Oh wow, I actually got reviews. That's so exciting. Thank you so much
(tear) it means so much to me. Well, I got some advice from Ildera and I'll
try and follow it. So this is the next chapter at my attempt for a fan fic.
So here goes nothing..
After a couple of days of being locked in the brig, seeing no one except those who came to feed her, Leah was finally summoned to the captain's quarters.
"Miss. Tempest, please have a seat. Let me introduce myself properly, as I already know who you are." The captain greeted her. "I am Captain Kegan Wallace, and this is my ship the Mists of Doom."
Leah ignored all he said and continued to stand. Looking straight at Captain Wallace she said quietly but firmly, "Let me go."
Chuckling Wallace spoke, "Now missy I can't be doing that. You've got something I want and need."
Hiding her confusion she spoke again, "I have nothing; all my possessions were burned in your God-forsaken raid." Leah stood and headed for the door.
"SIT DOWN!" Wallace yelled, causing Leah to jump. She slowly turned and sat.
"Now you are going to listen to me, for I haven't finished." He paused momentarily. "Your great-grandmother, Bridget, possessed a stone of great power. I know what you and your family are, and I know you are the next to possess the stone."
"I know nothing of this stone you speak of and I posses nothing." Leah responded stubbornly, determined not to let him have the stone.
"Don't try my patience. Give me the stone and no harm will come to you." Wallace was coming closer and closer.
A little alarmed Leah spoke once more, "I highly doubt that. Even if I did know of the stone you speak of I wouldn't tell you."
"Oh I think you know the stone, for it is hanging around your neck." Wallace laughed at the surprised look on Leah's face.
As Wallace reached for the necklace, a surge of energy from the stone blasted Wallace against the wall behind him, knocking Liana unconscious.
Ildera, was that better? So that's all for this chapter, my mind kinda stopped. Hopefully you like it and it's easy to read..umm mind overload..If my mind clears I'll try for another chapter tonight.
After a couple of days of being locked in the brig, seeing no one except those who came to feed her, Leah was finally summoned to the captain's quarters.
"Miss. Tempest, please have a seat. Let me introduce myself properly, as I already know who you are." The captain greeted her. "I am Captain Kegan Wallace, and this is my ship the Mists of Doom."
Leah ignored all he said and continued to stand. Looking straight at Captain Wallace she said quietly but firmly, "Let me go."
Chuckling Wallace spoke, "Now missy I can't be doing that. You've got something I want and need."
Hiding her confusion she spoke again, "I have nothing; all my possessions were burned in your God-forsaken raid." Leah stood and headed for the door.
"SIT DOWN!" Wallace yelled, causing Leah to jump. She slowly turned and sat.
"Now you are going to listen to me, for I haven't finished." He paused momentarily. "Your great-grandmother, Bridget, possessed a stone of great power. I know what you and your family are, and I know you are the next to possess the stone."
"I know nothing of this stone you speak of and I posses nothing." Leah responded stubbornly, determined not to let him have the stone.
"Don't try my patience. Give me the stone and no harm will come to you." Wallace was coming closer and closer.
A little alarmed Leah spoke once more, "I highly doubt that. Even if I did know of the stone you speak of I wouldn't tell you."
"Oh I think you know the stone, for it is hanging around your neck." Wallace laughed at the surprised look on Leah's face.
As Wallace reached for the necklace, a surge of energy from the stone blasted Wallace against the wall behind him, knocking Liana unconscious.
Ildera, was that better? So that's all for this chapter, my mind kinda stopped. Hopefully you like it and it's easy to read..umm mind overload..If my mind clears I'll try for another chapter tonight.