Nice reveiws. I've decided on something. I'm going to, for the first time, answer my reveiw in a readable way. (not that you care) Actually i'll only answer the criticism or questions. The rest of you thanks a lot!
Dogbertcarrol- These are very well organized theives. Plus traitorism and spies could be anywhere. (Oh shit, I'm turning this fic into a mystery!) I'm sorry you feel that way about the amnesia but hey its my plot twist. I mean think! Take a guess at how many ways I can go with this! (I have my way planed out of course but I dare you to TRY to guess it!) anyway thanks for the reveiw, even if it was needed opinionism instead of criticism.
Rochchen- Uh... Well... Um Uh... Sorta? Yeah... maybe. FINE I MADE A MISTAKE! It would be faster but Ranma doesn't like the cold! Yeah! That's it! Heh... Heh heh... (sweatdrop)
Kura-Kun- YOU DID NOT! IT"S BAD TO LIE! (heh heh)
Zsych- Uh dude... You should read authors notes more often. Yeah, Ranma does become a girl. Stay's that way too. (Though I have and Idea for a sequel... heh heh heh heh) Oh and about his sub-consious letting him live happy... No. His sub-consious wouldn't let GENMA live happy as a girl. HE, however, would get over his pop's shit and move on. Oh and calafornia was chosen for nothing magical about it. Ranko will find her cure don't worry. (I just love suspence)
Sired22- Yeah i know it's been done, but has it ever been double done? He has amnesia and then the people he met just that day tell him she already had amnesia!!!! Come on that leaves some possibilties man!
Well thats All I have to say to my reviewers. One last thing to say. I'm surprised no one asked this of me. Don't worry, while Ranko's masculinity depends his father's freakish teachings, his will to fight it in his blood. I'm not gonna let him quit fighting and stop with martial arts! NO WAY! Now that is something Ranko's sub-consiousness wouldn't let her live with. I got nothin left to do so On WITH THE SHOW!
Chapter 7: Luc
YOU SAW RANMA!!!! WHAT HOW!! WHERE!!! WHY!!! WHERE DID HE GO!!!! HE OWES ME 200,000 YEN!
"She came her to train at my dojo. Now if you would please calm down, your scaring me," See said. He was having a rather bad day. He had heard of this woman even in his remote dojo. What was her nickname again? Ice queen? And why in the hell was she calling Ranma a he? Ranma was about as far from male as it gets! (snicker!)
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"S... Sir?" Claust said as he slowly creeped into the dank hallway that was his lords throne room. His cast Iron vest securely in place in the case of any incoming spiked balls.
"Yes, Cluast. Good news I presume?" He said eerily.
"Uh...Yes, mostly sir," Claust said. "During the bombing on the Theatre where the girl was we broke Knives and Jule escaped as we planne but...(wispering) the girl wasn't killed,"
"One more chance Claust one more chance to kill her or you will!" He was cut off.
"Sir! She has amnisia! ...Is that allright? Sir?" Claust asked nervously.
"Amnesia? Hmm... Claust new mission. Do not attack her. Study her. Watch her. Use the power mesure on her. If it's above mine to below mine by 10,000, kill her. But if it is below mine by more than 10,000 bring her to me," He replied cruelly.
"Yes sir," Claust replied.
As Claust was leaving the room the Black man told him, "Claust get this done right, and I will raise your pay. Get it wrong and you will be demoted.
"Yes sir. Um... Sir may we remeasure you? You power may have changed as of lately," Claust said.
He nodded. Claust left for a moment and then came back with a small device. He turned it on and pointed it at the black man. A light on the machine read outloud, "147,397,"
"Sir! Your up almost five thousand!" Claust exclaimed.
"Good, get out," He replied coldly. Before Claust could leave, however his the black man shouted one more thing.
"Oh, and promote Luc! Unlike you, he always seems to be in the right place at the right time,"
Claust left to do his mission.
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"I... I already had amnesia?" Ranko asked.
"Yes," They all chorused.
"Maybe you should try to remember anything that's happened to you?" Luc proposed.
Hmm... Um...
-Flashback-
"You ready, Ranma?" Genma asked his son allready knowing the answer.
"Heh, right behind ya!" Ranma said as the both jumped onto the pole.
"SIRS! IS VERY BAD IF YOU FALL IN SPRING!" The guide shouted desperately but they paid him not mind.
After sparing for almost thirty seconds the older man was sent flying into a spring.
"Heh! Hey pop gettin' slow in your old age?" Ranma shouted to the spring.
A panda jumped out onto the pole.
W.. WHAT! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!!!
"Oh poor sirs, fall in spring of drowned panda! Now who ever fall in take body of panda!" the guide said.
"Hey! You never said anything about that to us!" The Ranma shouted back.
Suddenly the panda lunged at him. It caught him off gaurd and he was sucker-punched.into a different spring about ten yards away.
When he resurfaced he felt something missing on the lower half of his body.
A bloodcurdling and very feminine screem was heard for miles around by anything that cared to listen.
"Sirs, should not have come to Jousenkyo," The guide said as a brand new panda rug was furiously trying to be brought into the world.
-End Flashback-
"Um... I remember a place called Jousenkyo. And a man named Ranma who... who turned into a woman..." Ranko said to them.
"Um.. Ok," Aaron said. Then he whispered to Jess, "You think she's out of it?"
"No, with amnesia usually most your memories are true. I can believe it. After what I've seen happen since she showed up,"
"Oh yeah," Aaron replied, then mumbled under his breath, "Your crazy too! You can't just change your gender! Even if you can dodge bullets!"
"Um, could you tell me everything you know about me?" Ranko asked to all of them.
They told her the whole story of how she had arrived. How she had stopped the two terrorists. How she had told them that she was a world class martial artist. Everythng they could think of. Up till where she saved Jess from the falling pole. All the while Luc hadn't said a word. Ranko, became suspiscious. A subcouncious sense enveloped her telling her that something was wrong. She remained silent and began to listen again.
"Um, ok. Could you guys do me a favor?" Ranko asked when the story was finished.
"Sure what'cha need?" Aaron asked.
She twiddled her fingers and said, "Well, um could you look for Information on Jouenkyo for me? I know its a training ground in China but that's all. And, look up a man called Ranma? He has black long hair in a ponytail, blue eyes and is a martial artist. I think he may know something,"
"Well, we'll see what we can do, Ranko," Shannon said.
They left. All except Luc.
"What are you staying for Luc?" Ranko asked.
"I wanted to ask you something, alone," He replied.
He got off the chair and onto one knee in an abnormaly formal position. He then pulled out a device and pointed it at her. Her sense didn't go off so she decided this "thing" wasn't dangerous.
"Um, What is that?" She asked.
"My question was," he replied, "If you knew how to raise you strength in someway or another?"
-Flashback-
Now Ranma you raise your power by focusing. Just focus that ki you just learned to control and send it throughout your entire body.
"Ok, Daddy,"
-End Flashback-
"Ranko? Ranko, what's wrong?"
"Um... yes. Yes I can raise my power with ki,"
He smiled. When he had first measured her her power had been about 10,000. A normal human had a power of about 2,000. A human who was in a weight room every day could get there power to about 5000. A person with minimal knowledge of ki could bring there power up to 10,000. He knew it should have been higher than that. He himself couldn't dodge bullets but his power was about 20,000 at max. He could only barely project his aura with all his training.
"Um, could you raise it for me as high as it can go? The nurse gave me this device to see how strong you are. If your physically fit to return home. He couldn't do it because it's his daughters birthday.
"O..Ok," She said shyly.
The meter on the bar began to rise. 12,000, 15,000, 23,000, 30,000... Suddenly after that it shot up.
Ranko remembered. As she rose her ki she began to heal the wounds to her body. She felt the power. She remembered what she loved. A smile grew on her face as she remembered the thrill of her life. The thrill of a challange and practicing her art. It was in her to fight and be challenged and overcome everything that was thrown at her. She was... Wild horse? Where did that come from? Oh well. She knew what she was living for now.
"79,000! 86,000! 113,000! Amazing! 127,000! 130,000!" Luc shouted. Amazed that a girl younger than himself could have so much power, "134,391" The machine spoke in a monotone pitch.
"Wow, Your amazing," He said looking at her in awe. He finally notice the blue aura surrounding her. Wow. She actually projects her aura instead of just outlining herself with it.
"THANK YOU!" Ranko shouted snapping Luc out of his reverie. He suddenly felt hiimself on the recieving end of an enourmously tight hug that felt more like an attack. He blushed furiously. Something he hadn't done since he'd joined. ////Hint Hint!: Think of a purple haired Amazon's most deadly attack. That's right! The Amazon Glomp!////
"Um... Heh heh! What did I do?...heh?" He asked trying to keep his perverted male thoughts to a minimum. "Damn good thing I'm wearin' loose jeans!" he thought.
"I just remembered what I live for!" She said as she lay back down on the strecher.
"Oh? Um... what is that?" Luc asked her.
In an almost giddy way she replied, "Anything Goes Airborn martial arts! It's my own style. I remember making it!" She said as she thought about how she jumped OVER the atlantic ocean to get here. (She couldn't remember the reason though) Suddenly she yawned.
"Ahhhaahah. I think i'm gonna go to sleep now she said as she closed her eyes and completely shut out the rest of the world. That was draining, was her last though before drifting to sleep.
"How weird. Don't think I've ever seen anyone fall asleep that fast before," Luc thought. "She's different from other girls. She's... just different somehow,"
He walked to the door.
"She's cute when she sleeps," He thought as he watched a smile cross her face followed by a frown and then a frantic almost scared look.
That night he couldn't get beautiful, long, blonde hair and deep aqua green eyes out of his mind.
-My funny Theatre!-
They left. All except Luc.
"What are you staying for Luc?" Ranko asked.
"I wanted to ask you something, alone," He replied.
He got off the chair and onto one knee in an abnormaly formal position.
"Ranko ever since I first laid my eyes on you I've wanted to ask you this,"
"What Luc?"
"Ranko Ayumi. Will you marry me? Ranko? Ranko??! NURSE SHES FAINTED! SHE HAS NO PULSE!!!!!!!!" Luc cried going insane. She just HAD to have a heart attack right when he was making his move!!! DAMN!
-End-
Heh. Now I know why people do those. Now nobody say anything about the power stuff. I'm not going by DBZ's scouters, I'm not going by DBZ's scouters, I'm not going by DBZ's scouters, I'm not going by DBZ's scouters, I'm not going by DBZ's scouters... (This is what is called beating the dead horse) I'll repeat it one more time. I'm not going by DBZ's scouters! Ok. I'm done with that? R&R. I always need Reviews. Cuz they always help. I hope I hit 15,000 words with this but I bet I don't. Any way, See you next time!
Dogbertcarrol- These are very well organized theives. Plus traitorism and spies could be anywhere. (Oh shit, I'm turning this fic into a mystery!) I'm sorry you feel that way about the amnesia but hey its my plot twist. I mean think! Take a guess at how many ways I can go with this! (I have my way planed out of course but I dare you to TRY to guess it!) anyway thanks for the reveiw, even if it was needed opinionism instead of criticism.
Rochchen- Uh... Well... Um Uh... Sorta? Yeah... maybe. FINE I MADE A MISTAKE! It would be faster but Ranma doesn't like the cold! Yeah! That's it! Heh... Heh heh... (sweatdrop)
Kura-Kun- YOU DID NOT! IT"S BAD TO LIE! (heh heh)
Zsych- Uh dude... You should read authors notes more often. Yeah, Ranma does become a girl. Stay's that way too. (Though I have and Idea for a sequel... heh heh heh heh) Oh and about his sub-consious letting him live happy... No. His sub-consious wouldn't let GENMA live happy as a girl. HE, however, would get over his pop's shit and move on. Oh and calafornia was chosen for nothing magical about it. Ranko will find her cure don't worry. (I just love suspence)
Sired22- Yeah i know it's been done, but has it ever been double done? He has amnesia and then the people he met just that day tell him she already had amnesia!!!! Come on that leaves some possibilties man!
Well thats All I have to say to my reviewers. One last thing to say. I'm surprised no one asked this of me. Don't worry, while Ranko's masculinity depends his father's freakish teachings, his will to fight it in his blood. I'm not gonna let him quit fighting and stop with martial arts! NO WAY! Now that is something Ranko's sub-consiousness wouldn't let her live with. I got nothin left to do so On WITH THE SHOW!
Chapter 7: Luc
YOU SAW RANMA!!!! WHAT HOW!! WHERE!!! WHY!!! WHERE DID HE GO!!!! HE OWES ME 200,000 YEN!
"She came her to train at my dojo. Now if you would please calm down, your scaring me," See said. He was having a rather bad day. He had heard of this woman even in his remote dojo. What was her nickname again? Ice queen? And why in the hell was she calling Ranma a he? Ranma was about as far from male as it gets! (snicker!)
***************************
"S... Sir?" Claust said as he slowly creeped into the dank hallway that was his lords throne room. His cast Iron vest securely in place in the case of any incoming spiked balls.
"Yes, Cluast. Good news I presume?" He said eerily.
"Uh...Yes, mostly sir," Claust said. "During the bombing on the Theatre where the girl was we broke Knives and Jule escaped as we planne but...(wispering) the girl wasn't killed,"
"One more chance Claust one more chance to kill her or you will!" He was cut off.
"Sir! She has amnisia! ...Is that allright? Sir?" Claust asked nervously.
"Amnesia? Hmm... Claust new mission. Do not attack her. Study her. Watch her. Use the power mesure on her. If it's above mine to below mine by 10,000, kill her. But if it is below mine by more than 10,000 bring her to me," He replied cruelly.
"Yes sir," Claust replied.
As Claust was leaving the room the Black man told him, "Claust get this done right, and I will raise your pay. Get it wrong and you will be demoted.
"Yes sir. Um... Sir may we remeasure you? You power may have changed as of lately," Claust said.
He nodded. Claust left for a moment and then came back with a small device. He turned it on and pointed it at the black man. A light on the machine read outloud, "147,397,"
"Sir! Your up almost five thousand!" Claust exclaimed.
"Good, get out," He replied coldly. Before Claust could leave, however his the black man shouted one more thing.
"Oh, and promote Luc! Unlike you, he always seems to be in the right place at the right time,"
Claust left to do his mission.
***************************
"I... I already had amnesia?" Ranko asked.
"Yes," They all chorused.
"Maybe you should try to remember anything that's happened to you?" Luc proposed.
Hmm... Um...
-Flashback-
"You ready, Ranma?" Genma asked his son allready knowing the answer.
"Heh, right behind ya!" Ranma said as the both jumped onto the pole.
"SIRS! IS VERY BAD IF YOU FALL IN SPRING!" The guide shouted desperately but they paid him not mind.
After sparing for almost thirty seconds the older man was sent flying into a spring.
"Heh! Hey pop gettin' slow in your old age?" Ranma shouted to the spring.
A panda jumped out onto the pole.
W.. WHAT! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!!!!
"Oh poor sirs, fall in spring of drowned panda! Now who ever fall in take body of panda!" the guide said.
"Hey! You never said anything about that to us!" The Ranma shouted back.
Suddenly the panda lunged at him. It caught him off gaurd and he was sucker-punched.into a different spring about ten yards away.
When he resurfaced he felt something missing on the lower half of his body.
A bloodcurdling and very feminine screem was heard for miles around by anything that cared to listen.
"Sirs, should not have come to Jousenkyo," The guide said as a brand new panda rug was furiously trying to be brought into the world.
-End Flashback-
"Um... I remember a place called Jousenkyo. And a man named Ranma who... who turned into a woman..." Ranko said to them.
"Um.. Ok," Aaron said. Then he whispered to Jess, "You think she's out of it?"
"No, with amnesia usually most your memories are true. I can believe it. After what I've seen happen since she showed up,"
"Oh yeah," Aaron replied, then mumbled under his breath, "Your crazy too! You can't just change your gender! Even if you can dodge bullets!"
"Um, could you tell me everything you know about me?" Ranko asked to all of them.
They told her the whole story of how she had arrived. How she had stopped the two terrorists. How she had told them that she was a world class martial artist. Everythng they could think of. Up till where she saved Jess from the falling pole. All the while Luc hadn't said a word. Ranko, became suspiscious. A subcouncious sense enveloped her telling her that something was wrong. She remained silent and began to listen again.
"Um, ok. Could you guys do me a favor?" Ranko asked when the story was finished.
"Sure what'cha need?" Aaron asked.
She twiddled her fingers and said, "Well, um could you look for Information on Jouenkyo for me? I know its a training ground in China but that's all. And, look up a man called Ranma? He has black long hair in a ponytail, blue eyes and is a martial artist. I think he may know something,"
"Well, we'll see what we can do, Ranko," Shannon said.
They left. All except Luc.
"What are you staying for Luc?" Ranko asked.
"I wanted to ask you something, alone," He replied.
He got off the chair and onto one knee in an abnormaly formal position. He then pulled out a device and pointed it at her. Her sense didn't go off so she decided this "thing" wasn't dangerous.
"Um, What is that?" She asked.
"My question was," he replied, "If you knew how to raise you strength in someway or another?"
-Flashback-
Now Ranma you raise your power by focusing. Just focus that ki you just learned to control and send it throughout your entire body.
"Ok, Daddy,"
-End Flashback-
"Ranko? Ranko, what's wrong?"
"Um... yes. Yes I can raise my power with ki,"
He smiled. When he had first measured her her power had been about 10,000. A normal human had a power of about 2,000. A human who was in a weight room every day could get there power to about 5000. A person with minimal knowledge of ki could bring there power up to 10,000. He knew it should have been higher than that. He himself couldn't dodge bullets but his power was about 20,000 at max. He could only barely project his aura with all his training.
"Um, could you raise it for me as high as it can go? The nurse gave me this device to see how strong you are. If your physically fit to return home. He couldn't do it because it's his daughters birthday.
"O..Ok," She said shyly.
The meter on the bar began to rise. 12,000, 15,000, 23,000, 30,000... Suddenly after that it shot up.
Ranko remembered. As she rose her ki she began to heal the wounds to her body. She felt the power. She remembered what she loved. A smile grew on her face as she remembered the thrill of her life. The thrill of a challange and practicing her art. It was in her to fight and be challenged and overcome everything that was thrown at her. She was... Wild horse? Where did that come from? Oh well. She knew what she was living for now.
"79,000! 86,000! 113,000! Amazing! 127,000! 130,000!" Luc shouted. Amazed that a girl younger than himself could have so much power, "134,391" The machine spoke in a monotone pitch.
"Wow, Your amazing," He said looking at her in awe. He finally notice the blue aura surrounding her. Wow. She actually projects her aura instead of just outlining herself with it.
"THANK YOU!" Ranko shouted snapping Luc out of his reverie. He suddenly felt hiimself on the recieving end of an enourmously tight hug that felt more like an attack. He blushed furiously. Something he hadn't done since he'd joined. ////Hint Hint!: Think of a purple haired Amazon's most deadly attack. That's right! The Amazon Glomp!////
"Um... Heh heh! What did I do?...heh?" He asked trying to keep his perverted male thoughts to a minimum. "Damn good thing I'm wearin' loose jeans!" he thought.
"I just remembered what I live for!" She said as she lay back down on the strecher.
"Oh? Um... what is that?" Luc asked her.
In an almost giddy way she replied, "Anything Goes Airborn martial arts! It's my own style. I remember making it!" She said as she thought about how she jumped OVER the atlantic ocean to get here. (She couldn't remember the reason though) Suddenly she yawned.
"Ahhhaahah. I think i'm gonna go to sleep now she said as she closed her eyes and completely shut out the rest of the world. That was draining, was her last though before drifting to sleep.
"How weird. Don't think I've ever seen anyone fall asleep that fast before," Luc thought. "She's different from other girls. She's... just different somehow,"
He walked to the door.
"She's cute when she sleeps," He thought as he watched a smile cross her face followed by a frown and then a frantic almost scared look.
That night he couldn't get beautiful, long, blonde hair and deep aqua green eyes out of his mind.
-My funny Theatre!-
They left. All except Luc.
"What are you staying for Luc?" Ranko asked.
"I wanted to ask you something, alone," He replied.
He got off the chair and onto one knee in an abnormaly formal position.
"Ranko ever since I first laid my eyes on you I've wanted to ask you this,"
"What Luc?"
"Ranko Ayumi. Will you marry me? Ranko? Ranko??! NURSE SHES FAINTED! SHE HAS NO PULSE!!!!!!!!" Luc cried going insane. She just HAD to have a heart attack right when he was making his move!!! DAMN!
-End-
Heh. Now I know why people do those. Now nobody say anything about the power stuff. I'm not going by DBZ's scouters, I'm not going by DBZ's scouters, I'm not going by DBZ's scouters, I'm not going by DBZ's scouters, I'm not going by DBZ's scouters... (This is what is called beating the dead horse) I'll repeat it one more time. I'm not going by DBZ's scouters! Ok. I'm done with that? R&R. I always need Reviews. Cuz they always help. I hope I hit 15,000 words with this but I bet I don't. Any way, See you next time!