Yeah, so I got only 2 reviews for the last chapter..well that's ok..*sob*
but if its bad, plz review too, cuz I wanna know how to make it better!
Sorry Lyra for the shortness, I can only get myself to write a little at a
time..i dunno why..
Disclaimer: still don't own PotC.but I'm working on it.:) ahhh, jack sparrow is mine, MINEEEE..miiiiineee! *grins crazily.*
Ok----gotta focus here..*focuuuus* *lol*
Here you go, next chappy is up.
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Jack looks incredulously at the slim body of Elizabeth in his arms. He had just barely managed to catch her.
'Mmm., didn know I had such a strong effect on women' he grinned despite the seriousness of the situation.
What was he supposed to do now? He was free, yes, but with an unconscious woman in his arms and no plan for escape.he gently laid Elizabeth on the floor before striding quickly over to the window in her cell.
At first he saw nothing but the ocean, but when he turned his head to the left a bit he saw a bright yellow beach in swimming range. He peered closer.it was that same island he had been marooned on two times before!! He remembered that palm tree! (*lol* ok, tht sounds a bit stupid..:)) Quickly a plan formed in his mind and he pulled Elizabeth off the floor softly. He braced himself for what he would have to do next. Then he slapped her forcefully on her left cheek. He had no choice; he truly did not need an unconscious woman slowing his escape. Elizabeths' eyes flew open and she gasped audibly when she saw Jack mere inches from her face.
"What - "
"No time to explain luv.we gotta be fast!" Jack cut her off and pulled her behind him.
They reached the door, when it suddenly flew open and Ragetti entered. Jack just barely managed to back up against the wall, now hidden behind the door. Elizabeths' face was tight against his chest, his arm around her waist and he could feel her quick breath.
"Hey there poppet! I've com' back.ain't that nice." Ragettis fake-friendly voice came to a sudden stop when he noticed that his "poppet" wasn't there. He looked around the brig flabbergasted. (I love this word!!!) At the sight of the open door to her cell he jumped from surprise causing his wooden eye to roll onto the floor. He fell to the floor looking for it and Jack and Elizabeth instinctively pressed themselves closer to the wall. Ragetti was getting awfully close.!
"She's gone, she's gone!" He suddenly shouted, and Elizabeth froze. Ragetti stumbled towards the still open door and alerted his crewmates. Tossing one last glance back into the brig he quickly strided over to the deck, still fumbling his eye and wondering whether his captain was going to be very pleased with what he had to tell him.. Why did it always have to be him bringing the bad news?!!?!
Jack noticed how Elizabeth was still clinging to his chest, eyes shut tight, brow furrowed in fear.
"'tis ok luv, he's gone" he said gently, stroking her hair. Elizabeth slowly released her grip and looked at him, blushing. Her eyes held so many questions and Jack locked his eyes with hers for a bit, but then, remembering the rather unpleasant situation they were in he broke her gaze.
"C'mon luv, we've got no time to waste."
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At the same time in Port Royal..
Will knocked at the door to the Governors mansion angrily. Where were all the bloody servants? He was about to knock again, when the door suddenly opened. One of the many butlers looked him up with a condescending stare and Will noticed how shabby he must look, soaked and dirty, like a beggar.
"I need to speak to the Governor" Will said hastily, attempting to enter the house.
"The governor does not want to be disturbed, he is mourning for his missing daughter.. and I doubt YOU have anything to tell that is of importance to him.." That pompous look again, Will couldn't stand it, but he ignored it nonetheless.
"Mourning for his daughter? He doesn't send for her? He hasn't taken any actions to save her?" Will gasped incredulously.
"Her bonnet was found in the water this morning.we doubt she survived in the cold water...she's not a very good swimmer after all."
Will stared at the servant disbelievingly - they thought she drowned??? But then he remembered: the governor did not even know about Elizabeth's fate, he had no idea she was captured by pirates, but probably still alive. He attempted to shove the servant aside, but got pushed back roughly.
"I have to talk to the governor! I know something about his daughter! She's not dead!" Will growled furiously. Suddenly a very tired looking governor appeared at the door.
"Who is it talking about my daughter here? Ah, Will, I suppose you heard..do come in.you must feel as terrible as myself.what a loss, Elizabeth was - "
"She WAS nothing" Will cut him off rudely. "She is still alive! We must act as soon as possible if we want to save her!"
"What nonsense are you talking there boy! Don't you think I have suffered enough?" The governor turned angry. His daughter was dead, drowned and lost to the depth of the ocean. Who did this boy think he was anyway?
"She has been captured by pirates, Mr.Swann. Please you must believe me!" Will sighed in frustration, but then remembered the note Jack had found on the porch.
"Here" he took out a crumpled looking piece of paper, and the governor looked at it sceptically before taking it.
His face turned paler, if that was even possible.
"Oh my----Elizabeth!" he gasped. Suddenly Mr.Swann awoke out of his trance and his voice boomed through the silent house.
"Quick, get the commodore! Now!"
Will sighed relieved.hopefully they were not too late..
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Elizabeth was still in stupor. She barely felt the warm hand in hers dragging her up on deck. She was pulled behind one of the rowboats and found herself cowering next to this mysterious man. He noticed that she was going to speak up and put a finger to her lips.
"Hush, luv! Listen to me.. ye see that island?" he pointed behind them and Elizabeth could only nod, wondering why he kept calling her luv.he obviously knew her quite well..
"Well, what d'ye prefer..pirate ship or calm island?" he grinned cheekily, but when he got no answer hi quickly continued talking to assure her.
"Will is probably gonna find us there sooner or later..he knows how many times I've been stranded there..and so have you as a matter of fact." he trailed off, grinning, remembering Elizabeth in her drunken state..
Elizabeth looked at him confused. Who was Will? And.she had been on that island before?!!! 'Arr, damn that memory of mine!' she thought, but only nodded at Jack.
"Alright then, that's settled..most of those bloody pirates are below deck looking fer us.so. Are ye ready luv?" Jack pulled her onto her feet and climbed over the railing, still holding her hand.
'This is madness' she thought. 'What am I doing??'
The next thing she felt was cold water surrounding her and her head spun as she sank under water. Sputtering she came up, held securely by Jack. They quickly made their way over to the island, hoping that Bo'Sun and others had not yet noticed their escape...
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Well, not very much action and stuff..I'm kinda stuck.and I hadn't really planned this story, just wrote the first chap. for fun, so I'm not really organized here :) I don't even proofread..ah, sorry bout that!
Any suggestions for how the story should continue are gladly welcome!! (I'm kinda stuck with Will - should he find Jack and Elizabeth really soon? And then what? Arrr, I should have planned this.oh well *lol*
Hope you enjoyed, and please review, even if you didn't ok? Thanks!!!
I wont be able to update for a while, cuz I'm on vacation in Germany for two weeks - without a computer!!! *sob* I'm sorry, plz don't kill me, REVIEW instead ..hehe :)
But I promise that there will be J/E action the next chapter .Here's a little preview so you guys wont abandon my story for ever.:
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Jack couldn't resist the temptation, even though he knew he was wrong to take advantage of her state.
"Does that mean you forgot all those great times we shared together..just us two...? " Jack asked huskily, playing with a strand of elizabeths hair and locked his chocolate eyes with her light ones. Elizabeth cocked an eyebrow sceptically, trying once more to regain her memory, and looked up at Jack. Then a smile crossed her face.
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Disclaimer: still don't own PotC.but I'm working on it.:) ahhh, jack sparrow is mine, MINEEEE..miiiiineee! *grins crazily.*
Ok----gotta focus here..*focuuuus* *lol*
Here you go, next chappy is up.
************
Jack looks incredulously at the slim body of Elizabeth in his arms. He had just barely managed to catch her.
'Mmm., didn know I had such a strong effect on women' he grinned despite the seriousness of the situation.
What was he supposed to do now? He was free, yes, but with an unconscious woman in his arms and no plan for escape.he gently laid Elizabeth on the floor before striding quickly over to the window in her cell.
At first he saw nothing but the ocean, but when he turned his head to the left a bit he saw a bright yellow beach in swimming range. He peered closer.it was that same island he had been marooned on two times before!! He remembered that palm tree! (*lol* ok, tht sounds a bit stupid..:)) Quickly a plan formed in his mind and he pulled Elizabeth off the floor softly. He braced himself for what he would have to do next. Then he slapped her forcefully on her left cheek. He had no choice; he truly did not need an unconscious woman slowing his escape. Elizabeths' eyes flew open and she gasped audibly when she saw Jack mere inches from her face.
"What - "
"No time to explain luv.we gotta be fast!" Jack cut her off and pulled her behind him.
They reached the door, when it suddenly flew open and Ragetti entered. Jack just barely managed to back up against the wall, now hidden behind the door. Elizabeths' face was tight against his chest, his arm around her waist and he could feel her quick breath.
"Hey there poppet! I've com' back.ain't that nice." Ragettis fake-friendly voice came to a sudden stop when he noticed that his "poppet" wasn't there. He looked around the brig flabbergasted. (I love this word!!!) At the sight of the open door to her cell he jumped from surprise causing his wooden eye to roll onto the floor. He fell to the floor looking for it and Jack and Elizabeth instinctively pressed themselves closer to the wall. Ragetti was getting awfully close.!
"She's gone, she's gone!" He suddenly shouted, and Elizabeth froze. Ragetti stumbled towards the still open door and alerted his crewmates. Tossing one last glance back into the brig he quickly strided over to the deck, still fumbling his eye and wondering whether his captain was going to be very pleased with what he had to tell him.. Why did it always have to be him bringing the bad news?!!?!
Jack noticed how Elizabeth was still clinging to his chest, eyes shut tight, brow furrowed in fear.
"'tis ok luv, he's gone" he said gently, stroking her hair. Elizabeth slowly released her grip and looked at him, blushing. Her eyes held so many questions and Jack locked his eyes with hers for a bit, but then, remembering the rather unpleasant situation they were in he broke her gaze.
"C'mon luv, we've got no time to waste."
****
At the same time in Port Royal..
Will knocked at the door to the Governors mansion angrily. Where were all the bloody servants? He was about to knock again, when the door suddenly opened. One of the many butlers looked him up with a condescending stare and Will noticed how shabby he must look, soaked and dirty, like a beggar.
"I need to speak to the Governor" Will said hastily, attempting to enter the house.
"The governor does not want to be disturbed, he is mourning for his missing daughter.. and I doubt YOU have anything to tell that is of importance to him.." That pompous look again, Will couldn't stand it, but he ignored it nonetheless.
"Mourning for his daughter? He doesn't send for her? He hasn't taken any actions to save her?" Will gasped incredulously.
"Her bonnet was found in the water this morning.we doubt she survived in the cold water...she's not a very good swimmer after all."
Will stared at the servant disbelievingly - they thought she drowned??? But then he remembered: the governor did not even know about Elizabeth's fate, he had no idea she was captured by pirates, but probably still alive. He attempted to shove the servant aside, but got pushed back roughly.
"I have to talk to the governor! I know something about his daughter! She's not dead!" Will growled furiously. Suddenly a very tired looking governor appeared at the door.
"Who is it talking about my daughter here? Ah, Will, I suppose you heard..do come in.you must feel as terrible as myself.what a loss, Elizabeth was - "
"She WAS nothing" Will cut him off rudely. "She is still alive! We must act as soon as possible if we want to save her!"
"What nonsense are you talking there boy! Don't you think I have suffered enough?" The governor turned angry. His daughter was dead, drowned and lost to the depth of the ocean. Who did this boy think he was anyway?
"She has been captured by pirates, Mr.Swann. Please you must believe me!" Will sighed in frustration, but then remembered the note Jack had found on the porch.
"Here" he took out a crumpled looking piece of paper, and the governor looked at it sceptically before taking it.
His face turned paler, if that was even possible.
"Oh my----Elizabeth!" he gasped. Suddenly Mr.Swann awoke out of his trance and his voice boomed through the silent house.
"Quick, get the commodore! Now!"
Will sighed relieved.hopefully they were not too late..
******
Elizabeth was still in stupor. She barely felt the warm hand in hers dragging her up on deck. She was pulled behind one of the rowboats and found herself cowering next to this mysterious man. He noticed that she was going to speak up and put a finger to her lips.
"Hush, luv! Listen to me.. ye see that island?" he pointed behind them and Elizabeth could only nod, wondering why he kept calling her luv.he obviously knew her quite well..
"Well, what d'ye prefer..pirate ship or calm island?" he grinned cheekily, but when he got no answer hi quickly continued talking to assure her.
"Will is probably gonna find us there sooner or later..he knows how many times I've been stranded there..and so have you as a matter of fact." he trailed off, grinning, remembering Elizabeth in her drunken state..
Elizabeth looked at him confused. Who was Will? And.she had been on that island before?!!! 'Arr, damn that memory of mine!' she thought, but only nodded at Jack.
"Alright then, that's settled..most of those bloody pirates are below deck looking fer us.so. Are ye ready luv?" Jack pulled her onto her feet and climbed over the railing, still holding her hand.
'This is madness' she thought. 'What am I doing??'
The next thing she felt was cold water surrounding her and her head spun as she sank under water. Sputtering she came up, held securely by Jack. They quickly made their way over to the island, hoping that Bo'Sun and others had not yet noticed their escape...
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Well, not very much action and stuff..I'm kinda stuck.and I hadn't really planned this story, just wrote the first chap. for fun, so I'm not really organized here :) I don't even proofread..ah, sorry bout that!
Any suggestions for how the story should continue are gladly welcome!! (I'm kinda stuck with Will - should he find Jack and Elizabeth really soon? And then what? Arrr, I should have planned this.oh well *lol*
Hope you enjoyed, and please review, even if you didn't ok? Thanks!!!
I wont be able to update for a while, cuz I'm on vacation in Germany for two weeks - without a computer!!! *sob* I'm sorry, plz don't kill me, REVIEW instead ..hehe :)
But I promise that there will be J/E action the next chapter .Here's a little preview so you guys wont abandon my story for ever.:
****
Jack couldn't resist the temptation, even though he knew he was wrong to take advantage of her state.
"Does that mean you forgot all those great times we shared together..just us two...? " Jack asked huskily, playing with a strand of elizabeths hair and locked his chocolate eyes with her light ones. Elizabeth cocked an eyebrow sceptically, trying once more to regain her memory, and looked up at Jack. Then a smile crossed her face.
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