Reviewer Responses-
GoddessDiana: I am glad you liked the story. And I agree there are A LOT more JackOC romances than Will. That's why I wrote this one. I wanted to be different.
Maren L P: Thank you for the review. I am glad you're enjoying my story, unlike some people who shall remain nameless.
Mizzy: Thank you for reviewing. I hope you enjoy reading the rest of my story.
Stun04: All right, first things first; Thank You for the compliment about being brave enough to post a story. Now onto the rest, I have read a few other fan fics for PotC where a girl is either sent into the movie or sent back in time, or where Jack or Will are sent into the future or into the real world. Other writers have made their original characters and their characterizations of PotC characters act calm after explanations. I happen to think that I and other writers write it that way because it does no use to complain or breakdown in that situation.
As to the 'Mary Sue' comment and 'Titanic' I have to admit it may sound that way but that is not what was intended . I just typed in the title of the first movie that came into my head. This is the second fan fic I have ever written and I am trying to not fall into the trap of making it a Mary Sue. I respect your opinions and welcome any future comments you may have, but I have to say that in everything I have ever read about Mary Sue characters there never was a statement that says, "watching Titanic is a sign of a Mary Sue". I do have to question whether you would have said that if I had just typed, 'She grabbed the remote control, turned the tv on and popped a movie into the DVD player.'?
Rachel Sparrow: Thank you for the kind words. I always appreciate your comments.
AUTHOR'S NOTE-
I want to thank all my reviewers for their thoughts on my story. I appreciate their advice, compliments and even the comments from the 'flamers' :glares at flamers: they help me with my writing tremendously.
I however dislike the fact that the flamers assume something about my writing that is not true. I AM TRYING MY BEST TO NOT MAKE THIS A 'MARY SUE'. Just because I write a statement or dialogue that seems 'Mary Sueish' doesn't mean the whole story is going to be that way. THIS STORY IS MEANT TO ENTERTAIN AND NOT MEANT TO BE TAKEN TOO SERIOUSLY.
I am working on Chapter 4 right now and God willing I will have it up by the end of the week. Again thank you to all my readers out there.
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