Is confusing your readers considered a dirty habbit? If it is...I gotta get
rid of it . maybe this chapter will be my recovery I do a lot of
explaining here and almost confused my self lol but I worked out all the
kinks yay we are anit-kink here accept if you are a kinky person.....ok
im leaving enjoy ; )
"Yes Kurama what is it?" Koenma asked folding is hands on his desk. Kurama hesitated. "Its.....very difficult to tell you, because I would be breaking a promise to Kimura, but its getting her into even more danger. So now I'm coming to you." Kurama said. "Well then.....tell me!" Koenma said.
"Kimura has been having dreams lately, about a specific type of demon chasing her. They carry a mark of three circles on their forehead, exactly like the one's Kyozame's demons carry. Then demon showed up chasing only her at the dance. They had the same markings. Kimura told me that in her dream, they were yelling at her about a book. She said that a man in her dream gave her the book."
"You don't suppose....." Koenma started. "I think she is.....and Ryu has been following her around lately." Kurama said. Koenma sat back in his chair. "You wouldn't be doing this because....." Koenma was cut off. "Youko was my past. Im doing this for Kimura. She could get seriously hurt, and without her knowledge of the past, she could be in great danger." Kurama said. "What do you mean? She does not remember her past?" Koenma asked. "she does not remember anything.....and im not sure why." Kurama said. "keep an eye on her. I think I may have found a job we could give her." Koenma said
"Ryu! Where are you?" Kimura called walking down the sidewalk. "Are you stalking me?" Came Ryu's voice from behind her. She turned around. "What do you have to talk to me about?" Kimura asked. "What?...oh...uh....nothing...I don't know what you are talking about..." Ryu said in a strange tone. ".....But you just told me tha....." Kimura was cut off as Ryu put his hand over her mouth. "I didn't talk to you....." He stepped away. "What is your problem? Why are you acting so weird?" Kimura asked. "uuh....im not acting weird...." Ryu said. "What ever." Kimura said throwing her arms up in the air. She walked away. Ryu made sure she was out of sight.
"What was that all about? You know we will get her soon." Came a demons voice. Ryu turned around. What does my brother want?" He asked. The demon walked up to him, and sure enough had the symbol of the circles on his forehead. "Follow me." The demon replied. "This wouldn't be one of those little 'try and kill your little brother' traps is it?" Ryu asked. "If we kill you now, we won't get the information we want." The demon said walking. "If its about the book or the girl I'm not talking." Ryu replied. "just talk to your brother he's anxious to see you."
Ryu walked through woods where he and his older brother used to hide in together many years ago. "ah so my little brother finally returns home." Came a familiar voice. Ryu turned around to see his brother standing behind him. "I'm not going to tell you where the book is, because I don't know...and neither does Kimura so just leave her out of this." Ryu said. "So is that how you greet your brother after a couple thousand years huh? I didn't even want the book." He said rolling his eyes sarcastically. "Then why am I here?" Ryu asked. "ok, sit down and ill tell you a story." Kyozame said . "Ill stand." Ryu said crossing his arms. "There once were two very close brothers. They lived happily, having the time of there lives, getting into trouble, stealing and kicking the crap out of weaker demons. One day the older brother decided to steal a certain book from one of the most highly guarded places in spirit world. He told his brother about this thinking he would help, and was right. They both successfully stole this book, but something went wrong!" Kyozame yelled turning toward his younger brother. "The younger brother betrayed the older brother, and stole the book from him with the help of an accomplice."
"That was a beautiful story....what was the point?" Ryu asked yawning. "Ill forgive you if you join up with me once more. We could both get that book again." Kyozame said smiling. "er...nah I don't wanna." Ryu said shrugging. "What? Kyozame asked. "The whole reason why I took the book from you is because I have better uses for it than you do. "And what are your intentions?" Kyozame asked. "You'll see when I get it back." Ryu said walking away. "You will regret this day my brother." Kyozame called out. Ryu waved without looking back.
"What was that all about?' Hiei asked as Kimura walked into the kitchen. "Your still here?" Kimura asked. Hiei put his feet on the table. "I could see you have your old clothes on now." Kimura said smiling. "Hn." Hiei got up. "where are you going?" Kimura asked. "to Kurama's....you should come too." Hiei replied. "...ok..." Kimura said following Hiei.
"You know something Kurama...tell me." Hiei said. "And me too." Came Yusukes voice. Kurama brought Hiei and Yusuke into his bedroom and sat down on the bed. Are you going to tell us or do you just have the urge to have male to male sex?" Yusuke asked sarcastically. Kurama acted like he didn't here the comment. "Kimura may be a wanted criminal in spirit world." Kurama said. ".....Kimura? a criminal? What has she been doing behind our back?" Yusuke asked leaning against Kurama's dresser. "She inhabited another body you fool!" Hiei snapped. "Like Kurama?" Yusuke asked. "exactly. This one infamous demon went missing suddenly a few thousand years ago. Spirit detectives have been trying to figure this one out, especially Ryu, the partner of this demon. Ryu was finally taken into spirit world custody about 300 years ago, and has been working as a spirit detective as punishment for his crimes.
"How bad of a demon are we talking?" Yusuke asked. "You knew her didn't you?" Hiei asked. Kurama looked down at the floor. "No way! What? did she turn you down for a date or something?" Yusuke asked. "No." Kurama said, still keeping eye contact on the floor. "Then what!" Yusuke yelled, a wide smile on his face. "well......we had a few encounters with each other before, but there was a book that I desired deeply to take from the most highly guarded temples in spirit world.....before I could get to it, she took it. I guess you could say we were a little competitive with each other." Kurama said smiling. "....that's the book she is most infamous for, both her and Ryu." "wow who woulda thought that our Kimura is actually a demon almost as bad as Youko Kurama." Yusuke said.
"Im not certain if this is all true...but....her demon form looked exactly like Koraseru." Kurama said. "So you have known about this since the necklace incident!?" Yusuke asked. "No..i assumed...and I still do." Kurama said. "Im just not certain.....naturally when you inhabit another body, you are born or remember the memories and intentions of your past. Kimura is so clueless, she is having Koraseru's memories, and does not realize they are hers." Kurama said. "Amnesia." Hiei said. "What?" Yusuke asked. "Kimura told me she she fell when she was little, and lost her memory.....she didn't gain that memory back." Hiei said. "That could and probably is this situation." Kurama said. "Ok this is great and everything, but....what's the big deal? What are we supposed to do?" Yusuke asked. "I suggest we watch her. Ryu is going to be with her all the time now...." Kurama said. "Why is that bad?" Yusuke asked. "supposedly Koraseru hid the book...Ryu wil want it. We cant let him get the book....we don't know what he would do with it. There is also Ryu's brother who wants the book. That's whose demons those are. He knows Kimura is Koraseru. He knows that she has memory...somewhere.....of that hiding spot. I have told Koenma...hes going to do something...but for now.....we watch Kimura, and we pretend we no nothing." Kurama said. "...this is a lot to take in...why don't we tell her who she is? It might be a lot easier." Yusuke said. "you incompetent ningen. That might get her in even more trouble." Hiei said. "Yes besides....Ryu knows she doesn't remember. If he wanted her to, he would have told her already. There may have been a reason why he didn't." Kurama said. "He tried to tell her something earlier today......" Hiei replied. As soon as he spoke, he disappeared out the window. "Where is he going?" Yusuke asked. "So much for pretending to not know much." Kurama said.
"Hey guys! There you are! Dinner is done." Kimura smiled. Yusuke and Kurama looked at each other with a sweet drop. "oh...where's Hiei?
Im back....hopefully this has you a little more "in the loop" THE PLOT THICKENS DUN DUN DUN! SPOILER! NEXT CHAPTER HIEI GOES MENTAL ON RYU! DON'T MISS IT!
"Yes Kurama what is it?" Koenma asked folding is hands on his desk. Kurama hesitated. "Its.....very difficult to tell you, because I would be breaking a promise to Kimura, but its getting her into even more danger. So now I'm coming to you." Kurama said. "Well then.....tell me!" Koenma said.
"Kimura has been having dreams lately, about a specific type of demon chasing her. They carry a mark of three circles on their forehead, exactly like the one's Kyozame's demons carry. Then demon showed up chasing only her at the dance. They had the same markings. Kimura told me that in her dream, they were yelling at her about a book. She said that a man in her dream gave her the book."
"You don't suppose....." Koenma started. "I think she is.....and Ryu has been following her around lately." Kurama said. Koenma sat back in his chair. "You wouldn't be doing this because....." Koenma was cut off. "Youko was my past. Im doing this for Kimura. She could get seriously hurt, and without her knowledge of the past, she could be in great danger." Kurama said. "What do you mean? She does not remember her past?" Koenma asked. "she does not remember anything.....and im not sure why." Kurama said. "keep an eye on her. I think I may have found a job we could give her." Koenma said
"Ryu! Where are you?" Kimura called walking down the sidewalk. "Are you stalking me?" Came Ryu's voice from behind her. She turned around. "What do you have to talk to me about?" Kimura asked. "What?...oh...uh....nothing...I don't know what you are talking about..." Ryu said in a strange tone. ".....But you just told me tha....." Kimura was cut off as Ryu put his hand over her mouth. "I didn't talk to you....." He stepped away. "What is your problem? Why are you acting so weird?" Kimura asked. "uuh....im not acting weird...." Ryu said. "What ever." Kimura said throwing her arms up in the air. She walked away. Ryu made sure she was out of sight.
"What was that all about? You know we will get her soon." Came a demons voice. Ryu turned around. What does my brother want?" He asked. The demon walked up to him, and sure enough had the symbol of the circles on his forehead. "Follow me." The demon replied. "This wouldn't be one of those little 'try and kill your little brother' traps is it?" Ryu asked. "If we kill you now, we won't get the information we want." The demon said walking. "If its about the book or the girl I'm not talking." Ryu replied. "just talk to your brother he's anxious to see you."
Ryu walked through woods where he and his older brother used to hide in together many years ago. "ah so my little brother finally returns home." Came a familiar voice. Ryu turned around to see his brother standing behind him. "I'm not going to tell you where the book is, because I don't know...and neither does Kimura so just leave her out of this." Ryu said. "So is that how you greet your brother after a couple thousand years huh? I didn't even want the book." He said rolling his eyes sarcastically. "Then why am I here?" Ryu asked. "ok, sit down and ill tell you a story." Kyozame said . "Ill stand." Ryu said crossing his arms. "There once were two very close brothers. They lived happily, having the time of there lives, getting into trouble, stealing and kicking the crap out of weaker demons. One day the older brother decided to steal a certain book from one of the most highly guarded places in spirit world. He told his brother about this thinking he would help, and was right. They both successfully stole this book, but something went wrong!" Kyozame yelled turning toward his younger brother. "The younger brother betrayed the older brother, and stole the book from him with the help of an accomplice."
"That was a beautiful story....what was the point?" Ryu asked yawning. "Ill forgive you if you join up with me once more. We could both get that book again." Kyozame said smiling. "er...nah I don't wanna." Ryu said shrugging. "What? Kyozame asked. "The whole reason why I took the book from you is because I have better uses for it than you do. "And what are your intentions?" Kyozame asked. "You'll see when I get it back." Ryu said walking away. "You will regret this day my brother." Kyozame called out. Ryu waved without looking back.
"What was that all about?' Hiei asked as Kimura walked into the kitchen. "Your still here?" Kimura asked. Hiei put his feet on the table. "I could see you have your old clothes on now." Kimura said smiling. "Hn." Hiei got up. "where are you going?" Kimura asked. "to Kurama's....you should come too." Hiei replied. "...ok..." Kimura said following Hiei.
"You know something Kurama...tell me." Hiei said. "And me too." Came Yusukes voice. Kurama brought Hiei and Yusuke into his bedroom and sat down on the bed. Are you going to tell us or do you just have the urge to have male to male sex?" Yusuke asked sarcastically. Kurama acted like he didn't here the comment. "Kimura may be a wanted criminal in spirit world." Kurama said. ".....Kimura? a criminal? What has she been doing behind our back?" Yusuke asked leaning against Kurama's dresser. "She inhabited another body you fool!" Hiei snapped. "Like Kurama?" Yusuke asked. "exactly. This one infamous demon went missing suddenly a few thousand years ago. Spirit detectives have been trying to figure this one out, especially Ryu, the partner of this demon. Ryu was finally taken into spirit world custody about 300 years ago, and has been working as a spirit detective as punishment for his crimes.
"How bad of a demon are we talking?" Yusuke asked. "You knew her didn't you?" Hiei asked. Kurama looked down at the floor. "No way! What? did she turn you down for a date or something?" Yusuke asked. "No." Kurama said, still keeping eye contact on the floor. "Then what!" Yusuke yelled, a wide smile on his face. "well......we had a few encounters with each other before, but there was a book that I desired deeply to take from the most highly guarded temples in spirit world.....before I could get to it, she took it. I guess you could say we were a little competitive with each other." Kurama said smiling. "....that's the book she is most infamous for, both her and Ryu." "wow who woulda thought that our Kimura is actually a demon almost as bad as Youko Kurama." Yusuke said.
"Im not certain if this is all true...but....her demon form looked exactly like Koraseru." Kurama said. "So you have known about this since the necklace incident!?" Yusuke asked. "No..i assumed...and I still do." Kurama said. "Im just not certain.....naturally when you inhabit another body, you are born or remember the memories and intentions of your past. Kimura is so clueless, she is having Koraseru's memories, and does not realize they are hers." Kurama said. "Amnesia." Hiei said. "What?" Yusuke asked. "Kimura told me she she fell when she was little, and lost her memory.....she didn't gain that memory back." Hiei said. "That could and probably is this situation." Kurama said. "Ok this is great and everything, but....what's the big deal? What are we supposed to do?" Yusuke asked. "I suggest we watch her. Ryu is going to be with her all the time now...." Kurama said. "Why is that bad?" Yusuke asked. "supposedly Koraseru hid the book...Ryu wil want it. We cant let him get the book....we don't know what he would do with it. There is also Ryu's brother who wants the book. That's whose demons those are. He knows Kimura is Koraseru. He knows that she has memory...somewhere.....of that hiding spot. I have told Koenma...hes going to do something...but for now.....we watch Kimura, and we pretend we no nothing." Kurama said. "...this is a lot to take in...why don't we tell her who she is? It might be a lot easier." Yusuke said. "you incompetent ningen. That might get her in even more trouble." Hiei said. "Yes besides....Ryu knows she doesn't remember. If he wanted her to, he would have told her already. There may have been a reason why he didn't." Kurama said. "He tried to tell her something earlier today......" Hiei replied. As soon as he spoke, he disappeared out the window. "Where is he going?" Yusuke asked. "So much for pretending to not know much." Kurama said.
"Hey guys! There you are! Dinner is done." Kimura smiled. Yusuke and Kurama looked at each other with a sweet drop. "oh...where's Hiei?
Im back....hopefully this has you a little more "in the loop" THE PLOT THICKENS DUN DUN DUN! SPOILER! NEXT CHAPTER HIEI GOES MENTAL ON RYU! DON'T MISS IT!