Hey chapter 1 here lol. Well this is an AU: Alternate Universe Im only that 1s.Well I dedicate this storie to Michiko because she has helped me out in allot of ways. This is my first storie and I hope it turns out ok. Well on to the storie I bet u truley dont want to hear about my boring old life.
Disclaimer: NO I DO NOT OWN ZOIDS WHAT DID YOU THINK OR ANY DRAGONBALL Z but I do belive I own Travis and the idea.
Fiona........get in the........capsual now..........Ill set it for 1000 years then ill hope in the other 1 and meet you, said a young boy. But,No buts this isent the time,interupted the boy.Ok Ill miss you,said Fiona. Ya.......same.....here we got to hurry........my wounds are worse then I thought,said the boy weakly. Fiona then got in the capsual and she allmost instantly went to sleep. So what you waiting for Zeke get in that one Im not going to leave you,said the young man hysterically. The organoid did so and roared as a goodbye. Know its my time,Im sorry dad that I had to use these capsuals I know I failed in my dutys but I will carry out my dutys in the next time period,thought the boy. He then pressed a button and quickly lept into the 3rd and final capsual before the door shut. Before time froze he let a small tear fall and stated his final words. Goodbye Mom....Dad....Fiona
1000 years later.
Van...Van...Van,shouted Vans sister Maria. That boy never stops to think about anything else then exploring. Well boys will be boys he will be back if he wants his food warm,thought Maria.
Ahhhhh why are these guys following me?, Van asked himself trying to get away from 2 Command Wolfs on his hover board. Dang it I'll have to hide in those ruins,thought Van.Van had made it when one of the Command Wolfs shot the entrance and traped Van in. NO,shouted Van. Well at least I know most of these ruins to where I wont get lost,thought Van. Man I'm going to have to explore to find another way out and my hoverboards smashd so no chance of getting out that way,thought Van sadly
After awhile of walking Van came across a door he never seen before. He was getting currious and enterd and walkd down the lit hallway. This is getting freeky lights in trashed ruins not something very normal,said a shocked Van. He came to another door he opend it and found 3 capsuals. WHOA I'm finally going to have my on zoids or should I say zoids.,said Van walking over to a computer. He then made one capsual open and a small silver zoid fell out. Van the walked over to it and thought how cool it was. The zoid then sprang to life and swung its tail at him. Van barley dodging was just coming out of shock when the tail came at him and wacked him across the face. Van was sent into the wall. Van got up and charged at the zoid screaming stop it and dove onto it. the zoid and Van both fell. The zoid then stoped and nodged a different capsual. Van knew what he ment and he opend it but this time a boy came out instead of a zoid.
So how was the first chapter? Tell me what I need to work on and Ill do my best to improve. u can flame but plz dont go all out well Im off R/R.
=)
Disclaimer: NO I DO NOT OWN ZOIDS WHAT DID YOU THINK OR ANY DRAGONBALL Z but I do belive I own Travis and the idea.
Fiona........get in the........capsual now..........Ill set it for 1000 years then ill hope in the other 1 and meet you, said a young boy. But,No buts this isent the time,interupted the boy.Ok Ill miss you,said Fiona. Ya.......same.....here we got to hurry........my wounds are worse then I thought,said the boy weakly. Fiona then got in the capsual and she allmost instantly went to sleep. So what you waiting for Zeke get in that one Im not going to leave you,said the young man hysterically. The organoid did so and roared as a goodbye. Know its my time,Im sorry dad that I had to use these capsuals I know I failed in my dutys but I will carry out my dutys in the next time period,thought the boy. He then pressed a button and quickly lept into the 3rd and final capsual before the door shut. Before time froze he let a small tear fall and stated his final words. Goodbye Mom....Dad....Fiona
1000 years later.
Van...Van...Van,shouted Vans sister Maria. That boy never stops to think about anything else then exploring. Well boys will be boys he will be back if he wants his food warm,thought Maria.
Ahhhhh why are these guys following me?, Van asked himself trying to get away from 2 Command Wolfs on his hover board. Dang it I'll have to hide in those ruins,thought Van.Van had made it when one of the Command Wolfs shot the entrance and traped Van in. NO,shouted Van. Well at least I know most of these ruins to where I wont get lost,thought Van. Man I'm going to have to explore to find another way out and my hoverboards smashd so no chance of getting out that way,thought Van sadly
After awhile of walking Van came across a door he never seen before. He was getting currious and enterd and walkd down the lit hallway. This is getting freeky lights in trashed ruins not something very normal,said a shocked Van. He came to another door he opend it and found 3 capsuals. WHOA I'm finally going to have my on zoids or should I say zoids.,said Van walking over to a computer. He then made one capsual open and a small silver zoid fell out. Van the walked over to it and thought how cool it was. The zoid then sprang to life and swung its tail at him. Van barley dodging was just coming out of shock when the tail came at him and wacked him across the face. Van was sent into the wall. Van got up and charged at the zoid screaming stop it and dove onto it. the zoid and Van both fell. The zoid then stoped and nodged a different capsual. Van knew what he ment and he opend it but this time a boy came out instead of a zoid.
So how was the first chapter? Tell me what I need to work on and Ill do my best to improve. u can flame but plz dont go all out well Im off R/R.
=)