I'd just like to point out to Nicvaruce that typo's are common and I try to avoid them as much as I can.
Chapter 7: Time to end this war once and for all…if we can
Location: Spirit World
Ollrack threw open the huge oak doors of the familiar temple. Dark Ra stood in the center of the palace, grinning his ever present grin. "I SEE YOU FINALY MADE IT OLLRACK. IT'S A TRUE PITY I WASN'T THERE TO SEE YOUR DISPLAY DURING YOUR ATTACK ON OLLRAN, NOT THAT I'M SURPRISED YOU DEFEATED HIM. MAY I ASK, WHERE IS THE YOUNG HERO?"Aileta averted her eyes. "AH, SO OLLRAN PROVED TO BE MORE USEFUL THAN I BELIVED."
"David died in his own victory. A true honor." Ollrack said.
"I'M NOT SURPRISED; I ALWAYS KNEW HE'D GO OUT FIGHTING. NOW THEN, I ALWAYS FIGHT FAIRLY AS TO ENSURE THAT I DON'T FEEL GUILTY LATER…SO THIS BEING 2 AGAINST ONE DOESN'T SUIT ME. AILETA I'D LIKE YOU TO MEET YOUR NEW OPPONENT." On cue, an S-Metroid dropped from the ceiling in front of them. It snarled and bared its 10 inch long retractable fangs (A/N: these were the guy's we met on Irashin where Aileta got her Metroid disc).
"Didn't Ollran use this exact same trick on us?" Aileta asked.
"Yeah, the problem is, it worked. Wait, S-Metroids are our friends, why is this one fighting us?"
"MIND CONTROL YOU NIAVE THING." Dark Ra said.
"No, I'm not letting Aileta…"
"I'll fight him." Aileta interrupted. "S-Metroids don't have tractor beams right."
"Yeah, but S-Metroids are a lot stronger than Metroid Prime's."
"S-Metroids aren't 30 feet tall." Ollrack nodded in agreement and walked over to Dark Ra. Aileta faced the blue armored creature. She readied her sword and dared for the first move, a decision shed learn to regret. POING! The creature literally bounced straight up standing still and landed behind her. In a flash she was knocked to the ground, and the monster out of sight. As soon as Aileta got to her feet again she was knocked down by a blue flash. She could hear the quick creature bouncing around, POING, POING, POING! 'This is going to be harder that I thought.'
"COME NOW OLLRACK, IS THAT ALL YOU HAVE?" Dark Ra taunted as Ollrack wore himself out while failing time and time again to harm the demon.
"Thunder Blade!" He yelled. The discs hit dead on, but as the smoke cleared, Dark Ra stood tall.
"YOU ARE BEGINNIG TO BORE ME." Dark Ra said. In a flash he was in right in front of Ollrack. He bent low so he was eye level, and thou a solid punch into Ollrack's gut. Dark Ra's foot thick mussels nearly spilt the young electrifying in half. Ollrack fell to the floor gasping and wincing in pain. "YOU FOOL, DID YOU NOT REALIZE THAT THE MOMENT YOU WALKED INTO THIS TEMPLE YOUR PLAN WAS A FLOP. YOUR POWERS ARE MEANT TO PROTECT THE GODS…I AM USING THE BODY OF ONE OF THEM! HOW CAN YOU BELIVE YOU CAN WIN?" Dark Ra extended his hand over Ollrack. Pure crackling energy shot from them into Ollrack's flesh. The pain was so unbearable; Ollrack wasn't sure when he stopped. "I CAN SEE A HUGE AMOUT OF POTENTIAL IN YOU, A VERY IMPRESSIVE AMOUT. IT'S A SHAME I'LL HAVE TO KILL YOU NOW." Another burst of energy shot from his hand.
It was hopeless, the moment Aileta had 2 feet on the ground, she was on the floor again. Aileta saw that Ollrack needed her help, but she couldn't even help herself. She needed a plan, she had one, but was she up to it (A/N: no pun intended). She put one foot on the ground, waited, and then the other. POING! From her crouched position, she launched herself into a back flip, the S-Metroid soared beneath her. She landed and looked up, just as the S-Metroid turned back to her. "You just lost your advantage" (A/N: By now some of you may think that Aileta is OOC, but she isn't. She's simply in her warrior mode. Deep down she's still the extremely nice girl we all know and love). She said. The creature was smart enough to agree and dropped the bouncing strategy, instead at amazing speed it ran straight at her. Aileta had a split second, and she used it well as she thrust her sword straight at the S-Metroid. "EXTEND!" she yelled. Just as the beast was on her, the sword split the hard outer carapace. It came to a stop, looking down at the hand that held the sword. Aileta ripped the whip out of the creature. It fell over backwards. Aileta noticed a small black aura escape the creature's head. In its final breath the S-Metroid wheezed:
"Thank you." The S-Metroids head dropped dead to the floor.
"DON'T WORRY; THESE BEAMS AREN'T POWERFUL ENOUGH TO KILL YOU. BUT THEN AGAIN THAT MIGHT NOT CHEER YOU UP." Dark RA released another charge into Ollrack. "PITY THOUGH, THAT YOU, THE FIRST SOUL GUARDIAN, WON'T LIVE LONG ENOUGH TO SEE THE FATE OF THE OTHER 3." He said as he charged up again. But this time when he fired it was blocked by a sudden wall separating them. In the rage of this sudden inconvenience Dark Ra smashed the wall; he looked down to see that Ollrack wasn't there. Looking up he saw Aileta trying to drag Ollrack away from him. "VERY CLEVER USING THAT OLD TRICK I TAUGHT YOU AGAINST ME. BUT I'M AFRAID THAT YOU HAVE NO OTHER ALTERNATIVE BUT TO SUFFER BEFORE ME!" Dark Ra raised his mighty hand into the air. All the stars, galaxies, and universes from the mini-Void above shot a stream of light into his palm.
"Oh no…that's the same move he used on Electrifying. But I thought it only worked on him and him only." Ollrack said, trying to get to his feet.
"WRONG, IT WORKS BEST ON ELECTRIFYING ONLY. IT'S ONLY A MINOR PERCENTEGE ON ALL OTHER LIFEFORMS. BUT IT'S MORE THAN ENOUGH TO OBLITERATE YOU FROM HISTORY!" The ball in his hand resembled that of a small red sun. "YOU HAVE GOTTEN IN MY WAY FOR THE LAST TIME…GOOD BYE! SOLAR EXPOSION!" The sun in his hand erupted and launched for the 2. Aileta and Ollrack stared as the blast came for them, ready to destroy them once and for all.