Disclaimer; yeah yeah yeah.
Ok, I'm getting this chapter as long as I can. I need you guys to know something about all of my stories. I know you guys want updates and stuff, but I can't do this and school. I'm hoping to get an update every 4 to 5 days. If it's any sooner, then I didn't have homework or projects. So since today's Sunday, and I finished my homework, then I can do a bit of typing. Where did I leave off?
Ahh yes...
"ANTON!" She screamed. He was flying through the air, and landed in a kapok tree on a large wide branch. He smirked at her.
"And you were worried." He teased. She glared at him, still swinging back and forth on the vine.
"Well, in my normal mortal life, I wouldn't even be swinging on this vine, much less watch my boyfriend safely fly off of it and land in a tree!" she shrieked. He laughed.
""Sarah, my kingdom is my territory. I respect it, it respects me. I am as safe in this forest as Jareth in his labyrinth." He called out.
"And how the hell do I get down?" she questioned. He smirked again. "NO! No way in hell! Anton, I absolutely refuse!" she shrugged.
"I suppose we could get you down the simple way." He said, sighing exaggeratedly
"You mean the Sarah-won't -die-way." She shot back. She watched him climb down the tree. He hopped off at the bottom. He walked over to the swinging vine and caught it.
"Sarah, jump." He said, stepping a few feet away from the steady vine. She looked down, laughed nervously, then shook her head.
"Wellk, if you don't think you can do it.." He challenged.
"Damn you! I can do it." She said.
"Prove it Sarah, Jump." He said rationally. She glared at him, knowing he was jst messing with her mind, then let go off the vine. She noticed her white dress was glowing as she fell. She looked down, saw the rate at which she was falling, then closed her eyes.
"I'm going to die." She said simply. The glow grew in brightness, and she felt herself moving, but not down. She looked around. She was floating, hovering in the air towards Anton. She stopped a few inches above him, then fell right into his arms.
"You have got to be more trusting Sarah. How many times have I said no harm will come to you?" she smiled weakly. "Now tell me, how was that for a first date?" She laughed.
"Anything but typical. And you will find I'm not a typical girlfriend."
"I am not particularly attracted to typical women. They gossip, sew, and cook. I need an adventurer."
"Like Jane and Tarzan." She said absentmindedly.
"Basically. Anyhow, anything in particular you'd like to do next." He asked, setting her down. Her hands slid up his chest. He reached a hand behind her head and kissed her softly, she deepened it and it broke every few moments, turning into a frenzy of breath, kissing, and passion. Finally, he pulled back a bit, but drew her in closer.
"I love you Sarah." He whispered in her ear.
"I wish I could say it back." She said, nuzzling into the curve of his neck.
"Why, is it a one way attraction?" he questioned.
"Oh no! I'm definitely attracted, but I'm 16, and well, you're, well, yeah."
"I am 127 years old Sarah, Jareth is 271. In equality, I'm about 19, and Jareth is 28. For every hour you spend here, a day goes by Aboveground. I'm not sure you'll ever see your family again if you don't go back soon." He said quietly.
"I have no desire to see that family ever again. Living here with you would be just fine with me." She said quietly.
"Oh so now you want to live with me?"
"Is that a problem?" she teased back.
"Actually, I'd prefer it that way. But what about Jareth?"
"I never said I wouldn't see him ever again, I just said that I'd possibly want to live you."
"Come, I'll take you to one of my favorite lookouts. It's quite beautiful. Basically Sweet Sarah, don't let go of me." She wrapped her arms tightly around his neck. She could hear the silver sword sing as it left the sheath, then a slice and it was again sheathed. He began to climb the long vine. "The trick to any fear of heights is not to look down." He said soothingly.
"You're afraid of heights?"
"No, but you are my sweet. I can sense it. Very little can you hide from me." He said. She hugged him tighter.
"Wouldn't it be easier to just use magic?" she asked. He kissed her neck.
"Yes my love, but that's what Jareth does, flashy magic. I'd rather have all of my magic for emergencies then for pleasure. Why do you ask? I'm plenty strong enough, and don't you dare try and tell me you haven't been looking." She hid her face in his neck, blushing madly. He laughed. "It's not something you should be embarrassed for my love. I can tell you were impressed." He put his hand on a wood deck above him. It was a small platform.
"Did you build this?" He nodded.
"Hold the vine Sarah." She did, and he pulled himself up. He turned around and grabbed Sarah's wrist. She did the same, he pulled her up and she hugged him. He held her close, considering himself very lucky to have her care for him this much this soon in the relationship. Perhaps she would consent to be his forever. Just perhaps. As they were embracing, neither saw the snowy white owl perched on a nearby tree. He kissed her lightly, and that lead to yet another passionate blend of breath and passion.
"How dare he! She is mine and mine alone. I have to get her back then kill him!" Jareth thought. Another owl glided over.
"See what happens when you wait? Had I known you'd refuse her, I'd have kept her for myself."
"Shut up Kindari. I didn't refuse her, I just told her she was too young" He got hit over the head by Kindari's wing.
"You Idiot! Good luck getting her back! That's one of the many things you NEVER say to one whom you care for. I had her almost in tears over you and you blew it. That's the last time I attempt to do you a favor." Kindari took off angrily.
"I love you my sarah."
"I know, and you know my answer." She said, but her eyes made it apparent she felt the same way. He smiled.
"Come on then. We can get a better view higher up." He walked down the thin platform to the base off the tree. She followed.
"Good luck climbing that tree. No branches." He just smiled at her. He put a fingertip against the tree. The bark started swelling, then pushed out to become a small branch.
"Why is it that you can always prove what I say is wrong?" he turned around, cupped her chin and kissed her lightly, then looked deep into her maple eyes.
"I can't prove that you love me my sweet."
"I have to be absolutely sure before I say it. I've heard of love at first sight, but that's for faerie tales." He smiled.
"Wasn't the labyrinth a faerie tale Sarah, and the Goblin King? For all you know, you could very well be in love with Jareth and not me."
"No, and of that I am sure. He intimidates me beyond the point of fear. And I do not get the same feeling around him that I get around you. I can't name it, but I know it's something special."
"You don't seem scared of him."
"I am, but I'm more scared of what I feel around you. How would I know it's love?" he looked at her seriously.
"I will describe how I feel I suppose. I feel like I can tell you anything, kissing you is like kissing an angel, and I love looking into your soft eyes and seeing the care that you hold so deeply in them." He said softly.
"If that's love, then yes, I can honestly say I love you."
"Those are the basic feelings, but one more, do you trust me?"
"With my life. I can't believe I didn't see it. I'm sorry." He lifted her chin yet again, and looked at her with loving eyes.
"Don't be, as long as you've finally realized it. I knew from the moment you first kissed me."
"Why didn't you tell me?" He shrugged.
"I suppose I was hoping you'd realize it." She leaned into his arms, which wrapped around her waist like steel bands.
"I'm tired."
"it's only about 4 in the afternoon, 5 aboveground." "Why the difference?"
"I thought you knew. We have 26 hour days. Instead of just noon, we go to thirteen."
"That bastard!"
'What?'
"Jareth told me that he reordered time for me. He lied!"
'he tells that to al the young beautiful girls who travel the labyrinth. I don't wish to badmouth him, but he was using you. You're the only one to ever turn down his offer of your dreams."
"I suppose I owe him a debt of gratitude" she said thoughtfully. He raised an eyebrow. She laughed.
"If I wasn't brought back here, I woudn't have found you!"
"Ah.."
"He's probably happy I'm gone. He called me a child. I almost feel sorry for the goblins, having to deal with his ego." Anton laughed heartily.
"Actually, he's not that much of an ego maniac.
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"He will die for treason. Then she'll be mine forever." Thought Jareth. He took one last glimpse of Sarah, then flew back to his lonely castle.
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A white owl flew over to the embracing couple. Anton pulled Sarah behind him and drew his dagger, ready to protect her. A flash of white light came and left.
"Anton sheath your weapon. I mean no harm to you or your lady." Sarah looked over Anton's shoulder. He looked sternly at her.
"Kindari, um..hi?" she said nervously.
"Sarah, I'm not angry with you. Jareth destroyed his chances with you. Anton I have to speak to you for a moment." Anton kissed Sarah on her forehead.
"be right back love." He said so only she could hear. He walked over to Kindari.
"If we could, I'd prefer to go to a more private place. I don't want to upset Sarah." Kindari muttered.
"Kindari, I don't keep things from Sarah, so whether you tell us now or I tell her later, she will find out so go ahead." He replied firmly. He held out his hand to Sarah behind him, which she took gratefully, then leaned on his shoulder.
"Sarah, while I have no problem with you being with Anton, Jareth does. He's planning to assassinate you Anton. If he succeeds, who will your kingdom go to?"
"Sarah." He replied firmly.
"Are you sure? She doesn't know-" Kindari said.
"yes, I'm positive." He interrupted. She was looking quite frightened so he draped an arm over her shoulder. "But I highly doubt such precautions are necessary." Sarah leaned on his shoulder.
"Tell Jareth if he hurts one hair on Anton's head I will either kill him or never speak to him again." She threatened.
"That eliminates most of the possibility doesn't it?" Kindari winked at her.
"If it doesn't, I'll kill him with my bare hands." Her eyes flashed with rage.
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"not if I trap you first my Sarah." Jareth said. He had been watching them. He went over the mental plan in his head.
"Gather the masque, poison Anton, capture Sarah, claim her as mine." He thought.
"not to hard." He said aloud.
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(A/N)
Hey this is a pretty long chapter. Be grateful okay? Oh, and now it's time for the awards ceremony! You guys are probably so confused. Hehehehe. *clears her throat Hello and thank you for coming to the Reviewers Awards! FIRST PLACE GOES TO:
Terrie For Reviewing not 5, not 6, BUT 7 TIMES! I CAN"T THANK YOU ENOUGH!
Okay, um..
Cecilia! Hey, thank you very much for your first review.
Anyastazya, that was very hard to spell, Your last reviews confused me a bit but I will address them when I get there.
Ravy and Aurora: (half fo which is me. You guys have to read my story, The wanderers. It's really cool, and Kalasin summerbreeze is my partner in writing it!) thanks mandi.
Chapter 2 reviews.
Silver Space! Thanks for your nice reveiew
Cecilia, I'm glad to have kept your attention! Really!
Darkfire: thank you much! Your compliment means a lot!
Anyastazya: Again, very odd spelling. Thank you, and I kept my promise t owrite more!
Draegon_fire: Thank you soooooo much
Silver Space: Ack! You wrote two ! WHOO hoo!!
Kalasin: ha ha.
THE ELVEN ENIGMA! YOU ARE AWESOME! I KNOW THIS MIGHT BE A BIT MUCH, BUT AHHHHHHHHH! I FINALLY FOUND SOME ONE WHO ENTIRELY AGREES WITH ME ON ROUX AND JARETH AND LEGOLAS AND THEM BEING THE BEST PEOPLE ON EARTH! EEEEEEEEEEK, AND YOU LIKE MY WRITING. WHOOOOH HOOOOOO! YOU CAN TELL I HAD A BIT TOO MUCH SUGAR.
Chapter 3 reveiws
Phoebemoon: hey, Um,..i can tell you're a fan of um.j/s, so am I, but this fic was kinda a dare. To write a dark fic on the whole j/s thing. Basically, she ends up hating him more than life in the end, so I'm just giving you a warning, its not gonna be a j/s
Terrie: you are totally awesome! This is like, the fifth review already, I owe you so much
Anyastazya: you can't have a leggy. They're all mine. Lol. Jk. I plan to give handouts of clones of legolas, and roux and Jareth a little later.
General Sephiroth: thank you much!
Silver Space: yea, I try to update. Really I do. Thank yoU!
Chpater 4 reviews.
General Sephiroth: Thank you again!
Zabella: Well, Anton's a bit better then Jareth, and Sarah knows what she wants ahead of time. Hehehehe. There's still a bit of competition left later...
Phoebemoon: I toldja. Lol thanks
Anyastazya: okay, this was one of htose reviews I was questioning. Okay, Yikes! Is that a bad thing or a good thing, or what I'm lost.
Terrie: you are like my god here! Seriously
Silver Space; I'm trying to get longer chapters. Reeally I am! Anyway, on to more thanking people.
Chapter 5 reviews:
Zabella: I'm sorry. Really I am! Thank you!
Anyastazya: um.again...cnfused.
Terrie: I worship you. *Bows down and offers tribute of yet another chapter. Will this one do?
YAY!
Okay, that about wraps it up.
Um. yeah, I have one small request besides your reviewing this chapter.
PLEASE Read a story I have written with a best friend, and we've worked really hard on it. And I know you guys like labyrinth fics, but this is an original.
Just go under search.
Type in
"Ravy and Aurora"
Then click the first one.
And our story is called The Wanderers.
Please read it, we have 3 chapters up and only 5 reviews. Please please please! Really it would mean a lot. But thank you all anyhow for taking the time to read this story! Bye for now.
Ok, I'm getting this chapter as long as I can. I need you guys to know something about all of my stories. I know you guys want updates and stuff, but I can't do this and school. I'm hoping to get an update every 4 to 5 days. If it's any sooner, then I didn't have homework or projects. So since today's Sunday, and I finished my homework, then I can do a bit of typing. Where did I leave off?
Ahh yes...
"ANTON!" She screamed. He was flying through the air, and landed in a kapok tree on a large wide branch. He smirked at her.
"And you were worried." He teased. She glared at him, still swinging back and forth on the vine.
"Well, in my normal mortal life, I wouldn't even be swinging on this vine, much less watch my boyfriend safely fly off of it and land in a tree!" she shrieked. He laughed.
""Sarah, my kingdom is my territory. I respect it, it respects me. I am as safe in this forest as Jareth in his labyrinth." He called out.
"And how the hell do I get down?" she questioned. He smirked again. "NO! No way in hell! Anton, I absolutely refuse!" she shrugged.
"I suppose we could get you down the simple way." He said, sighing exaggeratedly
"You mean the Sarah-won't -die-way." She shot back. She watched him climb down the tree. He hopped off at the bottom. He walked over to the swinging vine and caught it.
"Sarah, jump." He said, stepping a few feet away from the steady vine. She looked down, laughed nervously, then shook her head.
"Wellk, if you don't think you can do it.." He challenged.
"Damn you! I can do it." She said.
"Prove it Sarah, Jump." He said rationally. She glared at him, knowing he was jst messing with her mind, then let go off the vine. She noticed her white dress was glowing as she fell. She looked down, saw the rate at which she was falling, then closed her eyes.
"I'm going to die." She said simply. The glow grew in brightness, and she felt herself moving, but not down. She looked around. She was floating, hovering in the air towards Anton. She stopped a few inches above him, then fell right into his arms.
"You have got to be more trusting Sarah. How many times have I said no harm will come to you?" she smiled weakly. "Now tell me, how was that for a first date?" She laughed.
"Anything but typical. And you will find I'm not a typical girlfriend."
"I am not particularly attracted to typical women. They gossip, sew, and cook. I need an adventurer."
"Like Jane and Tarzan." She said absentmindedly.
"Basically. Anyhow, anything in particular you'd like to do next." He asked, setting her down. Her hands slid up his chest. He reached a hand behind her head and kissed her softly, she deepened it and it broke every few moments, turning into a frenzy of breath, kissing, and passion. Finally, he pulled back a bit, but drew her in closer.
"I love you Sarah." He whispered in her ear.
"I wish I could say it back." She said, nuzzling into the curve of his neck.
"Why, is it a one way attraction?" he questioned.
"Oh no! I'm definitely attracted, but I'm 16, and well, you're, well, yeah."
"I am 127 years old Sarah, Jareth is 271. In equality, I'm about 19, and Jareth is 28. For every hour you spend here, a day goes by Aboveground. I'm not sure you'll ever see your family again if you don't go back soon." He said quietly.
"I have no desire to see that family ever again. Living here with you would be just fine with me." She said quietly.
"Oh so now you want to live with me?"
"Is that a problem?" she teased back.
"Actually, I'd prefer it that way. But what about Jareth?"
"I never said I wouldn't see him ever again, I just said that I'd possibly want to live you."
"Come, I'll take you to one of my favorite lookouts. It's quite beautiful. Basically Sweet Sarah, don't let go of me." She wrapped her arms tightly around his neck. She could hear the silver sword sing as it left the sheath, then a slice and it was again sheathed. He began to climb the long vine. "The trick to any fear of heights is not to look down." He said soothingly.
"You're afraid of heights?"
"No, but you are my sweet. I can sense it. Very little can you hide from me." He said. She hugged him tighter.
"Wouldn't it be easier to just use magic?" she asked. He kissed her neck.
"Yes my love, but that's what Jareth does, flashy magic. I'd rather have all of my magic for emergencies then for pleasure. Why do you ask? I'm plenty strong enough, and don't you dare try and tell me you haven't been looking." She hid her face in his neck, blushing madly. He laughed. "It's not something you should be embarrassed for my love. I can tell you were impressed." He put his hand on a wood deck above him. It was a small platform.
"Did you build this?" He nodded.
"Hold the vine Sarah." She did, and he pulled himself up. He turned around and grabbed Sarah's wrist. She did the same, he pulled her up and she hugged him. He held her close, considering himself very lucky to have her care for him this much this soon in the relationship. Perhaps she would consent to be his forever. Just perhaps. As they were embracing, neither saw the snowy white owl perched on a nearby tree. He kissed her lightly, and that lead to yet another passionate blend of breath and passion.
"How dare he! She is mine and mine alone. I have to get her back then kill him!" Jareth thought. Another owl glided over.
"See what happens when you wait? Had I known you'd refuse her, I'd have kept her for myself."
"Shut up Kindari. I didn't refuse her, I just told her she was too young" He got hit over the head by Kindari's wing.
"You Idiot! Good luck getting her back! That's one of the many things you NEVER say to one whom you care for. I had her almost in tears over you and you blew it. That's the last time I attempt to do you a favor." Kindari took off angrily.
"I love you my sarah."
"I know, and you know my answer." She said, but her eyes made it apparent she felt the same way. He smiled.
"Come on then. We can get a better view higher up." He walked down the thin platform to the base off the tree. She followed.
"Good luck climbing that tree. No branches." He just smiled at her. He put a fingertip against the tree. The bark started swelling, then pushed out to become a small branch.
"Why is it that you can always prove what I say is wrong?" he turned around, cupped her chin and kissed her lightly, then looked deep into her maple eyes.
"I can't prove that you love me my sweet."
"I have to be absolutely sure before I say it. I've heard of love at first sight, but that's for faerie tales." He smiled.
"Wasn't the labyrinth a faerie tale Sarah, and the Goblin King? For all you know, you could very well be in love with Jareth and not me."
"No, and of that I am sure. He intimidates me beyond the point of fear. And I do not get the same feeling around him that I get around you. I can't name it, but I know it's something special."
"You don't seem scared of him."
"I am, but I'm more scared of what I feel around you. How would I know it's love?" he looked at her seriously.
"I will describe how I feel I suppose. I feel like I can tell you anything, kissing you is like kissing an angel, and I love looking into your soft eyes and seeing the care that you hold so deeply in them." He said softly.
"If that's love, then yes, I can honestly say I love you."
"Those are the basic feelings, but one more, do you trust me?"
"With my life. I can't believe I didn't see it. I'm sorry." He lifted her chin yet again, and looked at her with loving eyes.
"Don't be, as long as you've finally realized it. I knew from the moment you first kissed me."
"Why didn't you tell me?" He shrugged.
"I suppose I was hoping you'd realize it." She leaned into his arms, which wrapped around her waist like steel bands.
"I'm tired."
"it's only about 4 in the afternoon, 5 aboveground." "Why the difference?"
"I thought you knew. We have 26 hour days. Instead of just noon, we go to thirteen."
"That bastard!"
'What?'
"Jareth told me that he reordered time for me. He lied!"
'he tells that to al the young beautiful girls who travel the labyrinth. I don't wish to badmouth him, but he was using you. You're the only one to ever turn down his offer of your dreams."
"I suppose I owe him a debt of gratitude" she said thoughtfully. He raised an eyebrow. She laughed.
"If I wasn't brought back here, I woudn't have found you!"
"Ah.."
"He's probably happy I'm gone. He called me a child. I almost feel sorry for the goblins, having to deal with his ego." Anton laughed heartily.
"Actually, he's not that much of an ego maniac.
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"He will die for treason. Then she'll be mine forever." Thought Jareth. He took one last glimpse of Sarah, then flew back to his lonely castle.
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A white owl flew over to the embracing couple. Anton pulled Sarah behind him and drew his dagger, ready to protect her. A flash of white light came and left.
"Anton sheath your weapon. I mean no harm to you or your lady." Sarah looked over Anton's shoulder. He looked sternly at her.
"Kindari, um..hi?" she said nervously.
"Sarah, I'm not angry with you. Jareth destroyed his chances with you. Anton I have to speak to you for a moment." Anton kissed Sarah on her forehead.
"be right back love." He said so only she could hear. He walked over to Kindari.
"If we could, I'd prefer to go to a more private place. I don't want to upset Sarah." Kindari muttered.
"Kindari, I don't keep things from Sarah, so whether you tell us now or I tell her later, she will find out so go ahead." He replied firmly. He held out his hand to Sarah behind him, which she took gratefully, then leaned on his shoulder.
"Sarah, while I have no problem with you being with Anton, Jareth does. He's planning to assassinate you Anton. If he succeeds, who will your kingdom go to?"
"Sarah." He replied firmly.
"Are you sure? She doesn't know-" Kindari said.
"yes, I'm positive." He interrupted. She was looking quite frightened so he draped an arm over her shoulder. "But I highly doubt such precautions are necessary." Sarah leaned on his shoulder.
"Tell Jareth if he hurts one hair on Anton's head I will either kill him or never speak to him again." She threatened.
"That eliminates most of the possibility doesn't it?" Kindari winked at her.
"If it doesn't, I'll kill him with my bare hands." Her eyes flashed with rage.
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"not if I trap you first my Sarah." Jareth said. He had been watching them. He went over the mental plan in his head.
"Gather the masque, poison Anton, capture Sarah, claim her as mine." He thought.
"not to hard." He said aloud.
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(A/N)
Hey this is a pretty long chapter. Be grateful okay? Oh, and now it's time for the awards ceremony! You guys are probably so confused. Hehehehe. *clears her throat Hello and thank you for coming to the Reviewers Awards! FIRST PLACE GOES TO:
Terrie For Reviewing not 5, not 6, BUT 7 TIMES! I CAN"T THANK YOU ENOUGH!
Okay, um..
Cecilia! Hey, thank you very much for your first review.
Anyastazya, that was very hard to spell, Your last reviews confused me a bit but I will address them when I get there.
Ravy and Aurora: (half fo which is me. You guys have to read my story, The wanderers. It's really cool, and Kalasin summerbreeze is my partner in writing it!) thanks mandi.
Chapter 2 reviews.
Silver Space! Thanks for your nice reveiew
Cecilia, I'm glad to have kept your attention! Really!
Darkfire: thank you much! Your compliment means a lot!
Anyastazya: Again, very odd spelling. Thank you, and I kept my promise t owrite more!
Draegon_fire: Thank you soooooo much
Silver Space: Ack! You wrote two ! WHOO hoo!!
Kalasin: ha ha.
THE ELVEN ENIGMA! YOU ARE AWESOME! I KNOW THIS MIGHT BE A BIT MUCH, BUT AHHHHHHHHH! I FINALLY FOUND SOME ONE WHO ENTIRELY AGREES WITH ME ON ROUX AND JARETH AND LEGOLAS AND THEM BEING THE BEST PEOPLE ON EARTH! EEEEEEEEEEK, AND YOU LIKE MY WRITING. WHOOOOH HOOOOOO! YOU CAN TELL I HAD A BIT TOO MUCH SUGAR.
Chapter 3 reveiws
Phoebemoon: hey, Um,..i can tell you're a fan of um.j/s, so am I, but this fic was kinda a dare. To write a dark fic on the whole j/s thing. Basically, she ends up hating him more than life in the end, so I'm just giving you a warning, its not gonna be a j/s
Terrie: you are totally awesome! This is like, the fifth review already, I owe you so much
Anyastazya: you can't have a leggy. They're all mine. Lol. Jk. I plan to give handouts of clones of legolas, and roux and Jareth a little later.
General Sephiroth: thank you much!
Silver Space: yea, I try to update. Really I do. Thank yoU!
Chpater 4 reviews.
General Sephiroth: Thank you again!
Zabella: Well, Anton's a bit better then Jareth, and Sarah knows what she wants ahead of time. Hehehehe. There's still a bit of competition left later...
Phoebemoon: I toldja. Lol thanks
Anyastazya: okay, this was one of htose reviews I was questioning. Okay, Yikes! Is that a bad thing or a good thing, or what I'm lost.
Terrie: you are like my god here! Seriously
Silver Space; I'm trying to get longer chapters. Reeally I am! Anyway, on to more thanking people.
Chapter 5 reviews:
Zabella: I'm sorry. Really I am! Thank you!
Anyastazya: um.again...cnfused.
Terrie: I worship you. *Bows down and offers tribute of yet another chapter. Will this one do?
YAY!
Okay, that about wraps it up.
Um. yeah, I have one small request besides your reviewing this chapter.
PLEASE Read a story I have written with a best friend, and we've worked really hard on it. And I know you guys like labyrinth fics, but this is an original.
Just go under search.
Type in
"Ravy and Aurora"
Then click the first one.
And our story is called The Wanderers.
Please read it, we have 3 chapters up and only 5 reviews. Please please please! Really it would mean a lot. But thank you all anyhow for taking the time to read this story! Bye for now.