Well, I know I haven't updated in a while but I have a good reason I reposted all of my other chapters with changes in the way I wrote them and maybe they will be easier to read
Thanks Ultima Tech I changed my chapters to fit your example because I thought it made it easier to read.
From now on in my new chapters Good Crobdan and Evil Crobdan might appear the bottom section just another reason to read my story.
Yes my real name is Mike
Disclaimer: I don't own Flcl but i do own my flcl fic and my flcl movies and my flcl posters and my flcl music and a whole bunch of flcl crap
Chapter 8: Fun at the beach... Damn I really need to get off of that beach they have been here since like chapter 5!!!
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Time has passed for Naota he is now 17 and still trying to cope with the lose of Haruko you would think all things would be better for Naota when she barges back into his life.
She slithered her hand up the wet bathing suit until she reached his member and she stroked it as he leaned back and relaxed his body on to the sand.
His breath quickened as she went faster and faster she could tell he was reaching his climax but then she suddenly stopped her movements.
He had a disappointed look on his face. "he's probably in pain already from not having his release", she thought to herself as she laid on top of him.
She kissed him and pulled down his bathing suit and got up momentarily to remove her own she slipped out of it.
she then slowly pressed his length into her as she sat on his waist pushed her weight on to his waist making him enter even deeper in her causing him too cry out.
She pushed deeper onto him going harder and faster deeper and deeper until he climaxed and released his warmth into her. She got off of him and lied on the sand next to him.
They started to put on their clothes as Kamon jumped onto the beach.
"Ahhh!!!, Naota-kun you were having sex with my Haruko-san for this I shall never forgive you we shall have a duel of honor for HARUKO-SAN!!!", said Kamon with his eyes on the two.
"Oh shit, here we go again", thought Naota. "I'm for it!!!", yelled haruko.
[At the office]
"Damn our attack failed we lost the targets", said Amarao.
"What now", said Kitsurubami while sitting down in a chair.
"I...I guess we could do another strike", said Amarao. "sir, we already have too explain why over a hundred men lost their lives", Said kitsurubami as a woman walked into the room.
"Sorry for the interruption but medical mechanica has called us", said the women.
"were screwed!!", Amarao said as he went to a room where a big monitor on the wall.
"Amarao, we have detected Raharu on Earth why haven't you informed us about her our intelligence shows that you knew she was here over two days ago", said the man on the monitor screen.
"Well, we...um...well we were going..."The man cut him off
"Amarao we have a barricade around this planet ordered by Captain Kares we will discuss this problem later", the man said and the monitor went off
[On the beach]
"Damn it's cold out here at night", said Naota.
" What's wrong are you afraid your dear dad is going to have to take Haruko- San away", said Kamon with a cocky grin on his face.
"Get on with it!!!", yelled Naota with a irritated voice.
"Fine! okay teams Haruko and Naota vs. The all powerful Kamon and Lord canti", Kamon said as he and canti ran into the dark.
"Haruko how about you run too the left and you run too the right", he said but she didn't respond she just sat there with her back to him. "Haruko?, Are you mad at me",
He asked but still didn't get a response he looked over to find her playing the old game Firestarter that Mamimi used too have.
"Haruko you still have one of those", he asked her. The game then read a game over screen on it and she slammed it on the ground
"Damn it I lost you distracted me by blabbing that fucking mouth", she said in a enraged voice.
"Hey it's not my fault you suck at the game anyways we should start coming up with a plan they probably are ready to ambush us as soon as we make our move", he said.
"Oh yeah well you better get out there this is your final battle go and die to prove that you love me!!!", she yelled as she slammed her twin neck guitar into his head.
he went flying into the air where Kamon and Canti saw them and released their rain of bullets on him and he went crashing into the ground.
"So much for my hero takkun saving me", she said as she watched him slam into the ground.
"Ah! yes just one more and we win and then I will have my sweet Haruko-san, Kamon said.
She saw some bushes move on the left side of her. She quickly jumped toward the bushes and Canti brought his shotgun out and fired at her. She dived to the left and shoot her guitar at his head and blew half of it away.
"Oh shit I really fucked his head up I bet Monchan could fix it", she said to herself as she inspected the broken robot. "Hey Monchan up for some fooly cooly", she yelled out into the air.
"Fooly Cooly with my sweet Haruko-San wait for me", Kamon said as he came running towards her. He stopped short of her when he saw her holding her guitar up at him.
"Sorry Monchan", She said and she slammed her guitar into the side of his head.He landed on Canti and she started to walk to the spot where Naota landed at. "Fix Canti when you wake up", she said while walking.
She reached the unconscious Naota and poured water out of a water bottle on him and he woke up coughing. "Come on Takkun let's go",he said to the dazed and confused Naota.
She started to walk toward her vespa and Naota got up and followed her. She got on the vespa and waited until he also reached the vespa. "where are we going", he asked her while getting on.
"You'll see", Haruko said and they took off
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Mwahahaha, you don't know but after you read this chapter you die in seven days!
Haruko: Shut up you idiot you'll scare them all away!
Takkun19: fine
Naota and Evil Crobdan: Flame Takkkun19 Because he suckz
Takkun19:Hey shut up You fucking Gothic Freak
Good Crobdan:Ya!!!
Takkun19: And screw yourself Naota you fuckin smart-ass
Takkun19's mom: What filthy mouth's you all got
(They all look at her and at the same time and pull out shotguns)
All: die demented bitch
Male Narrator: And the shotguns blew her apart and every one lived happily ever after
Takkun19: Hey Naota your "special friend" is here to see you
Naota:Oh goody!!!
Next time on the crazy adventures of Ta19's fic...chapter 9
Maybe I'll change the name of the fic maybe some of my reviewers can tell me if i should change the name or if it has to go and maybe even give me some ideas