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"I have to do this." Tris said determinedly. Whether she was trying to convince
herself or her friends she was not quite sure of. Tris faced her teacher and said, "Niko,
I'll need some of your magic please." Niko looked disturbed but Tris could feel his
magic pouring into her. A sudden feeling of excitement and fear rushed through her.
She settled into a meditating state and felt herself float away from her body. She was up
in the sky, floating on the winds that she loved, watching the approaching storm.
Thinking about how she was going to stop the storm she had and idea. Reaching out with
her magic, she sensed for storms around her. There! She found a long chain of storms
reaching out across Emelan. She called them to her and pushed them against the
approaching storm. Steadily but slowly the big storm started to move away. Suddenly
her concentration was broken. There was an army under that storm. With a jolt Tris
entered her body again and found Briar worriedly leaning over her. When she opened her
eyes he jumped back muttering something about feelings. Suddenly fatigue washed over
her and she slumped against the chimney and fell into a deep sleep.
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