-Here are my replies to some reviews.
TuxedoMac-Thank you, thank you. bows I know you have no idea what is going on. That is the whole point. I'm tired of predictable stories. Me and my friends, Mare na Var, The Serpent Guardian/Wynnlylei, and Shijin no Yoake, have 'teamed up' to confuse the heck out of everyone. If you don't believe me try and talk coherently with us at lunch or on the Internet... we even have our own language (which everyone really has, but we came up with stuff for) called Inamish and me and Mare na Var made two computer programs for it. Beginners and Advanced Inamish, great times, having all our friends add to it. Disturbed, that's a new one, I've had strange, odd, crazy (which is curable), insane (which isn't), and weird. Er... ok I don't think I forgot say no more, cause that would be the American way of saying it and I'm Australian... unfortunately living in America... anyway no it is definitely hint hint nudge nudge wink wink nothing more nothing less. Say it out loud it makes sense... well anyway thanks for the review. You probably stopped reading this at Inamish, cause I'm confuzzling you. So go on and read this chapter. It gets REALLY interesting in this one...
The Serpent Guardian – thanks FOR FINALLY REVIEWING PROPARLY!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you better update in the near future or I'll have to stand over you while you type... talk to you tomorrow.
Evil Muhahahaha- Love the name, thanks for the review, every little thing counts. Hope you enjoy.
Michelle – thanks for the review, its not that I don't know grammar and spelling, it's just that I can't be bothered to get a beta. Thanks anyway.
Mare na Var – WOULD YOU ONCE WRITE A PROPER REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Whatever, thanks anyway. Just means that you are at least reading my stuff. Talk to you tomorrow.
Makotochi – thanks for the review, hope you like this one. You and everyone else may get a bit confused...
Starlight Charm – Well actually they are my friends... but I made them into animagi. It will get explained as the story continues. I'm actually writing one of the harder chapters where I explain what is happening... you'll find out when you read. Hope you like.
bloodthirstypigion - whistles 'inconspicuously' maybe... well actually I'm not sure. I may but the next chapter gets interesting, as you'll see at the end of this one.
-Well there you are. I'm typing this up at 10 to 12 so if I mess up, sorry. Well hope you enjoy, and this I dedicate to TuxedoMac for being the first to review my story after chapter 4 was only being up for...3 hours. Enjoy chapter 5, teehee.
Chapter 5 – The Vision Harry POV
Harry was watching in fascination as the three animals talked. 'It's almost as if they have been friends for life or something,' when his scar twinged. His skin ripped up into fiery shreds as he silently screamed in pain. His head practically ripped open from the pain in his scar.
((Harry, are you alright?)) was all he heard before a second wave of pain hit him and he fainted into blissful unconsciousness.
The soothing blackness was disturbed when he landed on hard, slippery rocks. After nearly falling flat on his face Harry found his balance and looked around. He was standing on a cliff infront of a dark and gloomy castle. Then, as if he apparated, he was inside the building and looked at the last thing on Earth that he wanted to see... 20 dementors standing in all their glory before the one and only, Voldemort. He looked every bit as much like what he remembered from every nightmare he had had since June and a feeling of dread that had been building in him all summer now reared its ugly head. He could feel the dark magic rolling off Voldemort in thick, opaque waves. The dementors were sucking away at this like it was a feast behind glass hoping for their crumb.
Harry could hear the noise of their raspy breathes being sucked through what they called a mouth. He started to feel numb and his breath came out as mist. But the voice of his mother that he usually heard did not come like usual, 'Probably cause I'm looking through Voldemort,' Harry thought as he tried to make sense of the scene before him. Voldemort opened his mouth to say something when Harry collapsed to the cold stone floor, which became a black void when Harry's body began to convulse with pain. He opened his mouth to scream, when suddenly it was all gone.
He opened his eyes expecting Voldemort to be standing over him, laughing at his weakness but instead found a different scene. It seemed as though he was back in the Gryffindor common room. There was a warm fire roaring in the large fireplace and three comfy, deep chairs surrounding it. Harry was on the stone floor a few feet from the said area. He was wearing the clothes he had been wearing when he had fainted. 'Wow, OK, where am I?' Harry thought as he slowly sat up, wincing when he knocked his hand against his scar. He brought his hand back and saw blood. "Fuck," Harry said a little too loud; the sound reverberated around the quiet room.
"Oye, watch your language mister," a strangely familiar voice said with a hint of humor behind him. Harry whipped his head around and started to dig for his wand, when he realized he didn't have it. What he saw next nearly made him faint again.
There behind him, was his mother and father. His mother was beautifully clothed in a plain, deep forest green dress that pooled at her feet and matched her eyes. His father was wearing soft, sheep skin pants and at the sight of what was attached to his shirtless chest Harry's mouth dropped.
-BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH cough cough Yes I know I'm evil. Dodges objects being thrown Sorry you guys, but I had to. The voices in my head said 'Leave them and see how they like it' I've read sooo many stories with cliffies... that and the next chapter is going to take a while to write. Hopefully it will be up by this weekend. HAPPY HALLOWEEN, to all whom are aware. OK, so review and guess what is on James' back. If someone, OTHER THAN MY CLOSE FRIENDS, can guess it, I'll have you make a brief appearance in my story. Talk to you later. DON"T FORGET TO REVIEW!!!!!!! (Damn my author's notes are longer than my fic at the moment) wipes sweat from forehead whhhhoooo
TuxedoMac-Thank you, thank you. bows I know you have no idea what is going on. That is the whole point. I'm tired of predictable stories. Me and my friends, Mare na Var, The Serpent Guardian/Wynnlylei, and Shijin no Yoake, have 'teamed up' to confuse the heck out of everyone. If you don't believe me try and talk coherently with us at lunch or on the Internet... we even have our own language (which everyone really has, but we came up with stuff for) called Inamish and me and Mare na Var made two computer programs for it. Beginners and Advanced Inamish, great times, having all our friends add to it. Disturbed, that's a new one, I've had strange, odd, crazy (which is curable), insane (which isn't), and weird. Er... ok I don't think I forgot say no more, cause that would be the American way of saying it and I'm Australian... unfortunately living in America... anyway no it is definitely hint hint nudge nudge wink wink nothing more nothing less. Say it out loud it makes sense... well anyway thanks for the review. You probably stopped reading this at Inamish, cause I'm confuzzling you. So go on and read this chapter. It gets REALLY interesting in this one...
The Serpent Guardian – thanks FOR FINALLY REVIEWING PROPARLY!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you better update in the near future or I'll have to stand over you while you type... talk to you tomorrow.
Evil Muhahahaha- Love the name, thanks for the review, every little thing counts. Hope you enjoy.
Michelle – thanks for the review, its not that I don't know grammar and spelling, it's just that I can't be bothered to get a beta. Thanks anyway.
Mare na Var – WOULD YOU ONCE WRITE A PROPER REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Whatever, thanks anyway. Just means that you are at least reading my stuff. Talk to you tomorrow.
Makotochi – thanks for the review, hope you like this one. You and everyone else may get a bit confused...
Starlight Charm – Well actually they are my friends... but I made them into animagi. It will get explained as the story continues. I'm actually writing one of the harder chapters where I explain what is happening... you'll find out when you read. Hope you like.
bloodthirstypigion - whistles 'inconspicuously' maybe... well actually I'm not sure. I may but the next chapter gets interesting, as you'll see at the end of this one.
-Well there you are. I'm typing this up at 10 to 12 so if I mess up, sorry. Well hope you enjoy, and this I dedicate to TuxedoMac for being the first to review my story after chapter 4 was only being up for...3 hours. Enjoy chapter 5, teehee.
Chapter 5 – The Vision Harry POV
Harry was watching in fascination as the three animals talked. 'It's almost as if they have been friends for life or something,' when his scar twinged. His skin ripped up into fiery shreds as he silently screamed in pain. His head practically ripped open from the pain in his scar.
((Harry, are you alright?)) was all he heard before a second wave of pain hit him and he fainted into blissful unconsciousness.
The soothing blackness was disturbed when he landed on hard, slippery rocks. After nearly falling flat on his face Harry found his balance and looked around. He was standing on a cliff infront of a dark and gloomy castle. Then, as if he apparated, he was inside the building and looked at the last thing on Earth that he wanted to see... 20 dementors standing in all their glory before the one and only, Voldemort. He looked every bit as much like what he remembered from every nightmare he had had since June and a feeling of dread that had been building in him all summer now reared its ugly head. He could feel the dark magic rolling off Voldemort in thick, opaque waves. The dementors were sucking away at this like it was a feast behind glass hoping for their crumb.
Harry could hear the noise of their raspy breathes being sucked through what they called a mouth. He started to feel numb and his breath came out as mist. But the voice of his mother that he usually heard did not come like usual, 'Probably cause I'm looking through Voldemort,' Harry thought as he tried to make sense of the scene before him. Voldemort opened his mouth to say something when Harry collapsed to the cold stone floor, which became a black void when Harry's body began to convulse with pain. He opened his mouth to scream, when suddenly it was all gone.
He opened his eyes expecting Voldemort to be standing over him, laughing at his weakness but instead found a different scene. It seemed as though he was back in the Gryffindor common room. There was a warm fire roaring in the large fireplace and three comfy, deep chairs surrounding it. Harry was on the stone floor a few feet from the said area. He was wearing the clothes he had been wearing when he had fainted. 'Wow, OK, where am I?' Harry thought as he slowly sat up, wincing when he knocked his hand against his scar. He brought his hand back and saw blood. "Fuck," Harry said a little too loud; the sound reverberated around the quiet room.
"Oye, watch your language mister," a strangely familiar voice said with a hint of humor behind him. Harry whipped his head around and started to dig for his wand, when he realized he didn't have it. What he saw next nearly made him faint again.
There behind him, was his mother and father. His mother was beautifully clothed in a plain, deep forest green dress that pooled at her feet and matched her eyes. His father was wearing soft, sheep skin pants and at the sight of what was attached to his shirtless chest Harry's mouth dropped.
-BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH cough cough Yes I know I'm evil. Dodges objects being thrown Sorry you guys, but I had to. The voices in my head said 'Leave them and see how they like it' I've read sooo many stories with cliffies... that and the next chapter is going to take a while to write. Hopefully it will be up by this weekend. HAPPY HALLOWEEN, to all whom are aware. OK, so review and guess what is on James' back. If someone, OTHER THAN MY CLOSE FRIENDS, can guess it, I'll have you make a brief appearance in my story. Talk to you later. DON"T FORGET TO REVIEW!!!!!!! (Damn my author's notes are longer than my fic at the moment) wipes sweat from forehead whhhhoooo