This is for Loch Ness Monster, a basic breakdown of the story thus far.
Summaries of Benevolent Evil
Chapters 1-25
Cast at beginning of fic: Age Height WeightCyborg/Victor Stone: 19 183cm (6' 1") 1000kgs (2200 lbs)
Raven: 16 160cm (5' 4") Never ask a girl's weight 45kgs (99lbs)
Robin: 17 168cm (5' 7") 53kgs (116.6lbs)
Starfire: 17 173cm (5' 9") Never ask a girl's weight 47kgs (103lbs)
Beast Boy: 15 155cm (5' 2") 39kg (85.8lbs)
Tir'eir: 5017 165cm (5' 6") H/D: 55/230kgs (121/506lbs)
Jacob: 3035 180cm (6' 0") 60kgs (132lbs)
Maria: 500 160cm (5' 4") Never ask a girl's weight 46kgs (102lbs)
A/N:
Things starred "" should be remembered.
The rest are interesting things that are worth noting.
A RED highlight will be used for RobStar moments/chapters centered on them.
A LIGHT BLUE highlight will be used for CyRae moments/chapters centered on them.
Chapter One: Mira
Introduction to a mysterious character, a Tanar'ri with the title of Yamamoto or Guardian.
Raven takes a bubble bath to relax.
Starfire asks Robin about marriage, explains that on her planet, since she is poor she would never get a wedding, as they are ceremonies of the political elite. They share a moment in the control room.
Raven reflects on her lack of control of her powers. She reflects on her love of death but reveals that she cannot stand blood.
Team meets big red creature, meets mysterious boy, boy attacks creature.
Chapter 2: Una Lucha, A fight
Robin wounded in fight, Star and Robin share first kiss.
Boy kills Demon with pipe.
Chapter 3: Nueva, New
Battered team returns to Tower, boy included.
Raven treats her wounds and reveals her nightwear.
Team thinks over how Star and Robin like each other.
Robin stabilized but needs a serum to be fully healed. Boy wants to trade serum for information. Girls revealed as virgins.
Raven explains to Star that most people wait until they are married to have sex.
Star volunteers to donate blood for serum but Raven takes her place.
Chapter 4: Divertido, Fun
Star volunteers to donate blood for serum but Raven takes her place.
Star and Robin moment
Boy trades half of cure for information on the "Black Bird." Will either kill or protect the "Black Bird" once the Titans find her for him.
7 days pass
Raven knows she is the "Black Bird" and debates on what to do.
Chapter 5: Información, Information
Star and Robin moment
Boy revealed to be Tanar'ri called Tir'eir, Tanar'ri most powerful Demon. Chose to defy the Devil and is exiled. Boy visits Tower and gives serum to Robin.
Raven reveals herself as the "Black Bird."
Chapter 6: Abominable, Abominable
Raven reveals that she is a telepath.
Tir'eir ousted Trigon (Raven's Father) and has spent 500 years looking for Raven to place her on the Blood Throne before her brother Telir. Calls Raven "Candra" or Bright Star.
Raven's Past revealed.
Chapter 7: Bonita, Pretty or Cute
Tir'eir reveals his age as over 5000
Star offers to nurse Robin, Star and Robin moment
Chapter 8: La noche muy loca de Starfire y Robin, The very crazy night of Starfire and Robin
Raven's emotional upheaval in the previous chapter wrecks Star's room
Star goes to Robin's room, BIG Star and Robin moment
Robin and Star declare their love for each other
Night passes
Chapter 9: Ovlida, Forget (order or command form)
Morning of 9th day of story
Star and Robin moment
Tir'eir begins calling Raven "Di'Candra" adding an honorific to her Demonic name meaning "Princess", serves Raven breakfast in her room.
Raven reflects over lack of control of her powers
Chapter 10: Espalda, Sword
Tir'eir nicknamed Tear.
Tear connects with group.
2 weeks elapsed. 23 days since start of fic.
Baalor attack, Tear apparently killed.
Boys get ready to attack Baalors, Star and Robin moment
Chapter 11: Solomente dos en una pareja, Only two in a pair
Beast Boy kills one Baalor, Tear the other.
Star and Robin moment
Chapter 12: Bueno, por miedo a Tanar'ri, Well, for fear of a Tanar'ri
week passes, morning of day 31
Raven reflects about Tear on day 30
Tear helps Raven with her PMS
Chapter 13: Una habla entre las chicas, A talk between the girls
2 days elapsed; Day 33
Raven and Star talk about Star and Robin's relationship. Star asks for love advice. Both go over their concerns about their seeming lacks in their busts.
Chapter 14: Está es mi vida, This is my life
Night of Day 33
Tear reveals his past
Chapter 15: "Nunca, prefiero ir a diablo antes voy a decir 'te amo.'", "Never, I'd rather (prefer to) go to the devil before I will say 'I love you'"
Still night of Day 33
Star makes a move on Robin, Robin ignores move to go talk to the other two guys. Star hurt.
Guys hold conference in kitchen with milk. They all vote to kick Tear out.
Star goes to Raven, Raven consoles her. Raven gets jealous of Star's physical attributes and relationship. Star wishes to break up with Robin, Raven advises against it.
Tear reflects on his past
Chapter 16: Olvidasteme, You've forgotten me
Still night of Day 33
Introduction of Jacob and Maria
6 months elapsed
Morning of Day 214
Raven reflects about agreeing to evict Tear. Has fears of being evicted because of her own Demonic blood.
Chapter 17: ¿Qué es malo? ¿Qué es bien? ¿Por qué?, What is evil?(bad) What is good? Why?
Team meets Maria, Jacob.
Maria and Raven get to know each other.
Star and Robin unravel last night's misunderstandings between them. Star and Robin moment
Maria trains Raven to use her power
Chapter 18: Hijas de los Diablos, Daughters of the Devils
Maria and Raven chat, Maria reveals that Tear is tired, teaches Raven to control her power
Hooded figure meets other hooded figure. H.I.V.E. to be assembled.
Tension mounts between gang and Maria
Chapter 19: Tear, ¿Morirá?¿Vivirá?, Tear, will he live or die?
Mall attacked, team goes to investigate. Attacked by hordes of devils. Team fights back, slays all the devils.
Raven hides in a corner and cowers. Robin, Cyborg, and Beast Boy wounded in fight.
Tear makes a late appearance and finishes off the devils.
Raven blasts Tear and injures him
Chapter 20: Luna Violeta, Violet Moon
Raven reflects about her dark nature and death
Night of Day 214 falls
Cyborg sent to buy liquor
Maria takes out her frustration on Raven, tensions rise
Chapter 21: Juegos del celebro, Mind Games
Cyborg returns with liquor
Cyborg consoles Raven about that morning. CyRae moment
Cyborg talks to Tear in private
Star admits to pulling her punches in the last fight, Star and Robin moment, Robin proposes and Star accepts
Chapter 22: Ave y Machina, Bird and Machine
Raven reflects on her talk with Cyborg
Raven and Tear have a private chat
Cyborg's and Tear's talk revealed
Cyborg reflects on his talk with Tear and proceeds to get himself drunk. Cyborg thinks about leaving the team. President bashing :)
Raven reflects on what Tear told her and about her friendship with Cyborg. Raven has a dream about Cyborg and herself. CyRae moment
Morning of Day 215
Raven wanders around the Tower and finds Cyborg. Cyborg is not as mechanical as everyone thought CyRae moment
Cyborg confesses his "inexperience"
Raven tries to pump Cyborg for information about his talk with Tear but fails
Chapter 23: Amor en su brasos, Love in your arms
Star and Robin moment, hard R
Cyborg and Raven have breakfast together, Beast Boy joins them. Star and Robin tell the team they are getting married.
Robin borrows money from Cyborg to buy Star an engagement ring
Cyborg and Robin talk and Cyborg reveals that the rest of the team have been betting on Rob and Star. Cyborg owes Raven a favor
While the boys talk Star corners Raven and forces 'girl talk' out of her
Another revelation about Tear's talk with Cyborg, Reason for lack of blown up things when Raven get emotional explained
Raven snaps at Cyborg, Cyborg walks in and sees Raven, CyRae moment
Tear schemes something
Chapter 24: Mi corazón, My Heart
Evening of Day 215
Raven admits to herself that she likes Cyborg but berates herself on why they can't be together
Cyborg reflects on what just happened between Rae and himself, berates himself with how she deserves better
Cyborg works on making himself a new suit of armor at Tear's request
Tear, Cyborg and Raven have a talk. Cyborg tells Raven he wants to leave team after he turns 20 in 3 months. Tear proposes that Cyborg marries Raven in order to protect her. Tension between Cyborg and Tear escalate.
Cyborg asks Raven out to dinner, she accepts. CyRae moment
Cyborg and Raven meet Star and Robin as just head out. Boys talk, Girls talk. Cyborg eggs Robin into hitting a home run while Star tells Raven she wants to pitch a homer.
Chapter 25: La cita de los Stones y después, The Date of the Stones and after
Cyborg takes Raven to La Comida
Tear sits and reflects on the future
Cyborg and Raven dance and enjoy dinner. Raven gets drunk
CyRae moment
Cyborg and Raven get mobbed by media/fans
Cyborg arrested
A/N: I'm kinda glad that I did this. It made me see all of the crap plot lines that I have in here. I had to drops lots of them because they sucked and because of the change over in the fic. Oh well, at least this will help me keep the plot more streamline. I highlighted things yellow because they are very important for the plot elements in the next chapter. LockDown over and out…
