UniGirl: I hope this isn't too long between updates, I'm trying, I really am. I had almost finished this chapter, actually, finished it, just needed to do the reviews at the end, but…guess what? Yes, my computer :kicks computer: broke down. More specifically, my internet stopped working. Coincidence, ne? Then I had to wait to get it fixed. Just for that, I decided to make this chapter longer. It might not be, but hey, ranting's good for life. Also, my internet is very unsteady, so bear with me until I get it fixed for good.
I just wanted to tell you, in case I don't get an update in before it happens, but I'm going to be on vacation near the beginning of August, until the twenty fifth or sometime like that. So, don't expect an update from me until the beginning of September, or, depending on how much work I have, the middle of it.
I was surprised at how many of you shared my views about the dub names. In fact, I thought you would dismiss them as a lunatic authoress' ranting. In case you're wondering, the full list and character bios are in the official Nelvana website, under "Beyblade," for those who are interested. Just one more thing on this subject, :sings: "We don't need another heeero…" Anyway, I've got Kai and that's all I need.
Kai: o.O
Another thing I got surprised at was how concerned some of you were about Mariam. There's a reason she's gone. It's something to do with something that happened a few chapters ago, at night.
Oh, here's more advertising. If you haven't check out Rubellite's G Revolution pictures site, it's got all the spoilers you'll ever need. But she already took some off to make room for new pictures, so hurry up.
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The blades sent sparks into the stadium, and he looked at Bryan across from him. He looked down at both blades, waited until the right moment, then…
"DRACO!" (A/N All credits go to Nessi – thanks )
Bryan looked up at the great dragon; it was pure brown in colour, and maybe fifteen, no twenty feet long. Blood red eyes glared at him maliciously.
"FALBORG!" Next to this dragon, his bit beast looked small. But Bryan didn't care, it was going to win nevertheless.
"ATTACK!" screamed Storm, his bit beast running in for the kill.
"FALBORG COUNTER!"
"DODGE IT!"
And so it went like this for a while, one attacking, the other defending, attacking, and dodging. They were so evenly matched that the best bet was to wish the opponent would run out of steam.
That was until Bryan noticed something.
He was sure he had seen these attacks before, this pattern, this manoeuvre.
More importantly, he was sure he had seen this strategy before.
He looked into the mirrored lenses of the brown haired teen, not knowing what to think.
Then he had a plan.
"FALBORG!" the wind kicked up. "ATTACK…NOW!"
It took a while to realize that it wasn't aiming at the blade, but at him. Storm raised one arm to block the blow, but it was too late. The wind came flying at him. He closed his eyes, dreading the worst.
He opened them again. The first thing he noticed was that he was still standing, and that his blade was still spinning.
And then he noticed his shades, lying shattered, beside his feet.
Wing was standing up behind him. Noticing he was all right, she sat down again.
Storm closed his eyes, and then brought his head up to face his opponent.
Bryan looked at him, waiting for him to open them again. The blades were battling as if they had a mind of their own. Slowly, the teen opened his eyes, and gave him the iciest glare he could muster.
If Bryan hadn't seen it before, he would have frozen solid.
But he had. He knew he had received that very same glare, from that very same pair of icy blue eyes. He knew that deathly white face, that posture, and that style. He knew that tallness and calmness. He knew that shield, he knew that battle stance.
"You…traitor…" he whispered.
"Wasn't it obvious?" asked the boy, loud enough so that only Bryan could hear.
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The Crimson Sabres
Bryan nodded slightly. Fuelled by anger and hate, he called out again.
"FALBORG STROLLBLITZ!"
"DRACO HEAVY BIND!"
The spirits crashed at each other, tearing at their opponents, wishing, truly, to kill the other.
Bryan glared at the icy eyed boy. The wind swept up and engulfed him.
He smirked. "Why? Can't stand the wind?"
"You…wish" he spat.
Bryan's eyes widened in confusion as Storm stood up and called out to his bit beast, despite the winds swirling around him.
"I grew up in Russia. I've fallen into a frozen lake, got stranded in a snowstorm. You really think I can't handle a bit of wind?"
"Yes I do. FALBORG GIVE HIM WHAT HE DESERVES"
Storm tried his best to stay on his feet, but it didn't work. Again, he got on one knee, and again, his blade got pounded.
The winds died down again, and as Storm turned his head, he saw that his Wing was standing up. Her expression was impossible to read, but her lips were drawn in a straight line.
Indicating anger.
He turned around to look in Bryan's confused eyes.
"DRACO FINISH HIM!"
The dragon rushed towards its prey, tackling the bird to the ground. Then it wrapped its tail around Falborg's neck and squeezed hard.
The bit beast exploded into fragments of light.
Storm smiled as his own bit beast returned to its blade after giving a final cry of victory.
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Marina ran out to her team mate. "TALA!"
"Hey, Mari."
"That was wicked."
He chuckled inwardly. "I told you you haven't changed."
That kept her quiet.
"Just wait. I'll get Esbyiar back for you."
"Thanks." She blushed.
Suddenly, his eyes turned cold again. "Let's go outside and talk about this."
So he walked out of the room, with Flame following at his heels.
"Why do you keep that on? We don't need disguises anymore."
"Out of habit, I guess." He took the shades off, revealing his auburn eyes.
"Kai…I'm…"
But at the last minute, Kai decided he really didn't want an apology, even though he had longed for one for the last few years. "There's no need. I understand."
"Kai…All these years…they were for nothing."
"It's over now. We're good."
"Good."
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Watching Kenny type rapidly on his laptop, Ray asked, "What's happening?"
"Oh…do you really think that kid could be Tala?"
"And that Flame's Kai. What do you really think?" asked Tyson
"I really think that that boy is Kai."
"CHIEF!"
"What?"
"You can't say that."
"There's all the evidence in the world to back it up."
Flame leaned on the pillar in the walkway next to them. He was a few levels above, but knew every word they had said. He had heard enough. Turning around, he walked up the stairs, not failing to notice the stares the crowd was giving him.
Tala's right. I can't be a coward.
His crimson eyes flashed, and he closed them, walking through the halls with them closed.
"What are you staring at, Max?"
"Him…"
Tyson turned around to catch a glimpse of the roan headed boy, walking out the back door.
"He was listening."
"That…worm…" Tyson sprang onto his feet, but Hilary held him back. "TYSON!"
"I'll…kill…him…"
"Tyson, you can't. If he's Kai, then you'll have no chance against him…if he's not, then he must be very clever, and his bit beast very powerful. Honestly, I've never heard of a bit beast that can take the form of another, but this could be the first," said Kenny
Ray and Lin looked at each other.
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"Bladers ready…3…2…1…LET IT RIP!"
"FALBORG"
"DRACO"
"ATTACK" they screamed in unison.
There was never as much hate in any battle as this one. Bryan, ready to get vengeance, and Tala, well, his motives were unknown.
The wind kicked up. Tala glanced behind him. His team leader wasn't there.
I'll just have to fare on my own, he thought
Soon, there were whirlwinds circling the beystadium, in such a way that, if it weren't for the cameras directly above, no one would be able to see the blades.
Tala put one arm over his eyes, a desperate attempt to block the dust from entering. Then he braced himself for another attack.
It came as suddenly as it left, leaving the younger teen on both knees, panting.
Only the thought of victory urged him to stand up again.
"HEAVY METAL BIND ATTACK!"
"STROLLBLITZ"
They both smirked inwardly, but as contact was made, only one blade was left standing.
"D…draco…"
Then, obviously making effort not to show any emotion, Tala picked up his brown blade and walked out of the room.
I'm sorry, Marina, he said to himself
He didn't know that she was listening.
It's okay, Wing's power is greater than any I've seen so far. You know that.
She wasn't at the battle
She had bigger fish to fry.
Isn't this the most important thing that was supposed to happen?
For Wing, no.
She has to win this, or else we'll…
I know. Have you even seen her bit beast?
No.
I got attacked by it. If it can potentially tear flesh and blood into shreds, I have no doubt that Tomas' bit beast will be lying on the ground, writhing in pain.
We haven't seen him battle. Last time, he chickened out.
That's what makes me wonder if he's a powerful weapon under his sleeve.
Wing deceived BioVolt into thinking she was Kai. That's why Tomas was pitted against her.
I know.
You know how important Hiwatari is to the success of BioVolt.
I know that all too well.
I'm thinking that Tomas was trained specially to bring down Kai Hiwatari.
It was an interesting thought.
You know what? You may be right, but we can never be sure.
Yeah. I was thinking about that conversation we had a few weeks back. About that "place."
Yeah?
It's a coincidence that three of us went to BioVolt, left in that order.
And we weren't talking about BioVolt.
You're right.
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Kenny closed his laptop.
"What are you doing?"
"Going to pay Flame a visit."
"Why?"
"I'm convinced he's Kai."
"Well, I'm coming with you," said Ray
Kenny smiled.
They headed for the Celestials' training room. Ray put an ear to the door, listening.
"There are Beyblade noises. Wing's in there training, I think."
Suddenly, the door flew open.
"Uh…guys, I think we're caught," said Tyson, who, after a lot of persuading, agreed to tag along.
"What do you want?" asked Wing
"We're here to see…"
Wing turned her head towards the inside of the room. "Flame, you've got visitors."
"Let me guess, the Bladebreakers?"
"Precisely."
"Tell them that I'm busy."
"You heard that, right?" she asked, turning.
"Can you answer our question, then?"
"Depends on what it is."
"Is he Kai?"
"Yes."
The Bladebreakers turned around to the source of the other voice.
That's what you were busy with? Changing?
Yeah.
I thought girls changed slowly.
He chose to ignore the comment. "Now you've got your answer, care to leave?"
Tyson looked like he was about to explode. "How dare you? You ran away like that, never told us, and now you're on this team, and…"
Kai flinched. Tyson had packed a punch on his face.
Tyson, who had never seen his former team captain flinch, smirked.
Kai dug into his pocket, looking for his Dranzer. When he found it, he reached for his launcher.
Someone else got there before he did.
A blue blade whizzed by Tyson's cheek, cutting it. Beads of blood welled up, but he didn't seem to notice.
"Next time, idiot, I won't miss."
Tyson turned around.
"Marina…"
"They aren't worth your time."
"They aren't worth yours too, Ice."
Marina smiled, memories coming back to her, when everyone feared her, called her the "Ice."
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"Aquilla Cold Storm ATTACK!"
The cold winds circled the beystadium, resting in a blanket above it, trapping the cold air in, and keeping the warm air out.
"AQUILLA DIVE BOMB!"
"Not so fast, ESBYIAR FLOOD ATACK!"
And so Esbyiar had covered water all over the stadium, which, unwittingly, had been sealed in cold air.
The water froze.
"Now I've got the advantage. ESBYIAR ATTACK!"
"AQUILLA!"
Carolyn picked up her blade and looked up at Boris, glaring down at her. She did her best to show a brave face.
"Come here, Laona. You, clean up the ice."
Marina had heard "clean up, Ice." "My name isn't Ice."
Boris pondered it for a moment. "No, but I can call you that."
Marina wasn't stupid enough to reply.
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Wing looked across the vast beystadium, at the silver haired boy across from it. Unlike most people, she had a strategy.
"LET IT RIP!!!"
Tomas stared into the shades, trying to bore a hole through them. Questions swam in his head. Was this person Kai? Or was it the other?
He shook his head. "ATTACK"
Wing looked at the black blade, noticing its attack pattern.
She retreated. Better to defend, and lure the bit beast out. She wouldn't know what to do until she had seen it.
It worked. "Why won't you lose?" Tomas asked. "Why won't you just give up? You can't defend forever. BLACK DRANZER!"
Kai flinched at the name. He looked up. It can't be…
It is.
Wing?
Don't talk to me.
"BLACK DRANZER ATTACK!"
Wing looked into the eyes of the bit beast. You will pay, beast. You will pay…
Black Dranzer looked back at her, as if saying, right, girl.
The blade hit Wing's squarely, sending it into the air.
"RAPID SPIN!"
Wing's blade rotated, spinning the other way, as it landed squarely in front of its opponent.
Come on, Shade, come on…
You wish, beast.
But deep down, Wing knew she couldn't beat Black Dranzer without summoning her bit beast. She knew.
Of course you can't, Shade, summon her, and you have a small chance.
If I summon her, you'll take her over.
Yes, I will.
Also, would you mind getting out of my head?
Yes, I would. It's good to get you annoyed. And it serves as a good distraction.
What?
Look down and you'll know what I mean.
Wing looked down at the beystadium, to find that Black Dranzer was already almost pushing her blade off the edge.
"No…ATTACK!"
That's the spirit, Shade.
What would you know about it?
There was no reply. Then, you'll see, soon enough, but when you do, it will already be too late.
Wing tried to shake the voice out of her head, and clear her mind. Again, her blade was being pushed off the edge, and this time, there wasn't enough room for her to dodge it.
She weighed her chances. Win or lose, secrecy or…
It was useless. She could see, now that Black Dranzer was right. She needed the strength of her bit beast. If she didn't, it would be gone anyway.
Yes, yes!
Shut up.
"…AQUILLA!" [A/N, it's pronounced ah-KEY-ya]
A white hawk shot out of the bit chip. Its wings were massive, and its head both swift and graceful at the same time.
Kai stepped back from behind her. "No…it can't be…"
Wing took off her glasses, and her brown eyes looked back at her team mates.
"Carolyn…" whispered Kai, vermin evident in his voice.
Kai didn't know if she had heard him or not, but if she had, she made no remark.
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"What do you want, girl? You know you're misplaced in this abbey."
"You'll see soon enough, Viper."
"Maybe, Shade."
"Don't call me Shade."
"Why not? Tala calls you that."
"I respect Tala, he respects me back."
"And you hate me, I hate you back. So we're even."
She drew her blade. "You don't want me to…"
"Your bit beast is made by BioVolt, mine's a sacred beast spirit. How do you think that will compare."
"Aquilla's true power is beyond your wildest dreams."
"And yours. I doubt you've known how to unleash it anyway."
The younger child bit her lip. He was right.
Kai turned around, walking away. "What a waste of time," he muttered, loud enough for her to hear.
Carolyn watched him go. As soon as he was out of sight, she screamed a long string of swear words.
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"Hey guys," said Max
"What?" asked Tyson.
Max entered the room, accompanied by a white haired, brown eyed girl.
Kai looked at her, and she met his gaze. He glared. Carolyn Laona… Surprisingly, she only smiled back.
"Who's she?" Kai growled.
"Don't worry, he does that to everyone," Max told the girl. "This is Carolyn. She's new to Japan."
Carolyn smiled.
Kai walked up to her. He had no time for the sweat talk. "Carolyn Laona..."
She looked taken aback. "How'd you know my surname?"
"Enough games, girl. What do you want? Why aren't you in that hell infested nest with your hell infested friend?"
She smiled sweetly. "I don't know what you mean," she said with a respectful bow, "I came here, I wanted to see the Japanese BBA, that's all. I'm also here to watch the world championships."
Kai glared at her. His voice dropped to a deadly tone. "Whatever you're plotting, Shade, I'm not falling for it."
Again, the girl put on a confused expression. "Shade? Who's that?"
Kai turned around and walked out of the room.
"Sorry, Carolyn, he's rude," said Hilary.
"Don't worry, I've read all about the Bladebreakers' team leader." She smiled again.
"I forgot to introduce us," said Tyson. I'm Tyson, that's Kenny, we call him the chief, that's Ray over there, the one with black hair and ears like that elf from Lord of the Rings whatever his name is, and…"
"Tyson, I don't look like Legolas."
"Whatever. Anyway, that's Hilary."
Carolyn bowed again. "Thanks."
"Do you have a place to stay?" asked Hilary, "If not, you could stay here."
"That'd be great, but I don't think your friend likes me very much."
Kai had watched from the window, listening. Carolyn Laona, whatever you're plotting, don't expect to catch me off guard. I know why you're really here, and that's to kill me.
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So that's why she came back. That's why…so she had been planning to call this for a while already. And she didn't tell us…
"Waitaminute… Chief, isn't that Carolyn's bit beast?"
"Yeah. But hey, I'm not going to say anything. She had Dranzer."
"How can someone have two bit beasts that were so different???"
Again, Ray and Lin looked at each other. It was so impossible, but it was the only answer.
Tomas looked at the hawk. "Don't fool me, child."
"Child? You kid me. You still don't recognise me? I've seen you before, you're not a new recruit from BioVolt."
"I've seen you before too."
"Then you know who I am."
He surveyed her for a moment. "Not Hiwatari."
Carolyn rolled her eyes. "Do I look like him?"
Tomas looked past her at the real Kai. "Nope."
Carolyn remained silent.
"So who are you?"
"They call me Shadow."
"So…" he looked back at his teammates, and then at the Celestials. "The Crimson Sabres recruited. Ice, Wolf, Viper, and Shadow."
"Took you long enough. Too bad your reflexes aren't as good."
"What?"
With a final heave, Aquilla shoved the other blade off the stadium.
"That's not…"
"What would you have known about fairness, we both lived by breaking the rules."
His eyes darkened into an unmistakable glare.
Carolyn smirked.
"Carolyn…"
"Kai…"
"It was you. All along, it was you."
She rolled her eyes again.
"You freak."
"Who are you calling a freak? At least I don't smear my face with paint every morning."
"No, but you smear it with baby powder."
"What makes you think that?"
"Well, you look like a ghost."
Carolyn packed a punch right at the older teen's nose.
"I'm still older than you, and taller. Of course, you're still heavier than me…" He trailed off, the weight thing always worked on girls.
"Viper, I know that. I can't help it that I'm not as fit as you are. It's always been that way."
"What's happening?" asked Hilary. "They're hitting each other."
"But Carolyn…"
"She didn't have anything against Kai last time…"
"No, but Kai had a lot against her."
Ray breathed a sigh of realization. "Oh…I get it."
"What?"
"Yeah, Ray, we're all in the dark here."
"Carolyn came just for Kai."
Max snorted. He knew that.
"She must have known about this team, she might even be the one who called them together."
"That means that Kai didn't know which was which."
Kenny looked at Tyson. "So you've accepted Flame's identity."
"Yeah…I guess."
"She came to gain his trust, I think. What I'm puzzled about is this "Crimson Sabres" thing."
Kenny typed it up on his laptop. "According to Dizzi's search, the Crimson Sabres were a team composed of youngsters who kept on winning the Russian Junior Championships. She says that…"
"Chief, I can talk. Anyway, the Crimson Sabres were supposed to be led by BioVolt, consisting of some of the youngest top notch bladers. There was the Viper Sabre, the Wolf Sabre, the Ice Sabre, and the Shadow Sabre."
"Oh…Can you elaborate?"
"Tyson, let me finish. Apparently, two of them, Shadow and Viper, had a grudge against each other, and Viper somehow let Ice die over the edge of a cliff. Ice was both of their friends, along with the Wolf's. Then Wolf and Shadow went and isolated Viper, who just isolated them back."
"So that's why they're not dominating the world championships or something."
"Yes. Now I'll tell you something interesting. After Ice died, Viper destroyed the training facilities, and therefore got kicked out. Then, about a year and a half ago, Shadow disappeared, and just recently, Wolf did too."
"…Oh…" said Kenny, piecing the puzzle together.
"That's what Tomas meant when he said the Crimson Sabres were back. By looking at these clues, it's pretty obvious that Viper's Kai, Ice's Marina, Wolf's Tala, and Shadow's Carolyn."
"So that's why Kai abandoned us," said Max.
"No, Max."
"What?"
"I think he's abandoned you for a reason far more important, so important that it could affect…"
"LIN!"
Lin blushed. "Sorry, Ray."
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"Tala, cheer up. You and Kai are good again, I'm alive and well, why don't you just leave the things of the past behind you?"
"Marina, it's not that simple."
"Why?"
"After you left, we took a vow. We vowed the Crimson Sabres would never fight again - as a team."
"And now that vow is broken."
"Yes."
"Why is that such a great deal?"
"We're in trouble now, greater trouble than before."
Why?
The thing BioVolt wants more than Kai is the Crimson Sabres, back, fighting, as a team for them. To this day, we remain the strongest team they have ever had. We've got you and Carolyn for skill and Kai for leadership.
You missed yourself.
Me for being a pylon.
You're not a pylon, Tala. You bind us together.
You're the only one who can make Kai and Carolyn cooperate.
I can't. You're Kai's best friend. I'm Carolyn's.
That was our little club.
Yeah.
Look, Ice, there's nothing we can do except wish that Carolyn wins this match. And even if we do, BioVolt's going to get at us, now that they know you're alive, and Carolyn's well.
What if we're not willing to work for BioVolt?
You know Boris as well as I do. You know that once we get close enough to him for him to ask that question, we really won't have a choice
Either yes, or death.
Oh, they won't kill us. You've become naïve over these years. They'd rather have us working for them.
Oh… Marina's eyes hardened. "The drug.
You're right. That.
There was silence.
Wolf, why do they do these things? It's wrong, it's injust, it's…
Tala cut her off. He looked into the green eyes.Marina…what's the outside world done to you…what happened to the old you…the one that I knew and...l…liked?
Tala…I told you I had changed. You interpreted it wrong.
Tala shook his head. You don't understand. If we need to have an ounce of chance of beating them, we need to be who we once were. Maybe the members of the Sabres are here, but our minds have changed. Maybe you were right, the Crimson Sabres would be no more.
I'm willing to bring them back, to bring BioVolt down.
If they find this out, if they haven't found already, they'd capture the people you care for, not Carolyn or Kai, they want to give you a choice, but someone like…like Joseph, or Ozuma.
Pictures of them flashed in her head. No…
We need to be our old selves. It's the only way to win. And one more question: Marina, are you willing to die for this cause? Are you? Are you willing to die to save the Bit Beasts?
I've never died before.
Obviously, but are you willing to, when you are faced with this chance?
Yes.
That's enough.
There was silence again.
No, it isn't.
Carolyn?
To die for your beliefs isn't the greatest courage. Once you're dead, you have no guilt. You know what I think is harder than dying for what you believe in?
What?
Marina…are you willing to let another one of us die?
Marina paused. No.
You see my point? What about you, Tala?
Tala pondered it. Yes. But I wouldn't want to.
You'll never forgive yourself for the rest of your life.
I know.
That's what Boris was saying. That's why emotions are bad. To get emotionally attached to someone makes a person not able to make correct choices, even if it's for the good of the world. Would you choose the one you truly cared about over the whole world? Many men would.
Wow, Carolyn, I never knew these words would come from you.
Kai…
The day Carolyn finds wisdom in Boris' words is the day the apocalypse comes.
Carolyn…why do you know this? Asked Marina
I let someone die before. She sacrificed her life to save mine, so that I would live to recruit…you guys, and so I could have another chance.
Who was it?
Aquilla.
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UniGirl: is that considered a cliffy? :looks up: three thousand six hundred and eighty two words in the chapter alone, not even in the "Previously" part. :Uses word count again: Four thousand and ninety two words not including rants. That's not good.
How'd you find it? Next chapter, more answers, and the outcome of Carolyn's battle. I think. I'm not sure. Hey, I didn't get half of what I wanted to in this chapter.
In the meantime, you can review! Oh, and if you're interested, there's a long detailed bio of Lin in the fanwork forum of Ty Kamara, under "OC('s)" the first post. She turned out a little different than I intended. But then again, Carolyn was my original MS…
Must get onto writing Carolyn and Marina's bios…
I'm done ranting. REVIEW! IT'S AN ORDER!
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Nessi: Yes I finally did. Sorry…but he is evil, mind you. Very much so. I think I need you to remind me when I kind of forget about him. But the sequel won't be in the POV of the Guardians…more of Ray, since I like it when people don't know what someone else is thinking…
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