Riddick soon found out that Alerra had connections. As he followed her down the steps he entered a world that looked like none other. The place was filled with creatures beyond compare and he and the girl were the only humans or human resembling creatures to be found.
A serpent like man named Kraiten showed Riddick to his room and then left him alone. Riddick sat down and decided against his will to sleep in order to allow his head time to heal. He grumbled as he drifted off to sleep ………..
Kyra's vivid face was angry as she slammed her floor against the trap door from wence the shooting had come..."Err" she swung her hair back as she looked at him.
As they ran on he turned and asked her, "What was that, you don't care if you live or die?"…"if I kill them first. Not really "she replied. "Well maybe I do" he said evenly.
Then the dream changed and he saw her cold dead face.
Riddick woke up sweating on the mat that had been supplied for him. He was breathing hard. He looked up and saw the girl sitting in the door way.
"What are you doing here?" he asks in his low voice.
"I came to tell you that I can help you find your friend." She answered.
"What do you mean?"
"The girl you dreamed about. I can help you find her. I made the journey once before, I can do it again."
Riddick stood up shakily. "Show me" he said.
Alerra smiled, "let's go"
They traveled quickly. Riddick was surprised once again by the girl's speed. They ended their search when they came to a deep pit. "All those killed by the lord marshal go here unless he takes their soul" Alerra explained.
Riddick headed in to the pit. He saw that in it was a pillar of fire that glowed blue and held the bodies of those killed. He saw Kyra's body floating in it. He started to reach in when Alerra walked up behind him. "So this is she that you risked life and love to save. I will get her out" and with that she reached into the flame and pulled the limp form of Kyra's soul from the fire. "Do you have her body?" Alerra asked. "No Riddick answered angrily.
Alerra nodded and smiled. "I knew you would come, Riddick. You were my hope since came to this planet with the man you killed. I was his slave. I was told to obey. I was the reason he made it through. Then he left me and an elemental told me that you would come and rescue me. But now I see that I will never leave. Only my body will." She smiled and reached down and touched the head of Kyra. Kyra's soul leaked into Alerra's body and Alerra's soul escaped into the Pillar.
Soon after that; Kyra and Riddick left. I do not know what became of them next. I only know of my sister's brave death and the reincarnation of Riddick's love, Kyra.
I know that it is a bit corny but I like it and I hope that you do too. Please tell me how I did and give me ideas on what to write next.