I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaack! /every one runs/ awwwwwwwe, c'mon! Don't 'cha want the next chapter? No? Well, too bad, 'cause I'm up dating it anyway. Here are the responses:
Floresentpinkfaries: thanks for reviewing! Not sure what half of the words meant, but oh-well. Stupidity runs in the family… Thanks again!
Kit-kit: didn't I say that in the story? /sigh/ oh-well. Never mind that. I'll see if I can work in the snakes in this chapter, ok? Enjoy!
KaraKurama: you really think it's confusing? Wow. I'll see what I can do.
Chisara Notell: thanks and here you go! Enjoy!
Kurama's fox: you're too nice, you know that?
Wow. I guess I had less reviews than I thought I had…all the other are for coma…I might want to up date that soon…but right now, I'm a gonna up date this, so sit back, relax, AND HOLD ON TO YOUR HATS CAUSE WE FINALLY GET SOME ACTION! WHOO-HOO! (even though it will be horrible)
Thoughts (anyone's)
Yusuke
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Ok, so how do you work this thing again? Gabe thought. Oh. There we go! Now, Ko-Enma said he might be around here somewhere…
Gabe was in Genkai's forest, in a clearing somewhere. Buy the looks of the trees, he could have sworn an over grown bat once hung from the branches…and then he remembered, it was probably the one yusuke had fought his first time in this forest…
Gabe took a few steps forward. Suddenly, the watch on his wrist started beeping! Uh-oh. He wants me to find him. Great. I really hope I'm ready for this. And Gabe headed for the beeping sound.
He came to another clearing, but this one was much bigger and had the tallest tree he had ever seem right smack dab in the middle.
But he wasn't the only person in the middle of the clearing.
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"Ok, so where are we supposed to start? I mean, he could be anywhere!" yusuke shouted, frustrated after an hours walk.
"Wait, I sense something over there."
"Tee-hee! Looks like you found me Kurama. Too bad today is your dying day!"
"Want my help?" yusuke muttered in Kurama's ear.
"No thanks, yusuke. I'll take this one."
"Got 'cha."
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What, did you think I was gonna end it there? I'm not that evil! XP
"So…you're the new spirit detective, I take it?" Rando said.
"No! What could have led you to that idea?" Gabe asked sarcastically.
"Your arrogance, maybe? Just like the last one."
"Arrogant or not, I still need to get you back in prison. You can either go nicely, or I'll just have to take you down the hard way."
"Try me." Rando said dangerously and disappeared.
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Kurama stood ready, Hiei and Yusuke sat down at the edge of the clearing, still on there guard. Torgoro came fast, swiping at Kurama's face with foot inch nails he had grown. Kurama dodged, and pulled out his rose whip, slashing at Torgoro's face in return.
After awhile, the battle turned to punches and kicks. All aiming for the most vital parts possible, every move so fast the regular human eye couldn't see them. They both stopped after a couple of minutes so as to take a breather. Kurama, on his knees, breathing heavily, was thinking of a way to stop him. Certainly the same trick last time won't work. He'd have to take desperate measures…
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Rando reappeared right behind Gabe, aiming to hit his neck with the side of his hand. Gabe, seeing this oh-so-obvious trick, (1)spun around in a kick, but Rando saw this, too and blocked with said right hand.
They both faced each other, Gabe's leg in Rando's hand. Gabe's mercy in his clutches there also.
"Bad mistake." Rando said and took his other hand and put it on Gabe's knee cap. Gabe could feel the flesh behind his knee start to stretch out. Luckily, Gabe was flexible enough so it didn't hurt a first, but then the searing pain blinded and almost knocked him out. He slipped and found himself on the ground right sfter the resounding crack of a broken bon sounded through the clearing. Then Rando started to chant.
It's the shrinking spell. I have to cover my ears. Gabe painstakingly put his hands to his ears and started to mock Rando. "La la laaa! I don't heeere you! Do de do dop dop doo! I've been waiting all my life for yoooou! To shut up!" Gabe added to the song. Real bad move.
Rando stopped in the middle of his chant. "You dare mock me?" Gabe, still mocking, didn't hear him. Want even more stupidity? He had his eyes closed on top of it.
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Should I stop it here?... /sigh/ if I did I'd probably get at least three flames…oh-well! More s'mores for me! Just joking. but not really. fine!I'll go on…
The seed Kurama pulled out of his hair this time was quickly flicked out at Torgoro, creating an explosion so big, it' drove even Kurama back. When the wall of smoke was blown away buy Torgoro, Kurama had his trick ready.
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Rando took his chance and started at him, punching him in the face so hard he went through a couple trees. Gabe, being used to this, (coughgenkaicough), staggered up off his feet and remembered some of the crazy things he had to do with his master.
FLASHBACK:
"Be careful, this may kill you" Genkai said and threw a bunch of spirit energy at him, sending him straight back, sneakers squeaking on the gym floor. "We're going to be doing this until you don't move an inch." She said.
Now, doesn't that sound familiar?
NEW FLASHBACK:
"I have to WHAT?!" Gabe shouted.
"You herd me. You'll be sleeping with these guys for the next week."
"I'm here to learn to fight! Not street magic!" Gabe said angrily.
"if you don't stop complaining, then it'll be the next two weeks…and extra push-ups."
NEW FLASHBACK:
"Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Get off me! I can't climb with you doing that!"
"Nice try, kiddo, but if you think you can slack off, then you're in for it."
"But I'm not slacking off! This is the fastest I can climb!"
"Then climb faster! We're not here to reach your limits, were here to surpass them till the brink of death! Now, get moving!"
END FLASHBACK
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Kurama sent his rose whip lashing out, hoping to hit just once. He did. Now all he had to do was wait. Torgoro, noticing Kurama's sudden loss of eagerness to hit him, spoke.
"Tired, Kurama? Hee-hee-hee! Or have you finally realized that you can't beat me?" Kurama stood defiant. Torgoro tried to see what he was doing buy mind reading, but that was impossible. He went on. "Maybe if you ask me nicely, your death won't be as painful. I might even shorten the time a little…"
"Have fun trying that, with us here." Yusuke shouted.
"Oh, I will, Urameshi, I will. Because I'm going to kill you first!" Torgoro suddenly sped towards Yusuke, but it seems Torgoro was the only one who didn't know what Kurama was up to. Because, right before he reached yusuke, who had not moved an inch, Torgoro stopped, frozen in his tracks, rooted to the ground. Vines were sprouting out of his feet and lower legsand shooting into the earth, reaching to the core and grasping all that they could. (No one could see this of course, but at least Kurama knew what they were doing.)
"What did you do to me?! Why can't I regenerate?" he screeched.
"It's a combination of two seeds. One of them paralyzes you body's regeneration, so if I were to use it on it's own,a regular humanwould die slowly and painfully, your cells falling away every time you were under water or caught in the wind and not coming back. (2) The other seed's roots always head for the core of what ever planet it is on, it is now heading there and parts of it may have already made it. Buy sending those into your body, you are now completely rooted to the spot."
"Oh, yeah! You go Kurama!" Yusuke shouted, still in front of Torgoro.
"Yusuke, watch out!" Kurama said.
Torgoro, who may have been rooted into the ground, still had free hands.
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Gabe now perfectly under stood the reason behind the madness of Genkai. He was completely freaked out buy this guy. He was completely freaked out of the snakes, too. He was tired. And, training with Genkai, he was tired 24/7. I still have to fight. I still have to beat him. Just like I had to reach the top of the cliff.
Gabe stood up to his fullest height. (well apart from the broken leg bone) He had a plan.
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That even this author is wondering what it is. So evidently, I need to stop here. Sorry! Ok, so maybe I'm not that sorry, but hey, can you blame me? Well so maybe you can, but if you killed me, (or hung me off a cliff) you'd never know what happened, now would you? XP
1: it's ALWAYS behind. ALWAYS!
2: i'm not sure, i just made this up, but to me, it seems that the only way to regeneration would be the much-quickened pace of your cells.
I'm sorry if there were any grammer mistakes. Review please and tell me how much you hate my action writing. I think it sucks.
