Note: This is my first Fan Fiction, I am new to the site
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters created by Frank Herbert, I only own the few characters that I make up (they will be labeled as they come along)
A World Of His Own
(Written as a sequel to Dune, instead of Dune Messiah)
Maud'Dib's POV
Now that they worship me, I can crush their petty empire, no one shall stand against me, they would kill themselves for me. My master wanted me to kill them immediately, with force, but now, by my choice, they trust me, making the job all the easier. I have studied the prophecy long enough to imitate it. It took me seven years of secret study to learn about the Fremen religion.
They shall bow before me, cowering at my excellence. All, even my master, shall fear me. Many people will not fear me forever, BECUASE THEY WILL NOT EXIST! Maniacal laughter
"My love, what is going on, are you all right?" Chani interrupted as she walked in the door
"Just a recording of the old Barron Harkonnen, my love."
I approach to caress her, thinking 'Master, how much longer will I have to stay with this worthless woman?'
'You came up with the idea' said a voice that he knew quite well in his head (note: NEW CHARACTER, MINE)
'This is good, she thinks I know things before she tells me, they all do, which means you, my telekinesis friend, are doing your job.'
'More news my master'
'Get on with it'
'Yes, my master, your "precious" Chani wishes to give birth'
'With spice transit?'
'Yes'
'So she believed that "water of life"(or not!) that I "drank", Ha, it would be her undoing!'
'Yes.... my master'
'What, do you mock me?'
'Oh no, master'
'Stop listening to my mind, I will call the word worm if I need you'
I walk away from my "beloved" Chani, looking saddened
Note: Well, what did you think, please review, should I continue?
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