I have had some positive feedback from the reviewers and I'm pleased that people seem to like my haikus.
One thing I'd like to mention is that my focus was to describe the character and not actually write poetic literature, um...if that makes any sense...lol (o_@).
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An American
Michael the baseball player
A strong beyblader
Steve the tough blader
powerful like his bitbeast
a very strong guy
Eddy the dark guy
a skilled basketball player
a beyblader too
Emily the girl
an intelligent blader
a tennis player
One thing I'd like to mention is that my focus was to describe the character and not actually write poetic literature, um...if that makes any sense...lol (o_@).
_____________________________________________________________________
An American
Michael the baseball player
A strong beyblader
Steve the tough blader
powerful like his bitbeast
a very strong guy
Eddy the dark guy
a skilled basketball player
a beyblader too
Emily the girl
an intelligent blader
a tennis player
