "That's a stupid rule you know. In the middle of a fight I doubt a Death Eater's going to wait for you to bow…"

Her eyes flashed and she said, "No, your quite right Harry, they wouldn't so let's forget that part. Diffindo!"

Harry was a little startled by the spell she used but said, "Progeto!" Her spell smashed into the shield and was thrown backwards just above her head, causing part of the wall to split.

She raised an eyebrow and said, "Impressive reflexes Potter, Rictusempra!"

He jumped to the side then yelled, "Quietus!" Evelyn's voice was cut off just before she was about to call another spell. "Tarantallegra!"

Her legs started dancing around the way Neville's had last year and she held up her hands in a sign of defeat. "Finite!"

The dancing stopped and she said, "Very good Mr. Potter."

Harry walked to the side and noticed Hermione staring at him proudly. He smirked at her as Dean went up to show what he knew.

"That was great Harry," Hermione whispered. "But I know that's not all you could do. From that training at Grimmauld place this summer you know a lot more."

"Yeah, a lot more that neither she nor anyone else needs to know about right now," Harry whispered back and his friend just shrugged and clapped along with everyone else as Dean had done fairly well.

"It's almost as if you don't trust her," she said offhandedly.

"Right about now the only ones I really trust are you, Fred, George, Remus and Tonks. I'm sure Ron would be on that list if he was here too," he replied.

"I notice Dumbledore's not on that list," Hermione said, almost smirking. "A good damn thing too," Harry muttered under his breath angrily. "Dumbledore's been acting too weird this year."

He had his back turned from Professor Evelyn while talking to Hermione and now he felt as if someone was glaring holes in the back of his head. He turned quickly and saw their teacher staring at him. Once he turned she smiled and continued the class. Harry didn't see why he needed to pay attention to what everyone else was doing though.

"You're all an exceptional duelers, I'm impressed," Evelyn said once everyone had a go at her. "But to be a good dueler you need to have your own wand. They're personal to you and I want to know about them. So here's the deal, your homework is to write at least half a page about your wand. The catch is you have to tell me what the core is, what kind of wood, the size, what its specialty is and so on…it will be due next class."

A few people sighed with relief that there wasn't very much homework but Harry gave her an odd look. 'Why in gods name would someone assign something like that?'

Suddenly the bell rang, startling everyone, they didn't realize that the class had gone by so fast, then again this class was rather large and they all did spend awhile dueling.

"See you next class," Evelyn said and they all walked out of the door.


"What's so funny?" Hermione asked Harry as they approached McGonagall's classroom.

"Our assignment," he replied with amusement then he frowned and added, "I'm not passing it in." "Why?" a few people around him echoed as they stopped in front of McGonagall's classroom and waited for their teacher to show up.

"Just in case…I wouldn't want it to fall into the wrong hands," Harry said.

"What's so important about someone knowing about your wand?" Parvati asked.

Harry suddenly had a flash of a green curse and a red spell crashing into each other then the two wands they came from being connected together with a gold beam of light. "You never know…"

Suddenly the bell rang but no Professor McGonagall showed up. A few people started whispering she was never late for class.

"Well this is a chance to finish my homework," someone said and sat down on the floor and started finishing the questions they were assigned.

Hermione tutted and Harry sniggered a bit. They ended up sitting in the hallway for about half of their class. Some people were playing games on paper, others had fallen asleep, Hermione was changing one of her book's covers different colors and Harry was just staring off into space.

Suddenly there was a sound of footsteps coming down the hallway and everyone turned to look at who was coming, luckily the people that fell sleep woke up just as McGonagall appeared.

She didn't look happy, needless to say. No she looked positively livid about something. She flicked her wand and the classroom door banged open loudly, causing everyone to jump out of their sitting positions.

"Well what are you waiting for…get in," she growled.

A few people got alarmed looks on their faces and ran into the classroom as quickly as possible.

"Professor, are you ok?" Hermione asked her favorite teacher.

She shot Hermione an appreciative look and then said, "No Ms. Granger, I'm not ok in the least." She frowned heavily and motioned for her to enter the classroom. Harry shot her a confused look as she took the seat next to him.

McGonagall slammed a book down on her desk and said, "Mr. Boot, collect the homework. Ms. Turpin pass out the…"

She stopped, her eyes directly on Harry. They narrowed slightly as she said, "Pass out the stuffed animals you will be turning into creatures. Mr. Potter, I would like a word with you in the hall…NOW!"

Harry jumped slightly and everyone did as they were supposed to. An angry McGonagall was something nobody wanted to cross. He walked into the hall, followed by the professor.

She slammed the door then yelled, "WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!"

He backed away from his furious Professor and stammered, "P-Pardon?"

"The Quidditch match! Catching the snitch and not letting anybody see it!" She yelled. "Then flying up 100 feet above ground thinking you're going to throw yourself off of your broom?!"

"Oh…how did…I mean no I wasn't," he said in a pathetic attempt to lie.

"Don't you dare lie to me Potter," she said. Her face then went soft. "I can't believe you'd do that…waste your parents sacrifice…"

Harry felt his blood run cold at that and he said, "I didn't think about that." He looked at his feet, ashamed.

"Well think about it more often Potter," she said.

"I…wait…how did you know?" he asked with confusion.

"Albus told me," she replied simply.

That's when it hit Harry like a bludger had just plowed into his stomach. Dumbledore had been reading his mind!

He let out a light growl then said, "I'd like to get to class Professor."

She nodded her head and Harry walked back in the classroom. It seemed as if people could sense his bad mood.

Harry was tired of Dumbledore. No wonder the Headmaster knew almost everything that happened in the castle, he probably read people's minds all the time!

Hermione tried to ask him what was wrong from time to time but he'd just ignore her.

After class was over Harry didn't go to lunch, instead he went up to his dormitory. He was looking through his trunk for his extra quills because he had broken one from anger in Transfiguration when he came across his chocolate frog cards. He picked up his large group of Dumbledore cards when a memory shot back into his mind. It was last summer at Grimmauld place after Remus went through a list of all the things the wizarding world had done to Dumbledore.

"But Dumbledore says he doesn't care what they do as long as they don't take him off the Chocolate Frog Cards," said Bill, grinning.

He stared down at the cards with shock and saw all the Dumbledore's slide out of the pictures at the same time.

"So he hasn't been reading minds," Harry said out loud. "He's been spying through the cards and I bet the portraits too! Damnit! No wonder his card is so popular…you'd think one of the most powerful wizards in the world would be rare to get!"

He jumped up and took them in his hands then headed downstairs to the common room.

"Hiya Harry," someone said. "Hullo Colin," Harry replied automatically and chucked all the cards into the fire.

"Why'd you do that?" the curious boy asked.

"Ever wonder how Dumbledore always knows what's going on?" Harry asked.

"Yeah…" Colin said slowly.

"Well I think he uses the cards," he said.

Colin seemed to think for a minute before his already wide eyes widened even more, making him look like a bug as he said, "That makes sense. I'm getting rid of mine. See you later Harry!" He took off towards his Dormitory.

"Strange kid," the boy-who-lived said and walked out of the door to tell Hermione what he figured out.


The ULD was in the Room of Requirement again throwing some random curses and hexes around. They were working on the shield charm.

Harry wasn't really paying attention; his eyes seemed almost glazed over. Suddenly he felt a small shock run through his body and he looked over to see and amused looking Nicola look at him. "Shouldn't you be paying attention to what people are doing?"

He looked over to see that a curtain had caught fire and no one noticed it yet.

Looking around quickly he found the culprit…a happy looking Griffy. He rolled his eyes and watched as Athena, Hermione's Water Owl, jumped from the top of the bookshelf where she was perched and onto Griffy's head. She had yet to learn how to fly.

Athena's shape was like any other owl but her eyes were the same electric blue as her egg had been and her feathers looked perfectly slick and shiny with white, silver and blue. Her talons and beak were also a dark shade of blue.

He waved his wand and the fire was put out, and only then did people actually notice it.

Cho said, "Awe, I wish our grade was doing that project too…"

Katie rolled her eyes and said, "We have enough work to do as it is Chang." She then smirked and said, "I pity the seventh years next year."

"Why?" Dean asked.

She shrugged and shot him a smile but didn't say anything, actually she didn't know anything either, she just wanted to get the sixth years nervous.

Harry sighed then said, "Keep going with the shield charms. I noticed your shields are breaking too easily. Start with light spells then use stronger and stronger ones but please don't kill each other, I've gotta look something up in these books."

A few people laughed and they split off into pairs. Harry didn't really have something specific to look up in the books, he was just extremely bored. Last year he had become good at the Shield Charm and over the summer, during his training with Tonks, Moody and Remus he had become an expert at it.

He was flipped through a book called The Most Dangerous Curses on Earth although it also said "Unknown Author".

The first thing he saw that caught his eye in the index was the words 'Avada Kedavra', he was about to go look at it when there was a scream from across the room.

His head shot towards the sound and he dropped the book to the floor and rushed over to see what had happened. Looking confused he saw a girl named Alison on the floor and a slightly surprised looking Cho standing opposite of her.

"What the bloody hell happened?" Harry growled.

"We were practicing the shield charm and she didn't make a good one," Cho said simply.

"I was making good ones Chang!" Alison yelled angrily as she stood up. "One minute we were doing first year spells and blocking them then the next minute she does this seventh year spell. I could usually take it but I was so startled…"

A few people murmured with agreement.

"I did not," Cho snapped.

"That's it!" Harry yelled. "Everyone out! Meeting's over!"

Some people looked slightly startled but listened to Harry anyway and left in twos and threes.

"Harry…" Hermione said and walked towards him. "Cheer up. Think about it, tomorrow's the Halloween Feast."

"Yeah," Harry said and followed her out of the room. "Great time of year isn't it?"

She shot him a look and said, "No need for sarcasm."

"Sorry…it's just…my parents died on Halloween and all…"

"Oh," Hermione said with a guilty tone. "I'm sorry, I forgot. It's just you never used to mind…"

"Of course I didn't," Harry said. "Nothing gave me a reason to remember…now that Sirius is gone…"

She nodded sadly and they continued walking up the many sets of stairs.


Halloween came and seemed to lift the heavy air off of many people's shoulders. There hadn't been an attack for a while. Harry on the other hand was absolutely miserable this Halloween.

When he had lived with the Dursleys he knew Dudley got dressed up and went out and came back with a lot of candy (apparently he brought home less then he originally had, because he ate a lot before they came home) and here it was usually just…

'Come to think of it something odd has always happened on Halloween,' Harry thought.

Quirrell letting the troll in on Halloween in their first year, then in second year there was the first attack the Basilisk made, in third year the Fat Lady's portrait was sliced to pieces by Sirius, in four year his name was pulled out of the goblet of fire, and in fifth year…

He stopped and stared blankly at a wall, he couldn't remember what happened in fifth year.

(Note: More like I can't remember and I just finished reading the fifth book again the other day!)

"Halloween must be my unlucky day," Harry muttered out loud. Suddenly a second wave of memories hit him, and hit him hard. Something bad actually HAD happened every Halloween, even at the Dursleys. He didn't have a clue how he suddenly remembered all of this and wasn't really sure he wanted to.

When he was two he remembered having a terrible dream about his parents dying and was crying loudly. Uncle Vernon had come in and growled about him being noisy and waking little Dudders up and actually hit him across his face! Petunia was just told he fell out of his bed.

When he was three he went over to Mrs. Figgs and one of her cats pretty much attacked him, then when he was four Dudley shoved him roughly to the ground and he pretty much ripped open his knee.

When he was five he accidentally turned his teacher's wig into a giant rat (although he didn't know how or why at the time), when he was six he fell down the stairs and broke his leg, when he was seven Aunt Marge came over and her dog Ripper attacked him, when he was eight he caused Aunt Petunia's favorite flower to shrivel up and die, giving him a week locked in his cupboard, when he was nine he almost got hit by a drunk driver when going out to get the mail and finally when he was 10 Dudley once again shoved him down the stairs and he broke his arm in three places.

Smiling sarcastically to himself he said, "What a great childhood I've had."

"Are you coming to the feast Harry?" Seamus asked him, as he walked up to the armchair Harry was sitting in. "I heard the entertainment was provided by the Weasley Twins this year."

After thinking for a moment Harry said, "Yeah, sure…where's everyone else?"

"Already down there. Hermione's was growling about you not showing up so one of us decided to come get you…Parvati volunteered me," Seamus said and his stomached growled with hunger.

Harry smirked then said, "Whipped." They exited the common room and started walking towards the Great Hall.

"I am not," Seamus said with a frown.

"Yes you are," Harry argued. "Parvati's got you wrapped around her baby finger."

"Well if that's true then Hermione's got you whipped," Seamus said forcefully.

Harry raised an eyebrow and said, "I'm not going out with her mate."

Seamus just rolled his eyes and went silent; not noticing the confused look Harry was giving him.


"There you are," Hermione said, her voice full of delight as the two boys sat down at the table. "I honestly thought you meant it when you said you weren't coming."

Harry rolled his eyes then said, "I decided to save these guys from hearing you complain." He smirked at the look on her face then winced as she kicked him in the shin.

"Shut up," she growled, but not with anger.

"Fine I will," he said and went silent for awhile.

After about five minutes of no replies from her friend Hermione said, "Fine, don't shut up! You proved your point!"

Harry smirked once again at her then said, "So I guess Fred and George are doing the entertainment." He gestured towards the front table where the Weasley twins were sitting, looking positively excited about something.

Hermione shook her head and said, "Goodness knows what."

After a delicious meal that consisted of anything from roasted chicken to tomato soup and then some desert came, everyone's favorite part of Halloween. The House-elves always seemed to go out of their way to make the best of the best on that night.

Harry was actually having a good time; the pain about his parents dying on that night 15-years-old was dulled as he joked around with Seamus, Dean and Neville and tormented Hermione, Lavender and Parvati.

Dumbledore clapped his hands together and said, "Now that we are all full and tired I would like to present our entertainment tonight…Misters Fred and George Weasley."

A few people laughed and almost everyone clapped as the Weasley twins stepped forwards. They grinned evilly and Fred yelled, "DUCK!"

Everyone ducked then, much to their surprise, a bunch of ducks flew over their heads! There was a bit of laughter as the ducks flew around then one landed on Malfoy's head.

"Get off of me you stupid little," Malfoy started but didn't get to finish. BANG!

There was a puff of smoke after the bang then when everything was clear Malfoy was soaked in red and gold paint.

The show continued on with exploding paint ducks, amazing fireworks and many little stupid tricks, which were mostly played on Slytherins.

One duck landed in front of Dumbledore and exploded, soaking him in silver and gold paint. Everyone looked on with shock, even the twins, until Dumbledore started laughing merrily, "Quite a good bit of magic!"

The night continued on and everyone was having a good time, including Harry, until he noticed something red running down the wall. After staring a little more he realized that it was blood! More places on the wall started to leak blood too but no one noticed at first.

He shot Fred and George a confused look and said, "What are you doing?"

"What?" George asked. "The walls," he replied and everyone looked at the walls. A few people screamed and everyone that was sitting by the wall jumped up and ran to the opposite side of the tables. "SILENCE!" Dumbledore roared and everyone fell quiet. "Fred, George, is this your doing?"

"No sir," both twins said together while staring in horror at the wall.

Harry suddenly felt a strong pain flash through him, but not where his lightning bolt scar was but where the words 'Half Blood Prince' were scarring over on his arm.

A light haze seemed to fill the room and everyone looked around nervously and jumped as laughter filled the room. Not cheerful laughter but the type that an insane person made.

Hermione grabbed Harry's arm and looked around fearfully.

"1…2…there goes you, 3…4 I'll take some more, 5…6 you'll never guess this, 7…8 I'll make you wait, 9…10 it's not the end," a sadistic sounding voice sang out followed by that evil laughter again.

"Peeves?" somebody asked.

"Don't compare me to that stupid poltergeist!" the voice growled and at the moment Peeves actually poked his head into the Great Hall curiously.

A human shaped figure appeared but it had no features, it was just a gray shadow. Suddenly it sprang out towards the Hufflepuff table and people screamed, but it was stopped in it's tracks as a second figure appeared in front of it and it stopped.

Harry felt his heart almost stopped when he realized the second figure, the female, was the one that always protected him in his dream, and that must mean the gray one was the thing that turned into his evil clone.

"Go away," the girl growled and her body started to glow with light. "And beware, the Half Blood Prince approaches."

The other figure hissed with pain then disappeared as a load of magic shot from his body towards different parts of the house tables.

A few people screamed as their friends were thrown backwards.

Harry felt like someone had punched him in the stomach as he was slammed backwards into the wall, hitting his head against its stone surface. The last thing he heard before he blacked out was Hermione's screaming his name.


Author's Random Babbling

End there… (Smirks) I know I'm SO evil aren't I?

OK so I chose Hermione's animal to be an owl…not just any owl because of her element but a Water Owl.

I mentioned this before but I really mean it now, I start school on Tuesday so that means updates will get slower. You can probably see how I've been getting slower lately well that's because I'm usually gone…actually today after I finish writing this I'm going to school to get my locker, pay my fees and just walk around the school with my friend trying to find our classrooms. That should be fun (note the sarcasm).

Well I suppose I should get on with the reviews, then maybe I'll try to get a hold of Jess somehow so he can beta it for me…anyways…

Thank you to:

Hpfanchrissy1502 – really? Well thank you!

Athenakitty– You tell me. Obviously. No. answered that already. I decided to use a Water Owl. It's not that they forget, Harry just doesn't hear it. Still asking this question eh?

Lady Nicole Potter – Yeah I decided to make it a Water Owl. Well I might make a sequel…depends…hey! You're not supposed to use my idea against me! lol! Kidden! I tend to say I'll send Peeves or someone like that after the person…you could even write it on a sign! Haha!

Aqua Mage – That's what I'm using!

FluffiBunni– No I wrote those purposely. You see Tonks knew James and he sent her his invisibility cloak to use sometimes. What I meant by that part was if you become an animagus FIRST then you'll use up all your magic and you won't be able to conjure a Patronus BUT if you do the Patronus charm first then you'll be able to become an animagus because you still have energy, although it'll take longer and it'll hurt like hell…by the way I made that up for this story, I don't know if it's really true…but thanks for trying to help with my mistakes anyways!

GatomonandKarifan – lol really? Kool! I almost fell asleep in science class and nearly fell off my chair but my friend that sat behind me kicked me so I woke up…lol!

Carn – Well I'm honored you read this even though you don't usually read HP fics!

CastusAlbusCor – lol! Yes mood swings!

Cheerbear– I doubt it will be but I don't really care, I'm just writing what I'd think would be cool to happen.

Runaway Spirit – A sphinx would be cool but I agree that it might not be the best idea…it'd be kinda creepy if you think about…

LJstagflower4e– Bout time! Haha. I might be wrong but it might be KnowItAll's fic that has Hermione's parents yanking her out…can't really remember…it's a Water Owl…cool huh?

Destined Enchantress - Yeah, except it's called ULD…lol! Sounds like a type of credit card…

Dragon-Revenge – I know eh?

Lizliterarius– lol that's ok! I can be ignorant…you don't have to eat crow and I'm not going to flame you! It was a mistake…trust me I make enough of them to deserve to get flamed myself!

Fallen-angel-scorn – Yeah his friends are. An otter's a good idea but I wanted to give her something different

Ms Dumplings – 1) No I didn't…but AHHH! The Ring! That movie is the freakiest movie I've ever seen! 2) In away they were referring to the eggs 3) thank you!

GwEnDoLyB P. MaLfOy – I won't make you regret your decision, promise! I'll try to update as fast as possible!

Crazy – lol thanks. This is like practice for writing (which I want to do when I'm older) and slowly I'm getting better at it (compare this to Legend of Gryffindor…it was pathetic) but I don't think I'll publish this…I don't have any money to get sued for! Your name says it all! And no, that's not an insult!

DragonGirl-Chi318 – Thanks

Quizgirl– you like that stuff? I hope you mean like sad or angst things, even though that wasn't my first reaction to that. I don't have a certain amount of time to update I just write and when its up…it's up!

ellabella – Thanks for the suggestion, although I decided to use an owl. Although I was just going to have it look like a normal one but after reading your review I decided to picture it as more elegant then a normal owl…besides it's a baby now…a cute little baby bird!

Knuckz– as you can see I decided to use an owl…but not a snowy one since these animals are elemental but it sounds similar…

Holimontski– Thank you…poor you…you start classes tomorrow…I don't start until next Tuesday!

Bah - …it's fanfiction, people are allowed to have their own characters and the HP people are aloud to be out of character! It's not like I'm JK Rowling or anything!

I'm Not The Weakest Link – Thanks and that's ok…hope you had a fun time on vacation!

Beta's Note:

Good chapter cool ending and whatnot. Keep up the good work but watch out for some of those grammar mistakes.


That's your job to find the grammar mistakes and fix em though! Eh, whatever. I'm kidden though, at least I don't go out of my way to make mistakes just to set you to work!

Anyways thank you to everyone who reviewed, thanks to Jess for fixing up the chapter some and please read and review!

Krystal Lily Potter