Reviews:
NJ: gasp reviews!
White Silver Dragoon: This is for all those people who are called 'goody two shoes'. Thank you for your support and hope you like the rest of my story!
HazardousToYourHealth: You like it? Really? Hehehehehehe...loved your review! You may suggest it and your suggestion shall be granted! Thank you for your brill review, So the next chapter is dedicated to you! Disappears in a puff of smoke
Yusuke: Get back here, NJ! What about the rest of your reviews?
NJ: Still there Huh? There's more?
Kurama: Yes, and I suggest you reply.
NJ: WOOT!
Yavie Aelinel: Power to the girlz! You're right about the respect. They deserve it! Thank you for your review!
PhoenixFire2004: Thank you for the review and your suggestion has been taken into account!
Wild Roses: I hope so!
HieilovesBotan: I'm glad!
Spyrogue: OMG! I'm sooo sorry about that; I read it off the web. No offence taken, I'm happy that someone told me and someone upholds the truth! I'm ecstatic you like it though!
Kyu-Kyu: Glad ya liked it!
BotanLikePerson: Thank you! OO R rated Botan fic? Faints
NJ: wakes up Okie dokie then, I would like to dedicate the next chapter to...drum roll HazardousToYourHealth for being one of my first reviewers EVER!
Hiei: Why would they want something like this to be dedicated to them?
NJ: T-T
Authors note:
NJ: If I owned Yu Yu Hakusho, then you would all hate me for keeping it all to myself. As it happens, I don't own it and therefore you don't hate me. Yay-ness ; =P
The long awaited chapter two: The misfortunes of a kitsune (Kurama: Rolls eyes)
Kurama swore under his breath each time his foot slipped on the wet ground, and that so happened to be with every step he took. Pausing to glare up at the sky, he got a mouthful of water as the rain poured down heavier than before onto his already soaked form. Lightening crackled threateningly nearby and he continued on his way home, thinking over what went wrong in his day,
----FLASHBACK---
"Shuiichi-kun! (a/n NJ: growl) Matte yo! {Translation: (approximately) Wait}" a voice called out through the crowded hallways of Meiou (sp?) High, causing Kurama to wince and face the bane of his school existence, Marissa. (a/n
Marissa: I'm back!
NJ: You were never here. Go away!
Marissa: Shut up! You don't own me so you can't tell me what to do!
NJ: Actually I do own you...
Marissa: Oh yeah...)
"Hi, Marissa..." Kurama managed grit out civilly. Marissa was one of Kurama's worst fan girls, one of those beings who followed him everywhere and had to have his full attention at all times, but she was worse than that, she was also...a sponge.
"Shuiichi-kun, can you help me study? Please? Right now? I've already asked the teacher and she said that we could borrow a classroom for a couple of hours...don't make me go back on my request!" Her voice was simpering, but her eyes shone with a devious delight that had never failed to cause Kurama to wonder how her face could show something so completely different to her eyes.
"I really have no time to..." he began, but was cut off by the tears forming in her big, blue eyes and the way her lip twitched,
"Shuiichi..." she whispered, "Don't you- don't you like me anymore?" Teachers and students alike began to give him strange looks as she sank to the floor, apparently bawling her heart out.
Anymore? What does she mean 'anymore'? We never liked her in the first place. Kill her. Kill the annoying gaki (trans: brat) now! Youko's low voice echoed in Kurama's head. Kurama inwardly groaned as a teacher knelt next to crying blonde in an attempt to calm her down,
"Shh, what's the matter, sweetie?" she cooed. Marissa hiccupped several times before wiping her eyes on the back of her hand,
"Shuiichi doesn't like me and –and he refuses to help me study!" She managed, before bursting into tears again and burying her head into the teachers shoulder, sobbing uncontrollably. Kurama hung his head. He could see the detention slip now, unless...
"I never said I didn't like you, Marissa and I'll help you study if you want..." Marissa's head snapped up like a mousetrap, and a smile covered her features, tears forgotten. 'Uh oh, that smile's not good' Kurama thought. The teacher smiled as well,
"See? Everything worked out just fine..." she said to Marissa and left the two in the now mysteriously deserted hallway.
"Ok, Shuiichi-kun, help me learn!" She said.
----Several hours later----
Kurama ended up doing Marissa's homework, while she just sat there asking dumb questions and trying to look cute. It failed miserably. By the time Kurama finished, it was pouring with rain, and Marissa was moaning and complaining,
"Oh no! I can't go home now! I'll get soaked and sick and I'll die... You won't leave me here will you, Shuiichi?" she cried out.
Yes, yes, yes, yes... Youko was saying like a mantra in his head.
"No, you can take my umbrella and then we'll both get home..." Kurama sighed, completely ignoring Youko's undignified complaints.
Noooooooooooooo...
---End Flashback---
Thus Kurama was running home in the rain without an umbrella and swearing enough to make a sailor blush like a little schoolgirl.
Upon finally reaching home, he trudged up the stairs creating pools of water everywhere and got changed. He sighed in relief that his mother wasn't there and got to work cleaning up the mess he had made, which was a lot.
"Finally finished," he said to himself, "now, to get some sleep..." but he was interrupted by the phone ringing. Suppressing a groan he answered it,
"Hello?"
"Um, Shuiichi? Is that you?"
"Yes... Who is this?"
"Kurama, it's Yukina- " she started but was cut off by someone else picking up the phone,
"And Botan!" Botan chirped. (a/n NJ: Ah, three-way calling...gotta love it!)
"And Botan." Yukina confirmed, "Kurama, is it true that tomorrow is a ningen holiday?" she continued.
"Yes... but how did you get my number, let alone figure out how to work the phone?
"Long story. We'll explain later, however back to the matter at hand..." Botan said, "Do you want to get back at everyone for...taking advantage of your goodness tomorrow?" To Kurama she sounded like a commercial for something wonderful at exactly the moment you need it. A sly grin came onto his face,
"You two have a plan?"
Yukina then started to explain to Kurama her plan, with the occasional addition made by a certain ferry-girl. He liked the plan...
Tsuzuku...
NJ: That was short but I hope it was satisfactory, and the real fun begins next chapter so that's why I dedicated that one to HazardousToYourHealth instead of this one. ; I hate Marissa... By the way, anyone who wants to roast her is welcome to...anyway that you want to! Shine (a/n trans: die!) Marissa!
Note on the story: As you can see, this chapter was all about Kurama and I was going to continue writing about Yukina and Botan but I got grounded for spending too much time on fan fiction.net T-T. But that's not the point, I want to know how you, as the readers, want this story.
A. It can be everybody together e.g. Kurama, Botan and Yukina did so & so etc, etc It can be B.two people in a chapter and a solo chapter e.g. Yukina and Botan do whatever. Next chapter Kurama does blah.
C. OR (the big or) It can just be solo chapters, with BIG focus on each character e.g. Yukina does this, next chapter Botan does that, next chapter Kurama doesn't do anything.
Also- how 'bad' do you want them to get?
Do you:
A.Want them to try and be bad but fail miserably?
B. Want them to be bad and better than Hiei and Yusuke combined?
C. One of the above and April fools tricks? (e.g. Kuwabara is walking around with a 'kick me' sign on his back and Hiei and Yusuke are following him around. He doesn't get it. Kuwabara: Stop kicking me! Yusuke: Why? After all you are telling us to do it. Kuwabara: Huh? Notices sign URAMESHI! SHRIMP! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU TWO! Kuwabara, Yusuke and Hiei fight it out)
D. One of the above and Lazy/ laid back? (e.g. Koenma gives Botan an assignment. Botan: Lying on her oar, floating out the door Chill out, home dawg, I'm going, I'm going... )
E. One of the above and Violence (Kuwabara flirts with Yukina. Yukina: twitch THAT'S IT! I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU! beat, hit, freeze, melt etc. End result = very bruised, Koed Kuwabara. Yay!)
NJ: What do you want? points
Kurama: Please R&R whispers or she might not release us...
NJ: I HEARD THAT KITSUNE!
Kurama: Eep!
Yusuke: No flames or...
Hiei: Kuwabara will come after you and kiss you, regardless of gender. I said finish your own sentences!
Yusuke, NJ & Kurama: That was a very creative threat...--u
Hiei: smirk hn.
Yukina walks past with lots of black leather
Botan follows with lots of black stuff
Everybody: OOU
Yukina: Kurama...
Hiei:...