Athor's note: Sorry if I confused you guys in saying that I have a new chapter up...I just had to change some stuff...my the account went screwy on me --;;; The mini-note points down a few lines tells u what I did
Ok...truthfully speaking, I've had this written for a while now, but never really got to the point of typing it up. It's quite a bit shorter than the first, but I'm working on it...
I fixed the first chapter/part so that the block thingies weren't there anymore (making everyone confused...even me...I don't even know why I did that in the first place --;;)
The story is coming along slowly...but I'll try to finish it ;;;
Mini-note: I just changed the name of one of the guys...I didn't really like "Noah"...so he's now "Nozomi" Oh and one more thing...I'm going to be really late for the next chapter because I'm 1) really busy with all my University studies...I hate being behind and having projects to do (esp when they count for my whole grade!!!) and 2) I'm still trying to figure out how this is going to go....I had originally started the 3rd part in a certain way, but I completely scratched that and changed it...so yeah...Please bear with me ;;;
FEEDBACK would be great!!!
DON'T BE FOOLED
Part 2
This Monday morning in April is quite a beautiful one. No dark clouds in the sky to indicate any chance of rainfall. As sunny as it is, there are a few white clouds floating around to provide some moving shade from time to time. As the clock approaches 8:00, more and more students walk through the giant silver gates of Azabu Gakuen. Laughter and chatter are heard as schoolmates and friends relate to one another about their weekend. As students walk by the ivory fountain in the green area of the courtyard, most say "Good Morning" to the student body president and his counsel.
"Ohayou gozaimasu Sempai."
"Ohayou," reply the teenage boys. There are six of them, either standing by or sitting on the fountain rim. They're all quite tall, the shortest being around 6 feet tall. Two have blond hair; one has white (without looking like an old man) while another has a whitish silver look; another has brown, an almost dark auburn color, hair; and the last one has black hair, an ebony color so rich that it naturally gleams a dark blue in white light. All six are very lean, yet they possess the image of very hard-training and healthy athletes.
Looking at his watch, the white haired guy says to the others, "Oi...it's almost 8. We'd better get to class before we're late!" All six turn and walk into the building behind them. As they walk into their class, students who haven't seen them yet call out a "Good Morning". With a couple of minutes before 8, someone walks into the class. Her commanding presence prompted single students to take their seat. Thus commencing another day.
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"Well...looks like we have another group report due next week. So who's going with who?" asks the shortest blond at the end of the day.
"I don't know about you guys, but I'm going with Mamoru for this one," says the silver-white haired guy.
"What? Why do you get to go with him, Akira?" asks the same guy.
"Because, Jiro, I really don't want to do things at the last minute...at least not for this project."
"Aw what?! You make it sound like that's all we ever do!" says Nozomi, the brown haired guy. Akira lifts an eyebrow and he knows that he's caught. "Hey! At least we still do a good job!"
Rolling his eyes, Akira mutters, "unfortunately."
"So Akira...did you finish your paper yet?"
"It was assigned a week and a half ago...what do you think Jiro?"
"Ha! I knew you wouldn't have worked on it till last night!"
Akira shook his head before walking ahead of the others. "We already gave it to the teacher last week," says Akira as he walks through the front gates.
"Yo Mamoru!" he greets his friend.
"'Morning..."
"Something wrong?"
"No...just thinking..."
"What about?"
"The new transfer student..."
"We have a new student? That's unusual..."
"That's what I was thinking...and apparently they scored a perfect mark on our exams too..."
"Are you serious?! Other than you, NO ONE has ever gotten a perfect mark before...he must be a genius or something..."
"Maybe..." Mamoru trails off and starts walking to class. "Come on...bell's gonna go soon."
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"Good morning students," greets the principal. His presence unnerved most students, making them wonder what was going on. "I'm sure you all wonder why I'm here. You will be having a new student in your class starting today. I believe you will make her feel welcomed." After hearing the students' agreement, he called out to the hallway. "Alright then, please come in."
Oh wow...that wasn't even two pages...--;;;
But how was it??? Good? Bad? Horrible??
I know it's a really short chapter, but please bear with me...or you can just ignore me XD
I haven't written anything creative since my government-issued exam so...help?
Please review and tell me how you found it!!!
Thankies!!
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