A/N:
To the Three Reviewers, I thank you for your time. To VedGirl, I hope you change your mind, because it might get better. However, it might not. So thank you for the review, and on with the story! - Lia Tween
f you don't like it, that's fine, but can you be more specific as to what was wrong with the story, that way we can try and fix the problem and make as many people as possible happy. Merci -MAjcarter
She said thanks - Lia Tween
"Where do you think you're going? Camp is the other way. The guard snarled. The girls could see flashing lights in the background, so the cops and ambulance must have come to the wreck, allowing the guard to come after them.
"Uh....no comprendo." Kate answered quickly.
"isn't that Spanish?" Mr. Sir asked, glaring at the girls, who thought fast.
"Non!!! C'est francaise! Non ESPANOL" Kate spat out the last word, hoping to look convincing.
"She said that it's not French, it's Spanish. And I have to agree." Kim said quickly, trying very hard not to laugh.
"Follow me." Mr. Sir, who clearly did not believe them, turned and headed back to camp. "welcome to Camp green lake. This ain't a girl scout camp. Though, if more of you show up, it might...Any way, you're to dig a hole a day, you can work together. Your shovels are your measuring sticks." The girls nodded to show that they understand, and he pulled out four orange suits.
"Ew we have to wear ORANGE?" Kim cried.
"Too bad it's not yellow, I like yellow." said Kate brightly. Mr. Sir rolled his eyes, and led them outside. "There are several tents, and they are your group. Seeing as you're the only girls, you get your own tent. You will be part of the "D Tent" group, but not the tent. Understand?" Both girls knew it was a rhetorical question, but Kate piped up, "No I don't. Can you say it slower, in French?" Mr. Sir glared then said, "So, you speak English too, eh?" "Ya." Kate said in a German accent.
So the girls ended up in tent "D Minus". The next day, they awoke to trumpets. "Nooo it can't be morning!" Kim whined. Kate was still sleeping soundly. "Wake up Kate! If I have to suffer, so do you!" Kim threw a sneaker at Kate's head. The sneaker hit the headboard, missing Kate entirely. "Nice throw Kim." Came a sarcastic, muffled reply. "OH shut up."
At breakfast, they sat with D-Tent, who eyed them with interest. "Hey who're the chicks?" Someone called. "Chicks? What chicks?" Kim pantomimed looking all over, under her shoes, in her pockets, even under her breakfast plate. "I like chicks. They're so fluffy and cute. And they're yellow! I like yellow." Kate grinned. They sat down at the D Tent table, and one of the boys asked, "What are you two here for?"
"Well," Lied Kim, grinning, "We were at the mall, and we saw this really bald guy. I'm afraid of Bald guys, so I picked up a sneaker from a store near by, and chucked it at his head." Kate chimed in. "Only Kim has REALLY bad aim, so it hit him in the butt. He called against sexual abuse, and Kim got busted for that, and I got busted for stealing the sneaker." The girls grinned, and the boys were very unsure as to whether or not they were lying.
Once outside, they were led to a shack labeled "Library". "Oh yay, a library. I could use a new romance novel!" Kate bounded up to the shack, then added, staring at the shovels, "They could use a wider selection."
"Ooh look! That shovel has a yellow band!" Kate grabbed at it, and a tall African American boy wandered over. "Gimme my shovel." HE held out his hand. Apparently thinking he wouldn't get a fight. "No! I found it and I'm keeping it. Besides, Its yellow! I like yellow." X-Ray ignored her and tried to take it. Kate moved out of the way. X-ray glared and tired again, more forceful. Kate whirled it around, nearly smacking him on the head, but he ducked in time. "She's dangerous!" He called to his friends. Kate turned around to ignore him. "Fine, keep it." He muttered, walking away. "Teehee." Kate grinned.
They were instructed where to dig, and the girls began. It was hard, getting the shovel into the ground and out, pulling piles of dirt and rocks. "Ow, my poor arms! The shovel is heavy!" Whined Kate. "I can't do this. My arms hurt and it's only been an hour!" Kim sat down, rubbing her arms. Kate was acting. Kim was not.
But alas... it was Kate who passed out first, due to dehydration, and Kim grinned evilly. Carefully, she took off Kate's suit, leaving Kate in her yellow undies and a bra. The boys' eyes were out of their sockets, and Kim laughed. She hid Kate's clothes in a hole, and then hide herself in a different one. When Kate woke up, all hell broke loose.
To the Three Reviewers, I thank you for your time. To VedGirl, I hope you change your mind, because it might get better. However, it might not. So thank you for the review, and on with the story! - Lia Tween
f you don't like it, that's fine, but can you be more specific as to what was wrong with the story, that way we can try and fix the problem and make as many people as possible happy. Merci -MAjcarter
She said thanks - Lia Tween
"Where do you think you're going? Camp is the other way. The guard snarled. The girls could see flashing lights in the background, so the cops and ambulance must have come to the wreck, allowing the guard to come after them.
"Uh....no comprendo." Kate answered quickly.
"isn't that Spanish?" Mr. Sir asked, glaring at the girls, who thought fast.
"Non!!! C'est francaise! Non ESPANOL" Kate spat out the last word, hoping to look convincing.
"She said that it's not French, it's Spanish. And I have to agree." Kim said quickly, trying very hard not to laugh.
"Follow me." Mr. Sir, who clearly did not believe them, turned and headed back to camp. "welcome to Camp green lake. This ain't a girl scout camp. Though, if more of you show up, it might...Any way, you're to dig a hole a day, you can work together. Your shovels are your measuring sticks." The girls nodded to show that they understand, and he pulled out four orange suits.
"Ew we have to wear ORANGE?" Kim cried.
"Too bad it's not yellow, I like yellow." said Kate brightly. Mr. Sir rolled his eyes, and led them outside. "There are several tents, and they are your group. Seeing as you're the only girls, you get your own tent. You will be part of the "D Tent" group, but not the tent. Understand?" Both girls knew it was a rhetorical question, but Kate piped up, "No I don't. Can you say it slower, in French?" Mr. Sir glared then said, "So, you speak English too, eh?" "Ya." Kate said in a German accent.
So the girls ended up in tent "D Minus". The next day, they awoke to trumpets. "Nooo it can't be morning!" Kim whined. Kate was still sleeping soundly. "Wake up Kate! If I have to suffer, so do you!" Kim threw a sneaker at Kate's head. The sneaker hit the headboard, missing Kate entirely. "Nice throw Kim." Came a sarcastic, muffled reply. "OH shut up."
At breakfast, they sat with D-Tent, who eyed them with interest. "Hey who're the chicks?" Someone called. "Chicks? What chicks?" Kim pantomimed looking all over, under her shoes, in her pockets, even under her breakfast plate. "I like chicks. They're so fluffy and cute. And they're yellow! I like yellow." Kate grinned. They sat down at the D Tent table, and one of the boys asked, "What are you two here for?"
"Well," Lied Kim, grinning, "We were at the mall, and we saw this really bald guy. I'm afraid of Bald guys, so I picked up a sneaker from a store near by, and chucked it at his head." Kate chimed in. "Only Kim has REALLY bad aim, so it hit him in the butt. He called against sexual abuse, and Kim got busted for that, and I got busted for stealing the sneaker." The girls grinned, and the boys were very unsure as to whether or not they were lying.
Once outside, they were led to a shack labeled "Library". "Oh yay, a library. I could use a new romance novel!" Kate bounded up to the shack, then added, staring at the shovels, "They could use a wider selection."
"Ooh look! That shovel has a yellow band!" Kate grabbed at it, and a tall African American boy wandered over. "Gimme my shovel." HE held out his hand. Apparently thinking he wouldn't get a fight. "No! I found it and I'm keeping it. Besides, Its yellow! I like yellow." X-Ray ignored her and tried to take it. Kate moved out of the way. X-ray glared and tired again, more forceful. Kate whirled it around, nearly smacking him on the head, but he ducked in time. "She's dangerous!" He called to his friends. Kate turned around to ignore him. "Fine, keep it." He muttered, walking away. "Teehee." Kate grinned.
They were instructed where to dig, and the girls began. It was hard, getting the shovel into the ground and out, pulling piles of dirt and rocks. "Ow, my poor arms! The shovel is heavy!" Whined Kate. "I can't do this. My arms hurt and it's only been an hour!" Kim sat down, rubbing her arms. Kate was acting. Kim was not.
But alas... it was Kate who passed out first, due to dehydration, and Kim grinned evilly. Carefully, she took off Kate's suit, leaving Kate in her yellow undies and a bra. The boys' eyes were out of their sockets, and Kim laughed. She hid Kate's clothes in a hole, and then hide herself in a different one. When Kate woke up, all hell broke loose.