Liger003 ~ Here are some reviews that I got that I wanted to answer!
Since when does a soal still hold miko powers... oh yeah, that whole kikyo thing, but still, the 'inactive' soal! At least kikyo was mobile in a mud kind of way. Well, I wonder what happens next... can't wait for the update.
()() (n_n) ~Bunny
Liger003 ~ Um, I haven't seen or read the whole story so I thought that since Kikyo had miko powers and Kagome had miko powers and the main thing they share is a soul, which probably is a big thing, and Kagome got Kikyo's powers, I thought that the powers must be in the soul, I dunno. So that is just what I figured. May be I am wrong.
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oooh suspense ^____________________^ Don't make it too much of a chick fic...even tho imma girl, I can't stand too fluffly fics . ~AdOrEJaY
Liger003 ~ I am trying not to, (I don't like supper sappies either) but I didn't want his test to just be he comes back and kills Naraku (I am not saying that this happens, it might not, only I know ;P) I was thinking about Grim, but she can protect herself better than Kagome (She has that sickle, if anywhere I said glaive instead of sickle, sorry. I am obsessed with the weapon the glaive and sometimes write it in place of sickle. If you read my other two stories, they do have glaives, so I might be getting a little confused because I am writing them at the same time. May be that's not so smart . . .)
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The story is getting pretty good but what ever happened to the lava?? Since Inuyasha is jumping around so much why hasn't he jumped into the lava? Just a thought..
Liger003 ~ Well, I figured that he wouldn't just jump into the lava and that the dragon wouldn't throw their dinner into the lava, but I guess maybe I coulda added a bit more on that part, I might in this chapter to make up for it.
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Oi, and I thought that this was gonna be different. See, as i read your story, and i got to the part in the ring when Kagome appeared, I thought she'd end up giving him a kiss, you know, like in those fairy tail type stories with the princesses and knghts... "I love you so much, you simply can't die" you know, that shmele... accept, Kagome would have done an obvious other version... Well, I like the story.
In one of your previous chappys, when shippo was trying to wake up kiarra... you said InuYasha by mistake (I was a little confused)...
()() (n_n) ~Bunny
Liger003 ~ Um, I was planning to make it where their bodies had to kiss, not their souls, I didn't think about that. And sorry about that Inu- Yasha, Kiarra thing. I thought that I looked them all over before I poasted, I musta either not have or missed it, sorry!
Liger003 ~ That's all the ones I wanted to answer! Oh, and if you are wondering why I wrote Liger003 instead of Author's note, it shorter! I know, I am lazy! Oh, and don't think that I will make this chapter shorter just because of all the stuff I just typed. I won't! I just like talking too much . . .^_^ And thanks to anyone else who reviewed, I told you I like on reviews and probably would be typing the chapter of a different story right now if I hadn't gotten reviews on the last chapter!
Angel?
Chapter ten ~ Dragon's End
'What the . . .?' Inu-Yasha wondered. He looked up at the crying girl above him. 'Is she crying for . . . me? Oh, crap!' He watched as the dragon's head drew closer and he expected it to hit them, but as the light grew, it grew more solid. The dragon head rammed up against the walls of the dome, but the walls did not break, they didn't even budge. The dragon backed up and roared in pain.
Inu-Yasha looked up at Kagome who seemed to be concentrating to keep up her defense. She wasn't only crying, sweat dripped from her face. For a minuet his vision fogged and he felt pain in his wounds again. He groaned causing Kagome to look down on him.
"Inu-Yasha? How do you feel?" She asked worriedly.
"Like I have just been bitten by a three headed dragon." He told her sarcastically.
"It only has two heads right now."
"Gee, that makes me feel a lot better." He struggled to sit up, but Kagome pushed him back down. "Just what do you think that you are doing, wench?"
"You shouldn't get up. You are hurt and I can hold this a little longer."
"No way! I am getting up whether you like it or not!" Inu-Yasha struggled to stand.
"Don't make me use the s word!"
"You wouldn't . . ." Inu-Yasha said matter-of-factly.
"SIT!" Kagome commanded. Instantly he felt the pull on the necklace and he plummeted face first in to the hard floor of the ring.
"If you are so worried about me being hurt why do you break my back with that word every time you get mad at me?" He grumbled.
"You just lie there and I will take on the dragon!" She stood up and yelled at the fallen half demon.
"You wouldn't stand half a chance." He told her ignoring the pain as he tried to get into a comfortable position, but staying low so she wouldn't sit him again.
"Ohhh! I'll show you!" She growled and then turned her attention to the dragon. She brought up her power, she wasn't exactly sure how, it might have been that she was so ticked at Inu-Yasha. Light flowed from her fingertips.
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"Grim, you got a hold of him, didn't you?" Silence asked without looking up from her papers.
"Yes I did." She said professionally, but couldn't hide the relief from her voice. Silence smiled.
"He's alright then?"
"Uh, sorta. He was unconscious from being bitten by the dragon so many times." Grim told her.
"Oh, well, we have to hurry then!" Silence cried, going through mare papers. "He might be too weak to protect Kagome! And she's just human!"
"I have it!" Death called out.
"Great!" Grim sighed in relief.
"Here we go!" She pressed a few buttons on the control panel and the door on the clock swung open. "Let's go!"
They all jumped through the clock with after Kagome and Inu-Yasha.
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"Inu-Yasha looked at the dragon head and Kagome clash. Inu-Yasha watched in horror as she was pushed back. He watched as she drew closer and closer to the lava. 'Oh, crap!' He thought and picked up the Tetsusiaga.
He ran over to her. She instantly yelled at him. "I thought that I told you to stay back!"
"Sorry, but you should know by now I don't listen." He smirked and lifted to Tetsusiaga.
"Si-" She started, but before she could finish Inu-Yasha stuck the Tetsusiaga into the dragon's head, right behind its eyes. The head let one last roar and fell back, dead.
"T-thanks . . ." Kagome said slowly.
"Don't thank me yet. We still have one head to go." He pointed up. The enraged dragon charged but before he could even blink a flash of black whizzed in front of him. Following that one was three other black blurs.
Inu-Yasha and Kagome looked over to the three Grim Reaper sisters. They were all holding their sickles tight and they stared it down. Grim was the first to attack, leaving a large gash in its neck. The others followed. Each making the gash longer and deeper than before. Grim took the last swipe that took the head completely off.
"Hey! I thought that this was my test! Why are you finishing it for me?" Inu-Yasha growled.
"You didn't stand a chance and we made a mess up. We didn't realize that dragons eat human souls." Death scratched her head.
"We? You were the one that messed up!" Silence yelled back.
"Well, whatever. At least we got here in time to save their souls." Death reminded them
"Yeah, the Gods would kill us." Grim replied.
"Feh . . ." Inu-Yasha then felt the pain in his stomach return and he fell face forward on the ground, once again unconscious.
"What the?" Kagome grabbed him and pulled him up.
Grim looked him over. "He's lost a lot of blood. Let's take him back quick."
"Right." The others nodded and picked him up and pulled him through the clock.
End of chapter ten
Liger003 ~ I know that I said that I would be outa town for a while and not be able to update, but some how I managed to write this before I leave. Hope you like it and please review!
Since when does a soal still hold miko powers... oh yeah, that whole kikyo thing, but still, the 'inactive' soal! At least kikyo was mobile in a mud kind of way. Well, I wonder what happens next... can't wait for the update.
()() (n_n) ~Bunny
Liger003 ~ Um, I haven't seen or read the whole story so I thought that since Kikyo had miko powers and Kagome had miko powers and the main thing they share is a soul, which probably is a big thing, and Kagome got Kikyo's powers, I thought that the powers must be in the soul, I dunno. So that is just what I figured. May be I am wrong.
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oooh suspense ^____________________^ Don't make it too much of a chick fic...even tho imma girl, I can't stand too fluffly fics . ~AdOrEJaY
Liger003 ~ I am trying not to, (I don't like supper sappies either) but I didn't want his test to just be he comes back and kills Naraku (I am not saying that this happens, it might not, only I know ;P) I was thinking about Grim, but she can protect herself better than Kagome (She has that sickle, if anywhere I said glaive instead of sickle, sorry. I am obsessed with the weapon the glaive and sometimes write it in place of sickle. If you read my other two stories, they do have glaives, so I might be getting a little confused because I am writing them at the same time. May be that's not so smart . . .)
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The story is getting pretty good but what ever happened to the lava?? Since Inuyasha is jumping around so much why hasn't he jumped into the lava? Just a thought..
Liger003 ~ Well, I figured that he wouldn't just jump into the lava and that the dragon wouldn't throw their dinner into the lava, but I guess maybe I coulda added a bit more on that part, I might in this chapter to make up for it.
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Oi, and I thought that this was gonna be different. See, as i read your story, and i got to the part in the ring when Kagome appeared, I thought she'd end up giving him a kiss, you know, like in those fairy tail type stories with the princesses and knghts... "I love you so much, you simply can't die" you know, that shmele... accept, Kagome would have done an obvious other version... Well, I like the story.
In one of your previous chappys, when shippo was trying to wake up kiarra... you said InuYasha by mistake (I was a little confused)...
()() (n_n) ~Bunny
Liger003 ~ Um, I was planning to make it where their bodies had to kiss, not their souls, I didn't think about that. And sorry about that Inu- Yasha, Kiarra thing. I thought that I looked them all over before I poasted, I musta either not have or missed it, sorry!
Liger003 ~ That's all the ones I wanted to answer! Oh, and if you are wondering why I wrote Liger003 instead of Author's note, it shorter! I know, I am lazy! Oh, and don't think that I will make this chapter shorter just because of all the stuff I just typed. I won't! I just like talking too much . . .^_^ And thanks to anyone else who reviewed, I told you I like on reviews and probably would be typing the chapter of a different story right now if I hadn't gotten reviews on the last chapter!
Angel?
Chapter ten ~ Dragon's End
'What the . . .?' Inu-Yasha wondered. He looked up at the crying girl above him. 'Is she crying for . . . me? Oh, crap!' He watched as the dragon's head drew closer and he expected it to hit them, but as the light grew, it grew more solid. The dragon head rammed up against the walls of the dome, but the walls did not break, they didn't even budge. The dragon backed up and roared in pain.
Inu-Yasha looked up at Kagome who seemed to be concentrating to keep up her defense. She wasn't only crying, sweat dripped from her face. For a minuet his vision fogged and he felt pain in his wounds again. He groaned causing Kagome to look down on him.
"Inu-Yasha? How do you feel?" She asked worriedly.
"Like I have just been bitten by a three headed dragon." He told her sarcastically.
"It only has two heads right now."
"Gee, that makes me feel a lot better." He struggled to sit up, but Kagome pushed him back down. "Just what do you think that you are doing, wench?"
"You shouldn't get up. You are hurt and I can hold this a little longer."
"No way! I am getting up whether you like it or not!" Inu-Yasha struggled to stand.
"Don't make me use the s word!"
"You wouldn't . . ." Inu-Yasha said matter-of-factly.
"SIT!" Kagome commanded. Instantly he felt the pull on the necklace and he plummeted face first in to the hard floor of the ring.
"If you are so worried about me being hurt why do you break my back with that word every time you get mad at me?" He grumbled.
"You just lie there and I will take on the dragon!" She stood up and yelled at the fallen half demon.
"You wouldn't stand half a chance." He told her ignoring the pain as he tried to get into a comfortable position, but staying low so she wouldn't sit him again.
"Ohhh! I'll show you!" She growled and then turned her attention to the dragon. She brought up her power, she wasn't exactly sure how, it might have been that she was so ticked at Inu-Yasha. Light flowed from her fingertips.
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"Grim, you got a hold of him, didn't you?" Silence asked without looking up from her papers.
"Yes I did." She said professionally, but couldn't hide the relief from her voice. Silence smiled.
"He's alright then?"
"Uh, sorta. He was unconscious from being bitten by the dragon so many times." Grim told her.
"Oh, well, we have to hurry then!" Silence cried, going through mare papers. "He might be too weak to protect Kagome! And she's just human!"
"I have it!" Death called out.
"Great!" Grim sighed in relief.
"Here we go!" She pressed a few buttons on the control panel and the door on the clock swung open. "Let's go!"
They all jumped through the clock with after Kagome and Inu-Yasha.
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"Inu-Yasha looked at the dragon head and Kagome clash. Inu-Yasha watched in horror as she was pushed back. He watched as she drew closer and closer to the lava. 'Oh, crap!' He thought and picked up the Tetsusiaga.
He ran over to her. She instantly yelled at him. "I thought that I told you to stay back!"
"Sorry, but you should know by now I don't listen." He smirked and lifted to Tetsusiaga.
"Si-" She started, but before she could finish Inu-Yasha stuck the Tetsusiaga into the dragon's head, right behind its eyes. The head let one last roar and fell back, dead.
"T-thanks . . ." Kagome said slowly.
"Don't thank me yet. We still have one head to go." He pointed up. The enraged dragon charged but before he could even blink a flash of black whizzed in front of him. Following that one was three other black blurs.
Inu-Yasha and Kagome looked over to the three Grim Reaper sisters. They were all holding their sickles tight and they stared it down. Grim was the first to attack, leaving a large gash in its neck. The others followed. Each making the gash longer and deeper than before. Grim took the last swipe that took the head completely off.
"Hey! I thought that this was my test! Why are you finishing it for me?" Inu-Yasha growled.
"You didn't stand a chance and we made a mess up. We didn't realize that dragons eat human souls." Death scratched her head.
"We? You were the one that messed up!" Silence yelled back.
"Well, whatever. At least we got here in time to save their souls." Death reminded them
"Yeah, the Gods would kill us." Grim replied.
"Feh . . ." Inu-Yasha then felt the pain in his stomach return and he fell face forward on the ground, once again unconscious.
"What the?" Kagome grabbed him and pulled him up.
Grim looked him over. "He's lost a lot of blood. Let's take him back quick."
"Right." The others nodded and picked him up and pulled him through the clock.
End of chapter ten
Liger003 ~ I know that I said that I would be outa town for a while and not be able to update, but some how I managed to write this before I leave. Hope you like it and please review!