A/N: here is my chapter 8 but before here are some of the things Vixy told me to use:
He is flying really low to the ground and he trips on a stone.
They go to a river and he drops her in it.
My favourite, he shouts WIND and then this green air comes out of his ass...
Well here you are the REAL chapter.
Disclaimer: on da 1st pg
Chapter 8:
Raimundo had reduced himself to walking, it was evening now and it was raining hard and for all he knew Kimiko could be dead, she was limp in his arms. He thought of how he had betrayed her, he was being wrapped in an icy cold glove of guilt, the fingers wrapping tighter and tighter.
How could I even think of betraying her?!?
He looked at her, and thought of her soft, gentle heart, forgiving him, and jumping after him. He stopped at a lake, it was dark because of the clouds above, it was like a blanket of Blues and Purples had swept over the land and sky.
Raimundo laid Kimiko down on soft grass and wandered into the lake, he stood there, the water over his knees, softly swaying, he dived under the water and swam under the depths of what seemed to be his own icy cold heart. He rose from the surface, breaking the smooth lake.
"Why did you hurt me?" Raimundo whirled around, to see Kimiko standing a little further back from where he was.
"I-I don't know" he said, turning away from her. He could hear the rippling of the water as she moved towards him.
"Rai... tell me" she said
"I-I don't know, I just... wasn't thinking" he replied. Kimiko put her hand on his shoulder, he turned around, he had never really appreciated how beautiful she was, even when her hair was drenched from the rain. She stared into his eyes and was immediately lost in his forest of eyes. Kimiko looked down at the pure water, and Raimundo put his hands on her shoulders.
"I-I love you" he said to her, but her eyes only flickered.
"I wrote a song when you left" she said, still looking at the water.
"Lets hear it" Raimundo said. Kimiko was startled by his response, she looked at him, yet never retuning her gaze into his hypnotic eyes at the risk of never returning. Kimiko opened her mouth to sing, an angels voice filled the air with beautiful noise as she sang her song.
Na na la la la na na
I miss you, miss you so bad
I don't forget you, oh it's so sad
I hope you can hear me
I remember it clearly
The day you slipped away
Was the day I found it won't be the same
Ooooh
Na na la la la na na
I didn't get around to kiss you
Goodbye on the hand
I wish that I could see you again
I know that I can't
I hope you can hear me cause I remember it clearly
The day you slipped away
Was the day I found it won't be the same
Ooooh
I had my wake up
Won't you wake up
I keep asking why
And I can't take it
It wasn't fake
It happened, you passed by
Now your gone, now your gone
There you go, there you go
Somewhere I can't bring you back
Now your gone, now your gone
There you go, there you go,
Somewhere your not coming back
The day you slipped away
Was the day I found it won't be the same noo..
The day you slipped away
Was the day that I found it won't be the sa-
But Raimundo's lips pressing against hers stopped her. At first she protested, but there was no way she could stop it. She was in bliss, that is until Raimundo fell face first through her...
A/N: wooooooooooh cliffhanger, well I hope you liked this chapter and by the way I am NOT giving up computers, homework and how could I ever live without you guys!!!
Caky: you couldn't!!!
Me: big headed ( Caky's head suddenly expands till it is huge) hey... mega cool, anything I say happens.
Vixy: don't be mean!!!
Me: Zip it!!! (Vixy's mouth zips up)
Kimiko: oh no ya don't!!!
Me: how could I do that to you, my story wouldn't exist without you!!! No but where is jack?
Jack: I'm not in today... ah crap!!!!
Me: Mwa ha ha ha ha, fat ass, big nose and... hmmmmm, dick head!!!! (Jacks ass expands and his nose grows and a dick appears on his head) alright I will undo what I did to everyone except Jack, but only because that is what we all think of you Jack!!! (Everyone is normal except Jack)
Caky: not me, I fancy him you can have Alfie!!!!
Me: no thanks... I am totally over him NOT!!!! Bye!!!!