Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince
By: Krystal Lily Potter
Chapter Eighteen: The Space Between Realities
Rating: PG-13 (more on the AA side)
Couples: HP/HG, DT/LB, PP/SF, LL/NL, DT/GW, LB/RW, LL/RW, HP/PP (other twin), HP/EM, HP/CC...you know the whole raging hormone thing...
Summary: As Harry and his friends enter their sixth year at Hogwarts they don't enter the cheerful world they left behind. They enter a world covered in a thick blanket of fear. It only hits Harry how important he really is when people start seeing him as the light that allows them to see under this blanket. Along with his friend he must battle the horrors of the past, present, and possible the future to begin the end of the war, hopefully before it hits Hogwarts. What happens when people start disappearing from under Dumbledore's protection, and one of the famous 'trio' disappears? It's up to the last two, plus some more friends, to find a way to save all the people that disappeared because they can't fight this war on their own...
Warning: Dark themes will be mentioned a lot and if worst comes to worst I'll rate this R because of that. There's swearing, mentions of suicide, murder, rape, gore/bloody scenes, and other dark things like that...
Note: This chapter's going to seem a little...no...really weird but trust me on this...
"Harry...HARRY! Wake up!" a male voice yelled.
"Come on Harry! You can do it!" a female one also yelled.
Harry's eyes snapped open as he looked up at the two figures standing in front of him. They were blurred because he didn't have either his glasses or his contacts but he could clearly see two sets of fiery red hair."Get him his glasses," the girl said and someone handed his old thick rimmed, circular pair to him. He put them on with confusion, knowing that he had a better pair then this somewhere. What he saw though made him gasp in shock more then anything.
"RON! GINNY! YOU'RE ALIVE AND HERE!" Harry yelled happily and hugged them both in one big bear hug.They both got confused looks on their faces and Ron said, "Of course we're here...where else would we be?"
"With Voldemort, he captured you guys, remember?" he replied with sheer confusion.
Ginny smirked and said, "Harry I know you miss Sirius and all but don't worry, and who's Voldemort?""But..." Harry said and looked around, realizing that he was in the hospital wing. "Damn this is the hundredth time I've been in here this year!" He didn't even hear Ginny's question.
They both looked confused again and Ron said, "No it's not."
Harry shook his head and said, "So it was all...a dream?"
Ron smirked and said, "I guess, you've been in here for about a week now."
"What happened?" the raven haired boy replied.
"We were all out at Quidditch practice when there was a run away bludger flew towards the stands where Hermione was and destroyed it. She fell and you jumped off your broom to catch her. You both hit the ground but you were knocked unconscious..."Suddenly the door to the hospital wing burst open and Hermione ran in looking anxious. Her eyes turned to the bed and she dropped the books that were in her arms, let out some funny sort of squeal and ran at him. She tackled him back onto his bed and hugged him tightly. "Are you ok? Does it hurt? Do you need help with your homework? Is there anything I can get you? How-"
"Hermione!" Harry said loudly, shocking the girl slightly.
"Yes?" she asked."Stop asking questions, it wasn't your fault...it was the fault of the person that...never mind," he realized that someone probably didn't Charm the bludger but it just was a rogue one.
"Harry?" Hermione asked curiously, seeing the distant look in his eyes.
"It's nothing," Harry said and shook his head. "I just don't feel too good, that's all.""Of course you don't, I'll go get Madam Pomfrey," Ginny said at once and ran over towards the Nurse's Office.
"Hermione..." Harry said after a minute.
"Yeah?"
"Where did I spend the summer?" he inquired.
She looked surprised at the question then said with amusement, "At Godric's Hallow...were else?"
"What?" Harry said with shock. "Why was I there?"
The brunette and the red head shared an odd look then Ron said, "Er...Harry mate...you live there...with your parents and your brothers and sisters...remember?"
"My parents are dead," he replied without thinking. "No they're not," Hermione insisted. "You must have hit your head worse then we thought. Your mother is the Charms teacher here, remember?""No...I don't," Harry stated.
"Oh dear," Madam Pomfrey's voice echoed out to him. "I was afraid of this. A strong trauma to the head can cause amnesia...but this is one of the first times I've heard of someone coming up with new memories in their head...although it could have been one long dream I suppose...""Amnesia? A dream? How's that...possible," Harry said weakly. He suddenly got an idea and looked towards his arm. He pulled up the sleeve to his pajama top and stared with shock at his arm...there was no marks on it at all. Hadn't the words "Half Blood Prince" been written there just moments before? "What's the date?"
The three friends and the healer looked at him with surprise. It was Hermione who said, "December 23rd..."
'That's not right,' Harry thought with surprise. 'I was just at the...wait...where did I think I was...I can't remember...'
"Harry!" a female voice yelled and suddenly he felt another body jump on his and give him a tight hug. He looked in shock as a girl, about a year younger then him, with silky raven black hair and emerald green eyes looked up at him. "I'm so glad you're alright!"
"Don't worry I'm fine Lex," he said then another voice filled his head. 'How did you know her nickname was Lex?'
"Oh so you remember your sister's name not ours," Ginny said sounding insulted.
'Sister?' he thought weakly.
"And you were just going on about your parents being dead," Ron added.
"My parents aren't dead," Harry said with amusement.
Hermione, Ron, Ginny and Madam Pomfrey all shared odd looks once again but no one said anything to make him think otherwise.
"Do you know my full name Harry?" Lex asked him.
"Of course...it's Alexa Lily Potter...why wouldn't I?" he asked.
She smiled happily and someone else said, "Madam Pomfrey said you might have amnesia when you wake up."
Harry turned to see another girl...who was Alexa's double. "Hey Gemma."
The girl smiled, glad that her brother knew who she was. "Do you remember all our family?"
"Yeah, there's mum, dad, you two, and me...nice trick question."
"Thanks, I think...do you remember the Blacks?" "Yeah, there's Sirius, Maureen, Kaylee, Chad and Haylee. Oh and we can't forget Sirius's sister Kaylee and her son Orion.""What about the Lupins?" Alexa asked, although she seemed almost sad when Harry answered the question before.
"There's Remus, Liana and Josh.""Oh good! You remember everyone!" Gemma said and gave him a hug.
Harry hugged her back then suddenly another voice came into his head, 'Since when did you have a family aside from the Dursleys?'
Harry was let out of the hospital wing the next day. He didn't seem to have any problems except for that stupid little voice running around in his head (which he kept silent about, knowing that it wasn't normal to be hearing voices no one else could hear) and splitting headaches he got at random times, which he also kept silent about.
The annoying voice inside his head mostly started talking when he was around others. Especially when he was with his family. It kept saying that he didn't have one anymore.
He was broke out of his thoughts as Alexa said, "Come on Harry! Or we'll be late!"
"Late? For what?" he asked wildly as his little sister pulled him towards the Gryffindor common room.
"Don't you remember?" The girl asked and frowned. "Dumbledore gave our families permission to spend Christmas here together. Our family, the Blacks, and the Lupins."I didn't think that was allowed," Harry said.
"Of course it is, you were the one that planned it you know. Don't you remember?" she inquired.
"No I can't...sorry I guess I hit my head harder then I thought," he replied with a shrug as he entered the Gryffindor common room. It looked positively more beautiful then he had ever seen it before. There was live fairies floating around, glowing in different colors, streams of shimmering tinsel wad wrapped everywhere, there was warm frost on all the chairs and walls and the tree was huge and covered in the nicest array of decorations Harry had ever seen.
Alexa smirked as her brother's eyes widened and his mouth fell open. "This is amazing!"
"I know isn't it? Too bad nothing good ever lasts," she said with a sigh.
"What?" he asked and stared at her with surprise.She shrugged and sat down while staring at the fire sadly.
"What's wrong?" he asked her."I don't know...it's just...I feel like something's missing, like I'm somewhere I shouldn't be, ever feel like that Harry?" she asked.
"Yeah," he said and looked around the room. The portrait opened and Gemma walked in, skipping slightly. She looked over at her 'evil twin' and her older brother and ran over to them quickly, sitting on the chair beside her sister's.
"What are you so happy about?" Harry asked dully.
"It's Christmas!" she said happily. Obviously she was the over active one while Alexa was the deep thinker.
Alexa rolled her eyes and said, "I was just thinking..."
"You do that too much," Gemma interrupted.
"Whatever," she said with an annoyed sigh.
There was a scream from up the girl's dormitory steps then a young girl, the same age as the twins, flew through the door and into the room. She tripped and ended up flying headfirst onto the cushions of the sofa.
Both of the twins just burst out laughing at the girl.
She sat up and her gray eyes flashed angrily, her black hair was a mess and it added to her annoyed look. "Gemma! Why did you put a rat in my bed?!"
"Calm down Kaylee, it was just a joke," the girl said.
Kaylee glared at the girl darkly and said, "Don't do it again, you know I don't like rats!"
"That's just because Pettigrew was one," Gemma replied.
The other two girls and Harry got stony looks on their faces but Harry had a slight suspicion that it wasn't for the same reason he did.
Harry was walking silently out of the grounds. Ron, Hermione and Ginny all left to go home earlier that day, just after Harry had gotten out of the hospital wing.
He stared at the frozen lake and said to himself, "Why do I keep thinking Hermione has a little sister here?"
'I don't know...why do you?' that annoying voice in his head said again.
Suddenly he heard crying coming from somewhere. He followed the noise and saw a 15-year-old girl with long jet black hair holding her knees close to her chest and crying.
"Are you ok?" he asked and knelt down next to her.
She looked up and he saw she had gray eyes and she looked just like a young female version of...
"Sirius," he said.
She nodded her head and said, "I just can't...oh Harry...I know you don't know what I'm going through but I can't believe my dad's gone."
"It's ok Kaylee," he said and hugged her tightly. 'How did you know her name was Kaylee?'
"Kaylee Jenna Black," he thought to himself. "I miss Sirius too."
"Why'd he have to die? I hate my stepfather! He treats me like shit! God when I was home at one point of time he told me to shut the fuck up because I laughed! God!"
Nobody had told Harry how Sirius had died, but he kept seeing a flash of a man falling through a veil.
"What's happening to me?" he whispered and backed away from the girl while holding his head.
"What?" Kaylee asked with worry.
"I feel like...I'm not supposed to be here...like I'm supposed to be somewhere else..."She just gave him a worried look and said, "I don't know..."
Christmas Eve was eventful but Harry had a feeling of deep longing as he watched his happy parent's joke around with his two sisters. He felt deeply sorry for Kaylee as her stepfather, Matt kissed her mother, Maureen and her brother and sister (Chad and Haylee) did an odd little jig. The Lupins seemed to be the most normal of them all...aside from the fact that Liana had to put up with both Remus and Josh being werewolves. Kaylee, or rather Cassiopeia Black, Sirius's older sister, adored her son Orion but she had the same empty look in her eyes that Kaylee did.
"Here Harry," James said and held out a package wrapped in thick brown paper. "Figured you could use this, I have the other one."
Harry got an odd look on his face and slowly opened the package to see a square shaped mirror. Nobody noticed the look of horror on his face as he stared at it.
"Sirius (he seemed hesitant when saying that name and Matt looked angry) and I used to use them to talk to each other during detention," James said.
Harry's hand shook as he had a flash of himself opening up the same package and then throwing it into his trunk, smashing it.
It fell from his shaking hand and shattered on the floor.
"Harry! Are you ok?" Lily asked him and moved towards her oldest child/only son.
James however looked angry that Harry had broken Sirius's mirror.
"It shouldn't be this way," Harry said, causing everyone to look at him.
"What?" Lily asked.
"This is all wrong!" Harry yelled and ran out of the common room."HARRY!" his mother yelled and tried to run after him but James stopped her. He just stared blankly at the door and muttered, "What's wrong with you Harry?"
Harry sat on top of the astronomy tower, shivering from the cold. His own words repeated in his head like a choir of Harry's chanting, 'This is all wrong.'
It was almost as if he thought he wasn't supposed to be there, but be somewhere else with someone else.
"This isn't right, I'm not supposed to be here. I'm supposed to be helping Hermione with..."
He saw blood leaking down the Great Hall walls and several students crashing back into the bloody brick, including himself. "No..."
"That's right Harry, keep remembering," Alexa's voice said. He faced the younger girl with confusion written on his face. "What?""This isn't real Harry, no matter what you think this never happened," she said sadly. "It could have happened but it didn't. This is what it would have been like if Voldemort never existed."
"That's not true," a second voice said and Gemma joined them. "Don't listen to her Harry, its all lies. She's just trying to confuse and hurt you."
"No Harry, I'm not, I swear," Alexa replied sadly. "You have to trust me.""No Harry, trust me," Gemma said and shoved her sister lightly to the side.
"Remember the Philosopher's Stone?!"
"Nicolas Flamel still has it."
"The Chamber of Secrets?!""There's no proof it's real."
Alexa glared at her twin then a mirror appeared out of nowhere. She took it into her hands and walked closer to Harry.He stood up from his sitting position on the cold, stone floor and stared curiously in the mirror.
"Hold it," she said and he did. She then reached her hand forwards and pushed his hair out of the way, to reveal his lightning bolt shaped scar. "Remember this?"Harry was staring at his lightning bolt scar. His eyes widened as he heard his mother's screams, his father's yells, Voldemort's high pitched laugh and a flash of bright green light. "I remember...wait...what am I doing here?"
Gemma sighed and Alexa said happily, "You were knocked unconscious in your world and your mind was pretty much thrown into another one. When that happens two people from the world your mind went into are chosen to either try to get you back to your world or to keep you here. I had to try and make you remember so you could go back while Gemma was supposed to convince you that this was real and I was just out of my mind."
"Why?" Harry asked with surprise.
"Because," Gemma piped up, "When you're mind is thrown out of your body there's a good chance you could die. If I had managed to keep your mind here it would be here forever and your body would just eventually die because your soul would follow your mind here.""Amazing," Harry said. "As much as I love this world...how do I get back to mine?"
Suddenly a portal of light appeared between the two twins, illuminating the area so much that Harry had to put his hands over his eyes to keep the pain at a minimum.
"Right through there," Gemma said.
"You'll remember everything that happened here," Alexa said. "Sometimes it causes people mental breakdowns so..." He cut her off by saying, "No it won't. It'll make me try harder. I know what could have been now...and I'll make Voldemort pay for taking my family away from me and life away from you guys. I just have one question though...for Gemma..." "Yes?" she asked."Why are you named the same as my dead sister, from my world?" he inquired.
"It was one of grandma's favorite names and she promised, no matter what, to name her oldest daughter that. I'm about five minutes older then Alexa so that's why I was named it. I know in your world mum was raped, that's why she had Gemma, but she stayed true to her word to her mother," Gemma said.Harry nodded his head and said, "I'll keep you guys in my heart and mind...just so I know what I'm fighting for now..."
The two girls smiled as he walked through the portal then had to let their eyes adjust as it vanished along with their brother. "Think we should have told him that he's not going directly home?" Alexa asked. "Nah, he'll get through fine," Gemma replied with a shrug.Harry's eyes got used to the bright light he was in as he looked around. Sighing with an annoyed tone he said to himself, "I should have guessed it wasn't going to be that easy getting back."
Looking down at his arms he saw that all his scars had returned and were throbbing at the moment, including his lightning bolt scar.
He continued walking, although he didn't know why, it didn't seem to be getting him anywhere.
Stopping he growled angrily to himself and said, "I should have just stayed in the other world. At least there was scenery."
Suddenly he was tackled onto the ground and there was a yell of, "HARRY!"He looked back and jumped away in surprise to see a large black dog on him. He got up and said, "Sirius?"
Sure enough his godfather, although looking like he did when he was younger, appeared in front of him with a wide grin.
"But you're..."
"Dead? Yeah I know," Sirius said happily. "I'm having a great time and don't blame yourself for it. I'm happy with James and Lily. By the way they ordered me to tell you that they do love you and they're really proud of you. Now I don't have much time here. I was just supposed to lead you to the door of unconsciousness." "Don't you mean consciousness?" Harry asked. "No I got it right. You're in a coma right now and there's no way you'd keep going on your own here," Sirius said and started walking, Harry followed him closely."I'm sorry I got you killed," he blurted out.
"You know it's not your fault. If you hadn't gone Voldemort would have just got tired of waiting and went himself. The Order would have been alerted and I probably would have gone anyways and...well you know the rest," he said with a sigh. He then got a happy look on his face and said, "But now I'm free! I can do whatever I want whenever I want! I'm with your parents and I couldn't be happier. Just take care of Remus and your friends for us, ok?"Harry smiled at his godfather and said, "Alright. Just make sure you guys don't forget about me."
"No way in hell we would!" Sirius cried out. A door appeared out of nowhere and he said, "Here's your stop. Just promise not to forget us."Harry touched the door handle then turned around and said, "Sirius?"
"Yeah," he asked.Harry paused for a moment as if thinking the right words to say then said, "Someone once told me something, and it was the wisest thing I've ever heard...not even anything Dumbledore says can compare to what he said."
"What was it?" Sirius asked curiously.
Sirius chuckled, remembering that he himself had said those words. "A phrase to live by. Now get going! You're friends miss you and Hermione's probably having a fit or something."
"Knowing her," Harry said with a small smile. "Bye Sirius."He smiled and nodded as his godson opened the door and walked through it.
Looking around curiously Harry realized that he was probably back in his mind because it was all black with swirling colors, like you see when you close your eyes.
Suddenly there was yet another flash and he was in...a prison cell?
"Harry?" someone asked. He turned around to see a shocked looking Ron staring at him.
"Ron," he said and his voice echoed.Ron's face turned from shocked to glee as he said, "Finally! I hope you don't have another odd dream so I can get my message across this time."
Harry sighed and said, "To think I heard Dumbledore saying once 'For in dreams, we enter a world that's entirely our own'...seems to me like everyone but me is deciding what I dream."
Ron snorted then said seriously, "Harry, you've got to get us out of here. I don't know how much more of this I can take. It's the same with everyone else. I've been coping the best out of us all."
Harry bit his lip and said, "Tell me where you are.""I think we're in You-Know-Who's old house or something," Ron said with a shrug. "Some Death Eaters called it the Riddle house or something like that and you said his name is really Tom Riddle..."
Harry moved to the window, covered in bars, and looked out it. There was a graveyard and he could see a cauldron, one that looked like it hadn't been touched in at least two years, sitting there. "I know where this is."
"Really? How?" the red head asked and walked next to him.
"That's where Voldemort was reborn," he replied and gave an annoyed sigh at Ron's wince. "Say his name Ron..." "I can't," he replied, his freckles standing out against his pale skin. "Ron," Harry said threateningly."V-V-V-V-Vold-emort," Ron said the last part in a whisper.
"It'll take practice but you'll get it soon," Harry said. "So you're in the Riddle house, about the third floor up and the corner window and the Riddle house is right by the graveyard that I was taken to in fourth year. Well it's a little off from where Dumbledore thought you were."
"Yeah, and Harry...about Quidditch..."
Harry chuckled and said, "Katie's captain and we have a reserve Keeper. The spot was saved for you. Ginny will have to try out next year. We won against Slytherin, don't worry. Oh by the way...I got your...Prefect badge...I don't care what you say, your taking it back."
Ron smiled at his friend and said, "Thanks buddy..."
Suddenly there was another flash and Harry was back to just seeing black.
Hermione looked like a mess. These days she was either in classes or the hospital wing. She was slipping in her classes a little because she didn't pay attention all of the time. She still always had her homework passed in on time of course. And when we say slipping for Hermione Granger it means she goes from 110 to 100.
She never went to her dormitory, let alone the Gryffindor common room. Either Parvati or Lavender would bring her clothes and her books. Sometimes though she wasn't allowed to see Harry. Dumbledore would be with him and then he would go and talk to other Order members.
Currently she was sitting on the chair next to Harry's bed. She was holding his hand tightly as Lavender brushed her hair and started putting it in a braid. "He's going to be fine you know, Harry's the strongest person I know."
"I know he's strong and all but...we already lost Ron..." Hermione said weakly and told herself mentally, "I will not cry again."
She started going over phrases for Ancient Runes when she felt something squeeze her hand. "Stop it Lavender."
"I'm not doing anything," she replied grumpily.
"What? But I..." she trailed off and gasped as she saw Harry's hand squeeze hers again. "Harry?"
A light groan escaped his mouth and after a minute of struggling he opened his eyes. "Where am I now?"
Hermione let out a little shriek and hugged him tightly, causing her hair to fall out of the unfinished braid. Lavender didn't really care though.
She jumped up and said, "I'll get Madam Pomfrey."
"Are you ok?" she asked. Harry was glad she didn't go off on him like the other Hermione had done.
"I'm fine and so is Ron," he said happily."What?" she asked with confusion.
Madam Pomfrey ran over, followed by Professor Dumbledore, who had a look of deep relief on his face.
"Harry?" he said. "Who did you send to get the Weasleys?" Harry asked right away.Dumbledore looked surprised beyond anything and said, "How did you know?"
"I saw them saving the Weasleys," he replied honestly.
"Yes I should have guessed as much," the headmaster said in deep thought. The Healer and the two girls looked on in confusion. "We got the information on where they were located when you went from being in a coma to being unconscious. You would mumble in your sleep and we knew all we needed to know to save them."
"Wait, so you're saying..." Lavender said and trailed off.
Suddenly a door to the hospital wing opened and a group of Aurors walked in. One of them levitated a stretcher behind him. The figure on it was covered in a white sheet.
Hermione let out a gasp and Harry sat up straighter.
"Who is that?" Dumbledore asked with slight alarm.There was sobbing and a red headed woman walked in, sobbing heavily. Molly Weasley was defiantly skinnier and paler then the last time any of them had seen her. Her hair and cloths were a mess and she had cuts and bruises all over her.
Soon Arthur Weasley walked in the room looking extremely depressed. Like Molly he was skinnier, paler and dirtier but he was obviously abused much more then she had been.
Then Ron and Ginny walked through the doors.
Ron, who looked awkward before, seemed even more so now. He was very tall and obviously underfed...he was skinnier then Harry! Like his parents he was pale and dirty and the light that was always present in his eyes was gone.
Ginny, likewise, seemed to be the same as her brother. She was starting to turn into a rather fine young lady but because of her time being held captive she seemed to have stopped growing in every way possible.
"Oh no," Hermione said and looked at the sheet. "Percy...""He's gone!" Mrs. Weasley suddenly screamed with sheer pain in her voice. Tears gathered in Hermione's eyes and she clung onto Harry tightly, from both fear and sadness for the Weasleys.
"Why couldn't you have heard where we were sooner Harry?!" Molly screamed out. "Maybe my baby wouldn't have killed himself then!"
Harry looked at his blankets with an ashamed look on his face as Mr. and Mrs. Weasley were led away by Dumbledore. Ginny followed them but Ron didn't.
He looked at his friends and said, "It wasn't your fault...you tried and you got us out in the end. Thank you Harry, you really are a good friend where I was always the jealous one. Now I've got a taste of your life and...I'm glad I'm not you."Harry smiled sadly at his friend as he walked after his family, not giving Hermione or Lavender time to jump up and tackle him.
'They're back...' Harry thought happily.
Suddenly a familiar voice echoed in his head, "Keep in mind what's right and what's wrong Harry..."
"I know who it is now...that voice..." Harry muttered under his breath. "Dad..."
Author's Insane Notes (Decided to rename it for awhile)
Well I decided to get another chapter up before I went back to school. I've gotta make this short because my three friends are coming over later. Should be fun for my step-dad...four teenage girls...anyways...lol
If you noticed to the replies in chapter 15 my cousin put a math problem in that for Gorav1 that didn't really work...because she messed up SO badly on it. It was supposed to be 14 x 2 PLUS 10 MINUS 50 PLUS 20 PLUS 10. That equals 18, the chapter that the Weasleys were returning in. I feel bad now...I should have done it myself because not only did most of the figures not show up but she also typed in the wrong last number so sorry to everyone, it was supposed to be a hint but obviously it didn't work. Thanks Angel (Rolls eyes)
Well I'm going to get to the replies to the reviews and then send this to my beta! I don't really have many notes right now...except for one.That world that Harry was in is NOT relevant to the story, neither is the fact that the annoying voice always talking to him in his father's. I just thought it'd be fun to write...
Anyways...
I just noticed on the third movie Buckbeak eats dead ferrets all the time, Hermione states it clearly in the end when she says something like 'come get the nice dead ferret'. Well Buckbeak attacked Malfoy and then in the fourth book Malfoy turns into a ferret...maybe it was some foreshadowing they put in the moving they JKR left out of the book of Draco dying! Lol! I'm kidden here people!
Here's the replies to the reviews!
Holimontski – cliffehanger...hehe...poor you, having a rough time I see. I agree, school work comes first...all my friends/family can say I'm the most serious one with that stuff out of all my friends so I understand what your saying, homework does come before fanfic writing
Crazy – well we agree then! You are crazy! Is this a soon enough post?
Destined Enchantress – Yeah I do! OH god! Your story! I'm so sorry! My computer went haywire for most of the summer and I ended up forgetting all about it...I'm so sorry! No I wanted to read the rest of it! I'll check it out later ok? Promise!!!
CentralsPrincess15 – (Smirks) Nah people sucking up to me doesn't make me update faster but people saying they like my fic does...and when Jess threatens me to finish it (lol). Thanks! Oh and your first question...what gave you that idea?
LJstagflower4e – Yeah I decided to use an idea that was floating around the internet...I like cliffhangers. Oh I'm glad I got it right...I personally am a big fan of her fics...
Athenakitty – Yeah probably. Not telling. Happy? They were finally rescued! Other stories...maybe not...I was to concentrate on one at the moment...
Wise Man Domingo – Thanks. Oh...oops...oh well...can't have everything perfect! And yeah Paint Ducks! You do NOT want to know how I came up with that...
Laina – Thank you! Hope you like the rest!
Billywig – I know I'm evil! You can't sleep and it's wonderful...lol! Sorry that just sounds funny! Thanks!
Voldermortist – umm well thanks for liking most of my story, sorry that the dialogue that's majority of the story...and what nickname? Voldy? Everyone uses it...
UlitmateHPFreak – No Harry wasn't the only one...a lot of other people did too, he was just the most important one.
Carn – Thank you. Oh lord you read my old stuff...I am so sorry you had to go through that...it's kinda funny...from fics anyone can tell I'm slowly becoming a better writer...
Thank you to everyone now I will email this to Jess...wonder how long it'll take him to get this back to me this time? Oh wells!
Jess: Well I finally finished reading over this, good chapter, I like the other world. But anyway I have to be quick cuz I have to eat lunch clean up then go to the first day of school . There were a few small mistakes where you forgot to add in certain words and a few sentences I rearranged but overall not bad grammar. See y'all later my lunch is almost ready.
Krystal: you eat lunch THEN go to school? I never knew that...I eat breakfast and go to school (lol) anyways thanks again!
Krystal Lily Potter