Better ending, 2 chapters long
K. I said I was gonna make a better ending and I have. But for fun Chapter 5 is my original Chapter 3. Which will still stay Chapter 3
Chapter 3: The attack.
I checked for fingerprints and handwriting similarities and came up with the conclusion that the Mr. Dad was the culprit. So I decided to get him while he was sleeping that night…
--That night--
Well I actually decided to wait till about 5am
--5am--
It was time… he was asleep in his bed right beside Mrs. Mom. This was my time to strike. I got up on the bedside table and jumped over him fired all 6 shots of my .32 and toped it with using my jump as a belly flop. (Calvin gets on the bedside table, jumps, fires 6 darts out of his dart gun and falls on his dad's stomach.)
"WHAT THE TRACER… DIE" and he pummeled me, and how he survived my shots, even my superior detective skills couldn't understand (Calvin's dad gets angry and spanks Calvin). "Your stupid partner was so annoying that I was going to give him back but now you've got a very slim chance! In fact he's right here, dangling above this boiling pit of tava. MUAHAHAHAHAH!"