Pharaoh's Egyptian Arabian: Hi everyone! I need some help from you all. Since this story is really getting wordy,
should I change the rating to R or keep it at PG-13? Tell me people! I need some help! Also, should this story have a sequel? I thinkin' about it, but I'm not sure. Well, enough blabbing. On with the story!

Mai sat on the bed and cried. The memories kept coming back to her.

"Mai, they've found us."

"No."

"Their going to take me."

"I don't want you to go Joey."

They heard the doorknob being jolted around. Joey started to cry.

"Mai, there's one more thing I'd like you to do for me."

"What! Tell me Joey!"

Joey leaned forward and kissed her very deeply. It only seemed like seconds to where the door couldn't take anymore.
The door opened. Exposing the couple. But they didn't care. They were enjoying one another's company.

Then Joey was pulled away from Mai, breaking their kiss.

"Joey, I need you. Joey! Come back!"

But Joey never came back. Soon Mai heard footsteps. She turned her head to see who it was.

"Joey? Is it you?"

"No."

The voice seemed awfully familiar to Mai, but she couldn't place who's voice it was.

"Mai, it's me. Devin, your ex-boyfriend."

"Devin! What are you doing here?! I don't love you! I love Joey and you took him away from me!"

"Exactly. I wanted you and now I have you."

"I'll never be yours!"

"That's the same thing Joey said. But you are mine."

"No!"

"Yes!"

"If you come quitely to my demands, then I won't hurt Joey."

"Where is he? Tell me!"

Devin grinned and called for someone. Mai saw Joey being held by another guy.

"Joey!"

"Mai! Let go of me you ass!"

"Let go of him you monster!"

"Mai, this is my father."

Mai gasped at Joey's words.

"Why do you do this to your own son? It's not his fault your wife left you, it's yours!"

"Mai! Please, don't fight him! He'll kill you!"

Devin pulled a knife out of his pocket and held it up against Joey's throat.

"Now, if you give into my demands, I won't kill Joey."

"I'll do anything. Just don't hurt him."

Joey started to cry. He knew what this monster was going to do to her.

"Mai! He's going to rape you!"

"You bastard!"

Devin jumped at Joey but stopped short as Mai grabbed him and flung him to the side. Devin recovered and knocked Mai down.
He held her down by her wrists. Mai struggled to get out of his grip, but it was no use. Joey looked at Mai and saw her trying to break free.

"Joey! Help me!"

"Mai!"

Devin was advancing on Mai. Joey fought his dad as hard as he could so he could help Mai. Mai was screaming for Joey to save her. Finally, Joey kicked his father and his dad let go of him. He ran over to Mai and punched Devin right in the jaw.

"Mai, come here."

Mai got up and limped over to Joey. Joey held her comfortably in his arms.

"Mai, are you okay?"

"Yeah, I'm just hurt from where his hands gripped my wrists."

Devin got up and went right torwards Joey. Joey kicked him right where it hurts. Devin fell over in pain. Joey looked at his father with hate filled eyes.

"Get out of here! Now!"

"I'll get you one day."

His father and Devin left in a hurry. Joey sat Mai down on the bed and made sure that she was okay.

"Mai did he do anything else to you? Did he..."

"No, Joey. He didn't and I'm thankful."

"Me too Mai."

"Joey can you stay with me forever?"

Mai put his hand against her cheek and smiled. Joey smiled back.

"Of course Mai."

"Thank you!"

She jumped into his arms and hugged him tightly. Joey returned the hug. Mai kissed Joey so hard that she knocked him over on his back onto the bed. They broke apart and smiled at each other. Mai looked down at the man whom she loved. Joey looked up at the woman he loved. Mai brought herself down again and kissed Joey once again. They were truley a perfect couple.
It was amazing that to people's lives were so miserable, yet then it changed. Their darkness was turned into light and they had no worries left in their minds.

Pharaoh's Egyptian Arabian: Okay I'm going to make a sequel to this so looke for it soon. In the meantime, should I keep this PG-13 or change it to R? Tell me people. Patricia is my inspirtion for this story especially. I wasn't really sure that I could write romance novels, then she gave me the inspiration to write this. Oh and for any of you Seto and Serenity fans, that's the next story.

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