Ok, read it, there's no error in it. The story is like this, there's a part that is written again, changing some things, ok, it's not important. R&R.
Chapter 13.
"Harry, wake up" he heard Cho's voice, Harry opened his eyes and there she was, looking at him. But when she was about to speak again, someone took her by her wrist. It was a vampire, he was getting closer to her neck.
"Lumus solem" he yelled and the vampire became ashes.
But then, more vampires were aproaching to the scene. There was maybe 20 or 30 of them. They were walking in a strange way (of course, because they are dead, lol). Harry, Ron, Hermione, Cho and Draco were charming everything that went near them.
Harry heard a scream. He looked behind him and everything went black.
He had a strange feeling, he was like flying and at the same time, he felt heavy, the scar was hurting again, and then he saw people, running, after him. They were not chasing him, they were running away from something, he could not tell what was that thing. He heard someone screaming, and then, he noticed, he was screaming.
"Harry, wake up" he heard Cho's voice, Harry opened his eyes and there she was, looking at him. But when she was about to speak again, someone took her by her wrist. It was a vampire, he was getting closer to her neck.
"Lumus solem" he yelled and the vampire became ashes.
But then, more vampires were aproaching to the scene. There was maybe 20 or 30 of them. They were walking in a strange way (of course, because they are dead, lol). Harry, Ron, Hermione, Cho and Draco were charming everything that went near them.
Harry heard a scream. He looked behind him there was a vampire leaving Cho on the floor. He was late, he said "Lumus solem", but it was too late. He run towards Cho.
"Cho!" Harry was on his knees, he could not believe that. She couldn't be...dead "Cho, please wake up".
"Ok, I think it's over, the are no...cho!" Hermione was runnning towards Harry, worried "What happened?"
"A vampire" Harry couldn't talk, he was shocked. He looked at Cho.
She was lying on the ground pale as parchment. Ron, Hermione and even Draco, left him alone for almost 2 hours, his mind was clear. He had no thoughts, he was looking at her. Pale with her eyes opened, and two red-purple points in her neck.
"Harry, we must go now", Hermione was behind Harry, looking at him, with swollen, red eyes, she had been crying.
He looked around, they were waiting for him, everyone was looking at Cho, and then at Harry. He looked at Cho one more time, and then said,
"Let's go now" his voice was cold, he couldn't show any feeling.