Don't you love me?? I updated my story...I was going to discontinue
it...jk....but oh well. I just felt like saying that. Also I wasn't going to
make an a/n before this story but my internet isn't working and im bored.
Yup! Anyways...... here's the story. Also...I want to know if anyone reads my
a/ns so pwease if u read these thingies have the word.... Soobooloo in ur
review. And if u don't review and still read my a/ns then........... U
STINK!!!!!!!! Yes...and I'm extra nice b/c I didn't even get 30 reviews
yet!!! TRAITORS!! Sry...hyperness
I hate flames. Do not flame.
Disclaimer: I hate doing this. I really hate it. This is the only bad part about writing stories. Ok ok...I'll get on with it. I don't own Kodocha. For now........hehe.
Sana's View
Sana felt her breath catch in her throat. Was he dead? She ran out onto the street and stared down at him, feeling unsure of what to do. His eyes were closed, and his body was limp. One of his arms seemed to be at a slightly odd angle, and Sana guessed that it was broken. His head was bleeding from a cut on his forehead. There must have been more, but Sana was too flustered to be able to tell. She couldn't even tell if he was dead.
Slowly she reached down, delicately touching his wrist. She felt a bit of a pulse, and sighed in relief.
She heaved him up, and carried him into the building. She placed him on a blue mat on the ground. The children were staring at him, fascinated and terrified.
"Will Uncle Akito be okay?"
"I hope so" Sana replied. She felt tears started to leak out of her eyes. This was her fault. She had made Akito so upset he ran into a street without looking. She watched as a tall figure walked into the room. It was the driver of the truck.
"I'm sorry, but I didn't see him until it was too late." He said with a shrug.
Sana couldn't look at him. She wanted to go home and lie down. But she couldn't. She had to stay for Akito.
She stood up as if she was 90 years old, and walked to the phone. She looked at the phone in her hand, and slowly punched in three numbers. 9-1- 1.
Hello. May I help you?
"Yes. I have a man who was hit by a car..."
Where is your location?
"Um... _____ street (have no idea about street names in Japan)"
Alright. Our team will be right there.
Sana sat down on the mat beside Akito, and gently touched his cheek. Suddenly she broke down, loud, racking sobs shaking her body.
The driver of the truck seemed unsure of what to do. He scratched his nose, staring at Sana.
"Uh... miss? Are you okay?"
"I'm fine" Sana said, trying to stop her tears.
Rai's View
She found out from Akito's father. Sana had called him, and he had called her, thinking she needed to know.
Rai knew this was her fault. She was the one who had made Akito so upset. And now Sana was probably blaming herself. Rai had to explain this.
If Akito died, she would never forgive herself.
The thought that Akito was gone didn't change the fact that she was a horrible person. If he lived, he would be so angry at her. If he did survive, she would tell him the truth. And he would never speak to her again.
Rai decided that if Akito lived, she would tell him the truth and move to California, to start a new life.
If he died, she would move to America to start a new life.
Either way, she wouldn't be able to stand facing Sana again. The fact that she was a terrible person would come up, again and again.
So she was going to leave. She felt bad for running away, but she couldn't live with herself if she stayed.
Akito's View
He was having a dream.
He was woken up by Sana, who kissed him gently on the cheek.
"Wake up sleepyhead!" she pulls out her hammer but Akito throws his pillow at her before she can hit.
"I'm coming, I'm coming!"
"Don't you want time to say goodbye to the kids?"
He pulled himself out of bed, yawning. He walked out of his room pulling on a shirt. He slowly jogged into their sunny kitchen, another yawn stretching across his face. He felt his face break into a small smile as he looked at his children.
Nari-8-friendly eyes, thick, flowing hair running down her back, stopping at the level of her ribs- easily angry-hyper-hits people with karate belt when mad
Arimi-14-floppy hair and bangs that always seem to be in his face- tall- keeps things inside- has trouble expressing feelings-kind- serious
Suddenly the doorbell rang. He opened it to find Rai standing there with a figure behind her. Trying to see who it was, he woke up.
Akito's eyes stayed closed. He heard a familiar voice. In fact, one of his favorite voices, Sana's. He listened to the voice, which was usually cheerful. This time, it seemed to have sadness overflowing from it. He slid open his eyes, and almost gasped, except his voice didn't seem to want to come out. He was in a hospital bed!
Sana's View
As she talked to the nurse about Akito's condition, she felt as if her tears were going to come out again. All she could think about was how much she wanted Akito to be okay. She glanced over at the bed again to see his eyes were open, watching her.
"Akito!" She ran over to him and engulfed him in a hug.
"You stupid! How could you have run into the street like that?" She pulled out her hammer and banged him hard. The nurse came running in, trying to pull her back.
"He's barely alive, Sana! Save your hammer for later! If this happens again, I'm going to have to ask you to leave."
"Of course, of course. Very sorry." She aimed a wide, toothy smile at the nurse, until she walked away. Akito seemed to be in shock.
"Akito?"
"umph"
"???"
Sana stared at Akito's stiff figure with a worried look. He seemed to be staring at something, looking past her. She was afraid to look. Finally, she turned around, and saw Rai. (I thought about ending this here but I think my chappies r too short......lol. Wait, I think? They are too short! Lol.)
For the first time, she saw her. And she felt herself fill with sadness. Rai's eyes were overflowing with tears, but her face was solemn. She seemed as if she was trying to look strong, but Sana could tell she could break down at any moment.
Rai's View
She stared at Sana and Akito. They looked so...perfect together. She knew tears were flowing freely out of her eyes, but she couldn't seem to feel them. Her pain was so great, she felt as if she couldn't breathe or think.
They seemed to be frozen in time, their thoughts not able to come out as words.
Finally, Rai spoke, knowing that this would probably be the last time she spoke to either of the two people/
"I.....I need to tell u something. I...I am a terrible person. Akito, you know that time you were in a restaurant and Sana came up and said she never wanted to go out with you? Well...that was me." The story came out, Rai's shaky voice getting worse and worse.
She finished her story, and broke down in tears. Akito and Sana would hate her for the rest of their lives.
Sana's face was full of anger, and pain. This was nothing compared to Akito's face.
His face was overflowing with the same anger and pain as Sana's. Except...10 times worse. He seemed to be having trouble breathing.
"Rai..." he said. Rai could hear that he was trying to hold himself back, trying to be "kind" to her...but she knew his anger was too great to be held back for too long.
Sana was staring at Akito, frightened. She had seen Akito really angry before.
Too their surprise, Akito didn't go crazy, as they were afraid of. What he did was much, much worse.
The end of the chapter!!!!!!!
Not!! Hehe. Hehe. Hehehe. Sry...im evil. MWAHAHAHA! Ok...anyways...back to the story.
His eyes filled with betrayal he opened his mouth to speak.
"Rai, how could you do this to me? I...I...I almost died because of you. The way I felt, that wouldn't have been such a bad thing. I wanted to die because of what Sana...I mean...you said to me. How could you hurt a person this badly?"
"I'm sorry Akito...I was blinded...I...couldn't help myself."
"Please leave," he said with a snarl.
"Yes, that was my plan...I'm going to America."
As soon as Rai got out of the building and into her car, she leaned over the steering wheel and sobbed. She felt as if she could never be happy again. Akito...... He hated her, for good reason. She remembered his eyes, seeing the hurt in them. She swore, then, that she would never hurt a person like that again. If she did something like that again, she would kill herself.
Now, it was time to forget him, and make a new life. It was time to go to America.
Should I make this the end??? Hmm... *throws peanut at computer screen* This is too hard!! I want a cliffie...but...I want long chappies too!!! This story is gonna end pretty soon anyways I think... hmm... ARGH!!! Ok, I'm going to end it now..hey...maybe this should be the end of the whole story!! Tell me what you think in your many reviews...if u guys don't want me to write more of this story I wont...(I have a great idea for a new story that has been in my head for a week...which is a lot for me) Also, if I do decide to continue...I'm not continuing till I get 40 reviews. I know that's insane... and if ppl really want me to update I will before that... but I WANT REVIEWS!! Ok..my laptop is running out of battery..I'm going to finish this A/n later..hehe.
I'm back!! R u glad??? Or happy?? Or mad??? WELL IM BACK AND THAT'S TOO BAD FOR U!!!! yup...too bad...unless ur happy...then...big hug for u...HEHEHE! I'm really bloopy...if u wanna kno wut that meand go read bloopylover99's story. Hehehe. I love making long authors notes. Cuz its like...the only time I can talk to my faithful readers..................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ......................................................I LOVE DOTS!!! I'm gonna go do something...I'm at school right now...so I'll continue with my a/n later...
I'm back!!! Still in school...hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. I love a/ns. Oh yeah...I hav a mini story...
Once there was a nice kingdom. And there was a wonderful story that everyone liked to read, called My Akito, stupid title I know. And everyone read it. But some people didn't review the story. And they all died terrible deaths. The wonderful, nice people who DID review, lived long lives full of happiness.
Was that a threat?? I think that was a threat.
Review!! Press the little button....on the left...that says go...ur supposed to click it... O yeah... if I get 40 reviews in a week (which may be impossible) I'll try and make the next chapter longer...and I've already started working on it!!
I hate flames. Do not flame.
Disclaimer: I hate doing this. I really hate it. This is the only bad part about writing stories. Ok ok...I'll get on with it. I don't own Kodocha. For now........hehe.
Sana's View
Sana felt her breath catch in her throat. Was he dead? She ran out onto the street and stared down at him, feeling unsure of what to do. His eyes were closed, and his body was limp. One of his arms seemed to be at a slightly odd angle, and Sana guessed that it was broken. His head was bleeding from a cut on his forehead. There must have been more, but Sana was too flustered to be able to tell. She couldn't even tell if he was dead.
Slowly she reached down, delicately touching his wrist. She felt a bit of a pulse, and sighed in relief.
She heaved him up, and carried him into the building. She placed him on a blue mat on the ground. The children were staring at him, fascinated and terrified.
"Will Uncle Akito be okay?"
"I hope so" Sana replied. She felt tears started to leak out of her eyes. This was her fault. She had made Akito so upset he ran into a street without looking. She watched as a tall figure walked into the room. It was the driver of the truck.
"I'm sorry, but I didn't see him until it was too late." He said with a shrug.
Sana couldn't look at him. She wanted to go home and lie down. But she couldn't. She had to stay for Akito.
She stood up as if she was 90 years old, and walked to the phone. She looked at the phone in her hand, and slowly punched in three numbers. 9-1- 1.
Hello. May I help you?
"Yes. I have a man who was hit by a car..."
Where is your location?
"Um... _____ street (have no idea about street names in Japan)"
Alright. Our team will be right there.
Sana sat down on the mat beside Akito, and gently touched his cheek. Suddenly she broke down, loud, racking sobs shaking her body.
The driver of the truck seemed unsure of what to do. He scratched his nose, staring at Sana.
"Uh... miss? Are you okay?"
"I'm fine" Sana said, trying to stop her tears.
Rai's View
She found out from Akito's father. Sana had called him, and he had called her, thinking she needed to know.
Rai knew this was her fault. She was the one who had made Akito so upset. And now Sana was probably blaming herself. Rai had to explain this.
If Akito died, she would never forgive herself.
The thought that Akito was gone didn't change the fact that she was a horrible person. If he lived, he would be so angry at her. If he did survive, she would tell him the truth. And he would never speak to her again.
Rai decided that if Akito lived, she would tell him the truth and move to California, to start a new life.
If he died, she would move to America to start a new life.
Either way, she wouldn't be able to stand facing Sana again. The fact that she was a terrible person would come up, again and again.
So she was going to leave. She felt bad for running away, but she couldn't live with herself if she stayed.
Akito's View
He was having a dream.
He was woken up by Sana, who kissed him gently on the cheek.
"Wake up sleepyhead!" she pulls out her hammer but Akito throws his pillow at her before she can hit.
"I'm coming, I'm coming!"
"Don't you want time to say goodbye to the kids?"
He pulled himself out of bed, yawning. He walked out of his room pulling on a shirt. He slowly jogged into their sunny kitchen, another yawn stretching across his face. He felt his face break into a small smile as he looked at his children.
Nari-8-friendly eyes, thick, flowing hair running down her back, stopping at the level of her ribs- easily angry-hyper-hits people with karate belt when mad
Arimi-14-floppy hair and bangs that always seem to be in his face- tall- keeps things inside- has trouble expressing feelings-kind- serious
Suddenly the doorbell rang. He opened it to find Rai standing there with a figure behind her. Trying to see who it was, he woke up.
Akito's eyes stayed closed. He heard a familiar voice. In fact, one of his favorite voices, Sana's. He listened to the voice, which was usually cheerful. This time, it seemed to have sadness overflowing from it. He slid open his eyes, and almost gasped, except his voice didn't seem to want to come out. He was in a hospital bed!
Sana's View
As she talked to the nurse about Akito's condition, she felt as if her tears were going to come out again. All she could think about was how much she wanted Akito to be okay. She glanced over at the bed again to see his eyes were open, watching her.
"Akito!" She ran over to him and engulfed him in a hug.
"You stupid! How could you have run into the street like that?" She pulled out her hammer and banged him hard. The nurse came running in, trying to pull her back.
"He's barely alive, Sana! Save your hammer for later! If this happens again, I'm going to have to ask you to leave."
"Of course, of course. Very sorry." She aimed a wide, toothy smile at the nurse, until she walked away. Akito seemed to be in shock.
"Akito?"
"umph"
"???"
Sana stared at Akito's stiff figure with a worried look. He seemed to be staring at something, looking past her. She was afraid to look. Finally, she turned around, and saw Rai. (I thought about ending this here but I think my chappies r too short......lol. Wait, I think? They are too short! Lol.)
For the first time, she saw her. And she felt herself fill with sadness. Rai's eyes were overflowing with tears, but her face was solemn. She seemed as if she was trying to look strong, but Sana could tell she could break down at any moment.
Rai's View
She stared at Sana and Akito. They looked so...perfect together. She knew tears were flowing freely out of her eyes, but she couldn't seem to feel them. Her pain was so great, she felt as if she couldn't breathe or think.
They seemed to be frozen in time, their thoughts not able to come out as words.
Finally, Rai spoke, knowing that this would probably be the last time she spoke to either of the two people/
"I.....I need to tell u something. I...I am a terrible person. Akito, you know that time you were in a restaurant and Sana came up and said she never wanted to go out with you? Well...that was me." The story came out, Rai's shaky voice getting worse and worse.
She finished her story, and broke down in tears. Akito and Sana would hate her for the rest of their lives.
Sana's face was full of anger, and pain. This was nothing compared to Akito's face.
His face was overflowing with the same anger and pain as Sana's. Except...10 times worse. He seemed to be having trouble breathing.
"Rai..." he said. Rai could hear that he was trying to hold himself back, trying to be "kind" to her...but she knew his anger was too great to be held back for too long.
Sana was staring at Akito, frightened. She had seen Akito really angry before.
Too their surprise, Akito didn't go crazy, as they were afraid of. What he did was much, much worse.
The end of the chapter!!!!!!!
Not!! Hehe. Hehe. Hehehe. Sry...im evil. MWAHAHAHA! Ok...anyways...back to the story.
His eyes filled with betrayal he opened his mouth to speak.
"Rai, how could you do this to me? I...I...I almost died because of you. The way I felt, that wouldn't have been such a bad thing. I wanted to die because of what Sana...I mean...you said to me. How could you hurt a person this badly?"
"I'm sorry Akito...I was blinded...I...couldn't help myself."
"Please leave," he said with a snarl.
"Yes, that was my plan...I'm going to America."
As soon as Rai got out of the building and into her car, she leaned over the steering wheel and sobbed. She felt as if she could never be happy again. Akito...... He hated her, for good reason. She remembered his eyes, seeing the hurt in them. She swore, then, that she would never hurt a person like that again. If she did something like that again, she would kill herself.
Now, it was time to forget him, and make a new life. It was time to go to America.
Should I make this the end??? Hmm... *throws peanut at computer screen* This is too hard!! I want a cliffie...but...I want long chappies too!!! This story is gonna end pretty soon anyways I think... hmm... ARGH!!! Ok, I'm going to end it now..hey...maybe this should be the end of the whole story!! Tell me what you think in your many reviews...if u guys don't want me to write more of this story I wont...(I have a great idea for a new story that has been in my head for a week...which is a lot for me) Also, if I do decide to continue...I'm not continuing till I get 40 reviews. I know that's insane... and if ppl really want me to update I will before that... but I WANT REVIEWS!! Ok..my laptop is running out of battery..I'm going to finish this A/n later..hehe.
I'm back!! R u glad??? Or happy?? Or mad??? WELL IM BACK AND THAT'S TOO BAD FOR U!!!! yup...too bad...unless ur happy...then...big hug for u...HEHEHE! I'm really bloopy...if u wanna kno wut that meand go read bloopylover99's story. Hehehe. I love making long authors notes. Cuz its like...the only time I can talk to my faithful readers..................................................................... ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ............................................................................ ......................................................I LOVE DOTS!!! I'm gonna go do something...I'm at school right now...so I'll continue with my a/n later...
I'm back!!! Still in school...hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. Hehe. I love a/ns. Oh yeah...I hav a mini story...
Once there was a nice kingdom. And there was a wonderful story that everyone liked to read, called My Akito, stupid title I know. And everyone read it. But some people didn't review the story. And they all died terrible deaths. The wonderful, nice people who DID review, lived long lives full of happiness.
Was that a threat?? I think that was a threat.
Review!! Press the little button....on the left...that says go...ur supposed to click it... O yeah... if I get 40 reviews in a week (which may be impossible) I'll try and make the next chapter longer...and I've already started working on it!!