My first fanfic. Please R&R!
Code: Lyoko
Ulrich's Surprise For Yumi
Yumi
It started out like any normal day. I got up, got dressed and came to school. The first peculiar thing was that when I got to the bench at which Jeremy, Odd, Ulrich and I meet, Ulrich wasn't there! The funny thing was that supposedly neither Jeremy nor Odd knew where he was! I was checking all around the school when I realized how paranoid I was acting. Once again I thought of Ulrich and this time, my heart was taken over with a picture of him, one from way back when we first met. I also realized my face was burning the deepest shade of red.
It was then I heard the bell ring for first period. And, sighing, I headed off to class.
Ulrich
"Ulrich, oh Ulrich." I heard Yumi's voice in my ear.
"Ulrich?! ULRICH!!!" It was Odd's voice this time. "Ulrich you sleepy head get up! Class starts in ten minutes!"
I was awake in a matter of seconds. "Huh, what?"
"Class starts in ten minutes!" and in a quieter tone he said in my ear, "And today is the day of your surprise for Yumi!"
At the thought of Yumi, my heart skipped a beat, like it always did when Yumi was mentioned. "Oh GEEZE!" I exclaimed as I jumped out of bed and scrambled to get dressed. I did not want to be late to class because if I was late to class, I would have to stay after and I would have no time to set up the surprise at the factory.
Jeremy
Odd said he would go make sure Ulrich wasn't still in the dorm. We both felt bad about lying to Yumi, but we couldn't tell her what Ulrich was up to or it would ruin this afternoon's surprise. When he called me a few minutes later, he said he had found Ulrich still in bed. I figured he was dreaming of Yumi and his surprise for her this afternoon. When I asked Odd about it, he confirmed what I had suspected, and said Ulrich was now moving surprisingly fast. I laughed to myself as I head off to class.
well, how did you like it? my first fanfic, so please R & R! I will take as much critisism as you can dish out. I also know it was not very long, and I will work on that, but I really dislike typing.