A/N: Okie dokie... MaquedenEvenstar and Faerie Elf finally got back together and decided that their munderful story needed much work done on it. That and we lost interest because I and MaquedenEvenstar realized all Tolkien's characters were horrible OC's and the writing needed a lot of help. I decided if I was going to add original characters the story would a least be half decent.
After revising the plot and changing the original ending of the story, this is what we have come up with. Behold, the fruit of our labors! This is a tiny tidbit of what the first chapter is going to be like, unedited. Once we finish the first couple chapters we'll post them all at once.
Chapter 1
If you were 6 years old and had been left in the woods to die, what would you do? Run? Scream? Both? For two unfortunate little girls, this was the case. Also unfortunately for them, they found themselves being chased by big, hairy, ugly wolf-looking things. They had big, sharp, pointy teeth and looked like a cross between a pig and a very scary looking wolf.
For the two girls, the only option was to run and scream away from the wolf thingies. After days of alternating between running and walking and no sign of the evil wolf thingies, they deemed it safe to walk again... At least until they found someone, or someone found them.
At last, when their little bodies could go no further, they sat down to rest. Or, that was the original plan, at least. They fell asleep on the ground, exhausted.
A/N: So? Didja like it? Keep in mind that THIS IS UNEDITED AND IS NOT THE WHOLE CHAPTER. As Faerie Elf said before, it is merely a little tidbit (tidbit... I like that word...) of a greater story yet to come. And this time I WILL make her write it, if it kills me!!!
So... On with the story!!!