Cheese head ( Chibi Goten) : NO COOKIES FOR BULMA!!!!! –POUTS- ;;! –updates updates!- well!! Well!!! I have the last two chapters done!!! 3! Cookie cookie!?!?!??!?
LoveKakorot: 3! Well, here's some lemon o
ass-penis-gay (What a brilliant): Replace half my brain with shit. Now, what would that accomplish? Well, it wouldn't do much you know, the average person uses up. I think, lets see. 5 or 10 of their brain- what would replacing half of my peanut do? Me see a psychiatrist? Maybe if the same thing happened to me as did Trunks. ) I wouldn't mind falling in love with a young demi Saiyan shrink ;). (Plus, lets not get started with me and a psychiatrist- I would probably end up making the psychiatrist see a psychiatrist ) .) Aw, was that flame supposed to antagonize me? Sorry hunny didn't work. It actually did the opposite. I'm actually glad you tried to flame me. Yes, tried. Sorry babe, you must do better than that! You know, people like you, losers as I should say, that go around and flame others work to try and rouse them is just pathetic. Really. You go around and say that we have no lives and as such, but look whose talking? You go around and flame others out of shear stupidity. Maybe your jealous because I can write and you cant write shit. I mean, look at your profile. Your shit, yes shit, just like your sorry ass ), was taken off of and mine- well, its right here baby. You know... now that I think about it. I would have to say- your jealous of me. 0! Jealous that I can write, jealous that I can keep a fiction up, jealous that I have many reviewers and you have- oh lets see... none. 3 And if you are going to come up with a name, lets try something more intelligent. I know you can do it! -! Going back to the flamers. It's just a waste of the author's time, your time and the reviewer's time. I mean, I know I didn't have to write anything to you, and use up all this space on my story just commenting on your unintelligent remark. When you learn the proper ways of flaming, why don't you come back and type me something up ) or why don't you just drop by my email and write me. Hm? Would you like to discuss this? Go email me ) I would love to see your brainless, dimwitted comments. Now, I could go on and on about flamers. But, I don't want to waste my time, the reader's times, or anyone else's time. So just drop me a line 3.
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Chibi Goten-chanCheeseHead: CHEEEESE–GLOMPS-!!!!! o.o! Bulma's a drug – I should be illegal- no one can get enough of me X3 lmao j/k OO! 0! I never read a fic of Goten being the bad guy! –plots- I always see it as Trunks! That's why I didn't think this would be a good fic cause everyone always see's trunks as the bad guy! 3 but, your writings are good 3! Nods-! Actually, I think you should give a go at an angst fic. A dark dark angst! Or or! A Trunks and Goten one that takes place on Vegeta-sie oo! –gets ideas!-
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Blulily19: ok! –writes from where left off- o.o! where DID cliffhanger get its name :???
Ms. Trunks Briefs: lmao Xx! ok its in this year! Took me so long cause. O.o I been studying- and lazy XD! And. O.o PLAYING IN THE RAIN- YOU CANT TAKE THAT AWAY FROM ME! –CLINGS TO METAL POLE IN STORM- I WONT LET GOOOOOOOOOOOO NEVEEEEER
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The Psychiatrist
Majin Bulma
Chapter: VII
Trunks P.O.V
"Exactly where I want you." I didn't even realize I said that out loud. Staring down I look at him for any reaction. He just blinks. I regain myself and make a bold move. Lean forward and press my lips against his.
Oh. God. His lips are so warm.
I don't feel any movement coming from him, I squint an eye open and see his wide eyes staring at me.
Shit.
I begin to pull back when I feel a hand on my head, pushing it back fully onto his lips. I'm guessing he had no idea what he had just done because I can feel him gasp slightly. A small smirk forms its way to my lips.
Goten's P.O.V
Oh, Wow. I can't believe he's kissing me! I'm so shocked at the moment, so shocked that my eyes are as wide as saucers. I see his left eye begin to open and stare into mine. He begins to pull away.
No, no, no! Don't stop!
My hand darts from under his, and I grab his head thrusting it forward.
I didn't even know I did that! A small gasp comes forth from my lips at my realization. And then, I feel his lips curl slightly, and then he slides his tongue into my mouth, taking full advantage.
My hearts racing so fast. All thoughts cut from my head. All I do is kiss him back forgetting everything, letting it all go.
A hand snakes its way to my shirt, skin touching skin. His fingers dance across my heating flesh as the cloth is pulled forward inch by inch.
He breaks a moment as he tosses the article off from my body. Licks and nips travel down my neck to my shoulder. I'm left nervous and hot, the sensations taking over my mind.
I've never done this before! I just realize – What am I supposed to do?!
I suck in a breath, all thoughts kicked out that open window, as I feel the hand tug at the zipper on the crotch of my pants. The metal teeth open slowly until it reaches its end. I can feel the hands of my patient snake his hand into the opening.
If he looked up at my face I'd be beat red. A dark blush crosses over the bridge of my nose as I feel those powerful hands rub roughly against my now semi-erect manhood. My head is thrown to the side as I hiss and moan in pleasure. My hips bounce forward slightly as he rubs and strokes me threw my boxers.
Barely, just barely can I hear the chuckling coming from the lavender haired god on top of me.
His hand stops, and I let out a grunt in protest. My eyes are slightly open; I stare lazily at him as he rests his head next to my ear. I can feel the light breathing touching my earlobe, then moving up faintly making me shudder.
"Do you like that Goten?" He asks in a husky voice as that hand squeezes me making me groan and thrust my hips forward.
Even if I wanted to answer him I don't think I could. My breathing is coming in deep pants, my chest heaving, the pleasure is so... I don't even know the word.
"Anything special you want?" He asks another question, which I cannot answer as his hand fondles me softly. "Can't answer? Hmmm."
That mouth nips and licks the bottom of my ear, then runs down my neck doing the same. His teeth graze my shoulder, tongue darts out to lap at the skin and suck.
I can feel his hands move up and down my sides kneading the flesh.
Breathe tickles my chest and then I feel a wet appendage lick and nip at my nipple.
Oh God Oh God.
Trunks P.O.V
"Anything special you want?" I smirk and ask huskily as I run my hands up and down my black haired beauty's sides.
I stare at his flushed features, his eyes are closed, head thrown to the side with sweat starting to form on his brow.
My hand snakes down gently from his hip back in between his thighs. I rub and stroke the hardening manhood. "Can't answer?" I ask- more like mock.
I can tell he's never done this before. He's so easy to read. I bet he's never even touched himself before. Which will make my part just that much more pleasurable.
I lick and run my tongue across all the curves and crevices I can, when I meet his chest. I dart my tongue out tasting the bud presented before me. My other hand makes its way to the other, rubbing and pinching it gently.
Moaning and gasping comes from the withering body beneath me.
If I don't stop teasing him, then he's going to cum before we get down to the good and dirty stuff.
I mentally shrug. Moving myself away from his abused nub, I trace my way down his abdomen. Bringing down the material of his boxers and jeans, I stare at the prize before me.
Now this will be enjoyable.
I don't give him anytime to comprehend on what I am going to do. I lick the side of his erect manhood, my hand running up and down in between his thigh and my prize.
"FUCK"
I hear the beauty scream, feel his head tossing back and forth to the sides, feel the bucking and the moaning.
I slowly descend upon him. Making him cry out even more as I suck and nip at the end of his length.
I took him down as deep as I could. Hands playing in my hair, I begin to purr, vibrating around him, making him moan my name.
Now, that's what I want to hear.
I give a hard suck and feel him stiffen and then release his seed.
My attention darts to the door as I hear banging. I sit up, stare at the confused and recovering man lying down. I grab his boxers and jeans, pulling them back up.
"Goten, someone's at your door."
"Ah... Tell em to go away."
"Son Goten, this is the police, you have till the count of ten to open the door. And if you disagree to follow our orders we will be forced to break down the door."
What the hell...
"Hey, what are you talking about?" I scream threw the door making my way towards the peak hole.
"Mr. Briefs you will be coming with us. Come out with your hands up."
"Trunks?!" I hear Goten question scared.
Ok... Was it about what happened at school? They are going to arrest me and bring Goten in this!?
I hear them begin to count down.
"Its ok Goten, I wont let anything happen to you." I make my way to him, placing my hands on his shoulders giving them a slight squeeze. I lean forward, pressing my lips against his.
I hear them get to 5...
Opening the door with my hands up and Goten behind me, I see my mother and around 20 police men outside with guns pointing towards me.
"Move out of the way Mr. Briefs."
Move out of the way? For...
My eyes widen- they want Goten!
His form trembles behind me, cowering behind my back as he hints that they want him.
"What the fuck? What do you want Goten for?" I scream glaring at each and everyone one of them.
"Trunks baby, move out of the way and get away from that rapist!" I hear my mother cry out desperately to me.
Rapist?
"What the fuck are you talking about?!"
"Trunks?!"
My eyes dart to my side as I see out of the corner of my eye a blue uniform run in reaching to grab Goten.
As fast as I could, I ball up my fist and bring it across the mans face. I feel a pair of hands behind me, pushing me away. I strike my foot out, connecting it with another body part I am unaware of. I just keep hitting and kicking blindly.
God, it hurts so much! I had no time to recover from my earlier bout. I don't care. I don't care!
A scream comes from the side of me.
"GOTEN!" I scream. Punching and kicking with all my might, resisting the pain that shoots up all my body.
I'm thrown to the ground, with a man on top of me cuffing my hands behind my back. I look up to stare at at least 7 officers on me.
"Get the fuck off! What the hell did we do!?"
"This is the man?" I hear an officer call from behind me.
"Yes, that's the one that I saw beat and rape Mr. Briefs."
To be continued...
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