I got 2 more reviews. Apparently I'm still rushing which is really
bothering me. I'm going to slow it down, and write everything I see in my
head. Oh yeah, I updated one of my other stories.
Chapter6
Inuyasha was getting closer and closer to Kikyo's scent.
'The smell of dead Earth and ashes is coming closer. I won't let you down Shippo!'
Kagome was right behind Inuyasha, since he wasn't using his demon speed.
'Please Inuyasha, don't leave me.'
Inuyasha finally reached a clearing that was brighter than the rest of the forest.
"Kikyo."
"Inuyasha. I see you didn't bring me incarnation. Good."
"Kikyo! Let Shippo go!"
"Will you be going to hell with me?"
Kagome was now in place. She had her bow and arrow notched. 'Inuyasha. Just give me a sign. A signal, anything!'
Shippo looked up and saw Inuyasha and started yelling.
"INUYAHSA! INUYASHA! I'M UP HERE! INUYASHA!"
'What?! He can't here me? Why?'
Inuyasha couldn't hear or see Shippo, but Kagome could.
'SHIPPO!'
"So Inuyasha? Will you be going to hell with me?"
"Grrrrrr. Where's Shippo?"
Kikyo snapped her fingers and Inuyasha was on the ground. Shippo got up and ran behind Inuyasha and stuck out his tongue at Kikyo.
"Now Inuyasha, slaughter her!"
"You now have you're Shippo. Come Inuyasha."
"In your dreams! Now Kagome!"
Kagome took this as a signal and shot her arrow. It hit Kikyo in the shoulder, and she hit the ground. Even though he didn't love Kikyo anymore, it hurt to see her like this.
"Inuyasha." Kikyo grabbed the air and fell back down. "You betrayed me!"
Kagome came out of her hiding spot and stood next to Inuyasha.
"Finally, her soul has been put to rest." Kagome new Inuyasha was sad as he said this, even though he smiled. She put a reassuring hand on his shoulder and smiled too. Shippo jumped on Inuyasha's shoulder and said, "Thanks for saving me."
Inuyasha smiled and said, "No problem."
If you were right in front of the trio right that very second, they would look like the perfect family, except for the strange huge cat flying straight toward them.
Kirara let out a huge roar and all of three of them turned and looked at the cat.
"Kirara?"
Kirara stopped just in front of them and transformed in to her kitten form with a small parchment in her mouth. Kagome bent down and took it from her mouth.
"Inuyasha and Kagome,
Naraku is still well alive. He is planning on attacking the village and Kikyo is planning on dragging Inuyasha to hell with her and taking Kagome's jewel shards. Please get Shippo and come back soon to help. And when I say come back, I mean the both of you.
Sango"
"Grrrrr. Get on Kagome! Grab Shippo and Kirara too. I don't think Kirara is in the shape to fly back. We got to help Sango and the others before it's too late!" Inuyasha took one last glace at his former love before he took off.
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Sango, Miroku, and the villagers stood ready for anything that signaled Naraku was there. But they didn't expect to see Inuyasha come out of the forest.
"Inuyasha?"
"Where's Kagome?" Sango shouted.
"Kagome didn't go with me. She stayed here. She said something about the hot springs." But something about his story rung false. Kagome would NEVER relax and bathe in the hot springs in a crisis like this. So she decided to see what was up.
"Did you get Shippo?"
"Ya, he ran to the hot springs with Kagome."
"Where's Kikyo?"
"I put her to rest. Why are all the villagers here with weapons?"
"They were preparing just in case Kikyo came," Miroku was the one to talk this time. He understood what Sango was trying to do. He also thought something rung false in his story.
'Inuyasha' took a step closer and the entire village raised their weapons.
"What?"
"Inuyasha, did you not get the letter we sent you? It said Naraku is still alive so stay with Kagome and Shippo."
"We sent a villager to tell you," Miroku stated.
"Oh yes, I saw him, and I also saw Naraku. Kagome killed Naraku for real this time and I fended off Kagura and Kanna."
"But you said Kagome was at the hot springs."
'Damn. They're catching on. So, that reincarnation DID go with Inuyasha.'
"I meant she went there AFTER we killed Naraku."
"Where's the villager?"
"He left quickly after he told me."
Now Sango and Miroku KNEW he was lying, because he had said Kagome didn't go with him, then he said she did go with him. Then he said KAGOME killed Naraku. Then he said a villager had sent him the message, when Kirara had.
"Enough! I'm tired after such a battle with Naraku-"
"But you said KAGOME, killed Naraku!"
"I'm confused because I'm so tired. Now move aside so I can go to sleep."
"In the hut? You always sleep next to the river so you can wake up early."
"Oh yes, but I'd rather sleep in the hut today." But this time when he stepped closer, Sango and Miroku raised their weapons.
"You said a villager sent you the message. We sent Kirara. You said Kagome was at the hot springs, and then you said she's the one who killed Naraku. Where's the REAL Inuyasha!?"
"You are smarted than you look exterminator. Surely if it were you I tried to trick 50 years ago, you wouldn't have fell for it." Naraku transformed into himself and lunged at Sango. Sango quickly pulled her heavy boomerang in front of her and shielded herself from Naraku's attack. Naraku jumped back and smiled.
"I don't know why you're smiling! I reflected your attack!" Naraku only smiled more and responded, "Look again."
Suddenly Sango's boomerang broke in two.
"Ahhhh! My weapon!" But Sango quickly recovered as Naraku attacked again. But Miroku jumped in front of her and shielded her with his staff.
"Thanks."
Naraku just jumped back and readied for another attack. Until he heard the word "Fire!" And flaming arrows flew straight toward him. Only 6 touched him but the rest he dodged.
"Ha! I've been burned alive and suffered numerous wounds, what makes you think your arrows will harm me?!"
"Because we have sacred arrows!"
Sango and Miroku smiled as Naraku turned around and saw.
Cliffhanger. Not really, because you probably already know who it is. But I really hope I didn't rush on this chapter. Because I worry about me rushing through my story more than anything else. Happy Thanksgiving!
Chapter6
Inuyasha was getting closer and closer to Kikyo's scent.
'The smell of dead Earth and ashes is coming closer. I won't let you down Shippo!'
Kagome was right behind Inuyasha, since he wasn't using his demon speed.
'Please Inuyasha, don't leave me.'
Inuyasha finally reached a clearing that was brighter than the rest of the forest.
"Kikyo."
"Inuyasha. I see you didn't bring me incarnation. Good."
"Kikyo! Let Shippo go!"
"Will you be going to hell with me?"
Kagome was now in place. She had her bow and arrow notched. 'Inuyasha. Just give me a sign. A signal, anything!'
Shippo looked up and saw Inuyasha and started yelling.
"INUYAHSA! INUYASHA! I'M UP HERE! INUYASHA!"
'What?! He can't here me? Why?'
Inuyasha couldn't hear or see Shippo, but Kagome could.
'SHIPPO!'
"So Inuyasha? Will you be going to hell with me?"
"Grrrrrr. Where's Shippo?"
Kikyo snapped her fingers and Inuyasha was on the ground. Shippo got up and ran behind Inuyasha and stuck out his tongue at Kikyo.
"Now Inuyasha, slaughter her!"
"You now have you're Shippo. Come Inuyasha."
"In your dreams! Now Kagome!"
Kagome took this as a signal and shot her arrow. It hit Kikyo in the shoulder, and she hit the ground. Even though he didn't love Kikyo anymore, it hurt to see her like this.
"Inuyasha." Kikyo grabbed the air and fell back down. "You betrayed me!"
Kagome came out of her hiding spot and stood next to Inuyasha.
"Finally, her soul has been put to rest." Kagome new Inuyasha was sad as he said this, even though he smiled. She put a reassuring hand on his shoulder and smiled too. Shippo jumped on Inuyasha's shoulder and said, "Thanks for saving me."
Inuyasha smiled and said, "No problem."
If you were right in front of the trio right that very second, they would look like the perfect family, except for the strange huge cat flying straight toward them.
Kirara let out a huge roar and all of three of them turned and looked at the cat.
"Kirara?"
Kirara stopped just in front of them and transformed in to her kitten form with a small parchment in her mouth. Kagome bent down and took it from her mouth.
"Inuyasha and Kagome,
Naraku is still well alive. He is planning on attacking the village and Kikyo is planning on dragging Inuyasha to hell with her and taking Kagome's jewel shards. Please get Shippo and come back soon to help. And when I say come back, I mean the both of you.
Sango"
"Grrrrr. Get on Kagome! Grab Shippo and Kirara too. I don't think Kirara is in the shape to fly back. We got to help Sango and the others before it's too late!" Inuyasha took one last glace at his former love before he took off.
~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~
Sango, Miroku, and the villagers stood ready for anything that signaled Naraku was there. But they didn't expect to see Inuyasha come out of the forest.
"Inuyasha?"
"Where's Kagome?" Sango shouted.
"Kagome didn't go with me. She stayed here. She said something about the hot springs." But something about his story rung false. Kagome would NEVER relax and bathe in the hot springs in a crisis like this. So she decided to see what was up.
"Did you get Shippo?"
"Ya, he ran to the hot springs with Kagome."
"Where's Kikyo?"
"I put her to rest. Why are all the villagers here with weapons?"
"They were preparing just in case Kikyo came," Miroku was the one to talk this time. He understood what Sango was trying to do. He also thought something rung false in his story.
'Inuyasha' took a step closer and the entire village raised their weapons.
"What?"
"Inuyasha, did you not get the letter we sent you? It said Naraku is still alive so stay with Kagome and Shippo."
"We sent a villager to tell you," Miroku stated.
"Oh yes, I saw him, and I also saw Naraku. Kagome killed Naraku for real this time and I fended off Kagura and Kanna."
"But you said Kagome was at the hot springs."
'Damn. They're catching on. So, that reincarnation DID go with Inuyasha.'
"I meant she went there AFTER we killed Naraku."
"Where's the villager?"
"He left quickly after he told me."
Now Sango and Miroku KNEW he was lying, because he had said Kagome didn't go with him, then he said she did go with him. Then he said KAGOME killed Naraku. Then he said a villager had sent him the message, when Kirara had.
"Enough! I'm tired after such a battle with Naraku-"
"But you said KAGOME, killed Naraku!"
"I'm confused because I'm so tired. Now move aside so I can go to sleep."
"In the hut? You always sleep next to the river so you can wake up early."
"Oh yes, but I'd rather sleep in the hut today." But this time when he stepped closer, Sango and Miroku raised their weapons.
"You said a villager sent you the message. We sent Kirara. You said Kagome was at the hot springs, and then you said she's the one who killed Naraku. Where's the REAL Inuyasha!?"
"You are smarted than you look exterminator. Surely if it were you I tried to trick 50 years ago, you wouldn't have fell for it." Naraku transformed into himself and lunged at Sango. Sango quickly pulled her heavy boomerang in front of her and shielded herself from Naraku's attack. Naraku jumped back and smiled.
"I don't know why you're smiling! I reflected your attack!" Naraku only smiled more and responded, "Look again."
Suddenly Sango's boomerang broke in two.
"Ahhhh! My weapon!" But Sango quickly recovered as Naraku attacked again. But Miroku jumped in front of her and shielded her with his staff.
"Thanks."
Naraku just jumped back and readied for another attack. Until he heard the word "Fire!" And flaming arrows flew straight toward him. Only 6 touched him but the rest he dodged.
"Ha! I've been burned alive and suffered numerous wounds, what makes you think your arrows will harm me?!"
"Because we have sacred arrows!"
Sango and Miroku smiled as Naraku turned around and saw.
Cliffhanger. Not really, because you probably already know who it is. But I really hope I didn't rush on this chapter. Because I worry about me rushing through my story more than anything else. Happy Thanksgiving!