I do not own any of the Dirty Dancing characters, this is just a story that
I came up with when I finished watching the movie and wondered what might
have happened to Johnny and Baby after that unforgettable summer together.
Please review, I'm very interested to hear what people think, and if there is anything I should improve on. Thanks.
Chapter 2
So finally after months and months of waiting the day finally came and we were ready to leave for our vacation. I was up early that morning, showered and dressed before the sun rose. We all piled into the car before noon and were on our way. Mom, daddy, Lisa and I sat in silence most of the way there. I think daddy didn't know what to say, he knew that Lisa and I were getting too old for family vacations and the only reason that we were really going along was to see the boys, and not to spend time with him and mom. I think daddy will never really get over the fact that in a single moment he had been replaced as the most important man in my life, I know that in his mind I'll always be daddy's little girl.
It was a long drive out to Kellerman's but even though it felt like an eternity we did eventually get there. As we drove into the main driveway, I could hear music playing and children's laughter off in the distance, all kinds of memories came flooding back to me from the previous year. I specifically remembered that first day at the resort when mom forced us all to attend a dance class in the gazebo. I had no rhythm back then at all and I wasn't only tripping over my own feet but everyone else's too.
The brakes of the car squealed as we stopped at the main entrance and all got out. Immediately a bellboy came out and began to help us with our bags, he introduced himself to me, "Hi, I'm Christian." "Hello" I replied, "I'm Baby. Christian was tall and had a thin build; he had dark almost black hair and blue eyes that seemed to go on forever. I stopped quickly as I realized that I was staring at him, what was wrong with me? I was in love with Johnny and had no desire for anyone else, but I suppose I was only eighteen and not dead or anything so what did it hurt if I just looked a little?
On our way to our cabin we ran into Neil Kellerman, the grandson of Max Kellerman who owned the resort. Neil was the same as always, talking about himself the entire time and all the things that he'd been doing all year long. He didn't look like he'd changed at all either. Still 5 foot nothing, clean cut and stuffed into what was probably a boy's size suit. "Baby!" he called as we approached, "it's so great to see you. You'll never guess what I've been up to this past year..." Neil rambled on for what seemed like forever, I don't even remember most of what he said, I was too caught up in the fact that I was going to see Johnny. As we walked down the stone path to our room I scanned every inch of the grounds, if Johnny was there I didn't want to miss him.
Please review, I'm very interested to hear what people think, and if there is anything I should improve on. Thanks.
Chapter 2
So finally after months and months of waiting the day finally came and we were ready to leave for our vacation. I was up early that morning, showered and dressed before the sun rose. We all piled into the car before noon and were on our way. Mom, daddy, Lisa and I sat in silence most of the way there. I think daddy didn't know what to say, he knew that Lisa and I were getting too old for family vacations and the only reason that we were really going along was to see the boys, and not to spend time with him and mom. I think daddy will never really get over the fact that in a single moment he had been replaced as the most important man in my life, I know that in his mind I'll always be daddy's little girl.
It was a long drive out to Kellerman's but even though it felt like an eternity we did eventually get there. As we drove into the main driveway, I could hear music playing and children's laughter off in the distance, all kinds of memories came flooding back to me from the previous year. I specifically remembered that first day at the resort when mom forced us all to attend a dance class in the gazebo. I had no rhythm back then at all and I wasn't only tripping over my own feet but everyone else's too.
The brakes of the car squealed as we stopped at the main entrance and all got out. Immediately a bellboy came out and began to help us with our bags, he introduced himself to me, "Hi, I'm Christian." "Hello" I replied, "I'm Baby. Christian was tall and had a thin build; he had dark almost black hair and blue eyes that seemed to go on forever. I stopped quickly as I realized that I was staring at him, what was wrong with me? I was in love with Johnny and had no desire for anyone else, but I suppose I was only eighteen and not dead or anything so what did it hurt if I just looked a little?
On our way to our cabin we ran into Neil Kellerman, the grandson of Max Kellerman who owned the resort. Neil was the same as always, talking about himself the entire time and all the things that he'd been doing all year long. He didn't look like he'd changed at all either. Still 5 foot nothing, clean cut and stuffed into what was probably a boy's size suit. "Baby!" he called as we approached, "it's so great to see you. You'll never guess what I've been up to this past year..." Neil rambled on for what seemed like forever, I don't even remember most of what he said, I was too caught up in the fact that I was going to see Johnny. As we walked down the stone path to our room I scanned every inch of the grounds, if Johnny was there I didn't want to miss him.