Well here is the next chapter. I think it is the best so far and I hope you will like it


"Who is it, tell me" Shinra pleaded and begged Rikku to tell him, but she was just too stunned to talk at all she just stared at the screen.

"Seymour... but that's impossible we killed him four years ago," Rikku said still stunned. She then looked at the other person but couldn't see who it was because whoever it was, was wearing a robe and his backed was turned.

"Then we can kill the remaining Gullwings and take over Spira" the voice was barely audible over the crackling of the reception. Even though it was low Rikku knew right away it was Seymour who said it because no one could mistake his freaky voice.

"We've got to tell Yunie, before something bad happens." Rikku squealed.

"I agree, Brother take us to Besaid now," Shinra ordered

"Cehla frah tu E dyga untanc vnus oui," Brother remarked.

"ZICD TU ED!!!" Rikku yelled.

"Wait look," Shinra said motioning towards Rikku. On the screen Seymour was looking directly at the sphere.

"Did he hear us?" Rikku asked. She was very scared right now.

"No, I didn't send anything they couldn't of" Shinra answered being scared too. Seymour started walking towards the sphere and picked it up.

"Ahhh, you must be Shinra the one I have been hearing about," Seymour said. "I hear you're quite the wiz kid when it comes to machina and technology." "Do you know what I do to people who meddle into my business," Seymour said with a more threatening tone raising his hand. There was a short pause then "You will have nowhere to run" Seymour brought his hand down on the sphere making it explode. Then a burst of energy came coursing through the screen striking Shinra and making him fly into the wall on the other side of the room.

"SHINRA, yna oui ugyo" Rikku yelled in Al Bhed. She ran toward Shinra who was sliding helplessly from the top of the wall. When he hit the ground she checked his pulse and felt a very faint beat but he was alive.

"I guess something already went wrong" Shinra said with a little laugh looking at Rikku. Rikku was so happy he was alive that she burst into tears and hugged him as if he was leaving for good. "Get off of me I'm not dead," Shinra yelled at her. "At least not yet anyway."

"Don't talk like that, I'll protect you until we solve this mess, I mean Seymour can't possibly be alive he's been dead for four years," Rikku tried convincing Shinra but to no avail.

"Brother, just take us to Besaid already," Shinra said getting up and avoiding the computer incase he got hit again.

"Hey, Yuna, look it's the Celsius," Tidus told Yuna as he looked up at the speeding airship. Yuna looked up and got down from the roof of there house and started running towards the general direction they were going to land. The ship touched down and Rikku and Shinra jumped out.

"Hey guys, I went to the commsphere at the usual time but you were never there." Yuna stated. Yuna had a really puzzled look on her face and she knew something was wrong. "What's wrong? Come on tell me." Yuna asked very persistently.

"Welllll," Rikku began without her usual tone of voice.

"It goes like this... Seymour, whoever that is, is back and wants to kill the Gullwings and all of Spira." Shinra finished Rikku's sentence.

"Yhea sure like I am going to believe that," Tidus came out of nowhere and made them all jump.

"No, it's true we even got it recorded," Rikku protested.

"Fine, show me then," Tidus said doubtfully. They all went back into the Celsius and Shinra replayed the encounter with Seymour. Yuna's and Tidus's jaws dropped to the floor, they couldn't believe it.

"We must kill him again then." Yuna said strangely cheerful.

"Then let's go get Paine and tell her the news!" Rikku shouted.

"Warning, Warning,Warningincoming transmission" came the ship's computerized voice.

"It seems we got a distress signal from the Calm Lands," Shinra stated.

"Then let's go" Brother said starting the engines.

The ship landed by the Hidden Chamber of Fayth and the gang jumped out and ran to the entrance. They could hear the screams of citizens and grew worried. When they got in they saw Paine standing over Baralai ready for the last strike.

"Nooo, Paine don't do it," Rikku shouted and was ready to grab her. Paine raised her sword in hand and brought it. But before it reached Baralai limp body it was knocked out of her hands with a metallic clang. Smoke was rising from Yuna's gun as she put it away, and Rikku was restraining Paine so no more harm could come to Baralai. Baralai woke up with a startling jump and disrespectfully looked at Paine

"What happened?" Yuna asked Baralai.

"I saw Paine collapse on the floor and I ran over to her and that's when she got up and almost choked me to death," Baralai answered. "If you hadn't come I would be dead." Paine was struggling to get rid of Rikku's grip and almost did until Yuna came to help.

"Look at her... she's crazy." Tidus observed from a distance.

Then all of a sudden they were all plunged into the nothingness that Paine's mind was in.

"Huh, where'd she go" Rikku and Yuna said as they looked at their empty arms.

The cloaked woman then blinked into appearance and took hold of Yuna. She then blinked back out just as fast as she came in except this time with Yuna.

"YUNA" the rest screamed. Then the woman came back and started to speak

"Well, well ,well, it appears I have caught some more hopeless humans."

"What do you mean?" Rikku asked she was so angry smoke was coming out of her ears.

"I mean that your friend, the one you were just holding is here too." She continued "and will still be here when you're dead"

"What the hell did you do to Yuna?" Tidus asked flaming as well.

"You will find out soon enough," The mysterious woman said.

Then in the blink of an eye she was gone. Everyone was just too stunned to notice that Tidus was gone as well.

"Wh...wh...where'd he go," Rikku asked looking puzzled.

Baralai and Shinra just shook there shoulders and looked around hastily. Then the rest of the team was teleported back to the chamber. Rikku felt something heavy in her hands and she opened her eyes. There was Paine but she wasn't moving at all, as if she was alive but was somewhere else. Rikku could see that it did not look like she was asleep, as if she was awake but was somewhere else.

"Paine, Paine, PAINE." Rikku yelled. "Shinra what's happened to her."

"I don't know, I... I just don't know" Shinra said sadly looking down.

"Then let's get back to the ship before something else happens." Rikku ordered taking Paine with her. Baralai saw that Rikku was struggling with Paine and he offered to carry her.

When they got into the ship Brother went crazy, "Where's Yuna, tell me now!"

"I don't know, she somehow was taken by that cloaked person we saw on the Commsphere Network." Rikku answered.

"What about Tidus, Is he gone too?" Buddy asked.

Baralai shook his head yes. Then Brother noticed Paine and said,

"What's wrong with her?" pointing at Paine.

"She seems to be unconscious but... it's different." Shinra answered this time. Baralai then brought Paine to the cabin and set her on the bed.

"Please, just please wake up soon." Baralai then kissed her on the forehead and went back to the bridge.


A special thanks to these following people:

Paine-171229- Oh and Rikku will only be one of the main characters. I will probably add more

Violet121

Cute-kitty2

Kingleby

It might be around five days until the next chapter because I'm stuck. Suggestions are welcome.

Translations

Cehla frah tu E dyga untanc vnus oui -Since when do I take orders from you

ZICD TU ED!!!- JUST DO IT!!!

SHINRA, yna oui ugyo- SHINRA, are you okay