A/N: Anyone wonder why I'm in a bad mood…? -_-^

I got a flame so I asked what was wrong with my stories (of course I was polite) but look what I got back!

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Here's the reason why it was so tough to read. Yes there were spelling errors, and a lot of them. Why would I want to take the time to read something with so many spelling errors. As the read, how would I know, much less care how much time you had to make it. Writting, and how well you do it is a reflection on what kind of person you are. If you make spelling errors, gramerical errors, make poor sentence structure, vauge detail as to where the person is, or what they're doing, why would I take the time to read it? Yeah, no one is putting a gun to my head to read it. But you put it on fanfiction.net, meaning you wanted someone to read it. That tells me also that you posted it because it was worth reading.

Here's my plan of correction. Scrap the entire story. Don't listen to what everyone else on your review list is telling you. You're not doing a great job. They're being polite. After you delete your story, rewrite it. But rewrite it with the above points in mind. Make it something I, the reader would want to read. Also, scrap all the cliche anime stuff. Get rid of any original charecter with a Japanese name. YOu may be asian for all I know. It doesn't matter. As a writer you should be honest with yourself. You speak english. From what I can tell, rather well. Lose any romance in this particular story you might have too. That's also too cliche. A lot of Cowboy bebops charm was that Faye had a thing for Spike, but nothing ever happened.

I could tell you more, but I'm busy writting my cowboy bebop trigun fan fic right now. I write fan fics when I'm having writers block. If you write what you know, you'll be a good writer.

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You guys don't really think this do you?! You're not just being polite are you? I can take the truth and if I'm this bad them I'll trash my stories and be pissed at the world for giving me cursed writing skills. I know I make mistakes but look at how many this guy left in his email! That's more mistakes in his email than all the mistakes in two of my chapters! I wasn't the least bit rude to him when I asked why my stories bit, how mean and rude! (aka. I think he was a complete ass).

Compare this with the nicest review I got:

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Hello,
I have read all the stories before this one and I have one thing to say. . .or give blatant praise. ^-^ How about that? I love all your stories. You are incredible. I would just like to compliment of how talented you are. Much admirations are evoked from you to me. You have my eternal admiration. This fic is propitious and prodigious. The flow of words are pageantry display of imagery, magniloquence, and intellegence. You truly deserve every bit of praise ever said to you. Your unwonted proficient endeavoring eminent conspicouos writing skills are one of the best I have EVER seen. Your talent within the writing exceed the limits. Simply amazing, if I say so myself.

There is no need to belittle yourself by saying you don't deserve every praise given to you. Any lavish praise and blatant adoration given to you is pavcity in the amount of proficience,and endeavoring effort put in this fic. You are a goddess surely in the writing world. Your writing talent is far beyond what I've ever witnessed in my short life time. All I can say is that this is truly incredible. Your skills rival that of the most brillant writers in the whole world. Your talents never, ever cease to amaze me. You are truly one of kind. You will remain an inspiration. Always. Forever.

I can say with no hesitation that you are a true artist. I myself aspire to be a writer and you have greatly inspired me. I honestly hope I will one day obtain skills even remotely close to your talents! As people must say to you often I am absolutely blown away by your talents. Your words are so eloquent they make me feel as though I am insignificant. I am truly envious! Not only do you have yourself yet another fan, but someone who aspires to be at least half as talented as yourself!

Please don't confuse me with a mere sycophant, but I can't resist to eulogize about your exquisite literate skills on reading your fics. Once again this authentic placid talent that stirs in the abysmal depths of your mind should be commended as I hope I have stressed enough. I am captivated by your work. I've found precious few who could match your talent. I am grateful for your sharing work of beauty, mystery, dark poetry and magic in prose and imagery.

Thanks for gracing us most mercifully with this work of art of which I will endeavour to wait with patient enthrallment for your next chapter. I await your most anticipated chapter.

And so I must bid you farewell ". . .leaving rose petals on the floor for you to find when the day expires. . . " which I hope are worthy for such a person of your skills.

"Fare thee well and if forever still fare thee well."

You are also my new favourite author! ^-^x Amazing absolutely amazing *bows as she departs back to the shadows of whence she came*

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What the hell am I supposed to believe?! In the one year of writing I've done, this is the first time I've EVER received a flame. So I suppose that you guys like me but I can't help but wonder…

Anyways, sorry for the long note! Enjoy?

PLEASE REVIEW!!!

UnBREAKable

Chapter 3

Kat gazed out the window wondering what her daughter and her friends had found out. Rei had told her they had read an entry from her diary and Kat had begun to panic. Only when Rei told Kat that they were confused by the passage did she calm down. Saku apologized again for letting the teens get passed her.

"Saku! I don't blame you! At least they didn't see too much," Kat said.

They'll ask questions now that they know about Kenshin and the others. Rei warned.

"I won't answer," Kat told the wolf confidently.

They'll find out sooner or later. the wolf pointed out.

Kat sighed and fiddled with the bed frame, "I just don't feel ready to tell anyone else yet."

^_^

Sakura opened the secret passage between her and Katakana's room, "Think of anything?" Katakana shook her head and moved to let the other members of Bishoujo, their small band, by. (A/N: They're named after their parent's band, Bishounen.)

"I looked through the library's records of all our families. Found nothing," Katakana said as she sat down on Sakura's bed.

"Did you get busted for going back?" Thomas asked Sakura.

She shook her head, "Not yet anyways. Mom's too mad to even speak to me."

Kageunsei ruffled Saku's fur as he sat down next to the amber wolf, "You wouldn't happen to know anything about the real Kageunsei would you?" The wolf stiffened instantly as all the muscles in her body contracted. The wolf managed to slip off the couch.

I know nothing. was the blunt answer.

Thomas lifted an eyebrow, "It's a bit too obvious she knows something."

"Leave her be," Kageunsei said, "Whatever it is, she didn't seem to like the subject."

"But I wan-" Sakura was cut off when she got the chills.

Goosebumps coated her bear arms and the temperature in the room dropped. The window flew open and banged against the wall. Everyone's attention turned to the drapes swirling in the wind. The room was dead quiet as the group sat staring confused at the window.

Sakura shrugged off the strange feeling, "Must have been-"

A figure appeared in the center of the room and effectively cut Sakura off. It was a man, red haired, purple-eyed wearing the strangest clothes any of them had ever seen. He had wings and a halo and gazed at them as if he had never seen people before.

He stared at them a moment longer before falling over with shock, "ORO?!"

(A/N: Yes short but you can blame my flamer for that! Damn flamers! But I suppose it was bound to happen sooner or later… -,.- I suppose I can only learn with flames. But do I really miss that much on spelling? DON'T ANSWER THAT! I'm fourteen for crying out loud! I haven't had that much experience in writing. English no longer teaches spelling and grammar either. I'm sick of people telling me about my spelling! You're entitled to read these. It's not like I have you at gun point! I'm starting to get pissed… so I'll just stop now. (DAMN MY SPELLING!) PLEASE REVIEW!!!)