WARNING: MAY CONTAIN SPOILERS! DO NOT READ IF YOU DID NOT READ IT THE FIRST TIME!

RikkuxStarr: Yes, yes! It's true, I revised this story 'cause it stunk! Yes! There will still be confusing things in it, but you'll get it by reading my other stories after this one.

NOTE: Please don't ask me why Cloud (from FFVII) is in this or something near the end. If ya really wanna know, PLEASE keep reading. I've gotten a few emails asking why. It WILL be explained in Zutto! Really! Totally serious. Even in the THIRD ONE that's coming out as soon as I finish everything else I'm working on. Just think, which other game is Cloud in? Hm…I wonder. There might be a fourth one if I feel like writing some more.

As you can see, I'm a very impatient person and I can't be asked the same thing over and over again without getting mad. Sorry about this. It's just me. .

Mistakes I made the first time around:

-I did some of "real Emotion's" lyrics wrong.

-Zurvan is a god, not a place.

-Zeal's suppose to have had a heart on her chest, not a diamond.

-I shouldn't have put our own RP in there, but it's fixed now.

-I should have paid more attention to how the girls switched dresspheres.

-Besaid's "waiting room" was not Besaid's, more like Kilika's.

-I should have put a link to the Al-Bhed that I wanted you to know.

-Zeal became Kid too quickly, there should have been an event to trigger her memories.

-Strife wouldn't have punched Zeal in the first place, but that's also fixed now!

-There should have been more of a description of the Calm Lands and Mt. Gagazet.

-From Zanarkand on…it just stunk.

-The very ending, very good! But fixed.

Now…get to the revision!

People I want to thank:

Wisdomk6906 aka Kaitie: My best friend of all uber-universe! She's encouraged me a lot, really. I'll get writing as soon as I find time! Really!

Other people: A lot of the stuff I think about in my stories actually comes from real personal things. Really. Though it's in a male's point of view, Serge still gets the same emotions and feelings as I would. I'm not saying I think like a guy. I'd just like to thank all the people who've inspired me or made me go through all this, or think it anyway.