Disclaimer: I, again, own nothing in here besides the characters Renee, Danielle, and Amanda. As new things are introduced, I'll claim them if they're mine. Trust me, if I could claim the newsies, I would.
Author's Note: I'd really appreciate it if you'd review, since I might not be posting more until I get more reviews. It's nice to know that people are reading it. Plus, I'm gonna start saying at the end of the chapters who I'm using, or if needs be, if I could negotiate with you on one thing. You can reply to it by sending me an email at crazaysweetz7@hotmail.com . Thanks!
It was close to seven o'clock, and the girls felt like wandering a bit. To their luck, they ran into Blink and Racetrack, this time their company also consisting of Specs and Snipeshooter.
Recognizing the girls, Blink and Racetrack led Specs and Snipeshooter to them. "Heya goils," Kid greeted, respectively taking his hat off as he spoke to them.
Renee held back a blush. Kid was being so sweet! "Ya don't gotta take your hats off for us," she said, smiling despite herself.
Racetrack and Specs stepped closer. "We's always been taught to take our hats off to pretty gals like yaselves," Specs said, Racetrack, Kid and Snipeshooter nodding in agreement.
Danielle, Amanda, and Renee laughed and looked at them. "So, why're you guys out here?" Danielle asked.
Amanda discretely rolled her eyes and Renee held back her laughter. Danielle hit her friends playfully while the boys laughed. "We's jus' got done sellin' our last papes, and we's was headed back to da lodgin' house. Would ya like ta join us on our way?" Snipeshooter said, playing with his hat as he talked.
The girls nodded. So, the seven set out on their way to their seperate lodging houses, the girls hoping that they'd walk at a slow pace.
"So, how's come we's neva seen you'se goils around here before?" Kid asked, his eyes wandering to the sky as it started to darken.
Amanda, the only one of the girls up to talking at the moment, spoke up. "We've been around, just not around here."
"Oh, I guess that makes sense," Specs said, wiping his forehead with his forearm.
Suddenly, as Renee looked up at the sky, a clap of thunder sounded. Danielle jumped slightly, and Amanda sighed. Renee didn't flinch. She liked thunder.
"Uh oh, looks like a storm'sa comin'. Better get ya back to you'se lodgin' house," Kid said, his own eyes watching the sky.
"Why? It's not like thunder can hurt us," Renee replied, her eyes falling to the ground.
Kid looked at her funny. "Ya's like thunda?"
Renee nodded. "Yeah."
Racetrack smiled. "Still, it's best ta get ya back, jus' in case it gets woise."
The girls agreed, although Renee ended up staying outside for a moment before heading inside. She watched as the rain slowly came out from behind the dark clouds, the smooth, cold water soaking into her skin. Amanda, looking out the window, called to her. "Ray! C'mon! You're gonna get sick!"
Renee looked at her. "Do I normally care Anna?"
Amanda sighed. "C'mon, tomorrow's the day we try sellin' papes. Don't wanna miss that, do ya?"
Renee sighed. "All right." Thus, she came in.
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Raven: hey, thanks for being my first (and so far only) reviewer! thanks also for sending your profile, i'll definitely use it! it may not be soon, since I have more written than what's posted, but i'll be sure to use it once I start writing more of it. there's only one problem. I'm trying not to change the movie as much in here, so your relationship with Jack would be a problem. However, here's my idea- I can use your relationship with him as a past thing, and you can be friends with him but still want something more. Also, I will be doing other stories where I will change the ending of the movie, but not for this one. Sorry! again, to confirm what you feel, email me at crazaysweetz7@hotmail.com or you could even IM me at bballkgrl87!
Author's Note: I'd really appreciate it if you'd review, since I might not be posting more until I get more reviews. It's nice to know that people are reading it. Plus, I'm gonna start saying at the end of the chapters who I'm using, or if needs be, if I could negotiate with you on one thing. You can reply to it by sending me an email at crazaysweetz7@hotmail.com . Thanks!
It was close to seven o'clock, and the girls felt like wandering a bit. To their luck, they ran into Blink and Racetrack, this time their company also consisting of Specs and Snipeshooter.
Recognizing the girls, Blink and Racetrack led Specs and Snipeshooter to them. "Heya goils," Kid greeted, respectively taking his hat off as he spoke to them.
Renee held back a blush. Kid was being so sweet! "Ya don't gotta take your hats off for us," she said, smiling despite herself.
Racetrack and Specs stepped closer. "We's always been taught to take our hats off to pretty gals like yaselves," Specs said, Racetrack, Kid and Snipeshooter nodding in agreement.
Danielle, Amanda, and Renee laughed and looked at them. "So, why're you guys out here?" Danielle asked.
Amanda discretely rolled her eyes and Renee held back her laughter. Danielle hit her friends playfully while the boys laughed. "We's jus' got done sellin' our last papes, and we's was headed back to da lodgin' house. Would ya like ta join us on our way?" Snipeshooter said, playing with his hat as he talked.
The girls nodded. So, the seven set out on their way to their seperate lodging houses, the girls hoping that they'd walk at a slow pace.
"So, how's come we's neva seen you'se goils around here before?" Kid asked, his eyes wandering to the sky as it started to darken.
Amanda, the only one of the girls up to talking at the moment, spoke up. "We've been around, just not around here."
"Oh, I guess that makes sense," Specs said, wiping his forehead with his forearm.
Suddenly, as Renee looked up at the sky, a clap of thunder sounded. Danielle jumped slightly, and Amanda sighed. Renee didn't flinch. She liked thunder.
"Uh oh, looks like a storm'sa comin'. Better get ya back to you'se lodgin' house," Kid said, his own eyes watching the sky.
"Why? It's not like thunder can hurt us," Renee replied, her eyes falling to the ground.
Kid looked at her funny. "Ya's like thunda?"
Renee nodded. "Yeah."
Racetrack smiled. "Still, it's best ta get ya back, jus' in case it gets woise."
The girls agreed, although Renee ended up staying outside for a moment before heading inside. She watched as the rain slowly came out from behind the dark clouds, the smooth, cold water soaking into her skin. Amanda, looking out the window, called to her. "Ray! C'mon! You're gonna get sick!"
Renee looked at her. "Do I normally care Anna?"
Amanda sighed. "C'mon, tomorrow's the day we try sellin' papes. Don't wanna miss that, do ya?"
Renee sighed. "All right." Thus, she came in.
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Raven: hey, thanks for being my first (and so far only) reviewer! thanks also for sending your profile, i'll definitely use it! it may not be soon, since I have more written than what's posted, but i'll be sure to use it once I start writing more of it. there's only one problem. I'm trying not to change the movie as much in here, so your relationship with Jack would be a problem. However, here's my idea- I can use your relationship with him as a past thing, and you can be friends with him but still want something more. Also, I will be doing other stories where I will change the ending of the movie, but not for this one. Sorry! again, to confirm what you feel, email me at crazaysweetz7@hotmail.com or you could even IM me at bballkgrl87!