A/N:I have written heaps!!!! This is only a third of what I wrote cose I couldn't stop but ill wait a couple of days before I put up the rest in case I need it as background....its coming quite easy to me cose there is a script laid out its so fun to write. Oh and thanx for reviewing I was so happy hehe im loved....we to a degree any way enjoy...
The game was furious. Bodies collided scrambling for the ball then streaked through the water desperate to get a goal. The crowd in the stadium cheered and stamped as even more people piled into the stadium.
High above the city on a narrow ledge walked a middle-aged man that would pipe anyone's curiosity. He wore in a long red robe with a high zipped up collar covering his scared face. He had black pants and long boots. One arm was out of its sleeve and cradled close to his body as if injured the other held a large clay jug that he lifted in a toast to something that was rushing towards him.
The man was saluting a huge wall of water as if it where alive. It could have been. The swell came from nowhere far out but still visible from Zanarkand. It grew fast, rolling and swelling, as it got closer to the unknowing city. It was not unknowing for long, several people still on there way to the stadium caught site of the terrifying mass and screamed running to warn others and get out of the way. None of them noted the lone man on the ledge who was watching the approaching wave with complete calm and the hint of a smile.
Back in the sphere both players and those watching them had no idea what was going on outside. At this moment their favorite player had been viciously tackled and was struggling out of the much bigger mans iron grip. Tida refused to let him have the ball was becoming frustrated as her attempt to throw her opponent where failing. Instead she passed the ball knowing at least that would get rid of him so she could swim closer to the goal and hopefully score. The ball out of her hands her oppressor still didn't let go and her teammates where waiting for her to swim forward to take a pass that would mean a goal. Raging now and unable to use any of her limbs to free herself she snapped her head back smashing her captor's nose. He let go but was apparently unaffected. He had achieved his goal of preventing her team from scoring; he seemed happy to let go and swim away looking smug. Furious Tida sped after him coming up on his inside she gathered her strength and rammed into him pushing the shocked man right through the side of the sphere on to the crowed. Anything goes in blitz.
She twisted to a stop crossing her arms and lifting her chin in a victory pose before spotting the ball and streaked after it. The crowed screamed at Tida's display and there noise even increased through the dampening effect of the sphere, Tida was elated.
The lone man in red had come down off his ledge and was now slowly and calmly walking towards the stadium. The wave had slowed to a crawl as it got close to the city but that only made it more terrifying. It was still growing in size and strange reflections could be seen just under the surface something was alive in there. As is crawled along parts of the city trembled, then shook, then completely detached themselves from the rest of the buildings and flew towards the creature disappearing into its watery depths. The lone mans foot splashed in to a puddle and the droplets it sprayed didn't fall back down, as they should but floated up toward the mass. Zanarkand was slowly but terrifyingly being destroyed.
The siren sounded the Abes had scored the first goal. The fans rored and the team high five'd in congratulations. The ball had been played again and Tida was sick of hardly touching it. Every opponent had been doubly against her this time and she decided to make sure she would score the next goal, all on her own. As the ball shot up from its starting point she got underneath kicking it with an almighty force up and out of the sphere. She followed thrusting herself out of the water in a graceful back flip ready to kick the ball towards the goal as she fell. The stadium went quiet and Tida savored the sound of anticipation. Something big that shouldn't be there in front of her caught her eye and she realized her performance might not be why the fans where silent. She took her focus off the ball and caught her breath. A huge wall of water towered over the city. As she watched her eye widening in surprise and fear the water opened up and white hot something where shot into the city exploding where they hit.
Sill falling in her arch towards the sphere Tida saw clouds of smoke engulf the city at a terrifying speed. Her Bliz reflexes came back to her and she griped the narrow roof of the sphere before it was out of reach. Panic welled up as she swung from the ledge on her tenuous grip she fought to get her other hand on it. Below her the stadium was being demolished parts of it having been struck by the weird white things other part shuddering and braking away to join the rest of the city inside the watery creature.
Another lurch of the stadium and Tida lost her grip. She fell screaming, positive she was about to die when she felt herself hit the still active water sphere with a sharp slap. Her descending body was slowed by the wet substance and finally stopped. Before she could make another move part of the sphere machine was destroyed and the water along with Tida was spilled out on to the floor.
Breathing fast but unscathed Tida got up and tried to make sense of what was happening a moment ago she was about to make the Abes leading two to zero and now the stadium was ruined and her teammate no where to be seen. She pushed past scrambling people there panic infecting her as she to sought desperately to get out. She stumbled out over the rubble catching site of a stationary scarlet figure, relief but confusion broke out over her face.
"Auron what are you doing here?"
"I was waiting for you" Auron turned and walked away expecting Tida to follow him
"Wait where are you going?" she ran after him but he was headed towards that huge foreign mass instead of away. The rush of other people soon obscured Auron from view and Tida became frustrated wishing the rest of the running people would just stop.
They did. Tida froze observing the motionless people around her panic that had been driven away at the sight of Auron quickly came back. All the bodys around her where still in the act of running but none moved all frozen in mid step. What was going on what was that water thing where had it come from why is everyone frozen.
It begins don't cryTida jumped at the sound behind her and turned around. It was that purple hooded figure she saw at the dock when she was autographing. What was it doing here did it do all this. Tida made a move towards it her hand out stretched but it vanished and the people around her came to life again running and screaming.
"What the?" it was become more confusing by the minute. Out of the corner of her eye she saw Auron striding in the opposite direction to everyone else. She pushed her way through the thinning crowd trying to catch up.
" Hey! Wait! Hey! Not this way" she made it to his side but only because he stopped moving. Not looking at her he spoke.
"We call it Sin," he pointed to the object causing panic, which had now risen and formed a huge sliver ball of rippling water. Tida looked in awe at the sphere.
"Sin?" she questioned glad to finally have a name to put to the thing but still desperate to get away. She was about to suggest it when something slammed into the road ahead of them opening scales on it tail and spiting out tiny creatures that laded with sharp thuds all around them. Tida jumped back behind the older man who put out and arm protectively but also shoved a sword into her grip.
"Take it, a gift from Jecht" It was a sleek red blade the doubled back on itself a basic but deadly weapon.
"My old man?" Tida questioned with spite. Jech had been gone ten years why would he give her a sword. Auron ignored the query and merely stated
"I hop you know how to use it" before running in to battle with a huge sword that would have taken ten of Tida to lift.
Hers was heavy enough as it was. She followed Auron hoping to help him but her first slashes where clumsy and she fell, the unfamiliar weight of the sword causing her to over balance. Aruon grunted at her antics slicing another of the smaller creatures in two. He shouted instructions at her and eventually Tida managed to make a contribution to the battle. They faced the larger creature next Aruon ran ahead first, Tida her determination overtaking her panic and confusion concentrated on making accurate slashes at the enemies timing her attacks with Aurons to hurt the creature as much as possible.
Her Blitz skills quickly transferred to the sword making her a swift fighter. She danced around the creature half the moves just to make her look good striking twice as much as Auron but nowhere near causing as much damage as him. By the time the creature faded into tiny white lights she was beginning to enjoy the new experience. She stood for a moment savoring the new kind of victory and saw her father staring down at her what remained of the stadium. He seemed to jeer her.
"What are you laughing at old man?" the picture flicked but otherwise didn't answer. She sneered and turned to Aruon.
"Lets get out of here" Auron surged on ahead.
"We are expected," he said back to her. Getting tired of Aurons cryptic responses Tida followed mumbling
"Gimme a break, man"
More of the small hard shell creature struck the ground and the two launched in to another battle. Tida energy was slowly draining when Auron called out to her to strike a tanker than had crashed and was dangling over the edge of the road.
"What?" she couldn't understand the sense in that and was much to busy trying to fight off the never-ending number of attackers.
"Trust me you will see" it was the first real answer he had given her so strengthened by that she changed her attack to the tanker occasionally having to deal with a creature that sought to strike her. The tanker fell crashing into the ground below the stadium wall with Jechts picture on it crumbled in the explosion and Tida felt the ground she was on shift dangerously. The explosion had caused their part of the road to brake and it was falling towards the ground. Auron ran jumping across the widening gap.
"Go" he yelled to Tida. She didn't need any more encouragement she ran towards Auron and sprang across the gap she didn't clear it an only her fingers griped the edge of the road that was now slowly rising towards Sin. She pleaded with Auron to help her. Being Sucked into Sin seemd a better idea that falling to certain death.
"Auron! Auron!" the older man wasn't paying attention he was looking up at Sin.
"You are sure?" Auron Turned to the struggling girl griped her by the front of her uniform and held her up above his head. She fidgeted wildly is his hold trying to get out. Auron spoke calmly to her
"This is it this is your story it all begins here"
Something glowed above them and Tida felt her stomach get left far behind as the rest of her was absorbed into Sin. She screamed until she blacked out.
The girl awoke to find herself folating. She looked like she was back on top of the Blitz sphere but the Stadium was destroyed a weird sound throbbed in her ears.
"Hey Hey" a familiar voice said in greeting. A cord struck in Tida it was her fathers voice something she hadn't heard in ten years.
"My old man?"
He wasn't there she was alone. Only a tiny figure not big enough to be her father or Auron stood below her it was a girl of about eight. It was Tida
I thought about a lot of things...like where I was, what I'd got myself into. I started to feel light-headed...and then, sleepy. I think I had a dream. A dream of being alone. I wanted someone-anyone, beside me...so I didn't have to feel alone anymore.
Miles away from where she had been moment ago Tida awoke face down in a huge expanse of salty water. She gasped for breath hoping be find herself in a much more stable place than where she was floating. The cool water soon calm her as it always did she relaxed and after a moment took a few long strokes so she could get a better view of the place. It was the ruins of some old town the crumbling buildings where wet and grayed with moss. Tida used to screaming fans and many friends felt very alone.
"Anybody there?" she couldn't see anyone but hoped calling would bring an answer.
"Auron?" she didn't expect him to answer but hoped anyway. She swam a few more strokes and made it to part of the ruin that was still above ground.
"Heeeeey!" Still no answer.
No longer afraid, only lonely and ready to take whatever came she walked slowly up the high bridge that led from the ruins she was on. It wasn't such a good idea. She reached a part that was more fragile than the rest and fell with a splash into the water. Instaed of surfacing Tida stayed down in the weird organic watery world that was so different from her shiny Zanarkand and looked around. She examined the soft green of the moss on the stone and the richer green of water plant that grew deeper down. Zanarkand had nothing like this she knew she must be far away.
As she was about to rise back to the surface to continue her search for life a dark shadow swam past her. Spinning in the water she saw three reptilian looking fish snapping their jaws menacingly at her. She had found life but not the kind she was hoping for. Thankful she still had Jechts sword with her she tried out her newly acquired frighting skills underwater not wanting to become lunch. It was hard to be fast but she had managed to kill two when the third stopped focusing on her and instead darted past her swimming from the murky shape that had crept up unbeknown to the fighters.
It was a huge fish with long pointed teeth and glowing eyes. It swam fast crushing the smaller and now less terrifying animal between its jaws and went after Tida clearly still hungry.
Tida hadn't ever dealt with something charging at her and after a few attempt to ward the huge fish of she swam for her life. Not knowing where she was going she was glad when ahead of her she could see a dim light at the end of a narrow passage. Her pursuer was gaining. Tida swam faster desperate to get to the tunnel. She felt the hot opening of the fish's mouth on her legs before she squeezed into passageway that was much to big for her hunter, and was safe. She made it to the end of the tunnel but could here the fish behind her ramming into the opening trying to still get at her. The vibrations made the ancient tunnel cave in. the exhausted girl scrambled up the stairs in time to miss the falling rocks.
She dropped down to the ground shivering thinking how this was just never going to end. All she wanted was to find someone anyone and get away from this constant attack of monsters.
I had made it out of the frying pan...and into the freezer. I thought I was going to die in this place.
She was in a wide circular room that had paintings on the floor and some plants in pots. It looked as if it could be a temple. In the middle of the room were the remains of a campfire. This brought her out of her dark mood and lifted her hopes. Fire would mean human. She shivered again more violently wishing she had something to light a fire and create warmth.
"Cold... Need...fire." she chattered out loud. She jogged on the spot her hand tucked under her armpits hoping to warm herself up. Jumping up and down gave her new perspective and she caught site of an open door. Being naturally curious Tida walked briskly over to examine what was in it. She almost fell over with relief there in a box was flint. She grabbed it and did a spirited victory dance. Things where already looking up and not a monster to be seen. Walking back into the main room the pot plants caught her eye again maybe there would be a dead one for tinder somewhere. A quick scout in another passage way found a wither bouquet that would be perfect. She victory dance all the way back to campfire remains wishing she had a group of cute fan boys to applauded her.
The small fire was enough to warm her and the feeling of cold was soon replaced by the feeling of hunger.
"I need food" she said allowed again wishing she had grabbed a fish or something. With this statement she flopped on to her back but quickly rolled onto her side propped her head up in a much more ladylike and appealing poison. Tida even when no one was around was an exhibitionist. Although her hunger gnawed at her insides she found herself dozing.
She remembered it was a couple of weeks ago in the first match of the Jecht Memorial Cup her team had lost. It was also the tenth anniversary of her father's disappearance. Auron had come to her as she was sulking in her room.
"What do you want" she had been sick of people blaming her for the loss but that's exactly what Auron did
"It was a bad call. Your team lost because of you."
"You came to say that" she challenged him with a raised eyebrow looking grumpy.
"Its been ten years I thought you'd be crying" He was talking about Jecht disappearance Tida was a little supries at this statement because she made it plainly know that she hated her father. Hated him with a passion.
"Who me?" she said in bravado.
You criedTida woke with a start from the dream puzzled by the memory. She noticed the campfires dwindling flame.
"Hey, wait! Wait! Don't go out on me! Just hold on. I'll get more wood!" she spoke to the fire getting up to find anything to keep it burning. Her movement disturbed something else that had been woken. She froze praying it wasn't another monster. He prayer was not answered hanging on the corner on the wall was a huge red insect. It darted around the circular walls once then dropped down in front of Tida hissing and spitting. Annoyance rose in her and pulling out her sword she wondered if this was her life now. No more starlet of the Zanarkand Abes just "Tida, Monster Hunter"it had a ring to it but considering it could kill her it wasn't an appealing idea. She tried to kill the creature taking swift stabs at it and retreating out of its swipes but it didn't seem to be weakening.
She was considering another plan when an almighty blast shook the room and a short figure appeared in the new doorway. The figure was a girl wearing goggles and a close fitting outfit with straps and zippers everywhere. She evaluated the situation quickly and took up a fighting stance next to Tida.
"Your on my side? Cool!" Tida was so relived that she found another human that her strength redoubled. Her and the stranger, who threw grenades, soon killed the insect that evaporated in tiny whit lights.
The girl took off her goggles and examined Tida as Tida examined her. She had deep green eyes and a hart shaped face her hair was tied high on top of her head. Neather had said a word so Tida broke the ice.
"Whew that was close!" A group of people Tida hadn't noticed where lurking behind her helper. One of the men walked up a grabbed Tida by her short blond hair. Tida was confused. Didn't these people just help her what was happening? She didn't fight against the grip but protested.
"Hey lemme go"
"Fryd ec drec?" one of the people said who was standing behind the strange girl another one answered.
"Y fiend! Eh risyh teckieca! Oac! Ed ec cu"
Tida had no idea what they where saying and listened intently trying to figure out what was going on.
"Fa gemm ed?" A blade was slipped to Tidas neck. She understood what that meant and held perfectly still.
"Fyed? Fryd ev ed ec risyh?" The girl finally spoke she seemed to be pleading with the one holding Tida.
"Drao yna dra cysa eh taydr" the one holding Tida spat at the girl, tightening the knifes pinch on her skin.
"E vunpet ed! Fa pnehk ed fedr ic." She shouted angrily back as she walked towards Tida. She looked the taller girl in the eye tilted her head and finally spoke to her.
"Cunno"
Then she lifted her kneed and slammed it into Tida's stomach causing her to grab it in pain as she sunk to the floor and faint before she hit it.
Tida woke up with an elbow in the ribs she coughed and only heard the end of someone sentence.
"Ced, lybdeja!" Tida was feeling irritated and she was still hungry.
"Hey, that hurts!" she told the man who had woken her. At least she was still alive. She feeling dizzy from lack of food and went to grasp a rail to steady herself.
"Hu sujehk, rayn?" one threatened.
"Whoa... Okay" Tida stayed where she was trying to stay up. A door hatch opened and and the girl from before came out followed by another. The man with the girl had a pair of goggles and tried to mime what they where for. Tida was getting fed up and had no idea what she was talking about.
"Yeah. Whatever" She said amused by his actions. This did not impress the man.
"Tu oui hud cbayg?" he shouted. He shoved the goggles in her face.
"I told you I don't understand" Tida tried to get through to him.
"Ehcumahla!" the one that had woken her up yelled
"Fyed!" the girl interrupted him. She turned to Tida and spoke her language
"He said you can stay if you make yourself useful" Tida opened her mouth in surprise.
"You ...you can understand me" One of the others struck her still waiting for an answer.
"Ok ok I'll" work she said to him.
That seemed to satisfy them the stopped standing over her threateningly and went about with there business. Tida moved towards the girl wanting to talk to her again as she approached the girl smiled and spoke.
"We found some ancient ruins right beneath us. It's not active now, but there should be some power left. We're gonna go down there and activate it...and then we should be able to salvage the big prize! Okay! Let's get to work!"
The girl seemed very friendly as she explained the task they where about to do Tida so glad to find another person to talk to mock saluted.
"Rodger"
Not wasteing anytime the girl dived into the water Tida followed her. Occasionly they came across fish that seemed to be very territorial and desperate to attack they were easily slain and passage to their destination was quick. Tida stopped a moment to view the huge sunken ruin she couldn't see colors at this depth but the wreck was obviously some machine she could see it steely glint. It reminded her of home and made and she resolved to interrogate he friend as to where she was once they where above. She nodded to the girl and they went inside. It was easy to move around in and it seemed to have ordered passageway Tida wondered what it was.
They reached a dead end that had hug glass windows in front of them and a small control panel. She worked with the Girl to first discover if power was still available and then switch it on. On cue at the disruption another marine creature, with sandpapery skin and vicious teeth and bent on destroying them attacked. Tida wondered why is surprised her. It was a tricky battle and the girl without her grenade only had a tiny mental claw to attack with. Tida stepped into her leadership role as Blitz team captain and directed the girl in a battle strategy that gave them the edge. Tida thought as the monster quickly was defeated that she could really like being a "Monster Hunter" even though it them who hunted her.
After the excitement the girl signaled that they should go there work was done. Easy if this was all they wanted her to do it wouldn't be so bad. They boarded the ship again and the others where waiting for them. The girl went over and gave the report in her language and the other answered back with excited gestures. They where still talking as they headed toward the enclosed part of the ship. Tida followed but was prevented from entering.
"Oui, uidceta!" one said as the pushed her back.
"Hey I helped out didn't I?" she fixed him with a glare before looking towards the girl
The girl looked as if she was about to protest but decided agent it and instead just gave Tida a look that said sorry. Irritated again Tida went and sat under a part of the ship that at least had a roof. She sat down cross-legged and sulked. She was not used to people forbidding her to enter places. As a starlet it was usually other people who where forbidden to get near her. She sighed and lay back down feeling dizzy again from lack of food she wasn't sure how much longer she would be able to survive with out something to eat.
"Uhh...hungry."
She closed her eyes trying to make the pain go away when someone kicked her elbow. If this is some one else getting me to work with no food I'm going on strike. She open one eye and saw the girl had a tray of food and was smiling down at her. Not waiting to ask it was for her Tida pounced
"Whoa! Right on!" She ate ravenously.
Food food foody food.
She ate to fast and choked thumping her chest to get it down. It didn't budge. The girl quickly handed a canteen full of water and Tida drank it finally able to breath again.
"Its cose you eat to fast" the girl teased. Tida got up and stretched her hunger satified for the moment. They both stood there awkwardly smiling.
"Hey" the girl said shyly. Tida seized on that it reminded her of a shy fan meeting her for the first time.
"Hey there" she flashed a smile.
"What's your name" Tida said as if addressing a fan about to sign an autograph. But hoping the girl would know enough of her language to answer her.
"Rikku" the girl grinned back. Tida for some reason was incredibly excited by this. It meant she did understand.
"Whoa! You really do understand!" she grabbed both of Rikku's hands had started jumping up and down in a girly like manner. She didn't have that many female friends but those she did she was extremely girly with. Tida despite her love of Blitz was not a tomboy.
"Why didn't you say so earlier?" Tida was thinking of before when Rikku had intervened from Tida being killed it would have been nice to know what her friend had said.
"I didn't get a chance to! Everyone thought oui were a fiend." She giggled along with Tida and jumped with her to but stopped to talk
"Uh... 'we?'" Tida didn't understand.
"Oh Oui means you" she explained. Tida realized it was a word from her language. It wasn't a language she had ever heard before.
"Who are you guys anyway?" She asked. Rikku looked at her with a confused expression it was then that Tida noticed her eyes; a brilliant green had a vivid swirl in each pupil. Tida mirrored Rikkus expression.
"We're Al Bhed. Can't you tell?" Then she took her hands out from Tidas and stepped back
"Wait. You're not an Al Bhed-hater, are you?" Rikku accused.
"I don't even know what an Al Bhed is" Tida wanted to ask many questions but Rikku got in first.
"Where are you from?" Tida stepped back and shook her spiky blonde hair.
"Zanarkand. I'm a blitzball player. Tida Star player of the Zanarkand Abes!" she said waiting for Rikku to squeal in recognition. But she didn't the shorter girl was trying to muffle a laugh.
"Did you hit you head or something?"
"Um you guys hit me" Tida wasn't following. Did Rikku not know what Blitz was or did she just not know Tida.
"Oh right... Do you remember anything before that?" Rikku shook her head and fixed Tida with a pensive look. Finaly Tida was able to tell someone about the bazaar happenings of the past day.
So I told her everything there was to tell about Zanarkand...About life there, blitzball, and Sin's attack...and about how Auron and I were engulfed in this light. I just said things as they came to mind. But then I started to wonder.
The tall blonde girl in a black a yellow outfit stoped talking and lent her head agents the railing of the boat. She and Rikku who was shorter than her and had darker blond hair had been talking for the past hour trying to unravel the resent Events of Tidas history. There was an awkward silence both Tida fidgeted with her bracelet an official Zanarkand Abes one you got from being in the team she had and earring and a necklace too.
"Did I say something funny?" Tida said unable to stand the silence any longer.
"You were near Sin." Rikku said clarifying although they had been over it a couple of times.
"Mmm-hmm" Tida said Prompting Rikku to keep speaking
"Don't worry, you'll be better in no time." Rikku said brightly reassuring both herself and Tida
"They say your head gets funny when Sin is near. Maybe you just had some kind of dream?"
"You mean I'm sick?" Tida asked she felt fine a little tired and baffled but not like she had been infected by anything
"Because of Sin's toxin, yeah." She nodded her head and stood up stretching.
"You sure?" Tida wasn't convinced how could the whole of her life in Zanarkand be a dream.
"Yeah, there is no Zanarkand anymore. Sin destroyed it a thousand years ago. So...no one plays Blitzball there." Tida opened her mouth in shock.
"Huh? What you do mean a thousand years ago? But I saw Sin attack Zanarkand! You're saying that happened a thousand years ago? No way!"
Tida tried to make sense and wondered if Rikku was fooling her she glanced at the girl but it she looked genuine.
"You said... You play Blitzball?" Rikku said after a moment's silence.
"Uh huh"
"You know, you should go to Luca. Someone might know who you are, or you might find someone you recognize." Rikku seemed delighted by this plan and grinned while she was talking
"Luca" Tida had never heard of the place before how far away was from Zanarkand was she. The people around her knew of her home but Tida had no idea where she was.
"Okay, leave it to me! I'll get you to Luca, promise!" Rikku wasn't on the same wavelength as Tida but she was glad the touched was concerned for her and smiled at her.
"Okay, I'll go tell the others. Wait here." Rikku turned to go but stopped and added
"Oh, and one thing. Don't tell anyone you're from Zanarkand, okay? Yevon says it's a holy place. You might upset someone." She disappeared down the hatch.
My Zanarkand, some kind of holy place? Yeah right, I thought. Since when? Yevon? Sin? Luca? I thought Sin just took me to afar away place, that I could go back in a day or two. But a thousand years into the future? No way!
Rikku had be gone awhile and left alone to her thought Tida was just becoming more frustrated about her situation she wanted to do something active to work out the tension but constant laps around the deck got boring after a while. She kicked a cargo box in irritation. The whole ship shuddered, then again more violently. Noise was coming from inside the ship and then three Al Bhed tumbled outside.
"Sin!" One screamed Tida whirled around bracing herself on the side of the ship.
"Sin ec lusa!" Another said
"Ihtan ic! Ihtan ic!" the third shouted and the three ran around trying to keep the ship from over turning that was now rocking so violently it was hard for Tida to stay up right. The boat gave a huge lurch in the water and Tida lost her grip. She slipped on her back and the deck was to wet for her to get any kind of hold she felt herself slide clean over the deck and into the water with sin. Within moment the ship was out of site a strong current swept the struggling girl down into its deep blue depth. The speed at which this happed meant Tida had no breath to hold and soon she was unconscious.
Oh bugger suspense ill put the next chappy up now and the next heheh I cant even handle the suspense of my own storyes.... Plz read and review...thanx
Lilit