Yeah! My first fanfic with 8 chapters and beyond!!
8:49pm - Empire State Building
They rushed in the building wearing their spy jumpsuit.
"So how are we gonna find him?" Clover asked "This is a big building"
Sam takes out her compowder and types in Lloyd's cell phone number "They're in the 55th floor"
8:55pm - Empire State Building, 55th Floor
They got off the lift to find out that the 55th floor is and office, there was no one around.
"Are you sure you're right Sammy?"Alex asked
"Yah, there's no one here" Clover concluded
"But the signal of my compowder says it's...." Sam spots something moving under a desk "That must me Mr Lloyd"
The run towards the table. it was Mr Lloyd
"Are you okay sir?" Alex asked as they help untie him
Clover removes the cloth covering Rupert's mouth "It's a trap!"
"You got that right" Said a voice behind them. The girls look behind to see Micheal Lloyd
"Mikey? You did this?" Sam asked sadly
"No I'm not Mike" Mike pulls out his face to reveal that Mike is Tim Scam "Remember me Samantha?"
"Tim Scam! Or Mac Simt, or Tim Simt, mac tim.." Alex figured
"It's Tim Simt.., Mac Scam.. Aggrah! Tim Scam!" Scam answered
"You jerk.. Hey Sam, aren't you gonna say something?" Clover asked
Instead, Sam's jaw dropped and her eyes wide open. She was in complete shock
"As you can see, your friend is shock. We sure had a great time huh Sam? After we go out, kissed you and even slept with you" Scam said
"What?" Clover and Alex said
Sam started to sweat and gives a worried look "Well... I..I"
"After all that, I think I've fallen in love with you Sam" Scam said (Note I know another fanfic which has a Sam and Scam thing. But the way Tim falls in love with Sam is very different. And I wasn't thinking of that fanfic while typing it)
"No..No" Sam cried and walked backwards slowly "I won't accept you no matter what!" She shouted
"Very well..." Scam said closing his eyes. He snapped his fingers and 3 men dressed in black came out and grab the spies. One of them is Chris
9:04pm - Empire State Building, 55th Floor
Still at the same room, Sam, Clover, Alex and Rupert were tied up against the wall with titanium rings on their wrists and ankles, while Scam and his men made a few calls on the telephone. After doing so, he goes towards the spies
"It's no use girls, The things that are holding you are made of titanium and plus, I've got your gadgets with me." Scam explained
"So what are you up to this time?" Alex asked
"After the incident with your mothers, I went to prison again and escaped. So I decided not to run into you 3 again but I had a plan to take over the world. I've asked someone to plant bombs all over the major cities of the world."
"But why did you kidnapped Mr Lloyd?" Alex asked
"I needed the money to pay them off. I decided to attack Mr Lloyd but he called you 3 in to protect him. So I disguised myself as Mike to find out only you 3 have slacked. While you were out, I kidnapped Mr Lloyd and asked him to transfer money into my account so that I can pay off the expenses. Then I'll threatened the President into letting me taking over the world by blowing up the selected cities."
"Threatening people into taking over the world is like so 50's" Clover commented
"You'll never get away with this" Sam shouted.
"Oh, but I already have, Samantha" Scam answered and touches Sam's cheek
"Sam. I've got one advice for you" Clover snapped "Never EVER have a boyfriend"
"Tim" Chris called from the other room "I've got the president's number"
"Excuse me girls while I talk to the president" Scam said and left the room
Man this chapter sucks. But review anyway
CheezySquirrel: Nope. All the cars in this fanfichavenot been used in movies (yet) There's more than 4 in that chapter. Car chases are confuse to you? Should have added more details. Yes I sometimes write things in the present tense cause I get very stressed while writing. You got the idea while you're away but when you're at the computer, your mind goes blank. Than you think hard and you get stressed out
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