Wow, thanks for all the reviews! Makes me happy to know someone is reading my story though I think I need to fix the first chapter as to me… It's kind of bad. Thanks for voting!
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"Talking"
Thinking
- Place change
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Nightfall Bliss
Chapter 2
Trouble on Both Sides
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Kagome stood their, hand held up to her heart, facing the demons that stood in front of her. They just killed that demon so easily, it shocked her to know that, but what also shocked her was to know that demons were in her era. How could they have got through? The well closed up on both sides. Then she noticed they were standing in the middle of her room, staring at her. She put an intense glare on the demons and walked up to the shorter one.
"You," she said as she pointed to him," and then you," she pointed to the taller one. "What business do you have here?"
"We just saved you and now your going to ask us questions?" Hiei asked her, keeping a monotone voice as he spoke.
"You're the ones who came into my room without permission!" she snarled back at them. "I don't care who you are just… leave!"
Hiei was about to do something rash, Kurama could tell, so he simply replied a "Yes" and left, pulling his demon friend along.
When Kagome noticed they were gone she shut her window and took a seat on her bed, trying to relax her nerves. She didn't want to get rid of those two demons as they could have told her why the well was sealed or something useful. But she just wasn't in the mood to talk to them now. Especially that short one,'she reminded herself. It had been a long day for her and them coming only made it worse. Though they did save me.
This is going to be one long night. She tucked herself under the covers and fell into a blissful sleep.
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"Inuyasha, if you're so worried about her go to her time and get her," Miroku said, trying to calm his half-demon friend.
"I am not worried bout that stupid wench! I just want to collect the stupid shards but no she has to take off and take some stupid test or something!" Anyone could tell that just by his voice, he was worried.
Miroku sighed at Inuyasha's stupid attempt to cover his self up. It was pretty… pathetic. "What ever you say, Inuyasha." Then he took this chance to go over and see what his dear Sango was doing.
"Why beautiful Sango, are you cooking us dinner?" Miroku asked din his oh-so perverted voice. He reached closer to her...
"Pervert!" Sango yelled at him, hitting him over the head with her Hirikotsu (sp?).
: : THUD : :
"It was worth the pain," he mumbled into the ground.
"Miroku, stop slacking off and go get us some firewood, you lazy monk!" Inuyasha demanded, kicking dirt onto his laid out form on the ground.
"Yes master Inuyasha."
"Now that's what I like to hear," he said, crossing his arms.
Miroku took off into the woods, gathering as much firewood again so he wouldn't have to go off again later to get more.
A little farther into the woods he heard giggling which, he guessed, to belong to girls. He put the firewood down and hid in a bush, only poking his head out to see. There were two girls. He looked around and noticed their clothing scattered about the area.
Jackpot.
He came out from the bushes to present himself to the lovely bunch of ladies. (Even though there were only two)
The two girls screeched, until one noticed it was a guy. She whispered into the other girl's ear and than one of them giggled. One got out, and Miroku only stared until…
Flat chest?!
"You're…" Miroku backed away from him.
"Jakotsu, and you're?"
Miroku backed up into a tree. Uh…
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"What's taking Miroku so long with that firewood?" Inuyasha asked, growing impatient.
"Go find out for yourself," Sango suggested.
"Fine, I will!"
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"Miroku! Get your ass over here you lazy bum!" Then he saw Miroku with a… guy? "What the hell?!"
"Inuyasha, it's not what you think! Save me!"
"Miroku, that's sick!" He walked away from him, disgusted at what he saw.
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Kagome stretched her arms, having a good night sleep; she then stood up and smiled. "Boy I can't wait to see what's for breakfast!" She slipped out of her pajamas and changed into her school clothes, she brushed her hair ad took a shower. Than she ran downstairs and sat down at the table.
"You seem happy today," her mother said as she came in with a fresh plate of pancakes, setting them right in front of her daughter. She didn't even answer her mom as she was already digging into her food.
"Delicious mom!"
"I'm glad you like them." Her mom went back into the kitchen.
A few minutes later she finished her food and went straight to the door and slipped her shoes on. "Bye!" She swung her backpack over her shoulders and ran out the door.
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"That's odd, I wonder where everyone is?" Kagome asked out loud as she walked down the street. "Usually this place is always busy." She turned a corner and saw a few police cars and an ambulance. Wondering what the commotion was about – she ran over to the front of the crowd that was there.
This old lady was being taken into the ambulance, her body looked as though she had some fight with a gang of bullies. It looked like she had scratches on her body from head to toe. Two policemen passed by her – talking bout the problem.
"From what she told us she was attacked. But the odd thing is she didn't know who or what attacked her. She said she couldn't even fight back because she couldn't see what was hitting her. The lady isn't blind either.
"She also said that it felt like it had sharp claws. Odd."
Kagome walked away to take in what they said. It must be a demon. That's the only explanation! I'll have to check it out after school.
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I know it was shorter than the last chapter. But I just needed to get some information in – you could call it and information chapter I guess.
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BlueDove: Thanks! I'm doing my best to make this story good and enjoyable to read. But right now I'm just trying to get everything set up for something big to happen. And I'll do my best to keep them all in character!
GranolaBar: You'll figure out what Hiei and Kurama are up to sooner or later. Just kidding, you'll find out soon enough. Just not to soon!
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