Disclaimer: I do not own the labyrinth. I have said the words that REALEASE
ALL HELL!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
No, just kiddin. I really do own the labyrinth. In this story at least.
Here is chapter 2 rewritten. Actually, I lost my first two chapters, and I
had the rest of my story in a spiral, so I wrote them again, but I reread
my very long story, and the original first chapters are the only ones
that'll work. ^_^ Bear with me here!
She found herself in front of the castle door. She tried to push it open, but it weighed a ton. And there was no Ludo to be found.
"Great Kindari! Why couldn't you have sent me in the castle!" she whispered, or as much as one can whisper when pissed off.
"Because Kindari can't break my security spell. Hello again Sarah." She flinched at the sound of his voice. She was spun around quickly with her arms pinned at her sides. His touch, even gloved, sent chills up her spine. He dropped her arms.
:Not that I could move them anyhow.:
"Um..hi?" she stuttered. She gulped at how close he was.
:How could I have forgotten how scared of him I am? Damn!"
"Won't you come in? We musn't lurk in doorways. It's rude." He said coolly.
"Uh....sure. why not." He twisted a hand and a crystal appeared. Immediately, they were in his throne room. He leaned back on his throne and looked at her with interest. His eyes were burning into her flesh. She stood there for a few minutes, then began looking around the room.
"It's nicer then before. Where are the goblins?" she asked quietly, then looked at him.
"In the city sleeping. They're only allowed in the castle when I permit it." He answered, his eyes never leaving hers.
"Oh." She said quickly, feeling a bit stupid. A picture of kinderi flashed in her mind. She turned sharply to face him. "Why are people trying to kill me? Did you ask them to because you didn't?" his eyebrow rose.
"Who is trying to kill you? And I have not ordered an assassination for the past 200 years." He said.
"Kindari told me that your neighboring kings think that by killing me the golden age will stay. He also said they thought I wanted you dead. I don't though."
"Oh, and what brought out this sudden change of heart. Not 72 hours ago you destroyed me, despite my offers." He said coldly. She sat on the ground, seeing as no chairs were offered. "What else did Kindari tell you?"
"Don't change the subject!" she said firmly.
"Sarah I am a king, and you would do well to remember it. I will get this assassination solved." He looked away from her.
"Now, since you seem to be finished, I'll answer your question. Kindari told me that you didn't hate me. And don't you dare laugh at me either. I know I wanted a villain, but I also wanted a hero. You weren't exactly the hero I had in mind." She said, blushing a bit.
"If you mean a knight in shining armor, no never. What exactly did Kindari tell you?" he said. A chair rose from the castle floor facing Jareth. He motioned for her to sit there. She got up with unconscious grace and sat in the comfortable chair.
"A bit about my being famous here for destroying the golden age, my being a selfish bitch, you trying for a suicide to get away from me, why you didn't kill me. I think that sums it up. Oh and the assassination crew." She said a bit sarcastically. He rolled his eyes. Of course she wouldn't card why he saved her. She's just that heartless mortal.
"Oh did he. Hmm..."
"I don't mean to interrupt your train of thought, but can I go now? Home I mean?"
"No, you are my prisoner, and you will stay however long I decide.' He smirked at her dropped jaw. "No, not that kind of prisoner. I don't plan on killing you, but you are confined to my kingdom unless I give you the power to leave. I will send you home when I deem necessary."
"But what about you Jareth?" she interrupted. "Will you keep trying to kill yourself and your kingdom because of me? I'm not leaving you like this. Not with you loathing me. What do you think I am?" silence hung in the air. She looked into his eyes, and saw nothing.
"What I do is none of your concern." He said coldly. "Now why do you care?"
"Because I care about you!" she said frantically "and it is my business when I'm the cause of it! You were the villain, I was the heroine. I did what I had to do despite any feelings for you I might have had!" Slowly, she stood up and stepped towards him. She brushed her lips against his.
:Something about him. I don't know what it is. I can't believe I just did that.: she pulled away from him and turned around.
"I'm sorry." she whispered.
Hey this is the end of chapter 2! Jareth, sing a song.
Jareth: You remind of the babe.
WAIT A MINUTE! WHAT BABE
Jareth: The babe with the power.
I AM THE BABE WITH THE POWER! WHO ARE YOU SEEING BEHIND MY BACK!
Jareth: Lintrayel, it's just a song. I wrote it a long time ago because kids laughed at it.
Oh.
Jareth: Your stupidity amazes me at times.
*Lintrayel uses her magical author abilities to make Jareth wear.. a tight pair of hot pink pants and a shirt covered in roses. His fingernails are painted pink.
Lol. You look like an old lady.
*Jareth waves his hand and he's in a pair of tight ass black pants. I walk over to him.
Um...that's a bit better.
*He kisses me. I kiss him back.
Well, I gotta go, I've got a date with Orlando Bloom... then legolas at 4, and wait, didn't I have a date with Roux from Chocolat.. oh yeah, that's at 6, then I'll see you again Jareth.
Jareth: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*He waves a hand and a crystal appears, then Orlando, Legolas, and Roux appear.
Jareth: Stay away from MY girlfriend. She saw ME before she saw YOU losers!
Orlando: ummmm....no, she thinks I'm hotter.
Roux: Dude, you had a Mohawk. Those are so old
Orlando: Well you have LONG GREASY HAIR!
Legolas: I resent that comment.
ME: But out of all of ya, I think I like my Legolas best.
Jareth/Orlando/Roux: WHAT! KILL LEGOLAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Legolas pulls out his bow and arrow.
ME: You guys better watch out, I've seen his movie a million times, and not once has he missed.
*The guys all glare at me, and Legolas slides an arm around my waist.
Legolas: Let's go Lintrayel.
ME: I thought you loved Kalasin...
Legolas: No............. That was so last year.
(Sorry mandi couldn't resist)
I'll date you other guys later!"I call out to them as we get on a horse and ride away
REVIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWW. Bye.
I love reviews. Please review.
And please do me a gigantic favor. I joined with Kalasin (hehehe) to create a novel. We are writing it, and it's called the wanderers.
Go under search. Type in
Ravyn and Aurora.
Click on the first one.
PLEASE READ OUR STORY! There's only one right now, but we're working on it. We have about 8 chapters, but mandi has a crappy computer. Hehehe, I mean Kalasin has a crappy computer.
SORRY ABOUT BLOWING YOUR COVER MANDI I mean KALASIN!
Bye!
Oh, and here's a rose to all of you readers and future readers.
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She found herself in front of the castle door. She tried to push it open, but it weighed a ton. And there was no Ludo to be found.
"Great Kindari! Why couldn't you have sent me in the castle!" she whispered, or as much as one can whisper when pissed off.
"Because Kindari can't break my security spell. Hello again Sarah." She flinched at the sound of his voice. She was spun around quickly with her arms pinned at her sides. His touch, even gloved, sent chills up her spine. He dropped her arms.
:Not that I could move them anyhow.:
"Um..hi?" she stuttered. She gulped at how close he was.
:How could I have forgotten how scared of him I am? Damn!"
"Won't you come in? We musn't lurk in doorways. It's rude." He said coolly.
"Uh....sure. why not." He twisted a hand and a crystal appeared. Immediately, they were in his throne room. He leaned back on his throne and looked at her with interest. His eyes were burning into her flesh. She stood there for a few minutes, then began looking around the room.
"It's nicer then before. Where are the goblins?" she asked quietly, then looked at him.
"In the city sleeping. They're only allowed in the castle when I permit it." He answered, his eyes never leaving hers.
"Oh." She said quickly, feeling a bit stupid. A picture of kinderi flashed in her mind. She turned sharply to face him. "Why are people trying to kill me? Did you ask them to because you didn't?" his eyebrow rose.
"Who is trying to kill you? And I have not ordered an assassination for the past 200 years." He said.
"Kindari told me that your neighboring kings think that by killing me the golden age will stay. He also said they thought I wanted you dead. I don't though."
"Oh, and what brought out this sudden change of heart. Not 72 hours ago you destroyed me, despite my offers." He said coldly. She sat on the ground, seeing as no chairs were offered. "What else did Kindari tell you?"
"Don't change the subject!" she said firmly.
"Sarah I am a king, and you would do well to remember it. I will get this assassination solved." He looked away from her.
"Now, since you seem to be finished, I'll answer your question. Kindari told me that you didn't hate me. And don't you dare laugh at me either. I know I wanted a villain, but I also wanted a hero. You weren't exactly the hero I had in mind." She said, blushing a bit.
"If you mean a knight in shining armor, no never. What exactly did Kindari tell you?" he said. A chair rose from the castle floor facing Jareth. He motioned for her to sit there. She got up with unconscious grace and sat in the comfortable chair.
"A bit about my being famous here for destroying the golden age, my being a selfish bitch, you trying for a suicide to get away from me, why you didn't kill me. I think that sums it up. Oh and the assassination crew." She said a bit sarcastically. He rolled his eyes. Of course she wouldn't card why he saved her. She's just that heartless mortal.
"Oh did he. Hmm..."
"I don't mean to interrupt your train of thought, but can I go now? Home I mean?"
"No, you are my prisoner, and you will stay however long I decide.' He smirked at her dropped jaw. "No, not that kind of prisoner. I don't plan on killing you, but you are confined to my kingdom unless I give you the power to leave. I will send you home when I deem necessary."
"But what about you Jareth?" she interrupted. "Will you keep trying to kill yourself and your kingdom because of me? I'm not leaving you like this. Not with you loathing me. What do you think I am?" silence hung in the air. She looked into his eyes, and saw nothing.
"What I do is none of your concern." He said coldly. "Now why do you care?"
"Because I care about you!" she said frantically "and it is my business when I'm the cause of it! You were the villain, I was the heroine. I did what I had to do despite any feelings for you I might have had!" Slowly, she stood up and stepped towards him. She brushed her lips against his.
:Something about him. I don't know what it is. I can't believe I just did that.: she pulled away from him and turned around.
"I'm sorry." she whispered.
Hey this is the end of chapter 2! Jareth, sing a song.
Jareth: You remind of the babe.
WAIT A MINUTE! WHAT BABE
Jareth: The babe with the power.
I AM THE BABE WITH THE POWER! WHO ARE YOU SEEING BEHIND MY BACK!
Jareth: Lintrayel, it's just a song. I wrote it a long time ago because kids laughed at it.
Oh.
Jareth: Your stupidity amazes me at times.
*Lintrayel uses her magical author abilities to make Jareth wear.. a tight pair of hot pink pants and a shirt covered in roses. His fingernails are painted pink.
Lol. You look like an old lady.
*Jareth waves his hand and he's in a pair of tight ass black pants. I walk over to him.
Um...that's a bit better.
*He kisses me. I kiss him back.
Well, I gotta go, I've got a date with Orlando Bloom... then legolas at 4, and wait, didn't I have a date with Roux from Chocolat.. oh yeah, that's at 6, then I'll see you again Jareth.
Jareth: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*He waves a hand and a crystal appears, then Orlando, Legolas, and Roux appear.
Jareth: Stay away from MY girlfriend. She saw ME before she saw YOU losers!
Orlando: ummmm....no, she thinks I'm hotter.
Roux: Dude, you had a Mohawk. Those are so old
Orlando: Well you have LONG GREASY HAIR!
Legolas: I resent that comment.
ME: But out of all of ya, I think I like my Legolas best.
Jareth/Orlando/Roux: WHAT! KILL LEGOLAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Legolas pulls out his bow and arrow.
ME: You guys better watch out, I've seen his movie a million times, and not once has he missed.
*The guys all glare at me, and Legolas slides an arm around my waist.
Legolas: Let's go Lintrayel.
ME: I thought you loved Kalasin...
Legolas: No............. That was so last year.
(Sorry mandi couldn't resist)
I'll date you other guys later!"I call out to them as we get on a horse and ride away
REVIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWW. Bye.
I love reviews. Please review.
And please do me a gigantic favor. I joined with Kalasin (hehehe) to create a novel. We are writing it, and it's called the wanderers.
Go under search. Type in
Ravyn and Aurora.
Click on the first one.
PLEASE READ OUR STORY! There's only one right now, but we're working on it. We have about 8 chapters, but mandi has a crappy computer. Hehehe, I mean Kalasin has a crappy computer.
SORRY ABOUT BLOWING YOUR COVER MANDI I mean KALASIN!
Bye!
Oh, and here's a rose to all of you readers and future readers.
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